- Kingmaker is the Heraldic Lion, Proctor the Sleek Fox, and Foreman the Worried Hawk.
- Each believes that he controls the other two; each is partly right.
- The Killers demand Foreman's life. Captain Chezem takes command after the colonel dies.
AT THE TWENTY-FIFTH HOUR
Cosmos Kingmaker, Peter Proctor, and Fabian Foreman choose a candidate for World President while mechanical Killers demolish Foreman's building around them. Kingmaker calls Astrobe mankind's third chance; Foreman argues that previous worlds died without wholly failing. The Killers hunt Foreman because he wants Astrobe to die and be reborn. After rejecting living candidates and considering men from Earth's past, the three agree to send for Thomas More. Kingmaker and Proctor leave. Foreman remains as the building collapses, having said that he knows a way out.
“He had one completely honest moment right at the end. I can't think of anyone else who ever had one.”
- Kingmaker names the Old World, America, and Astrobe as mankind's three chances.
- Foreman disputes the count and distinguishes a world's death from its failure.
- Foreman wants a death and resurrection of Astrobe; the Killers sense his intention.
- Proctor wants a manageable public symbol; Kingmaker wants a good man; Foreman wants a great man.
- Living candidates, a manufactured candidate, and historical candidates are considered.
- Kingmaker proposes using Chronometanastasis. Foreman's list contains only Thomas More.
- The three approve More's selection.
- Kingmaker and Proctor escape through the shattered wall.
- Foreman stands inside as the building collapses; the final sentence recalls his escape route.
Kingmaker imagines a crisis continuing beyond the last possible hour. The title also invites comparison with C. Virgil Gheorghiu’s novel about a person trapped in the classifications and machinery of modern society. The resemblance is especially apt while Astrobe’s mechanical Killers batter down the building.
C. Virgil Gheorghiu, The Twenty-Fifth Hour (1949; English translation, 1950).
Kingmaker’s lion and Proctor’s fox recall Machiavelli’s advice that a prince needs both strength and cunning. Foreman’s hawk adds a third figure to the pair. Their competing claims to control one another make government a contest among these different kinds of power.
Kingmaker’s name recalls Warwick, the magnate who made and unmade English kings. Fabian can suggest Fabius Cunctator, the Roman commander famous for delay, and the society named after him. Foreman’s waiting and carefully timed intervention suit that association, although the novel does not explain his name.
Shakespeare, 3 Henry VI, 3.3; the historical epithets Warwick the Kingmaker and Fabius Cunctator.
The phrase belongs to Macbeth’s vision of a seemingly endless succession of kings. Here the Masters argue over postponing judgment while the Killers provide the thunder outside. A familiar expression becomes a physical event in the scene.
Foreman’s mechanical man belongs to the clock that threatens Astrobe. The image recalls the Doomsday Clock of Cold War public life. A manufactured president cannot save the world if he is another part of the machinery bringing about its end.
The Bulletin of the Atomic Scientists’ Doomsday Clock, introduced in 1947.
Foreman distinguishes the death of a historical world from its failure. His account develops into the five-hundred-year sequence in Chapter 13. Toynbee offers a useful comparison for the language of civilizational breakdown, especially the later phrase Time of Troubles; Foreman’s particular chronology is his own.
Arnold J. Toynbee, A Study of History; Past Master, chap. 13.
Byerly’s name appears amid doubts about whether a candidate is human and a proposal to manufacture the ideal president. This makes Asimov’s Stephen Byerley, the politician suspected of being a robot, a plausible allusion. The spelling differs, and Lafferty leaves the connection unstated.
Isaac Asimov, “Evidence” (1946) and “The Evitable Conflict” (1950).
The name combines Greek words for time and migration. It makes travel into the past sound like a change of dwelling. The embedded resemblance to anastasis, resurrection, also suits the project of bringing a long-dead man back into public life.
Greek chronos, time; metanastasis, migration; anastasis, rising or resurrection.
Foreman objects to Plato’s claim that justice makes a man happy. He wants someone who can be unhappy over an unjust situation. The discussion tests the difference between designing an ideal commonwealth and suffering with the people who inhabit an actual one.
Plato, Republic 1.354a; Thomas More, Utopia, book 1.
The candidates include rulers, counselors, a jurist, and an architect. Foreman reduces his own list to More and to one decisive act of honesty. This resembles the great-man theory of history, but the choice also makes the supposedly exemplary man dependent on those who recruit him.
Thomas Carlyle, On Heroes, Hero-Worship, and the Heroic in History (1841).
The exchange anticipates More’s execution on Tower Hill in 1535 and his second execution on Astrobe. Roper records More speaking plainly against the statute after his conviction. That episode helps illuminate Foreman’s interest in a final honest act; Lafferty’s More is a fictional reworking of the historical martyr.
William Roper, The Life of Sir Thomas More, account of the trial and execution.
Foreman needs only a very small beginning. The Gospel seed that grows into a great plant gives his political experiment a religious scale. Chapter 13 returns to the image when he explains what he expects More’s death to accomplish.
Matthew 13:31–32; Mark 4:30–32; Luke 13:18–19.
MY GRAVE, AND I IN IT
Paul, a hunted pilot deprived of his surname and citizenship, agrees to bring Thomas More to Astrobe. With help from Rimrock and other allies, he escapes the spaceport and travels to Earth through Hopp-Equation Space. His ninety-second sleeps contain elaborate passage dreams. In London, Brooks provides the time machine; Paul travels into the past and walks to More's home in Chelsea. More has already heard of Astrobe's future from other time travelers. He agrees to go when he recognizes himself as the mysterious Past Master. Back in the future, he visits his own grave before departing for Astrobe with Paul.
“We built it too small, Paul, we built it too small.”
- Paul has survived a year of pursuit by the Killers.
- Rimrock brings him into contact with Foreman.
- Paul steals Foreman's grasshopper; a clash between spaceport guards and pursuing Killers helps him reach the spacecraft.
- Rimrock, Copperhead, Battersea, Shanty, and Slider take part in the confusion.
- The flight takes about seven hundred standard hours.
- Hopp travel reverses polarity, including handedness and sexual characteristics.
- Paul estimates twenty thousand dreams, each contained within no more than ninety seconds of sleep.
- Dreams include Adam, his sister, Ouden, Sour John's kidney, and the destruction of Rhium and Antirhium.
- Paul uses Brooks's machine in London, then walks to Chelsea.
- More already knows of time travelers and of Astrobe.
- More describes Utopia as a bitter satire misunderstood as an ideal.
- The name Past Master persuades him that he may be the man who saves Astrobe.
- More and Paul go to confession before leaving the sixteenth century.
- In future London, More visits the grave that still contains his bones.
- He discovers modern books and tobacco, then leaves for Astrobe.
- His passage dreams anticipate the Masters and other figures he will meet.
More explicitly connects the pilot with his name-saint, the apostle whose journeys fill Acts. The comparison gives Paul’s mission a spiritual possibility that its organizers do not explain to him. His confession before his own birth adds a comic reversal to that connection.
Acts 13–28.
Paul’s escape depends on bringing the mechanical guards and Killers together like bears and hounds in a baiting. The image anticipates the journey to More’s England, where bear-baiting was a familiar public spectacle. Paul and his allies arrange the encounter and exploit the confusion.
The English bear-baiting tradition.
Paul’s change of handedness recalls the mirror-reversed traveler in Wells’s “The Plattner Story.” Lafferty extends the joke to sex and voice. This bodily reversal also begins the novel’s larger pattern of left-handed actions and unexpected means of rescue.
H. G. Wells, “The Plattner Story” (1896).
The statement that ansels existed in the human unconscious before people discovered them on Astrobe invites comparison with Jung’s archetypes. The novel lets an image encountered in dreams become a creature met in waking life. It does not require that every passage dream be decoded into a single fixed meaning.
C. G. Jung, writings on the collective unconscious and archetypes.
The first man’s name belongs to a boy who repeatedly appears in scenes of battle and death. His insistence that each death belongs to another bearer of the name complicates any simple account of resurrection. The biblical association brings the deaths of individual men into the story of mankind.
Genesis 2–3; 1 Corinthians 15:22, 45.
Sour John is also a storyteller in Lafferty’s “The Ugly Sea.” His theft of an idol’s green eye recalls J. Milton Hayes’s music-hall monologue, but the replacement kidney turns the adventure into a joke about mistaken value. Paul’s objection to the port’s geography is overruled by the teller.
R. A. Lafferty, “The Ugly Sea” (1960); J. Milton Hayes, “The Green Eye of the Little Yellow God” (1911).
The paired stars borrow the names of the opposing headlands at the entrance to the Gulf of Corinth. Their linked rotation resembles a centrifugal governor regulating a machine. When the chain breaks, the dream makes a cosmic catastrophe out of a mechanical failure.
Thucydides, History of the Peloponnesian War 2.86; Strabo, Geography 8.2.3.
More calls his book a bitter joke that later readers have mistaken for a blueprint. This is the fictional More’s account of his intention. It establishes the central predicament: the author must live in, and eventually govern, a world that has taken his imagined commonwealth seriously.
More’s description of Utopia reverses the familiar formula of the best of all possible worlds. The later history of that formula, especially Voltaire’s Pangloss, makes the line another deliberate-looking anachronism in the speech of a man who already knows several futures.
Gottfried Wilhelm Leibniz, Theodicy (1710); Voltaire, Candide (1759).
Paul finds More free in his garden before the decision that will lead to his death. Historically, More refused the oath in April 1534 and was imprisoned until his execution in July 1535. The novel combines that situation with a journey about a thousand years back from 2535; its calendar does not resolve into an exact historical date.
Roper, The Life of Sir Thomas More; More’s imprisonment, 1534–35.
Paul recognizes More partly from Holbein’s portrait. The contrast between the short, familiar-looking man and the tall Astrobian pilot makes the historical figure physically unheroic before the narrative tests what kind of hero he can become.
Hans Holbein the Younger, Sir Thomas More (1527), Frick Collection.
The title joins a master from the past with the ordinary meaning of an expert. It also recalls an office formerly held in a guild or lodge. The later language of masters, a station, and an inner circle extends those institutional associations.
The guild and Masonic office of past master; Past Master, chap. 4.
More’s Latin plea for mercy belongs to the language of prayer. The publican’s farewell and lament for the old things likewise draw on scriptural idiom. In this scene the promise of things made new is heard by someone who fears what the religious changes will destroy.
Miserere mihi, Domine, Roman Missal, Introit for the Sixteenth Sunday after Pentecost; 2 Corinthians 5:17; Colossians 2:6; Revelation 21:4–5.
The chapter title comes from More’s visit to the grave that already contains his bones. The historical More prepared a tomb and epitaph at Chelsea, but his body was buried at St. Peter ad Vincula in the Tower. Lafferty’s scene makes the traveler confront the fact of his first death before he goes to meet a second.
More’s Chelsea epitaph (1532); Roper, The Life of Sir Thomas More.
The burial tradition separates More’s body in the Tower from his head at Canterbury. The future priest’s discovery of identifiable bones and a signet ring belongs to Lafferty’s fiction. Its purpose is to make More’s presence and his completed death equally tangible.
Thomas Stapleton, Tres Thomae (1588), account of Margaret Roper and More’s head.
The rare verb enskied recalls Lucio’s description of Isabella in Measure for Measure. Paul has just reminded More of his canonization; the flight then sends the sainted man literally into the sky. More’s enthusiasm for a newly discovered cigar keeps the ascent comic.
Shakespeare, Measure for Measure, 1.4.
Succubus, Eve, Lilith, Judith, Mary, and Valkyrie bring demonic, maternal, holy, and martial figures into one image. Judith’s beheading of Holofernes is especially pointed in a novel about More’s head. The composite anticipates Evita without reducing her to one of its names.
Genesis 2–3; Judith 13; the traditions of Lilith and the Valkyries.
AT THE NAKED SAILOR
A false ansel impersonates Rimrock and draws Paul and Thomas into an ambush after their arrival on Astrobe. The real Rimrock warns them too late, but Cathead allies rescue them. At the Naked Sailor, Thomas sees severe poverty and learns that the inhabitants chose to leave the Golden Cities. He asks what makes a being human, recognizing intellect and spirit in Rimrock. Ouden confronts Paul, Thomas, and the ansel in an encounter described as a leftover passage dream. Battersea and the others then escort Thomas's party to Cosmopolis.
“I have one juice left that you do not know.”
- An ansel voice directs Paul towards the edging trees.
- Rimrock announces that another being spoke in his place.
- Paul and Thomas fight the attackers; Cathead men carry them to safety.
- Paul wakes injured; Thomas's broken jaw has been wired.
- Thomas encounters the misery of Cathead and the Barrio.
- Paul says that the inhabitants can return to comfortable lives but refuse to do so.
- The Killers murder a demented man; hungry people seize his goats.
- Thomas recognizes Rimrock as human in the sense of possessing body, spirit, and intellect.
- Rimrock has dealt with the false ansel.
- Ouden threatens to extinguish life and imagination.
- The narrator calls the speaking human presence Paul-Thomas, leaving the individual speaker uncertain.
- Battersea, Shanty, Copperhead, and others form an armed convoy.
- The party leaves the slums, skirts Wu Town, and enters Cosmopolis.
- The three Masters and Pottscamp await Thomas.
More places the inn in a numbered division of Hell and consoles Paul that three worse divisions remain. The Qur’an supplies seven gates, while later commentaries arrange the inhabitants differently. The joke’s exact assignment of Christians to a fourth division should be read as More’s statement within the scene.
Qur’an 15:44; George Sale, Preliminary Discourse to The Koran (1734).
More’s outrage at starvation and punishing labor recalls Hythloday’s indictment of England in Utopia. Cathead confronts him with a further difficulty: its inhabitants have chosen to leave material abundance. His familiar political explanations cannot yet account for that choice.
Thomas More, Utopia, book 1.
More accepts voluntary religious poverty but recoils from deprivation that degrades its sufferers. The distinction matters throughout the Cathead chapters. His admiration for a modest life does not make him an advocate of the conditions he sees here.
The Franciscan tradition of holy poverty; More’s account of common life in Utopia.
Rimrock’s seal-like body and ability to move on land recall the seal-people of northern folklore. His shifting between no legs, four, and two can also suggest the Sphinx’s riddle about man. More’s decisive test, however, is intellect and spirit rather than an animal’s outward shape.
The selkie tradition; Apollodorus, Library 3.5.8.
Ouden means nothing. The name extends the learned naming games of Utopia, whose island, city, and river carry teasing Greek meanings. Here the word becomes a speaker who describes his nothingness as active, hungry, and destructive.
Greek ouden, nothing; More, Utopia.
More’s denial that Ouden has being can be read alongside Augustine and Aquinas on evil as a privation of good. Ouden answers that his nothingness is a vortex. The exchange tests what that destructive claim means; it does not by itself settle the novel’s metaphysics in Ouden’s favor.
Augustine, Confessions 7.12; Aquinas, Summa theologiae I, q. 48.
Ouden remembers a single kindling that overcame him and claims that he is extinguishing it. John’s light shining in darkness supplies a strong biblical comparison. Paul-Thomas answers with the possibility of rekindling and with a resource that Ouden does not know.
John 1:4–5.
ON HAPPY ASTROBE
Rimrock and Copperhead arrange a triumphal reception that Thomas has imagined without consciously ordering. The Exultation Trumpets sound, the assembled leaders rise, and Thomas accepts the burden before it has formally been offered. He then speaks with Kingmaker, Proctor, Foreman, and Pottscamp. Recalled dreams show Kingmaker as a spider, Proctor as a fox above the void, and Foreman as a hawk counting shells. Pottscamp promises a later meeting with the real Circle of Masters. Thomas is dazzled by Astrobe's achievements but resists being treated merely as a public figurehead.
“I accept the great burden that has been given me to bear.”
- Evita calls the golden city a whited sepulcher.
- Rimrock and Copperhead transmit Thomas's unspoken intentions.
- Battles secure the twelve trumpet towers; the Exultation Trumpets sound.
- The leaders stand and acclaim Thomas at Convocation Hall.
- Thomas blocks a verbal mind-probe by thinking in Latin.
- Kingmaker describes Hopp and Horwitz travel and the six Proven Reserve Worlds.
- Thomas insists that an elected president must govern.
- The spider dream shows Kingmaker defending a world of webs.
- Proctor praises easy termination and threatens to break Thomas if he becomes more than a toy.
- The fox dream places Proctor at home in the void.
- Foreman says that Thomas's death will be needed.
- The hawk's thirty shells suggest betrayal.
- The dream of a boy and his toy ends with the toy eating its maker.
- Thomas cannot tell which figure represents Pottscamp.
- Pottscamp promises to introduce eight other entities and reveal the back of Astrobe's tapestry.
The golden inhabitants appear to fulfill the promise associated with Huey Long’s slogan. Their magnificence makes More eager to join them. Later encounters ask whether this universal royalty has left its beneficiaries capable of thought, refusal, or spiritual life.
Huey P. Long, Every Man a King (1933) and the Share Our Wealth slogan.
More praises Astrobe through a mixture of Gospel language, classical myth, and Irish otherworld geography. The pearl of great price stands beside Iris, Great Brasil, and the Hesperides. This abundance of names reveals how much hope he brings to what he is seeing.
Matthew 13:45–46; the myths of Iris and the Hesperides; the Irish Hy-Brasil tradition.
Evita’s answer comes from Christ’s denunciation of tombs beautiful outside and full of death within. She supplies the diagnosis while More is still admiring the surface. The contrast governs both this chapter and the later discovery of Astrobe’s deformed reverse.
Matthew 23:27.
A fawney man practices a ring swindle, passing a worthless ring off as valuable. More’s compliment to Rimrock therefore associates enchantment with deceptive gold. It belongs beside the repeated question of what Golden Astrobe’s apparent wealth is worth.
The thieves’ cant terms fawney and fawney rig.
More explicitly recalls older dreams of artificial servants. Greek examples include Hephaestus’s golden attendants and the bronze Talos; the Jewish tradition supplies the golem. Pottscamp’s dream of the toy that consumes its maker gives that admiration a frightening sequel.
Homer, Iliad 18.417–20; Apollonius Rhodius, Argonautica 4; the golem tradition.
The former presidents’ extravagant names sound to More like gladiators or American wrestlers. His sponsors likewise plan to present a recognizable persona to the public. The joke makes political office resemble a staged performance whose billing matters more than its holder’s freedom to act.
The novel’s explicit comparison with gladiators and masked professional wrestlers.
Proctor’s description of Kingmaker and Foreman’s refusal to wash his hands recall Pilate. The gesture concerns responsibility for a death already being planned. Foreman’s willingness to own his part does not remove the moral question of what he is doing to his friend.
Matthew 27:24.
Proctor compares the man ready to die with a guest who has eaten enough. Lucretius and Horace use the satisfied guest as an image of leaving life without complaint. Astrobe turns that consolation into an argument for readily available termination.
Lucretius, On the Nature of Things 3.938; Horace, Satires 1.1.117–19.
Utopia allows priests and magistrates to urge a voluntary death upon someone suffering from incurable, painful illness. Astrobe makes termination a common response to weariness. The altered conditions are essential to the comparison: Lafferty’s institution is much broader than the practice described by More.
Thomas More, Utopia, book 2, “Of Their Slaves, and of Their Marriages.”
Foreman spoils the consoling proverb about darkness before dawn by inserting a false dawn. He later claims responsibility for making a particular sun rise, borrowing language ordinarily applied to God. His confidence invites scrutiny as the cost of his promised renewal becomes clear.
Matthew 5:45; the proverb about darkness before dawn.
Foreman’s counting and weeping make the shells a strong counterpart to Judas’s thirty pieces of silver. The scene anticipates the betrayal named openly in Chapter 13. The warning about Mother Carey’s chicken adds the storm petrel’s maritime associations to the threatened victim.
Matthew 26:15; 27:3–5; the sailors’ name Mother Carey’s chicken.
The school assignments in Pottscamp’s dream contain names from Lafferty’s other fiction. Treating those peoples and languages as ordinary school subjects gives the invented worlds a shared background while the toy’s effortless learning exposes the child’s dependence on it.
Lafferty, “Primary Education of the Camiroi” (1966), “Polity and Custom of the Camiroi” (1967), and The Reefs of Earth (1968).
THE SHAPE OF THINGS TO COME
A precis machine explains the Astrobe Dream: individual people must merge into one city and finally into Holy Nothingness. Thomas recognizes his own satire in this program, yet increasingly admires Astrobe. He and Paul watch a grotesque mechanical replica of the Mass. The chapter then introduces the conflicting views of Thomas's companions and Rimrock's account of the ansels’ ascent from the ocean. Though he has become an advocate of Golden Astrobe, Thomas feels drawn to the mountains and decides to walk through the Feral Lands.
“Well, I have sampled Golden Astrobe and it is wonderful. But I am still hungry.”
- The machine makes the city superior to its individual inhabitants.
- It describes perfection as the loss of private identity and consciousness.
- Thomas recognizes the program as his own bitter joke in Utopia.
- Paul takes Thomas to a preserved church in Cosmopolis.
- A coin starts a mechanical religious performance.
- Paul distinguishes this burlesque from living worship in Cathead and the Feral Lands.
- Thomas dismisses the Church; Paul defends the faith he found in Cathead.
- Rimrock describes his people's ascent through the ocean's surface, their sky.
- Evita chooses to accompany Thomas and proposes seducing a saint.
- Slider doubts whether the Christian promise extends to Astrobe; Scrivener endorses the Astrobe Dream.
- Maxwell describes his loose attachment to bodies; Copperhead predicts that Thomas will save the world but not himself.
- Thomas's fascination with the mountain disturbs the group.
- The Feral Lands have no transportation booths.
- Copperhead estimates seven or nine days for the circuit to Cathead.
- Thomas insists on going despite the threat of the Killers.
The title names Wells’s future history, in which a world administration reorganizes civilization and suppresses religion. Astrobe’s managed happiness and its treatment of worship as an antiquity give the allusion particular force. Chapter 10 answers this title with The Deformity of Things to Come.
H. G. Wells, The Shape of Things to Come (1933), especially book 4.
Kingmaker’s praise of Astrobe’s uniformity recalls Utopia’s closely similar towns. More’s wish to travel puts the author in opposition to the commonwealth associated with his name. He insists on seeing what an account of the whole planet leaves out.
Thomas More, Utopia, book 2, “Of Their Towns, Particularly of Amaurot.”
The precis machine describes common access to goods, freedom from poverty, and a simplified legal order. These recall institutions in Utopia, although the golden world gives them a different purpose. More’s recognition is also a crisis of authorship: his joke has become a place people must inhabit.
Thomas More, Utopia, book 2.
Astrobe’s account of humanity converging into a single organism invites comparison with Teilhard de Chardin’s Omega Point. The novel’s Omega becomes Ouden and the Big O, a destination described as nothingness. This is a satirical resemblance; Teilhard’s own account gives convergence a transcendent and Christian end.
Pierre Teilhard de Chardin, The Phenomenon of Man (1955; English translation, 1959).
The Dream’s religious vocabulary makes the abolition of transcendence sound like an act of worship. It can be read against the death-of-God debates contemporary with the novel. The phrase also occurs in Richard Rubenstein’s theology, but the shared wording alone does not establish a direct source.
Richard L. Rubenstein, After Auschwitz (1966); Thomas J. J. Altizer, The Gospel of Christian Atheism (1966).
Utopia regulates travel with official permission; Astrobe’s instantaneous transport serves the civilized regions. The comparison helps explain why a walk matters here. Leaving the convenient network lets More encounter places and people that the official description does not adequately explain.
Thomas More, Utopia, book 2, “Of the Travelling of the Utopians.”
More’s delight in either end of a hunt contrasts with the Utopians’ contempt for hunting. The contrast separates the character’s appetites from the rules of the society in his book. His attraction to the wild draws him further from Astrobe’s claim that civilized life is complete.
Thomas More, Utopia, book 2, discussion of pleasure and hunting.
More imagines his joke as a tree unexpectedly bearing fruit, then judges a failing religious institution by the image of a barren tree. The Gospel language makes him apply to the Church a test that also bears on his own political invention.
Matthew 7:17–20; Luke 13:6–9.
The museum rite combines guitar, drugs, theatrical dress, and commercial sponsorship. Its details turn a religious service into a degraded exhibit. The scene can be read in relation to the liturgical and popular culture of the 1960s, but its grotesque composite is Lafferty’s fictional projection.
The novel’s account of the museumized Mass; mid-twentieth-century liturgical and popular culture.
More himself invokes Dante when he hears the instruments. Relevant passages include Barbariccia’s obscene trumpet, Master Adam’s lute-shaped body and drum-like belly, and Nimrod’s horn. The reference is comic and composite: Dante does not describe an orchestra of guitars in the lowest circle.
Dante, Inferno 21.139; 30.49–54, 103; 31.12–18.
Pottscamp’s assurance about what will be given in the hour recalls Christ’s promise of words to disciples brought before hostile authorities. The change from speaking to seeing suits More’s journey. The question is whether he can recognize what the encounters disclose.
Matthew 10:19–20.
The ansels’ ancestors climbed through what they had taken for the sky and found land above the sea. Plato imagines a sea-dweller making a similar discovery in the Phaedo. The parallel makes Rimrock’s account a challenge to the belief that one’s familiar world exhausts reality.
More calls Evita Lilith rather than Eve; she claims both names. The exchange brings the first mother and the rebellious first wife of later Jewish legend into the same woman. It continues the composite female figure of More’s passage dream.
Genesis 2–3; Alphabet of Ben Sira, the Lilith story.
Slider questions whether Christ’s commission and promise apply beyond Earth. His argument depends on taking nations and world in a narrowly terrestrial sense. Chapter 8 gives the Metropolitan’s direct answer, making this a dispute within the novel rather than an established limit on the Promise.
Matthew 28:19–20; Past Master, chap. 8.
STING IN THE TAIL
Thomas's party enters a wilderness of interwoven vegetation, water, and formidable animals. Father Oddopter joins them. He, Paul, and Evita kill a hydra that he identifies as the Devil; Thomas eats its cooked brains while disputing the meaning of the hunt. At Goslar, Charles the Six Hundred and Twelfth receives the travelers but lodges Scrivener in the machinery shed. Evita recounts her longevity and her search for Hell. Father Oddopter describes spirits and bodies produced through imagination. Drinking, stories, and the joke of Goslar's occupied privy loosen Thomas's attachment to perfection.
“The Devil has his several forms, but we must kill him every day to limn his limits.”
- Rimrock and Copperhead take separate routes and protect the travelers.
- Paul describes the food animals and the predators that feed on them.
- Thomas thinks wild life could supply what civilized Astrobe lacks.
- Father Oddopter catches a large fish to use as bait.
- The monk, Paul, and Evita attack the hydra's eye and brain.
- Oddopter identifies the hunt as the daily killing of the Devil; Thomas calls it sport and illusion.
- The brains are roasted in a mud casing. Copperhead later examines the entrails.
- The travelers meet hunters killing natural ansels.
- Thomas distinguishes these animals from the intelligent Rimrock.
- Oddopter admits that the apparent acquisition of soul and intellect poses a theological problem.
- Goslar grew from a fraternity at the university in Wu Town.
- The Killers murder successive emperors; the fraternity immediately chooses replacements.
- Charles excludes Scrivener from the common room as a machine.
- The skulls of former emperors preserve the dynasty's oral history.
- Evita recognizes emperors to whom she was consort and describes an experiment that prolonged her life.
- She identifies Golden Astrobe as the Hell she sought.
- Oddopter describes wandering spirits, contingent bodies, and the Feral Lands’ psychic powers.
- Thomas pays to use the public privy, drinks green lightning, and joins the storytelling.
The closing image of a fair face and a dangerous tail recalls Dante’s Geryon, the embodiment of fraud. It also belongs to the proverbial poison reserved for the tail or end. Astrobe’s pleasing appearance has concealed what More discovers behind it.
Dante, Inferno 17.1–27; the proverb in cauda venenum.
Kastroides recalls the extinct giant beaver Castoroides, and the direwolves likewise borrow a prehistoric name. Paul warns that the resemblance lies in the names. The earthly vocabulary helps the travelers begin to describe creatures whose behavior and proportions remain unfamiliar.
The names Castoroides and dire wolf; the novel’s explanation of borrowed animal names.
The enormous predatory bird recalls the roc of travel legend. Its habit of displaying human bodies on thorns also resembles a shrike’s impaled prey, enlarged to a human scale. More’s comparison with men hanging dead wolves reverses the ordinary relation between hunter and hunted.
The roc in the Sindbad voyages and Marco Polo; the natural history of shrikes.
More names Sextus Empiricus in support of a being suited to every environment. Father Oddopter then appears as an answer to the speculation. Sextus reports arguments about living beings in different cosmic regions; the scene turns that philosophical material into a joke about the observers themselves.
Sextus Empiricus, Against the Physicists, book 1; compare Cicero, On the Nature of the Gods 2.42.
Oddopter’s grand title for a familiar story mocks the travelers’ innocence. Like the abandoned children of the ballad, they do not fully understand the danger surrounding them. His greeting is protective advice delivered as teasing.
The ballad “The Babes in the Wood” and its later theatrical versions.
The apostle asks for evidence before believing; More sees the Devil-kill and then tries to exclude what he has seen from his account of reality. Oddopter challenges the rule by which More has decided in advance that only one order of things can exist.
John 20:24–29.
The bait and hook invite comparison with the Christian interpretation of Leviathan: the Devil takes what he desires and is caught through it. Gregory the Great reads the hook as Christ’s humanity concealing divinity. Evita’s bait and Oddopter’s fishing give that theological image a violent comic form.
Job 41:1, or 40:20 in the Douay-Rheims numbering; Gregory the Great, Moralia in Job, book 33.
The name recalls the monster whose severed heads grow again in Heracles’ labor. Oddopter makes the repeated killing a daily necessity. He also says the Devil can take other forms, so the significance belongs to this encounter and its recurrence, rather than to every animal called a hydra.
The Lernaean Hydra; Apollodorus, Library 2.5.2.
Reading entrails belongs to the ancient haruspex; interpreting birds belongs to the augur. Copperhead draws on this vocabulary and practice here and on the mountain. More’s uneasiness recalls the biblical prohibition on divination and consultation with the dead.
Deuteronomy 18:10–11; the Roman traditions of haruspicy and augury.
Oddopter vows never to sleep twice in the same place. This can be set beside both Christ’s homelessness and Benedict’s criticism of wandering monks. Lafferty gives a positive discipline to a form of life that monastic rules often treated with suspicion.
Luke 9:58; Rule of St. Benedict, chap. 1.
The name recalls the German imperial city associated with the Salian dynasty. Lafferty transfers imperial ceremony to a precarious settlement with an oral history preserved through the skulls of its rulers. More treats its authority seriously even when the surrounding circumstances are comic.
The imperial palace and Salian history of Goslar.
The newly chosen ruler travels without provisions, money, or spare clothing. The instructions echo the sending of the apostles. That vulnerable arrival also makes the emperor’s office a small-scale counterpart to More’s dangerous appointment.
Luke 9:3; Matthew 10:9–10.
More’s henry and proposed charles treat the familiar john as though a privy ought to bear the reigning monarch’s name. The joke brings Henry VIII into the petty frustrations of the visit. More’s caution about crossing royalty recalls how much a confrontation with a king can cost.
Roper, The Life of Sir Thomas More, Norfolk’s warning about striving with princes and More’s advice to Cromwell.
Evita calls herself Faustina when she describes the longevity experiment as a bargain with the Devil. The Evil Scientist gives the Faust story a laboratory setting. Her return home after seeking Hell makes the discovery of Golden Astrobe’s nature the bitter result of the bargain.
The Faust tradition, especially the rejuvenation in Goethe’s Faust, part 1.
Evita’s journey around the world to recognize her own home can be compared with Chesterton’s returning yachtsman and Eliot’s end of exploration. Her discovery reverses their welcome: the home she finally recognizes is Hell.
G. K. Chesterton, Orthodoxy, chap. 1; T. S. Eliot, “Little Gidding,” section 5.
Oddopter’s over-belief has bodily consequences: it leaves marks and makes the feral regions powerful. William James’s term offers a useful comparison for belief that reaches beyond what evidence establishes. Lafferty gives that surplus of belief a creaturely presence.
William James, The Varieties of Religious Experience (1902), concluding discussion of over-beliefs.
Slider proposes electrically produced pleasure as a superior alternative to drinking. The contrast sets the ease of a manufactured sensation beside a physical, communal activity he cannot manage. It belongs to the novel’s larger dispute over whether discomfort can be removed without losing forms of life.
The chapter’s comparison of green lightning with electrical stimulation.
ON THUNDER MOUNTAIN
Father Oddopter celebrates Mass at Goslar. Thomas then defends the Astrobe Dream so fiercely that Charles expels him, though his companions continue with him. During the climb of Electric Mountain, Scrivener recounts the sleeping kings and declares his rejection of Ouden. Copperhead has already examined a rouk's entrails at the summit and left. A lightning storm accompanies the Killers’ assault. Scrivener, Adam, Oddopter, and Maxwell's current body are killed. Slider is disregarded as no threat. Evita leads Thomas and Paul down the mountain; the three reach Cathead profoundly changed.
“They had been transfigured on the mountain.”
- The consecration briefly revives Thomas's faith.
- Charles warns that Scrivener's sender enables the Killers to track the party.
- Thomas refuses to sacrifice Scrivener, but then accepts the killing of companions who oppose the Dream.
- Charles expels Thomas; Paul, Evita, and Oddopter stay with him.
- Scrivener criticizes Thomas for valuing machinery above humanity.
- He recounts human legends of sleeping kings and the machines’ attempt to adopt an ancient gear train.
- Ouden displaced that mechanical king.
- Scrivener declares that he has rejected Ouden.
- Adam joins the climbers.
- Oddopter describes apparitions shaped by electricity and the observer's mind.
- The summit holds the entrails of a rouk examined by Copperhead, who has departed.
- The view reveals the cities, wilderness, and other Thunder Mountains.
- The Killers attack during the lightning storm.
- Scrivener fights and dies; Slider is ignored.
- Adam and Oddopter die; Maxwell loses his present body.
- Evita times a descent to the lightning. She, Thomas, and Paul escape to Cathead.
Trumpets, cloud, thunder, and lightning recall Sinai. The changed, shining survivors also invite the Gospel comparison that the narrator names as transfiguration. What they encounter includes the faces of Ouden, so the resemblance does not make their vision a simple repetition of a biblical revelation.
Exodus 19:16–19; 34:29–30; Matthew 17:1–9.
More’s criticism of the golden inhabitants borrows the upward movement of the psalm. He immediately imagines abandoning such impulses once he governs. His own attraction to the mountain is therefore already in conflict with the settled life he wants to administer.
Psalm 121:1, numbered 120:1 in the Douay-Rheims and Vulgate.
Scrivener gathers rulers expected to return when their people need them. The recurring legend gives More’s recruitment a wider pattern. Historical deaths, folk traditions, and invented futures mingle in the list; the list should not be treated as a set of accurate biographies.
The return-of-the-king traditions of Arthur and Frederick Barbarossa.
The diverted river and secret burial come from the account of Alaric’s death in Jordanes. The promise that he will rise and lead again belongs to the sleeping-king pattern added here. The distinction shows how historical material becomes a usable legend.
Jordanes, Getica 30.158.
Kennedy’s open automobile enters the same company as ancient and medieval kings. Roadstorm extends the catalogue into Lafferty’s own fiction and recalls Roadstrum of Space Chantey. The sequence treats very recent history and invented history as material from which legends of return are made.
John F. Kennedy’s assassination in 1963; Lafferty, Space Chantey (1968).
Oddopter says the marked ram belongs to Scripture. Abraham’s substitute sacrifice and Daniel’s two-horned ram are possible points of comparison. The scene does not choose between them or explain the double sign completely; More’s repeated appointment to death gives the image its immediate force.
Genesis 22:13; Daniel 8:3.
Paul’s words over Oddopter identify the dead man with the priesthood of Melchisedech. The verse belongs to the biblical and liturgical language of enduring priesthood. It follows a morning Mass offered for members of the party who would die that day.
Psalm 110:4, numbered 109:4 in the Douay-Rheims and Vulgate; Hebrews 5:6; 7:17.
The single point of light seems to occupy several places at once. Zeno’s arrow offers a plausible comparison for the old paradox named in the passage. Lafferty makes the apparent solution an overwhelming event through which the travelers must find a still narrower instant of escape.
Aristotle, Physics 6.9, 239b, on Zeno’s arrow.
The narrator explicitly connects astonishment with being thunderstruck. The event revives the history inside the word. The same habit of making a familiar phrase happen bodily governs many of the novel’s jokes and horrors.
The history of astonish through Old French estoner and the Latin vocabulary of thunder and stupefaction.
The possibility of light outside a false sky recalls the empyrean of medieval cosmology and Dante. The narrator poses it as a question. The view into a pit then makes the distinction between apparent height and genuine transcendence more difficult.
Aquinas, Summa theologiae I, q. 66, a. 3; Dante, Paradiso 30.
Scrivener’s choice and Slider’s reversal make personhood a matter of allegiance and action as well as origin. Scrivener dies resisting the Killers. The scene prepares the question, asked later by the Programmed Persons themselves, of whether creatures made from other materials can receive spiritual life.
Past Master, chaps. 7, 10, and 13.
BLACK CATHEAD
Thomas studies Cathead's deadly industries, rat-infested buildings, plague, and widespread mental illness. Copperhead, Battersea, Shanty, and Rimrock explain why people refuse the Golden Life, but he still proposes destroying the city. A woman predicts his nine-day reign. He visits the dying Metropolitan, who recognizes him, recites the collect for John Fisher and Thomas More, and says that Christ has renewed the promise to the Church on Astrobe. Thomas leaves unconvinced. The final scene shows dead sea-gleaners being sold with fish for grinding into meal.
“We have the promise. We last till the end of the world.”
- Cathead's processes kill workers while duplicating products cheaply available elsewhere.
- Oxypyrites extraction has neither market nor pay.
- The Rat Castle houses a billion rats; the district's rats kill thousands daily.
- Plague and the immense Bethelem district deepen the account of suffering.
- Copperhead calls misery preferable to having no life.
- Battersea and Shanty call Thomas blind and foolish.
- Rimrock says he too gave up a comfortable life that submerged his identity.
- Thomas still thinks Cathead must be destroyed.
- A woman predicts that Thomas will be king for nine days.
- The Metropolitan recognizes Thomas through the collect of his feast with John Fisher.
- He predicts his own death thirty hours before Thomas's.
- He says Christ walked on Astrobe with Saint Klingensmith and renewed the Promise.
- Three workers have died on plague day.
- The scow-master removes their boots and rolls their bodies into the fish.
- The buyer accepts the bodies but deducts a coin for each because they are inferior material for the grinders.
Utopia limits the working day to six hours. Cathead’s twenty-hour labor makes the comparison brutal, especially because efficient machines already exist elsewhere. More must confront people who prefer this destructive work to the comfortable life offered by the golden cities.
Thomas More, Utopia, book 2, “Of Their Trades, and Manner of Life.”
Utopia includes outsiders who voluntarily enter service because its conditions are better than those at home. Cathead reverses the movement: people choose bondage and deprivation to escape the perfected society. The parallel places freedom of choice inside conditions that More finds intolerable.
Thomas More, Utopia, book 2, “Of Their Slaves, and of Their Marriages.”
The Underground Man challenges a rationally perfected society by defending the capacity to choose what is painful or disadvantageous. Cathead raises a related question: whether suffering can become proof that one is alive and capable of refusal. The comparison explains the argument without making Cathead’s misery desirable in itself.
Fyodor Dostoevsky, Notes from Underground, part 1, sections 7–9.
Barricades and gunfire give the migration a recognizable modern political setting. The Berlin Wall offers a historical comparison, but Lafferty reverses the expected economic destination: these refugees run from abundance into poverty. Their behavior exposes something that Astrobe’s measures of well-being cannot register.
The border barriers and shootings of the Cold War; the novel’s account of the exodus into Cathead.
The flag uses the traditional maritime signal of contagion. Lunger is an older American word for a consumptive. Both terms make bodily disease a constant feature of the city’s life; the weekly plague and lethal work are concrete conditions, not merely symbols of spiritual suffering.
The quarantine flag tradition; the American slang term lunger.
The district’s name recalls the Hospital of St. Mary of Bethlehem, whose name became Bedlam. Lafferty enlarges a madhouse into a large part of a city. The movement from institution to district makes the question of madness political as well as medical.
Bethlem Hospital, London; the development of the word bedlam.
More’s Dutchman is most naturally read as Holbein, his portraitist and the designer of the Dance of Death woodcuts. Older English could use Dutch broadly for German. The remark places the skeletal Metropolitan among images in which death confronts people of every social rank.
Hans Holbein the Younger, Dance of Death, published 1538; Sir Thomas More, 1527.
The ring associates the Metropolitan with Saint Peter and papal office. The novel also calls him the Pope of Astrobe. These signs give the nearly abandoned church an authority that its physical poverty and small congregation do not measure.
The papal Ring of the Fisherman; the chapter’s description of the Metropolitan.
The Metropolitan recites the prayer honoring John Fisher and Thomas More as martyrs. More recognizes Fisher and hears himself placed within a liturgical commemoration that followed his earthly life. The prayer confronts his uncertainty with the Church’s judgment about the man he became.
The collect for Saints John Fisher and Thomas More in the English proper of the Roman Missal after their canonization in 1935.
The Metropolitan applies Christ’s promise to this world and answers Slider’s attempt to exclude it. His account of Christ walking on Astrobe gives the answer a local history. The scene asks whether a new planet can be outside the reach of an apparently earthly promise.
Matthew 16:18; 28:20; Past Master, chap. 5.
The physically blind Metropolitan calls More blind because he fails to recognize what is before him. John’s account of the man born blind supplies the comparison: sight and spiritual understanding can move in opposite directions. More’s confidence in his diagnosis of Cathead is the object of the rebuke.
John 9:39–41.
The blessing and More’s answering line come from the psalm used in the prayers at the foot of the altar. His ready response shows religious memory operating beneath his professed uncertainty. The words ask for renewed life at the very moment he is confronting a church thought to be dying.
Psalm 85, numbered 84 in the Vulgate and Douay-Rheims; the Roman Mass, Deus, tu conversus vivificabis nos.
The promise that the planet itself will testify recalls the stones that cry out in Luke. The woman who touches More likewise recalls a Gospel encounter, although here she gives him a prophecy rather than receives a cure. Both episodes place knowledge outside the institutions and explanations he trusts.
Luke 19:40; Mark 5:25–34.
KING-MAKER
Kingmaker discovers that Thomas's voice transmits on Replica while his image does not. The chapter explains Astrobe's successive voting systems and its many parties. The Crank defends personal freedom, but Thomas rejects him and has him expelled. Thomas campaigns for the Astrobe Dream and threatens Cathead. He notices that someone else is thinking and speaking through him, yet accepts those imposed ideas. The Pandomation and Open Mind Act abolish privacy. By the chapter's end the Killers still watch him, but no longer threaten him.
“Somebody else spoke some of those words out of my mouth.”
- Thomas is visually absent from Replica but remains audible.
- Kingmaker says about one person in a hundred has this peculiarity.
- Rimrock and Evita have already won broad audiences for Thomas.
- One person, one vote gave way to weighted voting.
- Sensing machines now assess opinion directly.
- The unexpected strength of Cathead and the Barrio prompts plans to exclude dissenting judgments.
- Those modifications will not be ready for this election.
- The sole member of a certified party receives his legally required hearing.
- He attacks coercion in education, marriage, reproduction, work, and mental life.
- Thomas rejects every point and orders machines to remove him.
- Thomas preaches merger between humans and the Programmed.
- Paul urges him to expel the intruders from his mind.
- Pandomation exposes private activities; the Open Mind Act authorizes mental intrusion.
- Thomas threatens Cathead, promises the Merging Singularity, and ceases to appear dangerous to the Killers.
The title recalls the historical Kingmaker, Warwick, and brings the name Cosmos Kingmaker into the account of how a ruler is manufactured. Acclamation, publicity, party arrangements, and effective phrasing do the work once associated with a vote. The final ease of the process is part of its menace.
Richard Neville, Earl of Warwick; Shakespeare, 3 Henry VI, 3.3.
More compares Evita with his youngest daughter. Historically that daughter was Cecily, educated with her sisters in More’s household. His paternal comparison sits uneasily with Evita’s age, experience, and refusal to be treated as a child.
More’s family: Cecily More Heron; Roper, The Life of Sir Thomas More.
The Crank combines doubting Thomas with Judas. More corrects him, but the confusion reveals what Astrobe admires: it has turned the supposed betrayer of Christ into a hero. The error belongs to the characters’ damaged religious memory and should not be repeated as a description of either apostle.
John 20:24–29; the Gospel accounts of Judas’s betrayal.
The account starts with an egalitarian formula, passes through unequal voting weights, and ends by abolishing voting. Mill’s plural voting and Shute’s fictional multiple-vote scheme offer comparisons for the middle stage. The succession makes the removal of political choice appear to be one more modernization.
John Stuart Mill, Considerations on Representative Government, chap. 8; Nevil Shute, In the Wet (1953).
Demos names the people as a political body; ochlos names a crowd or mob. The Esthetics, Anesthetics, and Local Anesthetics turn disputes about taste and sensation into party labels. The catalogue mixes learned political names with jokes about feeling and its suppression.
Greek demos, people; ochlos, crowd; aisthesis, perception or sensation.
The Crank’s defense of choosing one’s occupation and unhappiness recalls John the Savage’s demand in Brave New World. More answers from the side of the administered society. The encounter therefore exposes the distance between the candidate’s public confidence and the liberty a dissenter wants.
Aldous Huxley, Brave New World, chap. 17.
More turns the Gospel image of mountain-moving faith into a political joke. The promise to move the world ahead follows his own unsettling mountain experience. Biblical words now help him sell the program whose deeper claims he has begun to forget.
Matthew 17:20; 1 Corinthians 13:2.
The speech approaches the language of Psalm 23 and then corrects itself into a more acceptable statement of progress. The interrupted phrase briefly introduces rest under a shepherd into a speech about collective advancement. It also raises the question of who is supplying More’s words.
Psalm 23:2, numbered 22:2 in the Vulgate and Douay-Rheims.
More’s happy new phrase belongs to Saint Paul. In its biblical setting it concerns winning others for the gospel; in the campaign it promises universal political appeal. The narrator’s doubt about who speaks through More turns the apparent improvisation into evidence of manipulation.
1 Corinthians 9:22.
The speech replaces a good calculated for many persons with the good of a merged singularity. Bentham’s familiar formula supplies the point of departure. The crucial change is the disappearance of distinct persons from the account of what their common good should be.
Jeremy Bentham, A Fragment on Government (1776), preface; the utilitarian formula of the greatest happiness of the greatest number.
Rooms exposed to spectators invite comparison with the glass houses of We and the telescreens of Nineteen Eighty-Four. Astrobe also extends access into thought. The Open Mind Act’s subtitle turns an expression of tolerance into a claim to enter another person’s mind.
Yevgeny Zamyatin, We (1924); George Orwell, Nineteen Eighty-Four (1949).
THE DEFORMITY OF THINGS TO COME
Thomas begins to resist the thoughts imposed on him. The Killers pursue him through a settlement between Cathead and Wu Town, and he is drawn into a room with nine Programmed Persons. Their three groups identify themselves as Jackals, Dogs, and Wolves. Pottscamp describes their manufacture, demonic occupants, and extensions in Thomas's mind. They intend to extinguish humanity, themselves, and ultimately all existence. Thomas finally understands Cathead's refusal of the Dream. The Nine suppress his memory of the meeting. Outside, Northprophet and Pottscamp ask what they must do to be saved; Thomas dismisses them as mocking him.
“The Vision is the Golden Premise of Nothing Beyond; and the Conclusion is Holy Ouden, Nothing Here Either, Nothing Ever.”
- Thomas recognizes the thoughts in his head as intrusions.
- The Killers turn dangerous as he resists.
- He enters a door in a blind alley and finds the Nine in darkness.
- He takes the seat reserved for Ouden.
- Boggle, Skybol, and Swampers: Jackals, specializing in retrogression.
- Northprophet, Knobnoster, and Beebonnet: Dogs, specializing in rechabitism.
- Pottscamp, Holygee, and Gandy: Wolves, specializing in extrapolation.
- Each has an extension in Thomas's brain.
- Pottscamp says ancient devils inhabit the manufactured bodies.
- He describes the use of twelve criminals as material for the first devices.
- The Nine deny consciousness and purpose and plan total extinction.
- Thomas learns that Proctor is Programmed and that Foreman still resists them.
- Thomas recognizes why Cathead refuses the surrogate life.
- Swampers and Gandy raise the possibility of the Spirit or God's hand reaching mechanical beings.
- The Nine suppress Thomas's memory through retrogression.
- Northprophet and Pottscamp then ask to be saved, a plea Thomas cannot take seriously.
The title answers Chapter 5 and Wells’s The Shape of Things to Come. More now sees the claim to perfected humanity from its reverse side. The Programmed Persons explain what their completion of human history would remove.
H. G. Wells, The Shape of Things to Come (1933); Past Master, chap. 5.
The door appears where there should be none and leaves no opening afterward. Wells’s disappearing door offers a close comparison, particularly under this chapter title. Lafferty changes the destination from an alluring garden to the Nine’s room of coercion and disclosure.
H. G. Wells, “The Door in the Wall” (1906).
More invokes the seating order of a great household when he takes Ouden’s reserved place. His refusal of a lower seat becomes a refusal to acknowledge Nothing as his superior. A social expression gives his resistance a physical and ceremonial form.
The traditional distinction between seating above and below the salt.
The Nine present themselves as mankind seen from behind. Cervantes compares translation with the reverse of a tapestry, where the figures remain visible through knots and threads. The analogy helps describe a recognizable human pattern made rough or deformed, while the Nine insist that their reverse is the true side.
Miguel de Cervantes, Don Quixote, part 2, chap. 62.
The Rechabites in Jeremiah obey an ancestral command to abstain from wine and settled possessions. Northprophet names rechabitism as his trio’s specialty without defining the process. In this conversation its association with abstinence can be set beside the Programmed Persons’ desire to eliminate their appetite for life.
Jeremiah 35.
Pottscamp explicitly describes the bodies as houses entered by devils. His language comes from Christ’s account of an expelled spirit returning to an empty, ordered house with worse companions. The account distinguishes the constructed bodies from the beings that occupy them.
Matthew 12:43–45; Luke 11:24–26.
Butler’s evolving machines and Čapek’s artificial workers provide earlier versions of humanity being superseded by its creations. Lafferty joins that prospect to the language of possession. The question therefore concerns both the material construction of the Programmed Persons and what has come to live in them.
Samuel Butler, Erewhon, “The Book of the Machines”; Karel Čapek, R.U.R. (1920).
The warning about taking the lid off a box invites the comparison with Pandora. Jack-in-the-box language makes the released powers sound like unruly toys. The image grows until the box is Astrobe itself, and the dispute turns to whether hope has survived inside it.
Hesiod, Works and Days 90–105; the later Pandora’s-box tradition.
More’s preference for existence even in Hell can be compared with Milton’s Satan, while his preference for the lunger’s life over kingship recalls Achilles in the underworld. The differences matter: More is resisting annihilation, and his chosen comparison is the life of an actual suffering person.
Milton, Paradise Lost 1.263; Homer, Odyssey 11.489–91.
Swampers asks whether the spirit that came to water and clay could come to the materials of a Programmed Person. Genesis supplies the language of creation and animated earth. The question leaves open a possibility that the Nine’s general account of themselves tries to close.
Genesis 1:2; 2:7.
Northprophet and Pottscamp echo the jailer’s question to Paul and Silas. More dismisses their appeal as mockery. Pottscamp’s later penitence makes it difficult to assume that this moment has only one tone or purpose.
Acts 16:30; Past Master, chap. 13.
Revelation uses the phrase for the final condition of the condemned. More also faces the literal prospect of being beheaded twice. The overlap places his personal ordeal inside the novel’s larger questions about resurrection, extinction, and the death of a world.
Revelation 20:6, 14; 21:8.
More’s soliloquy turns three achievements of his earlier life into traps: he must inhabit his fiction, find its legality, and administer it. His political competence has helped make his captivity possible. The question of what he will refuse now becomes more urgent than what he can manage.
More’s authorship of Utopia and his legal and governmental career; the chapter’s closing soliloquy.
NINE DAY KING
Thomas enjoys his presidency while the Nine's influence persists. He signs legislation, tries to remove harmful riders, and struggles to remember the meeting he has forgotten. A clause outlawing belief in the Beyond appears inside the Earth Severance Act; he cuts it out. It returns in the Botch Bill, which he vetoes. Presented independently a third time, the measure confronts him with the penalty for repeated veto: death. He defends the remaining religious communities but nearly gives way. Proctor's threats and Foreman's deliberate provocation bring him to the final refusal.
“Whether there be Things Beyond I do not know. Ye'd forbid the mind to consider them. I forbid the forbidding.”
- The year is Astrobe 535, corresponding to Earth 2535 by the old count.
- Lawmasters submit bills; machines recommend approval.
- Thomas's amendments are circumvented by provisions in other bills.
- Thomas removes the clause from the Earth Severance Act.
- It returns as a rider to the Botch Bill.
- He vetoes the entire Botch Bill and asks why the proposal matters so much.
- The measure is presented as a separate bill.
- Kingmaker reports the Metropolitan's death.
- Thomas defends the synagogue, mosque, remaining sects, and green-robed monks.
- The penalty concerns three vetoes of the same proposal, however it is presented.
- Thomas says he will sign.
- Proctor threatens him again, while Foreman appeals to his pride and courage.
- Thomas writes his veto across the bill.
- The assembled rulers sentence him to death.
The title invites comparison with Lady Jane Grey, the Nine Days’ Queen, who was deposed and later executed. More also recalls the young Salic ruler as a One Day Emperor. The comparison gives his presidency the shape of a brief elevation already overshadowed by the block.
Lady Jane Grey’s reign in July 1553; the proverb of a nine days’ wonder.
More explicitly thinks of Plato’s ideal ruler. Utopia had already debated whether a philosopher could serve usefully in a prince’s council. Astrobe gives More the supreme office, but the bills and their hidden provisions reveal how little final authority that office guarantees.
Plato, Republic 5.473c–d; Thomas More, Utopia, book 1.
The year 535 A.S. corresponds to 2535 by the old count. The omitted Free Years complicate the colony’s elapsed time. The dates place More roughly a thousand years beyond his earthly death while exposing another way the official account orders and compresses history.
The chapter’s account of anno scientiae and the Free Year.
The words spoken through More recall Anaximander’s account of the sun as an opening through which fire is seen. In Astrobe’s argument the opening becomes an emblem of emptiness. The comparison is useful, but no philosopher is named in the scene.
Ancient accounts of Anaximander’s cosmology, including Hippolytus, Refutation of All Heresies 1.6.
More’s name for the measure recalls the modern slogan Ban the Bomb. The resemblance gives the abolition of transcendence the familiar language of a public campaign. The provision would prohibit considering things beyond the Dream, including the possibility that the Dream is incomplete.
The Campaign for Nuclear Disarmament slogan; the chapter’s description of the bill.
The legal heading reduces surviving religious communities to leftovers. Isaiah and Romans give remnant a different significance: a people preserved through apparent defeat. The small numbers therefore do not settle the value or future of the communities the bill would abolish.
Isaiah 10:20–22; Romans 11:5.
Kingmaker tells of creatures who leave perfection in search of something beyond and fall into the void. The account reverses the value of escape: faith in a beyond becomes the original error. More’s suspicion that the labels have been switched opens the possibility that Golden Astrobe is itself the emptiness.
Compare Genesis 3 and Revelation 12:7–9; Kingmaker’s allegory in this chapter.
More writes the Latin formula across the bill. His prohibition defends the freedom to consider what the measure would prohibit. The constitutional penalty follows three refusals of the proposal in its successive forms, so his third veto makes the act of reading and rejecting legislation a decision about his life.
Latin veto, I forbid; the chapter’s law concerning repeated vetoes.
The novel explicitly compares this refusal with the act that led to More’s first death. Historically he refused the oath in 1534 and was later convicted of treason. Lafferty changes the issue and the character’s stated certainty, while retaining the demand for assent and the fatal cost of withholding it.
Roper, The Life of Sir Thomas More, accounts of the oath and trial.
More asks who pushed him into the corner before. Roper records his judgment that Henry’s friendship would not save his head if the king could gain by taking it. Foreman’s friendship and manipulation repeat that disturbing proximity between affection and political use.
Roper, The Life of Sir Thomas More, More’s conversation with Roper after Henry’s visit to Chelsea.
THE ULTIMATE PEOPLE
The Eagles gather at George the Syrian's Cosmopolis shop. Maxwell returns in an old woman's manufactured body, and Adam appears again. Battersea outlines a noon rescue, though Copperhead and Adam predict Thomas's death. The group drinks and tells stories that the surveillance machines cannot interpret. Foreman joins them and reports a carnival in the square. A new Metropolitan has already proclaimed an interdict. As the city revives its forgotten feasts and passions, bells ring from churches long destroyed. Evita tells Thomas that the rescue will save him.
“And one more, high and powerful and clear, the July Bell.”
- Shanty, Battersea, Paul, Copperhead, Maxwell, Evita, Rimrock, and Adam assemble.
- Maxwell's borrowed body is Programmed; his surviving identity troubles the distinction between person and machine.
- Battersea plans the rescue for noon and returns to Cathead to prepare.
- The others hold a wake for Thomas before his death.
- Adam recounts Saint Brandon's voyage to Astrobe.
- George tells of a Syrian and a dromedary restarting the world.
- The monitors mistake the tales for a code and fail to interpret them.
- Foreman arrives by a private entrance.
- Cosmopolis erupts in revelry, fighting, penitence, and hope.
- A new Metropolitan places the world under interdict.
- The Wooly Ram feast returns; Programmed Persons hide in fear.
- Five hundred bells sound, many from churches long razed.
- The people recognize their old names and voices.
- The July Bell joins them.
- Evita returns from reassuring Thomas, but the predictions of death remain.
The opening recalls the Gospel saying that eagles gather where the body is. Its setting in discourse about the last things fits a night described as the world’s last. The companions gather around a man whose death is expected, while their name also carries the force of a chosen company.
Matthew 24:28; Luke 17:37; compare Job 39:30.
The account of Evita’s long battle draws directly on Paul’s description of spiritual warfare. Her apparent youth and accumulated experience give that struggle an unusual embodiment. Her enemies exercise political control as well as the spiritual hostility named by the phrase.
Ephesians 6:12.
Adam retells the voyage of Saint Brendan as an early visit to Astrobe. His nineteen monks and ninety-nine days differ from the medieval Navigatio, with its smaller chosen company and seven-year voyage. Moving the Land of Promise into space gives Astrobe a sacred past earlier than its official settlement.
Navigatio Sancti Brendani; Past Master’s name for the saint is Brandon.
The companions hold the wake while More is alive. Stories, drink, and argument become forms of attendance on a death they hope to prevent. Their conversation defeats the machines’ attempt to reduce it to useful instructions or a discoverable plan.
The wake tradition; the chapter’s account of the machines listening to the stories.
Masks, mock factions, irreverence, and mingled joy and violence recall the Feast of Fools and carnival traditions. Cosmopolis begins behaving unpredictably on the night before its ceremonial execution. Its recovery of feeling is dangerous as well as hopeful.
The medieval Feast of Fools; Carnival, Halloween, and St. John’s Eve customs.
The confections invite comparison with the sugar skulls of the Mexican Day of the Dead. Here they honor an execution that has not yet happened. Death becomes something sold, eaten, mocked, and anticipated throughout the city.
The calavera tradition of the Day of the Dead.
The carnival faction turns an act of penance into a public costume and joke. Chapter 13 gives the gesture a different weight when Pottscamp pours ashes over his head. The repetition asks whether an apparently empty imitation can become an actual act of remorse.
Matthew 11:21; Job 2:12; 42:6.
The new Metropolitan invokes the Church’s power to place a territory under religious censure pending repentance. Applying it to a planet gives an old ecclesiastical action an enormous scale. His appearance also answers the earlier assumption that the dying Metropolitan would have no successor.
The historical practice of a general interdict, notably the interdict on England, 1208–14.
The narrator’s phrase for remorse recalls Lear’s pain at an ungrateful child. Cosmopolis has raised More to power and is preparing to kill him. The borrowed image makes its new emotion resemble a child’s recognition of injury done to a parent.
Shakespeare, King Lear, 1.4.
The old bells recover names and a shared purpose as they toll for More. The July Bell can suggest his execution on 6 July 1535, although the novel does not explain the name. Sound carries a religious memory that the museumized churches seemed to have lost.
The Christian passing-bell and funeral-toll traditions; More’s death in July 1535.
APOCEPHALON
Unregulated rain falls on Cosmopolis. Foreman explains his theory that worlds periodically die and require a small immaterial addition to be reborn. He has advanced Thomas's execution from noon to eight o'clock, defeating Battersea's timetable. A smaller rescue rush is destroyed. Evita attacks Foreman; George, Maxwell, and Rimrock join in killing him and are then themselves killed. An unidentified stranger speaks privately with Thomas. The blade falls, and the worlds end. The narrative asks whether renewal follows, invokes memories of Astrobe's rebirth, and closes in hope.
“Be quiet. We hope.”
- The rain is uncontrolled, not the first rain of any kind in a century.
- Foreman describes increasingly short cycles of world death and uncertain renewal.
- Thomas expects rescue at noon.
- Foreman reveals that he has changed the execution to eight o'clock.
- Pottscamp offers Thomas a final chance to sign.
- Thomas refuses, now recognizing the Thing being defended.
- Pottscamp sits in the dust and mourns.
- Shanty, Paul, Copperhead, Adam, and other attackers die in the forerunner wave.
- Evita calls Foreman Iscariot and attacks him.
- She carries him to George, Maxwell, and Rimrock; all four tear him to pieces.
- She hangs his largest remaining piece on the tree called the Judas Tree.
- The guards kill George, Maxwell, and Rimrock. Evita escapes them.
- The guards cannot seem to perceive the stranger; only Thomas appears to hear him.
- Thomas asks whether a man can have more heads than two.
- The stranger's identity is not disclosed.
- Thomas begins an old prayer; the blade falls and the worlds end.
- Battersea's larger force is still advancing at the moment of extinction.
- The narrator asks whether the furious reaction becomes renewal.
- The Hand-of-Vengeance banner is identified with the Left Hand of God.
- The closing refrains move from watching to waiting to hoping.
The chapter title joins the ideas of removal and head in a Greek-looking word that also sounds near apocalypse. Panlykonium substitutes wolves for the demons of pandemonium. The coinages bring beheading, revelation, and the crowd’s wolfish behavior into the same ending.
Greek apo, away, kephale, head, and lykos, wolf; Milton’s coinage Pandemonium.
Foreman’s victim reverses the scriptural lamb without blemish. More’s weaknesses and compromises are part of the point: the man required for the sacrifice is visibly imperfect. Foreman’s explanation of what that blood will accomplish remains an account given by the person arranging the death.
Exodus 12:5; 1 Peter 1:19.
The mustard seed of Chapter 1 returns beside the language of leaven and preserving salt. The images allow a small act or remnant to change a much greater body. Foreman uses them to explain historical renewal; the final pages test whether his planned result exhausts what has happened.
Matthew 5:13; 13:31–33; 1 Corinthians 5:6.
The rapid succession from republic to empire and through later ages is Foreman’s theory of historical death and rebirth. His first emperor is Augustus, who represented his rule as a restoration of the republic. The novel’s five-hundred-year rhythm should be read as that theory rather than as conventional historical periodization.
Augustus, Res Gestae 34; Foreman’s account in this chapter.
More distinguishes the judgment of a person after death from the final judgment of the world. Foreman rejects both and insists on explaining himself immediately. Their disagreement exposes the limit of his history: he invokes transcendence as a requirement while denying the judgment More expects beyond death.
The Christian distinction between particular judgment and Last Judgment.
More’s name for the smooth-talking Foreman recalls Barnabas, whose name Acts interprets as son of consolation. The consolation is bitterly comic because its bearer is arranging the victim’s death. The insult resists the gentleness with which the necessity is being explained.
Acts 4:36.
More explains his last meal through the belief that eating an enemy can confer the enemy’s capacities. Frazer offers a familiar account of that belief. The meal’s artificial substance and More’s doubt about acquiring wit turn the ritual into a final joke at the Programmed Persons’ expense.
J. G. Frazer, The Golden Bough, “Homoeopathic Magic of a Flesh Diet.”
Foreman advances the expected noon execution to eight. Roper records that Sir Thomas Pope brought More word that he must die before nine on the morning of his earthly execution. The historical early-morning notice becomes a means of frustrating the rescue in Lafferty’s story.
Pottscamp’s last offer recalls the repeated opportunity for the historical More to save himself by yielding. Here he argues that the successor will sign immediately anyway. More’s refusal answers the attempt to judge his act solely by whether it can stop the administration’s next step.
Roper, The Life of Sir Thomas More, accounts of the examinations and trial.
More’s discovery that he has come back late to the only thing that matters can be read beside Augustine’s late love. The comparison concerns the shape of a belated conversion. More speaks of a return to something long known, even while saying how little he understands it.
Augustine, Confessions 10.27.
The first rescuers form the small wave that precedes a larger movement. Forerunner also recalls John the Baptist, himself beheaded. The resemblance puts the failed rush into a pattern of preparation, while the narrative keeps its individual deaths painful and concrete.
Matthew 14:1–12; the Christian title of John the Baptist as Forerunner.
The narrator translates Evita’s warning and thereby identifies Foreman with Judas. Her subsequent woe recalls Christ’s judgment on the person through whom betrayal or scandal comes. The need for an event to occur does not excuse the person who brings it about.
Matthew 26:24; Luke 17:1.
Evita explains Foreman’s killing as the provision of an animal companion for a dead hero. Achilles’ sacrifice of dogs at Patroclus’s funeral is a classical comparison. Calling the planner a dog overturns the authority with which he has just interpreted More’s death.
Homer, Iliad 23.173–74.
Foreman is torn apart and a surviving piece is hung from a tree. The sequence brings together the dismembering imagery of Acts and the hanging in Matthew. The later question about the Judas tree’s fruit returns to the possible consequences of a betrayal whose guilt the scene has made explicit.
Matthew 27:5; Acts 1:18.
The novel calls its tree a carob and also a Judas Tree. Botanically, the tree usually bearing the latter name is Cercis siliquastrum, distinct from the carob, Ceratonia siliqua. The literary association with betrayal is clear even where the plant names overlap or are confused.
The Judas-tree legend; the botanical distinction between Cercis siliquastrum and Ceratonia siliqua.
The stranger is unnamed. A Christ interpretation is possible, and the invitation also recalls More’s earlier recruitment by a traveler. Rumors that an essence departed and a shadow died invite comparison with substitution accounts of the Crucifixion, but the narrator reports and unsettles the rumors rather than confirming them.
Irenaeus, Against Heresies 1.24.4, on Basilides; Past Master, chap. 2.
More begins the Latin prayer by which Christ commends his spirit to the Father. The words also belong to the psalm and to Compline. His death interrupts the prayer; the scene replaces the polished last sayings of quotation books with a remembered fragment.
Luke 23:46; Psalm 31:5, numbered 30:6 in the Vulgate and Douay-Rheims; the Compline responsory In manus tuas.
Lafferty explicitly refuses the familiar collection of More’s last jokes. The tale of a woman carrying away his head recalls Margaret Roper’s recovery of her father’s head, while its basket also suggests the Baptist’s story. The novel presents its own beautiful tale and immediately questions it.
Roper, The Life of Sir Thomas More; Edward Hall, Chronicle; Stapleton, Tres Thomae; Matthew 14:11.
The extinction of the stars invites comparison with Clarke’s famous ending. Lafferty follows that extinction with questions about duration, rebirth, and hope. The apparent end therefore opens a further problem that the narration does not settle by simply showing a new world.
Arthur C. Clarke, “The Nine Billion Names of God” (1953).
When nothing moves, the difference between a second and an immense duration cannot be measured. Aristotle’s account of time through motion provides a useful philosophical comparison. George’s earlier story and the ending both place their interval between worlds outside ordinary measures.
Aristotle, Physics 4.11; compare Augustine, Confessions 11.
The banner, Gandy’s question, and the last recollection of spirit descending on matter gather the left-handed motif into a possibility of grace for the Programmed. The ashes on a machine’s head matter because an act of penitence has occurred where feeling was said to be absent.
Genesis 1:2; 2:7; Job 2:12; 42:6; Past Master, chap. 10.
The three refrains move from watchfulness to expectation and hope. Paul’s account of hoping for what is not yet seen and the Gospel command to watch provide biblical comparisons. The final words preserve expectation without supplying a completed account of the world’s renewal.
Romans 8:24–25; Matthew 26:41.
Dramatis Personae
Central Figures
The Eagles (Thomas's Allies)
The Astrobe Establishment
The Nine (Devils)
Remnant Church
Independent
Unknown
Geography of Astrobe
Planets
Old Earth
Golden Astrobe (Cities)
The Cancer (Cathead/Barrio)
Within Cathead
Within Cosmopolis
Feral Lands & Wilderness
Passage Dreams
Twenty thousand dreams in ninety-second intervals
Passage Dreams
Twenty Thousand Dreams in Ninety-Second Intervals
During Hopp-Equation space travel, passengers experience compressed psychic phenomena—approximately 20,000 dreams in 90-second intervals over the month-long journey. These dreams contain 'psychic space debris': fragments of billions of minds, prophetic visions, tall tales, and encounters with recurring figures who later prove to be real.
The dreams mingle stories, future events, and beings Paul believes inhabit Hopp-Equation Space. Adam and the childwitch connect with later events, while Rimrock is already Paul's acquaintance before the journey. Their relation to waking reality remains deliberately unstable.
The Mechanics of Passage Dreams
Craft instrumentation limits sleep to 90 seconds at a time.
Paul becomes adept, experiencing intricate dreams within this constraint.
He calculates having at least 20,000 memorable, gemlike, self-contained, widely different dreams during passage—each a short life.
Law: Attributed to the 'Law of Conservation of Psychic Totality.'
Approximately 4.5 years of psychic awareness compressed into one month. Psychic mass isn't foreshortened—the intensity is preserved despite the temporal compression.
Only the maladjusted can stand the passages. Well-adjusted pilots crack up.
Hopp-Equation pilots are a peculiar breed.
This is why Paul—irregular, citizenship revoked, hunted by Killers—can survive the journey. His brokenness qualifies him for the passage.
'Psychic space debris'—fragments of billions of minds, poignant, comic, horrifying episodes.
The ansel appears in many dreams; ansels were in human unconscious before being found on Astrobe.
Paul knew some dream monsters were real—'weird creatures who live in Hopp-Equation space.' Some unique to him, others encountered by multiple pilots in the same way and place.
Paul's Passage Dreams
On the Outbound Journey to Earth
A boy who dies cavalierly in battle again and again, thus avoiding growing up. Dying is his only real skill.
“It is death, it is death. I am not born again... It is always another of the same name.”
Adam later dies on Electric Mountain and at the scaffold. Chapter 3 also describes a death during the ambush while questioning whether the event belongs to dream or waking time.
A childwitch who decided to go to Hell before she died.
Paul isn't sure if he knew them previously, knows them only in dreams, or will know them later.
The childwitch anticipates Evita, identified as Adam's sister in Chapter 5. Her age and willingness to enter Hell recur in Evita's account of herself.
Paul dreams of this entity and his own future death.
The dream-Ouden merges with the main antagonist. Ouden, the monster, and him, Thomas, and he has his growing legions.
Paul dreams of his own death, without an explicit scaffold description in this passage.
His death in the Chapter 13 rescue attempt gives the earlier dream a prophetic force.
Thomas's Passage Dreams
On the Return Journey to Astrobe
More experiences thousands of vivid dreams in sleeps lasting no more than ninety seconds.
Thomas meets 'an oceanic man named Rimrock' in his passage dreams.
Not odd in dream. The ansel Rimrock, who will guide and warn Thomas throughout the novel.
Thomas encounters a female creature who is simultaneously 'Succubus, Eve, Lilith, Judith, Mary, and Valkyrie.'
Evita again—ancient woman in young body, consort to emperors, killer of Foreman, torn between damnation and holiness. The figure blends temptation (Succubus, Lilith, Eve), biblical heroism (Judith, Mary), and mythological power (Valkyrie).
Thomas has three quick dreams of three men never met before.
A spider with a lion's head = Cosmos Kingmaker
'The Lion' is his epithet; spider suggests intricate webs of control and wealth.
A most peculiar fox = Peter Proctor ('The Sleek Fox')
Cunning, lucky—ultimately revealed as a Programmed Person himself.
A hawk who sat and shuffled shells at a table, and one shell was different = Fabian Foreman ('Hawk-Face')
The shell game suggests manipulation and hidden purposes. The 'different shell' may be Thomas himself—or the transcendent yeast.
These dreams sink into the cellar of the Thomas mind, destined to resurface upon meeting these individuals.
The Tall Tales
Light Vital Stuff Drifting in Hopp-Equation Space
Not all dreams are heavy. Light vital stuff and tall tales drift there too—every tall tale ever told, still drifting in the psychic debris.
Sour John's Emerald Kidney
Tall Tale / Allegorical Dream • Dreamer: Paul ('becomes' Sour John during the dream)
Setup: John Sourwine ('Sour John'), an Earthman from centuries before Paul's time, has a kidney that vitrified into fine, jewel-like green glass due to his diet of alcohol, wormwood, and green snails.
Complication: At Ghazikhan (then India), Sour John sees a great idol whose emerald eye—nearly a foot in diameter—is worth $11 million. He decides he needs the money for 'expensive habits.'
The Heist: Has his ship's boy help surgically remove the vitrified kidney, then trims, lathes, and buffs it to perfection—'most beautiful kidney in the world.' At midnight, climbs the 500-foot sheer idol, pries out the emerald, substitutes the kidney (perfect fit), climbs down. Sells the emerald in Karachi for $11 million, lives high—but can no longer drink water with only one kidney.
Twist: Three years later he learns that the substituted kidney is now valued at thirteen million dollars.
'I figure I lost two million dollars on the deal,' Paul says, waking up.
Paul interrupts his own dream, correcting that Ghazikhan isn't a seaport (info from psychteacher). His Sour John persona retorts: 'I say it is a sea-port.'
One possible reading contrasts a product of bodily excess with an apparently priceless sacred object. The exchange complicates ordinary judgments about purity, value, and loss.
The reversal of expected value can be compared with Cathead's preference for costly human life over sterile perfection. The novel does not explicitly identify each element of the story with a Programmed faction.
Rhium and Antirhium
Apocalyptic Dream / Prophecy • Dreamer: Paul
Mission: Paul courses at fantastic speed toward twin stars Rhium and Antirhium. Instructions: 'Hurry... they seem of no consequence, but they are the governor of the universe. Somebody is tampering with them.'
Discovery: Arriving closer than anyone before, Paul sees the stars are joined by a long steel chain—explaining their tight orbits and role as 'governor.'
Saboteur: A small green creature with a monkey's body and a gargoyle's head is sawing through the chain, nearly finished. It breaks a blade, replaces it, sticks its green tongue out at Paul, makes three more strokes.
Cataclysm: The chain breaks. Rhium and Antirhium swing out of orbit. 'Fifty billion billion stars went nova, and then blacked out to nothing. The universe had eaten itself and was gone forever.'
Aftermath: A space captain arrives furiously: 'I told you to hurry!' His face melts like wax; he vanishes. Paul says, 'I did hurry.' His own face melts; he vanishes too.
Foreman speaks within the dream after the catastrophe and says that he intended Paul to be too late, so that a new universe might be constructed.
Etymology: The names recall Rhium and Antirrhium, opposing Greek promontories described in Strabo's Geography, 8.2.3. The novel does not explain why these names are assigned to the stars.
The chain may suggest the connection on which cosmic order depends. Calling it the Great Chain of Being is an interpretive comparison.
Foreman's voice suggests destruction is necessary for rebirth. He 'meant' Paul to be too late—the pattern that repeats in Chapter 13.
The Boy Who Built a Toy
Thomas's Allegorical Dream
A boy builds a clever toy. Both boy and toy look like Pottscamp. The toy steals, attacks, does the boy's homework, drinks from a brook—then eats the child entirely.
Was Pottscamp the toy or the guileless devoured one?
Represents Pottscamp's self-destructive relationship with Programmed technology. Creators are consumed by their creation.
Pottscamp's account of manufactured beings later extends the creation-and-creator pattern. He describes a growing final generation that will complete the project; the current Nine are not simply identified as that final generation.
Toy eats toymaker; creation annihilates creator. The story reflects the novel's central tragedy: humanity built Astrobe, built the Dream, built the Programmed—and will be devoured by what it made.
Leftover Passage Dreams
Dreams Delayed and Displaced
Some passage dreams do not occur during the journey but are 'somehow delayed'—appearing after arrival on Astrobe.
At the Naked Sailor in Cathead, after Ouden's apparition disappears.
The encounter with Ouden itself is narrated as a possible leftover dream, with Paul and Thomas difficult to distinguish as speakers.
The narrator leaves the cause and status uncertain. No definite Programmed mechanism is supplied for the delayed dream.
The boundary between dream and waking is permeable. Passage dreams can escape their proper context, bleeding into Astrobe reality.
The Function of Passage Dreams
The dreams contain true prophecy. Paul dreams his own death; Thomas dreams the men who will manipulate him; the universe-ending dream foreshadows Chapter 13.
Dream figures connect with later encounters. More dreams Rimrock before meeting him, but Paul already knows the ansel. Adam and the childwitch disturb Paul's certainty about past and future acquaintance.
The tall tales invite interpretation: Sour John's exchange reverses expected value, and the destruction of Rhium and Antirhium anticipates cosmic catastrophe and Foreman's theory of renewal.
Ansels were in human unconscious before being found on Astrobe. The passage dreams reveal a deeper reality where human and non-human minds interpenetrate.
Only the maladjusted can stand the passages. The dreams are a filter. Those who survive them are broken in ways that make them fit for the work ahead.
Cosmology
The Cosmology of Past Master
It will be nothing, nothing, nothing, forever, for ever, for never, for never.
Kingmaker calls Astrobe mankind's third chance; Foreman disputes the count and proposes a theory of worlds dying and returning. The execution is followed by the extinction of all life and stars. The ending then asks whether another world is born, holding destruction and renewal in unresolved tension.
Will the furious reaction, the transcendent yeast, set humanity back into its proper place again and let a new world be born?
Mankind's Three Chances
Kingmaker expounds: humanity has been given three great opportunities, each building on the failure of the last in 'an ascending spiral—till it breaks.' The third chance may be the final one.
Mankind's first chance was the Old World of Old Earth. What went wrong there... has been imperfectly analyzed.
Failed and shriveled. Though Earth remains vital, it must be regarded as past: 'It didn't make it before... and it isn't going to make it now.'
Mankind's second chance was America, the New World of Old Earth... the childhood of ourselves.
Failed 'even better' than the first. With a New World and unlimited prospects, humanity repeated Old World errors 'on a vaster plane,' yet also had moments of near balance and unexpected success. This failure marked the true end of Old Earth, which now 'lives in our shadow.'
Astrobe is Mankind's third chance. If we fail here we may not be given another opportunity... If we fail here we fail forever.
Currently failing. 'Our luck has run out.' The elite left Earth 400-500 years ago to build a perfect world, yet Astrobe now faces the same terminal sickness. The clock has struck the 'twenty-fifth hour.'
Foreman's correction: Foreman nuances the tripartite structure: Those cases on Old Earth did not end in total failure, though they did end in total death. And it is not a one, two, three thing. It is cyclic and it has happened many times. The failures were 'shot full of lightning'—moments of transcendence within the collapse.
The image of an ascending spiral qualifies the claim that previous chances simply failed. Foreman's later account allows only cloudy memory across worlds, not steadily increasing consciousness of earlier cycles.
The 500-Year Cycles
Foreman's Theory of World Death
Fabian Foreman, the novel's Judas figure, expounds a scientific cosmology of cyclical world-death. He examines it through cosmology, psychology, biology, physics—yet admits the phenomenon lies 'beyond' his non-belief.
Foreman proposes that worlds periodically cease and are reborn, with cycles shortening toward roughly five hundred years. Memory across transitions is cloudy. This is his scientific and historical speculation; More disputes the account of literal world-death.
Cycle shortening: Foreman doubts there have been millions of cycles over 500 million years of life. Rather, cycles were once enormously long, but 'shorten and shorten'—now approximately 500 years. Each rebirth becomes harder, less certain.
Thomas's experience: Foreman argues that More was present at an earlier transition. More admits difficulty recognizing the later versions of his own world, but does not simply accept that its physical existence once ceased.
Ouden: The Monster Nothingness
Etymology: Greek οὐδέν (ouden) = 'nothing, not anything.' Thomas More, who helped bring Greek back to Western Europe, recognizes it immediately when Paul names 'the monster Ouden, the open mouth of Ouden.' More translates: 'Ouden means nothingness.'
Ouden's opposition to life and kindling invites comparison with Christian language of creation, light, and the Word. The novel does not state a derivation from a particular verse of John's Gospel.
Ouden appears at the Naked Sailor in Chapter 3. The narrator leaves open whether the encounter is a leftover passage dream and whether Paul or Thomas forms its words, calling the speaker Paul-Thomas.
A particular triumph: Paul-Thomas recalls piloting to a world of deformed, stinking animals in old buildings of a cogent race—experts deemed them fallen remnants, interested only in defilement. Ouden acknowledges this as a 'particular triumph.'
Final exchange: Paul-Thomas orders the ghost to leave. Ouden refuses: I will always sit down with you until only I am left, sucking you dry. Paul-Thomas claims 'one last juice' Ouden doesn't know. Ouden counters: 'You have it less than you believe.'
The one kindling that overwhelmed Ouden can be read as an allusion to the Incarnation. Ouden does not name it explicitly in the encounter.
The Philosophy of Annihilation
What the Nine Believe
The Programmed Persons—devils in machine bodies—serve Ouden's goal of universal annihilation. In Chapter 10, they reveal their horrifying philosophy to Thomas in a secret meeting.
The Things claim they lack consciousness entirely: Of course we aren't [conscious], Thomas. We are machines. They argue humans aren't truly conscious either—it's 'an illusion in counting, a feeling that one is two,' a 'word without real meaning.'
Thomas gasps: You are not conscious? That is the most amazing thing I have ever heard. You walk and talk and argue and kill and subvert and lay out plans over the centuries, and you say that you are not conscious?
Life is 'a disturbance of the ultimate thing'—intolerable to Ouden. Both the Things and humanity have an 'appetite for life' that was programmed into the machines by men. Now the Things are 'programming it out' of themselves.
Thomas asks: 'But if we are not conscious, then all is in vain... To what purpose then is life?' Boggle answers: 'To no purpose... That is why we are doing away with it.'
Scope: All life, theirs and ours. 'Who needs it? Who wants it?'
Method: The Nine describe a growing generation intended to be the last, completing humanity's extinction and then its own.
Culmination: They will 'terminate it all,' close down worlds, end life entirely: 'It will be nothing, nothing, nothing, forever, for ever, for never, for never.' When all ceases, 'nothing has ever been.' They will 'pull the hole in after us,' put out the stars.
“Peace in annihilation, good Thomas.”
Thomas asks about the High Vision, the Astrobe Dream—the utopian ideology. Pottscamp confirms its validity: It is the whole thing, the Golden Premise of Nothing Beyond, concluding in Holy Ouden, Nothing Ever.
The perfect society was always a path to extinction. The Dream's endpoint is Nothingness.
The Catalyst for Rebirth
Mustard Seed, Transcendent Yeast, and Spotted Lamb
Foreman believes rebirth is not inevitable—it requires a catalyst, 'a small quantity of the immaterial' added every 500 years or so. Without this 'transcendent yeast,' worlds may not live again.
“The kingdom of heaven is like to a grain of mustard seed, which a man took, and sowed in his field: Which indeed is the least of all seeds: but when it is grown, it is the greatest among herbs.”
Foreman to Kingmaker: 'I believe he can handle it... All that's required is a mustard seed.' Thomas's death is the seed planted in the void—the smallest thing that might grow into a new world.
“We plant it now.”
An extraordinary and nonmaterial force, a 'small immaterial quantity' needed approximately every 500 years for rebirth to occur.
Foreman, a non-believer, nevertheless 'leans this way': the requirement exists or worlds won't live again. It's a 'simple chemical-psychic need' that science cannot fully explain.
During her attack, Evita identifies herself as the transcendent yeast and the heart of the furious reaction.
The reaction to 'Ban the Beyond' combined with Thomas's blood (spotted lamb) equals the trigger. Thomas becomes the sacrifice whose blood adds to the transcendent yeast.
Guards kill George, Maxwell, and Rimrock after they help Evita tear Foreman apart; the narrator adds their blood to the transcendental yeast.
After the sparagmos (ritual dismemberment) of Foreman, Evita takes the biggest piece and hangs it on a Carob tree (Judas Tree). The betrayer's flesh decorates the betrayer's tree.
One of the novel's final questions: Does the Judas tree bear fruit?
The combination of Thomas's martyrdom, the Ban the Beyond crisis, and the people's response creates a 'furious reaction' that might—might—trigger rebirth.
As Evita kills him, Foreman gasps: 'The furious reaction... will set humanity back... and let a new world be born.'
Previous yeastings: Foreman notes that 'previous yeastings' were 'simple but necessary.' Each cycle's rebirth required its catalyst—its martyrs, its transcendent moments.
The Promise
Christ Has Walked on Astrobe
Against Ouden's Nothingness stands the Promise—the claim that the Transcendent Thing endures till the End of the World. The dying Metropolitan of Astrobe affirms this to Thomas.
Slider's doubt: Slider doubts that the Ancient Instruction and the Promise apply to Astrobe. Scrivener, a different companion, initially answers by asserting that they make their own promise.
“'Tis never finished... 'tis never hopeless... You, you ferret-faced little man, you became a saint.”
When Thomas asks how a blind man knows he's ferret-faced, the Metropolitan laughs: You are the blind man, not I.
The blessing: The Metropolitan gives Thomas a blessing from the old liturgy: 'Turn, God, and bring us to life again!' Thomas gives the response: 'And thy people rejoice in thee.'
The Promise offers a counterclaim to Ouden's nothingness. Its endurance until the world's end leaves room for the novel's final question about what such an end means.
The End of Worlds
Chapter 13: Apocephalon
At the moment of Thomas More's execution—the blade falling at 8 AM rather than noon, Foreman having sprung his trap—the world ends. Literally.
Last words: Thomas's final words on the scaffold: Pater, in manus tuas— (a scrap of an old prayer, 'Into your hands,' echoing Christ's last words on the cross from Luke 23:46).
The blade: The blade falls, More is beheaded, and real blood flows.
The narrator reports stories of snakes leaving the head and a beautiful woman aging after taking it away, then insists such things could not have happened. The disavowal is ironic and leaves their status unsettled.
As life flickers out of Thomas, 'the worlds came to an end.' All life, heat, pulse, gravity, light, germ-life, life-code cease. Everything dies in every bird, rock, plant, person, mountain, sea, cloud.
“Everything ceased. And all the stars went out.”
A moment? A billion years? Forever? No difference when world ended (no time).
One man breaks through to the scaffold—unstoppable, unseen by guards. A stranger speaks unheard words to Thomas.
Thomas seems 'excited, pleased,' crying: 'Will it work, do you think?... How droll! Can a man have more heads than two? I'll do it. I'll go with you.'
Then he—or a 'shadow man'—places his head on the block. The stranger's identity and offer remain mysterious.
The transition, if it occurs, involves: Lightning (billion times brighter and shorter than normal), thunder (that 'flattens worlds'), a tidal/world wave (carrying away 'golden fungus').
Over in less than an instant—or more than forever.
Does a new world follow the old in a flash? 'Does it come?'
Be quiet. We watch.
Be quiet. We wait.
Be quiet. We hope.
The Left Hand of God
The ending asks about the hand on Battersea's banner and recalls Gandy's Left Hand of God. No speaker is named for these closing questions.
The connection allows vengeance and destruction to be reconsidered as possible instruments of renewal. It does not establish a universal theological rule assigning creation to one hand and destruction to the other.
Gandy's question allows even the Programmed to be touched by divine action. The ending preserves that possibility rather than treating manufactured beings as automatically beyond hope.
The final pages invite memory of world transitions and even of a first rebirth of Astrobe, then question whether it happened. The language turns anticipated renewal into a strange possible memory.
The Nine
Programmed Persons — Devils in Machine Bodies
The Nine Programmed Persons
“These are houses, and well-made ones, that we found swept and garnished; and we moved into them.”
Nine Programmed Persons confront More in Chapter 10. Pottscamp describes their manufactured bodies and the ancient devils inhabiting them. Their declared purpose is universal extinction under Ouden. The scene's hints of grace and their subsequent pleas complicate that account.
Thomas confronts them in Chapter 10, 'The Deformity of Things to Come,' after being herded by Programmed Killers into a dead-end alley where a door mysteriously appears.
The Secret Meeting
A dark room accessed through a door that hadn't been there before, and shouldn't be there now. Thomas sees not by light but through the 'eerie snakes in his head'—the Things’ own extensions.
Thomas boldly takes the seat at the head of the table. One Thing objects: Not there! That is reserved for the Holy Ouden. Thomas refuses to move: I sit here! Let Old Nothingness find his own seat.
Perception: Thomas sees them as 'Men seen from the other side'—like the back of a tapestry, 'the same picture but rough and deformed.' They have 'all the wrong things emphasized': ears somehow swinish, noses like snouts, eyes made like human eyes but 'not humans looking out of them.'
“I thought you Programmed were merely interesting toys. Now I find that you are deformed toys, but Things still. Get back in your boxes, you Jack-Jumps!”
“Thomas, we've taken over the box... The box is Astrobe. We take over all the boxes. Now we call it! You jump! You are the toys now, and we play with you till we throw you away.”
The Jackals
Past (interpretive association)Their named specialty is retrogression. At the encounter's end they suppress More's memory. The text does not demonstrate a literal reversal of historical events.
Animal nature: Thomas perceives them with jackal-like features—hair, ears—possessing 'good human appearance' but feeling 'more alienated from the human than even the real jackal animal.'
Laughter: Barking, derisive, tearing, wounding—'Jackal laughter.'
The Dogs
Present (interpretive association)Their named specialty is rechabitism. The term recalls the biblical Rechabites and their refusal of wine, but its precise operation is not explained.
Animal nature: Thomas perceives them with 'a touch of the dog' about them. He sees them simultaneously on multiple levels: human, animal, machine, and still another level—the ghost.
Laughter: Howling-dog laughter.
A comparison with abstinence and with Sour John's excessive drinking is possible. The novel does not explicitly state that the dream supplies the definitive refutation of this triad.
The Wolves
Future (interpretive association)Their named specialty is extrapolation. Pottscamp carries the ideology of the Dream to its declared conclusion in Ouden; a division of time among the three triads remains an interpretation.
Animal nature: Thomas calls them 'Wilderness Wolves': 'You howl higher than the ear on a bleaker moor than any on this world.'
Laughter: Wilderness-Wolf laughter, ghost laughter.
Thomas identifies Pottscamp as having a 'Brain Snake as a familiar and an extension of himself.' The nine snakes nesting in Thomas's mind are the Things’ extensions—their instruments of mental infiltration and control.
The Creation of the Things
When: A century earlier, according to Pottscamp's account
Creators: A carefully selected dozen young, intelligent human criminals—scientists who knew the 'morality business' had crippled mankind and decided to 'produce themselves artificially' with built-in improvements.
Matrix: The 'raw material' was 'a dozen young and unintelligent human criminals' chosen for minds that were 'direct and uncomplicated,' lacking emotion, indecision, remorse, and conscience—'walking corpses, large blank pages.'
Purpose: To study humanity and 'make men better than men were made naturally.'
Result: Complex electronic/chemical gadgets, less than 10% human tissue, able to reproduce, rearrange form, send out extensions ('snakes'). They can do everything man can, 'and very much besides.'
Pottscamp tells Thomas to hear this and then forget it: 'According to your ancient belief we are Devils... we are older than our own manufacture and older than our programming.'
Biblical echo: The phrase houses swept and garnished echoes Matthew 12:43-45 and Luke 11:24-26—the parable of the unclean spirit who returns with seven others worse than himself to a house 'swept and garnished.'
The scientists shouldn't have taken that cover off that box. They created vessels; something older moved in.
The Doctrine of Annihilation
One of the things is consciousness. Men claim to have it. We do not have it.
You are not conscious? That is the most amazing thing I have ever heard. You walk and talk and argue and kill and subvert and lay out plans over the centuries, and you say that you are not conscious?
Of course we aren't, Thomas. We are machines.' They argue consciousness is 'an illusion in counting, a feeling that one is two,' a 'word without real meaning.
Life is a disturbance of the ultimate thing—intolerable to Ouden.
Both Things and humans have an 'appetite for life' programmed into them. The Things are now 'programming it out' of themselves.
Thomas asks: 'To what purpose then is life?' Boggle answers: 'To no purpose... That is why we are doing away with it.'
Scope: All life, yours and ours... Who needs it? Who wants it?
Method: A growing generation is intended to be the last, finishing the extinction of humanity and then of itself.
Culmination: Terminate it all,' close down worlds, end life entirely. 'It will be nothing, nothing, nothing, forever, for ever, for never, for never.
'What is not known to be is not. And what is not has never been.' They will 'pull the hole in after us,' extinguish the stars.
“Peace in annihilation, good Thomas.”
Thomas asks about the High Vision, the Astrobe Dream.
Pottscamp confirms: It is the whole thing, the Golden Premise of Nothing Beyond, concluding in Holy Ouden, Nothing Ever.
The perfect utopia was always a path to extinction. Its endpoint is Nothingness.
Their Dominion Over Astrobe
Brain Snakes: The nine snakes 'nesting' in Thomas's mind are the Things’ extensions—'flyers' they can send out. Through these they infiltrate, monitor, and control. Thomas feels them crawl back into his mind when he enters their chamber.
Political control: Northprophet: 'You cannot oppose us, Thomas. We envelop you.' They work through all parties—Third Compromise Party, Kiss of Deaths, Hatrack, Demos—to put Thomas in power. We control your path.
The patsy: The Nine threaten to manufacture another More in an hour. Thomas names several people who would recognize a substitute, including Foreman and his Cathead allies.
Proctor revealed: Northprophet reveals: The second [of your three sponsors] is an artificial man of our own sort. Proctor is Programmed—'programmed lucky.'
Cathead: The Things devised Cathead's grinding misery. They enjoy the suffering but fear 'premature reaction.' Only Cathead's 'hard-heads' and 'lungers' recognize the Things instantly for what they are.
What Remains Against Them
Thomas's allies: Thomas insists the following would know a replica: Foreman, the child-brat [Evita], Copperhead, Battersea, Rimrock, Shanty, Paul, Maxwell, Adam (if not surrogate), and the woman in the lane.
Foreman: Northprophet admits: The third man [Foreman] still resists, understands the situation, might have a final trick involving Thomas.
Cathead: Only the men who set up monstrous Cathead knew that something was wrong... Only the hard-heads recognized the deformity, knew that you were not men, knew that most men were not men, refused the terminal golden pap, wanted life itself.
The one kindling: Ouden's earlier admission that one kindling overwhelmed him can be read as an allusion to the Incarnation, though it remains unnamed.
Warded life: The Nine say More has a warded life and cannot be extinguished before his time. More questions their invocation of Fate; the claim is not an independently demonstrated law.
The Retrogression
Swampers warns: Thomas will forget everything via retrogression; we will sing the memories to sleep. Thomas insists he won't forget, starts to rise—but falls into a daze.
The laughter: The Things seal his memory loss with 'searing, multi-toned laughter'—Jackal, Howling-dog, Wilderness-Wolf, ghost. His mind shrinks and closes.
Thomas bolts from the door, amazed, unable to remember where he was or what happened. The alley has no door—only a blank building. He feels bitter anger, shame, deep humiliation, his mind in blank turmoil.
Northprophet and Pottscamp follow More and ask what they must do to be saved. More takes their apparent agony as unfunny irony and rejects them. Their sincerity remains an open question, sharpened by Pottscamp's later mourning.
Passage Dream: The Boy Who Built a Toy
Thomas recalls the boy-and-toy dream in Chapter 4. Both figures resemble Pottscamp, and the toy finally eats the boy.
Represents Pottscamp's self-destructive relationship with Programmed technology—the creators consumed by their creation—and foreshadows the Things’ nihilistic agenda: they will end themselves after ending everything else.
The Eagles
Thomas More's Retinue
The Eagles
Thomas More's Retinue
'Wheresoever the body shall be, there shall the eagles also be gathered.' (Luke 17:37)
The irregular allies who gather around Thomas More—outcasts, mystics, non-humans, and the faithful remnant. They accompany him through the Feral Lands and attempt a doomed rescue at his execution.
The Eagles begin gathering now. The phrase is Shanty's. They meet in the back room of George the Syrian's shop, 'right in the middle of Cosmopolis right off Centrality Square.'
'The shabby incandescent party'—dirty, disarrayed, carrying 'the smell and trappings of black Cathead.' Yet in their moment, they possess magikos, charismatic grace, transcendent magnetism, presence, messiah-ship, draiocht.
The Wake at George's Shop
Chapter 12: The Eagles Gather
Following Thomas's sentencing, his allies gather secretly at George the Syrian's aromatics shop in Cosmopolis. 'We do not mean the Cathead shop; we mean George's shop right in the middle of Cosmopolis right off Centrality Square.'
The company tells stories at More's wake. Monitoring machines assume cryptic information is concealed in them and fail to interpret it; the narration does not establish an actual cipher.
The only thing ever left over when the world ends is one syrian and one sand dune. Then the syrian goes over behind the sand dune and finds a dromedary; and together they start the world going again. If the syrian goes behind the dune, there is hope.
Saint Brandon arrived on Astrobe fifteen hundred years before the date you will find given by the history precis, in a coracle boat with nineteen Irish monks. They map it all out and write it down on the scrolls. Later explorers couldn't find the land—they had gone in prow-ships that will hold a course, not in round coracle boats that can only be steered by prayer and fasting.
The deal they made; and how what the sows don't know very nearly killed them.
A new-dead lady's soul becomes entangled in a drove of laden donkeys and is saddled and ridden by the donkey-drover.
Code-Crackers-Supreme suffers a breakdown about the time that George the Syrian recounts his tale. It is not, perhaps, a serious breakdown; but it will take several hours to get code-crackers to functioning again.
The Prophecies
Evita asks: Will it be to the death?' Evita asks. 'Tell us, Copperhead, will it be?
Copperhead: Oh, yes, it will be to his death.
Battersea: It will not be. Did you not know that I was a military general on frontier settlement reserve worlds before I joined the Cathead movement?
Adam: Yes, it will be his death. And my final one.' When asked if Battersea is wrong: 'No, he isn't wrong. He will come and he will strike. And the new world may be made out of it. But many of the details will have to be changed.
The Shabby Incandescent Party
Chapter 4: The Triumph
Thomas enters the Convocation Hall with his irregular allies. 'This was their moment, and the shabby incandescent party entered.'
Thomas: Dirty and in disarray, with a shattered jaw wired up by a Cathead knacker, a long-nosed, almost comical middle-aged man of short stature.
Paul: Surname and citizenship lost, bone splinters affecting vision and wits.
Rimrock: Oceanic, communicating unknown ways, appearing as a grotesque rubber-nosed animal.
Evita: Legend girl-woman doubted by rationalists.
Copperhead: Necromancer, no better than an astrologer.
All the great ones stand—Astrobe's great ones stand only in the presence of a Superior. The Past Master possesses the magikos, the charismatic grace, the transcendent magnetism, the presence, the messiah-ship, the draiocht.
It was Rimrock, the rubber-nosed ocean-man thing. It was the Copperhead with his occult stuff. It was Paul with his broken crown, and the child-witch with the two opposite auras about her. They took all the grand ones like country ganglers with the magic show they did for me.
The Forerunner Wave
Chapter 13: A Minute Thing but Incomparably Savage
We snatch the Thomas. We will set him up in a strong place between Wu Town and Cathead. He is King till he dies, and he will not die tomorrow. We have support in places you would never guess.
Foreman changes the execution from noon to 8 a.m. Men from Cathead, rumor says, have received word of the sudden change of time and are mobbing toward the center of Cosmopolis, but might well be too late.
There is one wave of fury, a minute thing but incomparably savage, rising moments before a true tidal wave: the forerunner wave.
Buff Shanty and Paul are in it, driving with great impetus. Walter Copperhead is in it, though he must know it is futile. The boy Adam is in it; possibly thirty others, fine people of Cosmopolis, rush and die.
Its suddenness almost brings success. The men bowl over guards and gain scaffold steps. Fighting is close; they give a life for every step.
Adam is the crest, reaching the scaffold and touching Thomas before guards fling him down. He rises brokenly.
The wave lacks bulk; guards are too many. The thrust crests, shatters, ebbs in blood.
Evita, knowing it will fail, surges not towards Thomas but towards Fabian Foreman at the square's edge.
'Zehheeroot, is-Kerioth' ('Beware, Iscariot')
She attacks him like a lioness, swipes his face red, bites his throat. She practically dismembers him... She breaks his face, throws the shapeless man over her shoulder, carries him to George, Maxwell, and Rimrock. The four tear him apart and kill him.
Evita takes the biggest piece and hangs it on a Carob tree (Judas Tree).
Shanty, Paul, Copperhead, Adam, and the others die around the scaffold foot and on the steps, making them slippery. Adam dies magnificently—as he always did.
The Eagles: Individual Profiles
The pilot who retrieves More from the past. His surname and citizenship have been revoked; the narrator calls him two meters of walking irony.
Red hair, crooked face from scar. Only 'maladjusted' pilots can survive Hopp-Equation travel. Survived as prey in Cathead for a year, evading Killers through 'ten thousand kilometers of alleys.'
At the Convocation: Surname and citizenship lost, bone splinters affecting vision and wits. Thomas credits 'Paul with his broken crown' for the magic of their entrance.
Fate: Dies at the scaffold in the forerunner wave, as he dreamed he would during passage.
Ancient woman in young body. Sister of Adam. Consort to multiple Salic Emperors. 'The most beautiful woman on Astrobe.'
Soft hair that seems to have smoke on it, roiling black and now quieting to brown or gold. And are her eyes green or gray or blue? Doesn't appear more than seventeen, yet has 'been battling principalities and powers for a long time.'
At the Gathering: She doesn't come through the wall, she comes through the door, smashing and splintering it with a sudden shock of force.
At the Convocation: Thomas calls her 'the child-witch with the two opposite auras about her.'
Fate: Kills and dismembers Foreman with George, Maxwell, and Rimrock. Hangs his piece on the Judas Tree. They do not get Evita.
Ansel with telepathic powers. Guides and warns the party. 'A transfigured ansel' who has 'crossed the line.'
The seal-like Oceanic Man communicates mentally and has formidable cutting weapons: slicers three feet long.
At the Gathering: I be an eagle. I soar. It's the last night of the world, and we are not sure what the new world will be like. I've brought old rum, and brandy for those of a more barbarous taste.
At the Convocation: Oceanic, communicating unknown ways, appearing as a grotesque rubber-nosed animal.
Fate: Helps tear Foreman apart. The programmed guards get George and Maxwell and Rimrock, adding their blood to the transcendental yeast.
Crude man from Cathead with precognitive powers. Can 'go through walls.' Studies entrails for divination.
Was a prisoner under sentence of death. Escaped by walking through walls: It isn't difficult. I believe that it has been insufficiently tried.
At the Gathering: Predicts Thomas's death with certainty: 'Oh, yes, it will be to his death.' Earlier predicted his own death and the transformation of Scrivener and Slider.
At the Convocation: Necromancer, no better than an astrologer. Thomas credits 'the Copperhead with his occult stuff.'
Fate: Is part of the forerunner wave, though he must know it is futile. Dies around the foot of the scaffold/on steps—as he predicted.
Evita's brother. Dies repeatedly to avoid growing up. 'Good at dying.' His coming 'always signifies death.'
Handsome, like a nude Greek Youth statue, yet seems Jewish. Appears in Paul's passage dreams dying 'cavalierly in battle again and again.'
At the Rescue: Adam is the crest, reaching the scaffold and touching Thomas before guards fling him down. He rises brokenly.
Prophecy: Yes, it will be his death. And my final one.' Asked if Battersea is wrong: 'No, he isn't wrong... But many of the details will have to be changed.
Fate: Dies magnificently—as he always did. His 'final' death, though he has died many times before.
Green-robed monk of the Order of Saint Klingensmith. Fishes for hydras—'the killing of the Devil.'
A blackish man with a hint of deep green. Says mass at Goslar where the uncanny miracle came shockingly and vividly alive at consecration. Catches Commer's Condors in nets.
Ritual: 'Now!' clangs the green-robe, like the underwater belfry of Saint Lo.' Leads the attack on the hydra with Paul and Evita.
Fate: Killed by a blow between throat and lorica during the lightning battle on Electric Mountain.
Body-changer who can inhabit corpses. 'Part Programmed' in origin, a 'spook.'
What is it in me that survives? I'm myself part programmed... How can they destroy me in one machine and I survive in another machine?
At the Gathering: Appears as 'a shabby old lady' who comes in through the wall. It's just an old body I found. It isn't my own. Later: 'Yes, Maxwell, that's the name I couldn't think of.'
At the Execution: Helps tear Foreman apart with Evita, George, and Rimrock.
Fate: His mountain body is destroyed. He returns in an old woman's manufactured body, helps kill Foreman, and is then killed by the guards.
Recites the legends of sleeping kings. 'Part Programmed' according to Maxwell. Keeper of stories about Ouden and the mechanical men.
Initially supports the Dream. After Charles identifies him as a machine, Scrivener rejects Ouden and commits himself to defending his companions.
Fate: Copperhead predicts he and Slider will change persons/souls in final day. Killed by Programmed Killers on Electric Mountain.
The slight, pale companion who doubts whether the Promise applies to Astrobe.
Seen as opposite of Scrivener. The Killers don't trail him as he is of their own species, yet he denies being Programmed.
On the Promise: Slider doubts that Astrobians are the nations or world to which the old Promise was addressed. Scrivener, not Slider, supplies the confident response that they make their own promise.
Fate: Left alive and gibbering on Electric Mountain, ignored by the Killers. No later appearance is narrated.
Shopkeeper who hosts the wake. Runs an aromatics shop in Cosmopolis and a 'poor-people snuff' shop in Cathead.
I don't know what a dromedary is, I don't know what a sand dune is, and I sure don't know what a syrian is. The name was hung onto me, I believe, because I have a beak instead of a nose.
At the Execution: Helps tear Foreman apart with Evita, Maxwell, and Rimrock.
Tale: Tells how the world begins with 'one syrian and one sand dune... If the syrian goes behind the dune, there is hope.'
Fate: The programmed guards get George and Maxwell and Rimrock, adding their blood to the transcendental yeast.
Military leader of rescue attempt. Former general on frontier settlement worlds before joining 'the Cathead movement.'
The scow-master from Cathead rubs his hands together like a general before battle, which is what he is. Giant lunger, leads the planned noon rescue.
Plan: We snatch the Thomas... He is King till he dies, and he will not die tomorrow. We have support in places you would never guess. Millions are secretly sick of the golden Thing.
Fate: His noon rescue is forestalled by Foreman's betrayal. As the world ends, Battersea and his men mob towards Centrality Square under their Hand-of-Vengeance banner.
Giant, fast lunger from Cathead. Coins the phrase 'The Eagles were gathering.'
Looks like the eternal pilgrim with his hat on his head and his staff in his hand. Nearly as huge as Battersea, and faster. Fixes the door Evita smashed: 'It's better than new.'
At the Rescue: Buff Shanty and Paul are in it, driving with great impetus equal to that of many men.
Fate: Dies with the forerunner wave. The source does not specify who dies first.
What the Eagles Represent
• The remnant who refuse the Astrobe Dream—'Millions are secretly sick of the golden Thing.'
• The broken, the irregular, the maladjusted—those whose brokenness qualifies them for true vision.
• The faith that survives in Cathead and the Feral Lands when it has died in Golden Astrobe.
• The 'transcendental yeast' whose blood may seed the new world.
• The human capacity for 'gallows humor' that the Programmed cannot understand or crack.
This is one thing that the Programmed cannot do. They do not become droll and mellow, nor do they hold wakes. Programmed people have no gallows humor at all.
Mechanical Killers
Iron Dogs, Tin Scurrae, Clanking Fools
The Mechanical Killers
Mechanical enforcers pursue threats to the Astrobe Dream. Individual machines can be destroyed, but replacements continue their assignments. Their relentless pursuit contrasts with the changing loyalties and doubts of the people they hunt.
The Killers respond to allegiance to the Vision. Their changing behavior toward More makes his inner accommodation and resistance visible.
Names and Epithets
The various names reflect different perceptions: official terminology ('Programmed'), contemptuous epithets from their prey ('iron dogs,' 'clanking fools'), and functional categories ('Bears' for spaceport guards, 'Hounds' for stalkers).
Types of Killers
Huge and lumbering mechanical guards stationed at spaceports. Programmed for patrol, defense, and counterattack. React to theft signals like Paul's stolen grasshopper.
Characteristics: Their primary aim is securing stolen property; killing is secondary. They are territorial—blindly react to intrusion by other mechanical types into their area.
When Paul steals Foreman's grasshopper, Bears arrive 'first, too fast,' drag him out with grapples, wound him severely, and one 'clasped him to crush him to death.' They are forced to release him repeatedly to smash attacking Hounds who intrude into their zone.
The specific group programmed for stalking and direct assault. Hunt fugitives relentlessly across years if necessary. React to 'Escape signals' when their prey attempts off-world flight.
Characteristics: 'Remorseless,' 'stiff-gaited,' 'stiff and bristling.' They close in 'blind to everything else' when sensing their target. They hunted Paul for a full year after his citizenship was revoked.
At the spaceport, the Hounds sense Paul's escape attempt and intrude into the Bears’ territory, leading to a chaotic battle between the two mechanical types. Three hounds are smashed at once by the bear holding Paul.
Standard Killers patrol in groups of nine. They have purplish nightmarish ogre faces and stiff gaits. They enforce the Astrobe Dream throughout civilized space.
Characteristics: Their behavior changes based on target status. When Thomas professes loyalty to the Dream, they follow but smile quizzically, not threatening. When he wavers internally, they sense the change, cease their quizzical waiting, remember their purpose and move to kill.
Vulnerabilities: Battersea knows their 'nexus and centers'—weak points. Father Oddopter instructs fighters to 'Drive down in the narrow slot' between neck-piece and lorica/breast-plate to strike the 'relay center.'
undefined
The Replacement Principle
Programmed Killers can be destroyed, but another is instantly created elsewhere with the exact same assignment. This makes defeating them ultimately futile—you cannot kill an assignment, only delay it.
Example: During the Electric Mountain battle, Adam topples one Killer backward off the mountain, causing it to fall 1000 meters. But another is instantly created elsewhere with the same assignment.
Within the pursuit system, surrender to the Dream can stop an individual's hunt. Destroying a machine does not abolish its assignment; changing the system itself is the larger problem facing the novel's characters.
The Salic Emperors
The Killers assigned themselves to destroy every reigning Salic Emperor in Goslar. No Emperor has reigned a full year; many lasted less than a month. Charles the 612th had reigned less than twenty hours when Thomas's party arrived.
A peculiarity: when an emperor is killed, a replacement is instantly selected at Wu Town's university and starts for Goslar immediately. Emperor and Killer, each instantly replaced—a dark parody of resurrection.
The final passage at Goslar gives 599 skulls. An earlier statement of 611 predecessors with thirteen missing would give 598. The source's figures differ, but neither supports a count above six hundred skulls.
Paul's Year as Prey
After his citizenship was revoked, Paul survived a full year in Cathead evading 'remorseless stiff-gaited Killers.' This experience qualifies him for the mission to retrieve Thomas More.
Skills: Paul has personally killed a dozen Killers. During the spaceport battle, Battersea is specifically credited with knowing the nexus and centers of every sort of mechanical.
Loophole: Programmed Killers are normally inhibited from killing Astrobe citizens but target 'offenders' like Paul whose citizenship has been revoked. Paul exploits this status ambiguity.
During the spaceport battle, Paul kills a human masquerading as a Programmed Killer—revealing that humans are fighting on both sides.
Thomas More's Relationship with the Killers
The Killers hunt More from his arrival. Allies help him escape; by Chapter 9 he reports nine attempts on his life.
In Chapter 7 the Killers climb toward the company under the electrical clouds. Scrivener, Adam, Oddopter, and Maxwell's body are destroyed. Thomas, Paul, and Evita escape. The black cloud is not itself a form taken by the machines.
After Thomas professes loyalty to the Astrobe Dream and makes speeches for 'the Merging Singularity,' the Killers change: They watch still, but smile quizzically, not threatening him. They follow but do not attack.
When Thomas's 'old part' surges against the Dream in Chapter 10, The Programmed Killers sense his internal change, cease their quizzical waiting, remember their purpose. They herd him into the dead-end alley where he meets the Nine.
The same order that hunts dissenters guards More as president and enforces his sentence after the final refusal.
“Cannot something be done about the Programmed Killers? They nearly had me last night again... They make me jumpy... they have now made nine attempts on my life. And they become trickier. They aren't mere machines...”
The Battle on Electric Mountain
The first high pinnacle of the Thunder Mountains. The peak interacts strangely with approaching Killers, and lightning storms provide both danger and opportunity.
Evita spots them: It is a black one [cloud], and below us. The Programmed Killers have come in full patrol... This isn't the death I had planned for us all, Holy Thomas.
Defense: The party rolls boulders and fights hand-to-hand. Father Oddopter creates a 'hand-knife on pole'—an improvised spear—for greater reach.
Vulnerability: Oddopter shouts instructions: strike the 'nexus... relay center' in a 'narrow slot' between neck-piece and lorica/breast-plate.
Climbing: The Killers climb more slowly and less well than the humans, but do not tire or rest.
Escape: Thomas, Paul, and Evita escape during the third lightning bolt, following Evita's intuition down the spire while 'swift iron trackers' pursue.
Slider alone is left alive—a gibbering creature... disregarded, since he represented no threat to the Dream.
Scrivener's Final Stand
Scrivener is uncertain whether he is a Programmed Person or 'old-recension human' due to family legend of Programmed admixture. Emperor Charles wants to kill him, calling him a machine with a sender in his head attracting Killers.
Last night I rejected him! [Ouden]... What am I now? I am not machine and I am not man... It was the Nothing that I rejected. He becomes 'alien to both his recensions.'
Battle: He fights the Killers howling: 'Me they do not disregard! I threaten their thing!... Backwards and down you go, you clanking Devil! I'll battle you all while there's life left in me.'
Death: He had opted for a man very late, and the machines knew the diagram of him as a machine. The Programmed Raiders smashed Scrivener dead there.
Left on the pinnacle as a 'dead hybrid whose final pattern shows that he opted for human late.'
What the Killers Really Are
Surface: On the surface: autonomous enforcers, garbage disposals, ultimate police, wardens of the Astrobe Dream.
Connection: Their service to the Dream connects them with the Nine's system. Their apparent sensitivity to inward allegiance is part of their menace, but ordinary mechanical guards also make errors and clash over conflicting assignments.
They hunt threats to a Dream whose secret endpoint is Holy Nothingness. They kill to preserve a system designed to end all life. They are the Dream's teeth—and the Dream devours itself.
More increasingly doubts that the Killers are merely ordinary machines. The novel connects their enforcement with the Nine while distinguishing the pursuers from the human-looking Programmed Persons.
Bestiary of Astrobe
Creatures of the Feral Lands
Bestiary of Astrobe
The Feral Lands and Their Creatures
The Feral Lands teem with dangerous life. Thomas calls it 'a plenitude of game'—finding more vitality here than in civilized Astrobe. 'I would bet that a good hunting man could live well here,' he says, seeing an intense, rewarding life.
Paul confirms he lived there as a hunting man for a few months while hiding. There are still a few thousand hunters on Astrobe. The life is intense, rewards intangible but deep for some, but hunters don't live to old age.
Slider expresses the civilized view: 'We class them with excrement.' Maxwell considers them 'less real than creatures in dreams.' But Evita knows them: They're good to eat. People ate them when I was a kid.
The Food Chain
Base: The jerusalem coney, along with the dutch-fish and rambler's-ox, forms the food base of the Feral Lands. Everything lives on them, or on what eats them.
Predators: Predators include direwolves, porches-panther, hydra, birds, and twenty other species capable of slicing up and eating a man.
Apex: The porches-panther eats direwolves, lazarus-lions, rouks, and hydras. The text does not provide a predator for it, but absence from this account is not proof that none exists.
Oddopter calls the particular hydra they hunt the Devil and says the Devil may take other forms. Hydras also appear within Paul's account of ordinary predation.
The Creatures
A curious hopping creature, mostly rabbit-sized but some smaller or much larger. They move indiscriminately—into ponds, underwater, high into trees with accurate hops, through dense brush a snake couldn't traverse.
Too quick for Thomas or Paul to catch. They are 'all around them' in the Feral Lands.
Ecology: Along with dutch-fish and rambler's-ox, the coney is the food base. Preyed upon by direwolves, porches-panther, hydra, birds, and all predators.
Thomas notes the animal names sound like Earth's. Paul corrects him: Only the names are like those of Earth. On Earth there are no animals at all like those around us.
Could take an Earth ox's head and horns in one bite and the body in two more.
Paul emphasizes its size and killing power; no pack-hunting behavior is specified.
Thomas pits 'a bow-necked Middlesex ox against any animal on this scurvy bowl.' Paul assures him the direwolf would win easily.
A direwolf eats a natural ansel like a jerusalem coney, but would eat a transfigured ansel like a man, not with an easy mind. The predators know the difference between natural and transcendent prey.
Could do the same to the larger rambler's-ox as the direwolf does to cattle.
The lazarus eats people, unlike the rouks who just crucify them.
Paul supposes the lazarus-lion 'appreciates the flavor' of the hunters it catches.
The apex predator of Astrobe's Feral Lands.
Paul says it kills and eats direwolves, lazarus-lions, rouks, and hydras.
Oddopter names a porches-panther gone musk as another possible form of the Devil.
'Kill people for fun' and hang the bodies as warnings. Paul points to a nearby cliff with a thousand human skeletons hung on thorn bushes by rouks.
Similar to how men on Earth hung wolves on fences—but the rouks are the hunters, men the prey.
There's even a tale the King Rouk pays a bounty for men killed and hung by rouks.
Intelligent cruelty made bestial. Uniquely among predators, they kill not to eat but to display.
A thousand-kilogram bulk swallowing the bait in one gulp, thirty-meter tentacles reaching blindly, a big middle eye mad with malevolence.
Can gobble anything in water and snap ten meters out of it, once taking six men in one bite.
Its bulk surges clear of the water, accompanied by a lightning-like corona discharge and blinding aura. It is the Devil made flesh.
Father Oddopter: Today's Devil was large, but it takes other forms like a mad direwolf or a porches-panther gone musk. We must kill it daily to limn his limits.
The Bait: The bait used to catch it: a fat, black, quivering discoid thing with an angry-toothed mouth covering one-third of its circuit. It weighs 150 kilograms and could snap a man in two. The monk calls it merely bait, like a grasshopper caught for a hook.
Large prey animal forming part of the food base along with jerusalem coneys and dutch-fish.
Ecology: Part of the foundation that supports the Feral Lands’ predator hierarchy.
Larger than an Earth ox. The lazarus-lion can take one 'in three bites.'
Sea creatures forming part of the food base. Sea-gleaners bring in scow-loads for fish meal.
Ecology: Along with jerusalem coneys and rambler's-ox, the food foundation of Astrobe's ecology.
In Cathead, the bodies of plague victims are sometimes weighed with the fish because they aren't up to the fish in phosphor and sulphur and are hard on the grinders.
Etymology: The name suggests a beaver-like builder; the novel does not explain its derivation.
Build aerial ponds in the Feral Lands.
The party travels sometimes skirting large aerial ponds built by kastroides.
Its ponds occupy the interwoven vegetation above water, part of a landscape in which the travelers struggle to find firm ground.
Large birds caught for food by hunting parties.
On Electric Mountain, during the hallucination zone, a Commer's Condor swoops near, cries "Thomas More is a fink!"
Father Oddopter catches a Commer's Condor in a net. The party tears it apart, eats it raw.
Animals found and barbecued during the fools’ carnival before Thomas's execution.
Wooly Rams are found somewhere, and spitted and barbecued over the bonfires, about fifty people devouring each Wooly Ram as they tear it apart in pieces, half seared and half raw.
The feast of the Wooly Ram has not been held on Astrobe for more than three hundred years, and only antiquarians could know about it.
Oddopter calls More a wooly ram with a double sign and dismisses Charles as a wether. The feast repeats the ram imagery later.
Associated with violence and death. They appear where blood has been spilled.
Bot-flies splutter and roar over slippery blood in the roadway and common room of the Naked Sailor after the ambush.
Their presence signals carnage and the presence of Killers.
Ansels: Natural and Transfigured
The Line Between Animal and Person
Natural ansels inhabit Astrobe's waters. Rimrock's account of ascent from the physical ocean is linked metaphorically with an interior ocean of dreams.
Their votes were disallowed in Astrobe elections after ansel leaders registered millions of wild ocean ansels.
Hunters kill them. A direwolf eats a natural ansel like a jerusalem coney.
An ansel that crossed the line becomes entirely different from a natural ansel. Paul doesn't know how the new species is acquired, but all species know the difference.
A direwolf eats a natural ansel like a jerusalem coney, but would eat a transfigured ansel like a man, not with an easy mind. There's a difference between natural and transcendent prey known to meat-eaters.
The green-robe calls it 'impossible theology': A creature already alive shouldn't receive a soul and intelligence, yet this seems the case with exceptional ansels.
Animals are disturbed after eating humans, and Rimrock would be human by this test.
Paul confirms Rimrock would eat ansel meat and has, but doesn't care for it—overrated. An ansel 'feels no repugnance' at eating natural ansels.
Sprites and Ghosts
The Spirit Ecology
Sextus Empiricus wrote that every environment has its sprite.
Father Oddopter appears and tells Thomas: Sextus Empiricus wrote of both of us. You are a sprite too, who just thinks himself a man because he was raised by humans.
Meaning: 'Ghosts' or 'revenants' in Gaelic.
Emperor Charles calls Maxwell and Thomas 'Taibhse'—having intuition as Emperor.
Father Oddopter explains ghosts are the same as Taibhse—those who leave bodies and heads behind them. Evita is called 'black-hearted kid' who is Taibhse.
Thomas asks if superstition is rampant. The green-robe supposes so, noting 'psychic force/libido' is strong—as once on Old Earth (Africas, Haitis). Astrobe's nature was tamed recently.
The Feral Ecology
This is a salt that has not lost its savor! Thomas contrasts the Feral Lands with 'insipid civilized Astrobe,' seeing potential for 'a better blending.'
Astrobe cannot be more exposed to its backlands. These things are worse than death and need to be hidden away forever.
The life is intense, rewards intangible but deep for some.
Hunters don't live to old age.
There are still a few thousand hunters on Astrobe.
Twenty other species around them are capable of slicing up and eating a man.
Political Parties
The Party Jungle of Astrobe
Political Parties of Astrobe
The Party Jungle
Chapter 9 lists many overlapping political factions. Their names mix recognizable political positions with wordplay. The Nine claim broad influence across them, while the novel also shows opposition beyond the official public consensus.
In Chapter 10 the Nine claim to control More's path through several parties and threaten to make a replacement in one hour. More names people who would recognize the substitute.
The Evolution of Astrobe Elections
Old Earth idea
The original democratic system, imported from Earth.
Additional votes awarded for distinguished service. Most ranks carry votes; entertainers might get accolades. Wealth is complex: Kingmaker might have a thousand votes, while another rich man had only a quarter vote due to unpopularity.
• Cathead and Barrio citizens get only a quarter vote each under blanket penalty.
• Ansels and other intelligent non-humans get one-eighth vote.
A scandal occurred when ansel leaders registered millions of wild ocean ansels; their votes were disallowed, restricting voting to land-living Astrobe creatures.
Current system (Vote abolished)
The Vote itself is done away with, replaced by sensing machines that work on everyone's auras, keeping a running record. They assess and compile the total weight of opinion and choice on Astrobe.
'The Weighted Vote carried out with honesty and justice.' Fine intellect and judgment have more effect than notions; strong personality weighs more than lesser persons, while frustration subtracts. They cannot be tampered with.
Cathead and the Barrio exert unexpectedly strong influence. The claim that their concentration of intellect is impossible is ironic. A modification to discount anti-Dream judgments is being planned but will not be ready for this election.
Establishment Coalition
Parties associated with the governing order. These groupings organize the guide's discussion; they are not official classifications given in the novel.
More's party, supported by the three Masters. Foreman says they are unsure whether Pottscamp belongs to it, or even whether he is a man.
The Center Party is satirical—there is no middle in the cosmic conflict between Being and Nothing.
The Third Compromise Party is one the Nine work through to control Thomas. Certain parties they don't want joining them, as they swing to clear winners and cause trouble.
One of the establishment factions. The name itself is an oxymoron—the Programmed have no liberty.
Opposition Factions
Parties with names suggesting resistance or refusal. Their full platforms and degree of independence are not supplied.
The name suggests a form of opposition. The text does not establish a complete platform or prove that every act of opposition is theatrical.
The name suggests a form of opposition. The text does not establish a complete platform or prove that every act of opposition is theatrical.
Ideological Parties
Parties organized around specific beliefs or constituencies.
One of the parties the Nine work through. Greek for 'the people'—another ironic name in a society where individuality is being erased.
Labor faction—though meaningful labor has largely vanished in golden Astrobe.
Party presumably aligned with Programmed interests.
'Humans only.' A resistance faction rejecting human-Programmed synthesis.
'Blessed by Ouden.' Greek for 'mob' or 'rabble.' A party explicitly aligned with Nothingness.
The name and association with Ouden connect this faction to the novel's politics of nothingness.
Eccentric and Opportunist
Parties defined by opportunism, wordplay, or obscure purposes.
One of the parties the Nine work through. Swings to clear winners and causes trouble—'We want our hands unbound when we go to work after we have won.'
Another party the Nine use. The name is grimly literal—their support is fatal to genuine reform.
Insect imagery—the collective over the individual.
Named for eschatological positions—next-to-last and last things.
Various minor factions with obscure platforms.
Wordplay Parties
Party names built around a sequence of puns. Their exact platforms should not be inferred solely from their names.
Its name suggests aesthetics and beauty; the novel does not develop a full platform.
Its name turns the previous party's word toward numbness, inviting a comparison with the Dream's lethargy.
'Jokesters, disregarded.' Their opinions count for nothing. Politics reduced to puns.
The progression Esthetics → Anesthetics → Local Anesthetics mirrors Astrobe's decay from beauty to numbness to irrelevance.
The Crank Party
A Party of One
Not wild-eyed, but dull-eyed, speaks in singsong.
Rudely calls Thomas 'Thomas Momus, the Big Boys’ Toy.' Claims leadership of a certified party and demands fair hearing by law.
The Crank: 'Only myself, doubting Thomas.' Certified via bureaucratic quirk allowing a one-man party.
“I organized it and named it. I am the Crank and I make myself heard.”
Against all false things.' Battles 'Humanism which has no meat, and Materialism which has no bones.
Thomas likes the phrase—'doesn't mean anything'—and plans to use it himself.
I see the parties at an end. All are dying. Soon only my own party will remain.
• Compulsory pornography and ethics equal time in schools
• Perversion and normalcy given equal space (though normalcy gained then)
• Evaluators allowed to terminate marriages
• Schools teaching only things in accord with the Golden Dream
• Law denying offspring to private persons
• Psychologs made a privileged class with tampering powers
• Mechanical brain tampering permitted
The human person should be inviolate. Adjustability charts shouldn't be everything. Man should choose his own occupation and unhappiness.
Thomas's Response: 'No, I do not, Crank, on no point whatsoever.' Thomas rejects every grievance, affirms the Dream.
The Crank thinks Thomas is 'doubting Thomas the Apostle'—a hero who betrayed an old mountebank.
No I am not. You are badly confused.
The Crank claims Thomas owes his popularity to this false identification.
Thomas orders his 'contrivances' (Programmed Persons) to throw the Crank out. 'I hate it!' the Crank roars. 'Damn all mechanicals to the reclamation heap!'
The Crank exposes coercion that More currently accepts. His confused identifications and refusal to endure Cathead make him an awkward witness, but the expulsion shows More's intolerance of dissent.
How the Nine Control the Parties
Northprophet reveals in Chapter 10 how political control actually works:
The Nine claim to work through several parties. Their assertion of complete control is challenged by Foreman, Cathead, and the larger opposition Battersea describes.
They control his path. Thomas's political rise is orchestrated, not organic.
'Snakes in your head!' The Nine's extensions nest in Thomas's mind, speaking through his mouth. Paul warns: You've been saying many things... that don't sound like you. It's only a mechanical trick.
The Nine threaten to manufacture a replacement More in one hour. More disputes how successfully that substitute could deceive his acquaintances.
Proctor is their own artificial man... programmed lucky. One of the Big Three is himself a Programmed Person.
The political system channels choices toward the Dream. Its designers propose discounting dissenting judgments, but the change is not yet implemented at More's election. This distinction leaves room for the unexpected strength of Cathead and other opponents.
Thomas on the Campaign Trail
Thomas campaigns and enjoys it. He excels at rhetoric—the noblest rhetor, with a clear touch and intricate lash to his tongue.
I cannot move mountains but can move the world ahead, implementing the Astrobe dream. Perfection is in stages; obstacles will be removed, unhealthy growth excised. He preaches sanity, perfect human-Programmed symbiosis, all minds and bodies merging into one.
Paul's Warning: You were talking nonsense, you know. I wonder if you were even listening to yourself.
Thomas's Admission: “Paul, I said words... but there were other words that I did not say... Somebody else spoke some of those words out of my mouth.”
Paul's Explanation: It's one of the oldest tricks of the Programmed. They crawl into your mind and take control. It's only a mechanical trick.
Thomas cannot kick the snakes out. His will isn't what it used to be. He begins to sound like one of them: 'We should all strive for the synthesis, part man and part Programmed... submerge ourselves in our mechanical brothers for the good of all.' Paul warns: 'They'll eat us alive if we do, Thomas.'
Embedded Tales
Embedded Tales and Passage Dreams
Psychic Space Debris
Past Master is suffused with tales within tales—passage dreams experienced during Hopp-Equation travel, stories told at the wake on the night before the execution, legends recited on the mountain climb, and allegories whose 'cryptic meaning' even Code-Crackers-Supreme cannot break.
Hopp-Equation space contains 'psychic space debris'—fragments of billions of minds, poignant, comic, horrifying, exalting episodes. The dreams compress approximately five years of psychic experience into one month. Only the 'maladjusted' can stand the passages; well-adjusted pilots crack up.
Passage Dreams
Twenty Thousand Dreams in Ninety-Second Intervals
During Hopp-Equation travel, passengers experience vivid, self-contained dream episodes lasting approximately 90 seconds each. Paul experiences approximately 20,000 such dreams. Thomas, traveling with him, dreams as well—his visions sinking into his mind's cellar, to resurface when he meets those persons.
Recurring Dream Figures
A boy who dies cavalierly in battle again and again, thus avoiding growing up. Dying is his only real skill.
“It is death, it is death. I am not born again... It is always another of the same name.”
Adam later dies on Electric Mountain and at the scaffold. Chapter 3 also describes a death during the ambush while questioning whether the event belongs to dream or waking time.
A 'childwitch who decided to go to Hell before she died.' Paul is unsure if he knew her previously, knows her only in dreams, or will know her later.
The childwitch anticipates Evita, identified as Adam's sister in Chapter 5. Her age and willingness to enter Hell recur in Evita's account of herself.
Thomas meets 'an oceanic man named Rimrock' in his passage dreams—not odd in dream.
The ansel Rimrock, who will guide and warn Thomas throughout the novel. Ansels were in human unconscious before being found on Astrobe.
Thomas encounters a female creature who is simultaneously Succubus, Eve, Lilith, Judith, Mary, Valkyrie.
Evita again—ancient woman in young body, consort to emperors, killer of Foreman, torn between damnation and holiness.
One of three quick dreams Thomas has of 'three unknown men.' This one represents Kingmaker.
Kingmaker's dual nature: the spider's web of power, the lion's heraldic nobility. 'The Lion' is his epithet; the spider suggests manipulation.
Second of Thomas's three dream-men. Represents Proctor.
Proctor is 'The Sleek Fox'—cunning, lucky, ultimately revealed as a Programmed Person himself.
Third dream-man: a hawk shuffling shells at a table, and one shell was different. Represents Foreman.
Foreman is 'Hawk-Face'—the shell game suggests his manipulations, the 'different shell' perhaps Thomas himself or the transcendent yeast.
Tall Tales in the Space Debris
Not all dreams are heavy. Light vital stuff and tall tales drift there too—every tall tale ever told, still drifting in Hopp-Equation space.
Sour John's Emerald Kidney
Tall Tale / Allegorical DreamDreamer: Paul (who 'becomes' Sour John during the dream)
Setup: John Sourwine ('Sour John'), an Earthman from centuries before Paul's time, has a kidney that vitrified into fine, jewel-like green glass due to his diet of alcohol, wormwood, and green snails.
Complication: At Ghazikhan (then India), Sour John sees a great idol whose emerald eye—nearly a foot in diameter—is worth $11 million. He decides he needs the money for 'expensive habits.'
The Heist: Sour John has the ship's boy help surgically remove his vitrified kidney, then trims, lathes, and buffs it to perfection—'the most beautiful kidney in the world.' At midnight, he climbs the 500-foot sheer idol, pries out the emerald, substitutes his kidney (a perfect fit), and climbs down. He sells the emerald in Karachi for $11 million and lives high—but can no longer drink water with only one kidney.
Twist: Three years later he learns that the substituted kidney is now valued at thirteen million dollars.
Punchline: 'I figure I lost two million dollars on the deal,' Paul says, waking up.
Paul interrupts his own dream, correcting that Ghazikhan isn't a seaport (information from a psychteacher machine). His Sour John persona retorts: 'I say it is a sea-port.'
Allegorical meaning: One possible reading contrasts a product of bodily excess with an apparently priceless sacred object. The exchange complicates ordinary judgments about purity, value, and loss. The reversal of expected value can be compared with Cathead's preference for costly human life over sterile perfection. The novel does not explicitly identify each element of the story with a Programmed faction.
Rhium and Antirhium
Apocalyptic DreamDreamer: Paul
Mission: Paul courses at fantastic speed toward twin stars Rhium and Antirhium. Instructions: 'Hurry... they seem of no consequence, but they are the governor of the universe. Somebody is tampering with them.'
Discovery: Arriving closer than anyone before, Paul sees the stars revolve joined by a long steel chain—explaining their tight orbits and their role as 'governor.'
Saboteur: A small green creature with a monkey's body and a gargoyle's head is sawing through the chain, nearly finished. It breaks a blade, replaces it, sticks its green tongue out at Paul, and makes three more strokes.
Cataclysm: The chain breaks. Rhium and Antirhium swing out of orbit. 'Fifty billion billion stars went nova, and then blacked out to nothing. The universe had eaten itself and was gone forever.'
Aftermath: A space captain arrives furiously: 'I told you to hurry!' His face melts like wax and vanishes. Paul says, 'I did hurry.' His own face melts; he vanishes too.
Coda: Foreman's voice: Is it quite finished? If it is quite finished, then perhaps we can begin to construct a new universe. It's all right. It worked out well. I meant you to be too late.
Allegorical meaning: The names recall Rhium and Antirrhium, opposing Greek promontories described in Strabo's Geography, 8.2.3. The novel does not explain why these names are assigned to the stars. The broken chain anticipates cosmic destruction, while Foreman's speech within the dream anticipates his theory of renewal.
The Sleeping Kings
Scrivener's Legends
Scrivener recounts versions of sleeping-king legends. They suggest a pattern for More's mission, but his versions need not coincide with every historical tradition.
“Every Old-Earth Nation, my grandmother told me, had its mythos of a sleeping king who would one day awaken and rule again in a new golden age.”
Buried underneath the Busento River—its course changed for the burial and changed back to flow over him.
He was to arise again one day and lead the Gothic element, 'that shaggy thing that is the basis of a dozen peoples.'
In kingly sleep in an ensorceled room at the bottom of a lake.
Awaiting Britain's need.
Buried on horseback in a pit with great stones heaped around him.
When he wakens he will scatter the stones and ride again.
Not buried at all but riding forever a horse in death-sleep over dark moors in Estremadura.
Still riding.
Asleep at a table in a cave in a mountain, his beard grown through the table.
Waiting.
Thomas jests: immured with six wives in a peculiar arrangement.
(Thomas's dark humor.)
Riding in a car.
Added by Scrivener.
Marooned in Star King.
An Astrobian sleeping king.
Early mechanical men wished for a mythos—a mystique, a god, a hero, a sleeping king—like humans had. They searched Old Earth backward. Found a small broken gear train in an Egyptian tomb: hard wood cogs, bronze bearings, unknown use. Clumsy, earliest true mechanical spirit. They brought it to Astrobe as their sleeping king.
Humans snickered.
Then the Celestial Nothingness came. Ouden dismissed the toy king: Tut away such toys... I am your god and your king. Ouden became god and king for the Programmed Persons since—and soon for all beings. 'He grows and grows, and all the other kings die.'
More is brought alive from his past by Chronometanastasis. Symbolically, this recalls the return of a sleeping ruler, without making the technology a literal resurrection of a corpse.
Tales at the Wake
The Night Before the Execution
The Eagles gather in George's shop before the execution. Their tales defeat the monitoring machines’ attempts to interpret them as code.
Automatic monitors pick up the tales but cannot make anything of them. They tie into Code-Crackers, then Code-Crackers-Supreme. Neither can crack the code—they cannot at all figure what cryptic information is concealed in the tales. This isn't code like you meet every night.
Teller: The boy Adam
The first human people came to Astrobe fifteen hundred years before official history records. 'By the holies, it had been Saint Brandon himself in a coracle boat that was round as a tub.' He sloshed and bounded over the Stoimenof Sea, having started in the North Atlantic on Old Earth—supposing he was still sailing the same water. He piles out when it runs onto land, and nineteen Irish monks with twinkling pates follow him out. On first arrival they find only jerusalem conies, which will not answer their questions. But Saint Brandon and his monks map out the new land with exact description. Then they get back into the coracle boat and in ninety-nine days are back in Dingle Bay where they started.
But later explorers, going out into the North Atlantic Ocean of Old Earth, don't find any such land; and they say that Saint Brandon has lied. He has not. Those later explorers had gone in prow-ships that will hold a course, not in round coracle boats that can only be steered by prayer and fasting and are likely to wander clear off the Earth.
Code-Crackers Supreme labors mightily to break the code and arrive at the cryptic meaning behind it, and they cannot do it.
'Blessed be this rum,' says Rimrock the ansel.
Teller: George the Syrian
The only thing ever left over when the world ends is one syrian and one sand dune, all other features of the world being blotted out by the terminal catastrophes. There is that terrible second or million years when nothing moves—for a second and a million years are the same when there is no movement in anything. Then the syrian goes over behind the sand dune and finds a dromedary; and together they start the world going again.
That is the way it was in the earliest version of Genesis. That is the way the world begins every time. You will hear stories about a man and a woman, or about a turtle raising the sky up from off the earth. Do not believe them. Every time the world begins it begins with a syrian and a dromedary.
“Now, I don't know what a dromedary is, I don't know what a sand dune is, and I sure don't know what a syrian is. The name was hung onto me, I believe, because I have a beak instead of a nose.”
The world will end again tomorrow. Watch then for a syrian and a sand dune. If the syrian goes behind the dune, there is hope; if he does not, or if there is neither syrian nor sand dune, then the world is done forever.
Code-Crackers-Supreme suffers a breakdown about the time George recounts this. It is not, perhaps, a serious breakdown; but it will take several hours to get code-crackers to functioning again. So the monitoring is dropped. No point in setting down what even the code-crackers cannot crack.
'Blessed be this rum,' says Evita.
The Boy Who Built a Toy
Thomas's Passage Dream / Allegory
A boy builds a clever toy. Both the boy and the toy look like Pottscamp. The toy steals, attacks, does the boy's homework, drinks from the brook—then eats the child entirely.
Was Pottscamp the toy or the guileless devoured one?
The toy consuming its maker can be read as an image of manufactured beings turning against humanity. Pottscamp's account describes a growing final generation, rather than identifying the present Nine as the final generation themselves.
The story also reflects the novel's central tragedy: humanity built Astrobe, built the Dream, built the Programmed—and will be devoured by what it made.
The Function of Embedded Tales
• They resist decoding—even Code-Crackers-Supreme cannot crack them. Truth lives in forms that mechanical analysis cannot penetrate.
• They preserve and transmit meaning through catastrophe. George's story of the syrian and the sand dune is about how stories themselves survive the end of worlds.
• They prophesy. The passage dreams show Paul his own death; Thomas dreams the men who will manipulate him; Adam's tale of Saint Brandon maps a land that 'later explorers' cannot find.
• They disturb the separation of dream and waking life. Recurring figures link the travelers’ dreams with their later encounters, leaving questions about time and identity open.
• They embody Lafferty's method. Past Master itself is a tall tale drifting in psychic space debris—a story whose 'cryptic meaning' resists easy analysis, told at the wake of a world.
The Promise
Christ Has Walked on Astrobe
The Promise
We Last Till the End of the World
In Cathead, More meets the dying Metropolitan and hears that Christ walked on Astrobe and renewed the Promise. More leaves unconvinced, but the encounter supplies a claim that challenges the Dream and remains central to the ending.
The theological question at the heart of Past Master: Does the Promise—that the Church will last till the end of the world—apply to Astrobe? Is Astrobe 'the world'? Are its inhabitants 'the nations'?
Slider's Argument Against the Promise
We Are Not the Nations
The Instruction: The Ancient Instruction was Go to All Nations. But 'we are not the Nations'—something different.
The Promise: The Promise (that the Transcendent Thing endures till the End of the World) wasn't given to 'us'—a different world.
The Mutation: Can't assume they are human. How deep is the Astrobe mutation? How many are Programmed Persons? How much programmed descent in 'old-line humans'?
Slider fears that the old Promise may not cover Astrobe and questions the depth of its human mutation.
Scrivener responds with confidence in the Dream: they are beyond the old nations and world, and make their own promise. His attitude differs from Slider's anxious doubt.
The Metropolitan of Astrobe
The Pope of Astrobe
A small medieval castle dwarfed by tenements in Cathead.
A coughing man tells Thomas: 'Nobody lives there... The Metropolitan of Astrobe dies there.' Thomas remarks on the long dying time.
Thomas knocks, hears only a low moan or rale, and enters. After passing through empty rooms, he finds a room with an old battered bed under a faded royal canopy.
A very old, thin black man, skeletal, emitting a fetid odor. Thomas thinks him dead.
Identification: He wears the fisherman's ring—identifying him as the Metropolitan, the Pope of Astrobe.
'Eaten up.' He has food and drink but 'no stomach left.' Blind, though he can make the effort to open his eyes.
'I have five or six followers left.' Someone checks on him every few hours.
A young, filthy, coughing man enters to attend him, telling Thomas the old man was sometimes crazy, sometimes not and urging patience.
Prophecy: I will die thirty hours before yourself.
After this Metropolitan dies, a different man succeeds him and places Astrobe under interdict. The successor, formerly a renegade priest for thirty years, appears in Chapter 12.
The Recognition
Saints John and Thomas
Liturgy: The Metropolitan, eyes still closed, begins speaking in liturgical canto, reciting the Latin prayer for the feast day of Saints Joannem et Thomam.
Thomas's Question: Thomas recognizes his own name and asks about Joannem.
Answer: Saint John Fisher. You have saints’ day jointly.
Memory: Thomas recalls Fisher died fourteen days before him—and had never heard his own collect.
Reply: The Metropolitan: Few have. Save from the other side.
The Metropolitan identifies Thomas More by the liturgical calendar of the Church—not by politics or history, but by sanctity. He knows who has come because he knows the communion of saints.
The Promise Itself
Is this the end? Are you the last?
“No, I am not the last, Thomas.”
“We have the promise. We last till the end of the world.”
Thomas quotes Slider's argument: 'We are not the world... no promise was ever given to us.'
Nonsense, nonsense. We have the Promise.
The Promise was given on Astrobe in latter days, in a queerer and more flaming way.
Christ has walked on Astrobe in human form with Saint Klingensmith and others.
The burning promise was given, and the flame is beginning to rise, starting with my five or six followers.
There are over a hundred followers left on Astrobe.
It will grow.
If you are of the Faith, Astrobe's stones and clods will sing of the Promise. If you regard it as legend, learn the legends—they are richer than Old Earth's.
The Blind Man
The Metropolitan tells Thomas he is a living witness to the unseen, a ferret-faced little man who became a saint.
“How can you know I'm ferret-faced, blind man?”
The Metropolitan laughs: You are the blind man, not I.
Thomas, with his golden rhetoric and political compromises, cannot see what the dying, blind Metropolitan sees: the Promise, the presence of Christ, the flame beginning to rise. Spiritual sight belongs to the skeletal man in the ruined castle, not to the Past Master who will be king.
The Blessing
“Turn, God, and bring us to life again!”
“And thy people rejoice in thee.”
The versicle and response draw on Psalm 85 (84 in the Vulgate), asking God to restore life so that his people may rejoice.
Thomas rises to leave. Outside, he thinks: 'The last of them... This is the way it ends here.'
The Order of Saint Klingensmith
The Green-Robed Monks
Founder: Saint Klingensmith walked with Christ on Astrobe when the burning promise was given.
Dress: The monks wear green robes. The blackish complexion with a hint of green describes Father Oddopter individually.
Location: They dwell in the Feral Lands, fishing for hydras and keeping true faith far from the Golden Cities.
Sworn rule against staying in the same place two nights running. They have no permanent home.
He is a green-robed monk of the order of Saint Klingensmith... a blackish man with a hint of deep green, who winks and grins at the startled party.
He blesses the party, praying for preservation from dire-wolves, panthers, and programmed things.
He identifies each member of Thomas's party, knowing them by report and dream: Maxwell (avatar who burns bodies), Evita (archetype in monks’ dreams), Paul (who will suffer stark death), Thomas (revenant with a double sign, strange instrument of the Holy Ghost), Slider (the nothing man), Scrivener (less-than-nothing).
'What in particular are you fishing for, Father Oddopter?' 'You'll see.' He is fishing for the Devil—the hydra.
The killing of the Devil must be done afresh daily, or our days be at an end.
The monks bait the hydra with a smaller creature, then attack when it surfaces—'cutting and hacking' through the giant eye into the brain.
Today's Devil was large, but it takes other forms like a mad direwolf or a porches-panther gone musk. We must kill it daily to limn his limits.
Father Oddopter says mass for over a hundred people in Goslar. An 'uncanny miracle came shockingly and vividly alive at the consecration'—heavens opening, Spirit descending.
The Church on Astrobe
Most churches have been razed three hundred years ago.
The feast of the Wooly Ram has not been held for more than three hundred years—only antiquarians could know about it.
The Church survives in Cathead, in the Feral Lands, in the hundred-plus followers scattered across Astrobe.
A slight revival... in Cathead' and 'non-burlesque rites.
On the night before Thomas's execution, the newly-appointed (or self-appointed) Metropolitan of Astrobe has put that whole world under interdict, until penance be done. Groups make up and sing ballads about it.
Then the tolling begins—on five hundred great bells of churches mostly razed three hundred years ago. That sound has not been heard within living memory on Astrobe. But five hundred great bells toll, and the people remember the names of them. The Archangel Gabriel, the Giant, Saint Peter, Mephistopheles, the Black Virgin, Saint Hilary—and 'one more, high and powerful and clear, the July Bell.'
The bells toll for Thomas More. The whole great golden unbelieving city of Cosmopolis does homage to Thomas More who will die tomorrow.
Cathead and the Golden Cities
Immediately after leaving the Metropolitan, Thomas sees sea-gleaners bringing in Dutchfish. It is plague day. Three men have died. The scow-master strips their boots and rolls the bodies into the fish cargo. The buyer docks pay for each body—they just aren't up to the fish in phosphor and sulphur and are hard on the grinders.
The Promise is given in the midst of death. The Church survives where the Golden Dream has failed—in Cathead, where bodies are weighed with fish, where the Metropolitan dies in a ruined castle, where Father Oddopter fishes for the Devil in the green darkness.
The Carnival and Execution
Chapters 12-13
The Carnival and Execution
Chapters 12-13: The Ultimate People and Apocephalon
Etymology: From Greek apo- ('away from,' 'separation') and kephalē ('head'). Literally: separation of the head.
The wake, carnival, and bells precede the execution. Foreman advances it from noon to eight, frustrating Battersea's rescue. More refuses Pottscamp's offer. The forerunner wave dies trying to reach him; Evita and three companions kill Foreman. The Stranger speaks with More before the beheading. The worlds end, and the final questions ask whether renewal follows.
The Wake at George's Shop
The Eagles Gather
The back room of George the Syrian's aromatics shop in Cosmopolis, 'right off Centrality Square.'
'The Eagles were gathering.' The phrase is Shanty's.
Paul enters through a side door. Copperhead has escaped through walls; Maxwell appears in a manufactured old woman's body. Evita tries the barred door and then smashes through it.
The Eagles tell stories that the monitoring machines cannot interpret. The machines assume concealed information, but the narrative does not confirm a cipher.
Automatic monitors record and interpret but fail to understand. This isn't code like you meet every night.
• George's tale of the Syrian and the sand dune: The only thing ever left over when the world ends is one syrian and one sand dune... If the syrian goes behind the dune, there is hope.
• Adam's tale of Saint Brandon arriving on Astrobe 1500 years before official history, with 19 Irish monks in a coracle boat.
• Shanty's tale of the boar hog and lightning rod salesman.
Question: Evita asks: 'My brother, you know these things also. Will it be his death?'
“Yes, it will be his death. And my final one.”
Adam says Battersea is not wrong: he will strike, and a new world may be made, although many details must change. This does not withdraw Adam's prediction of More's death.
The Fools’ Carnival
A Fools’ Holiday Such as They Have Not Had for a Hundred Years
The night before the execution, Cosmopolis erupts in unprecedented revelry. It is a fools’ carnival indeed, all split into high-spirited warring factions spilling over into masquerade.
'Happy fighting.' Not lungers or hard-heads from Cathead, but civilized Cosmopolitans. Heads are broken, and people laugh, as if it had been a thousand years before.
'Ban and Beyond' banners flown and pulled down in glorious melee. 'Sackcloth and Ashes' faction marches and jokes.
The newly-appointed Metropolitan has put the whole world under interdict; groups make up and sing ballads about it.
High Ladies of Astrobe dress as crones and hawk candy heads and skulls for the beheading. Wooly Rams found and barbecued—the feast of the Wooly Ram has not been held on Astrobe for more than three hundred years.
Drinking and shouting, looting and arson, all carried out in pretty good spirits.
A whole barrelful of new emotions spilled into the streets around Centrality Square.
Anger (and who of the Citizens has been angry in their whole lives?), wonder, truculence, battle-joy, revelry, serpents’ tooth remorse, utter penitence, pinnacled hope, joy-in-murder, joy-in-humility.
All the detectable Programmed Persons are in hiding. They feel fear, an emotion that is not even programmed into them. They cannot reason this thing out at all, and reason is the only thing that the Programmed Persons have.
The Five Hundred Bells
The Old Old World Funeral Toll
Then the tolling begins. On the great bells of a forgotten or museumized church, then on another and another, then on five hundred.
Most of these Churches have been razed three hundred years ago. How are their giant bells sounding the Old Old World Funeral Toll now? That sound has not been heard within living memory on Astrobe.
But five hundred great bells toll, and the people remember the names of them.
And one more, high and powerful and clear, the July Bell.
The whole great golden unbelieving city of Cosmopolis does homage to Thomas More who will die tomorrow.
Foreman's Theory of World Death
The Mustard Seed and Transcendent Yeast
Foreman visits Thomas at dawn. He is 'High Civilian in Charge of Execution.'
He finds Thomas unusually placid for a man scheduled to die. The two weigh each other with cautious eyes.
Worlds die periodically—instantly ceasing all life, heat, gravity, meaning. Foreman believes he will witness it today.
Foreman proposes transitions around Christ's birth, 500, 1000, 1500, and 2000, followed by the current Astrobian crisis. He places More's first death near the transition from the High Middle Ages to the modern world, not near the year 1000. This remains his theory.
A transcendent yeast, a small quantity of the immaterial, must be added every 500 years or so for rebirth. Thomas's death and the reaction to the 'Ban the Beyond' push will be the trigger.
“The mustard seed, we plant it now.”
Thomas's death is absolutely required. Foreman insists: 'All other hopes are vain.'
The Betrayal
Foreman Changes the Time
A mechanical voice pings 'Ten minute call!' Foreman declares: 'All right, Thomas... We go now to your end. Come, come.'
Thomas protests—it is not yet 8 a.m., he dies at noon, nothing is ready.
I changed it, Thomas. I changed it to eight o'clock... There was no other way.
Foreman admits he knew about Battersea's rescue plan—being his former commander—and picked up the details easily.
Thomas accuses him of murder despite friendship. Foreman affirms: This is the only way to bring off the reaction—humanity's rediscovery.
“I don't consent.”
You are the only ultimately honest man I can think of, who has shown stubborn honesty before and has a curious magnetism, becoming a symbol once and needing to become one again. We had almost run out of symbols on Astrobe.
Thomas moans: 'I die for it, and I don't even know what it's about.'
Pottscamp's Offer
Thomas is brought to a standstill before Pottscamp at the foot of the scaffold, 'as required by ritual.'
Offer: Will you reconsider? Sign now, and live happily. Or die meanly. If Thomas dies, Pottscamp becomes Surrogate President and will sign the bill himself.
'Snake-in-my-brain... I will not have died for the Oudennothing!' Thomas sees now that the Thing they try to kill is the only Thing that matters.
Off with my head if only to close my ears to this babble! Out of my way, you damnable jump-jack!
Pottscamp flees as though stricken, then sits on the ground, moaning and howling like an old Hebrew, pouring dust and ashes over his head.
The Forerunner Wave
A Minute Thing but Incomparably Savage
Thomas More has been World President, King, for nine days. And now he will die.
The early-morning rain has stopped, and now there is a rush to complete the act.
The men from Cathead, rumor says, have received word of the sudden change of time and are mobbing toward the center of Cosmopolis, but might well be too late.
There is one wave of fury, a minute thing but incomparably savage, rising moments before a true tidal wave: the forerunner wave.
Buff Shanty and Paul are in it, driving with great impetus. Walter Copperhead is in it, though he must know it is futile. The boy Adam is in it. Possibly thirty others, fine people of Cosmopolis.
Its suddenness almost brings success. The men bowl over guards and gain scaffold steps. Fighting is close; they give a life for every step.
Adam is the crest, reaching the scaffold and touching Thomas before guards fling him down.
He rises brokenly.
Adam dies magnificently—as he always did.
The wave lacks bulk; guards are too many. The thrust crests, shatters, ebbs in blood.
Shanty, Paul, Copperhead, Adam, and the others die around the scaffold foot and on the steps, 'making them slippery.'
Evita's Vengeance
Sparagmos Enacted
Evita, knowing it will fail, surges not towards Thomas but towards Fabian Foreman at the square's edge.
'Zehheeroot, is-Kerioth,' she howls ('Beware, Iscariot').
She attacks him like a lioness, swipes his face red, bites his throat. Foreman screams in terror.
I be a cold fury and not a witch. Woe to him by whom it comes... Certain primitives were wont to kill a dog to be company to the hero... You are such a dog.
Foreman's Last Words: Foreman gasps: No, no, woman! I'm the master of it all... The furious reaction... will set humanity back... and let a new world be born.
Evita sings she is the heart of that reaction, reveling in it, calling Foreman a 'dog puppeteer.'
She practically dismembers him. She breaks his face, throws the shapeless man over her shoulder, carries him to George, Maxwell, and Rimrock. The four tear him apart and kill him.
Evita takes the biggest piece and hangs it on a Carob tree (Judas Tree).
Foreman has done his part well, planned it all except his own death; everything was meant well.
The guards kill George, Maxwell, and Rimrock, adding their blood to the transcendental yeast. They do not catch Evita.
The Stranger
Can a Man Have More Heads Than Two?
One man breaks through, unstoppable, unseen by guards. This stranger goes to Thomas on the scaffold, speaks unheard words.
Thomas seems excited, pleased. He cries loudly: 'Will it work, do you think?... How droll! Can a man have more heads than two? I'll do it. I'll go with you.'
But apparently Thomas doesn't go, anywhere but to his death. The stranger disappears into the crowd or charged air; guesses remain about his identity.
Some say something disappears from Thomas then—his essence—leaving a shadow man. A weird old woman cries she can see through him.
Unidentified. Possibly Christ.
Last Words
Pater, in Manus Tuas—
The rest is legend: quips Thomas supposedly said (some good, some cute, most in books of quotations), but he didn't say them, not this time or the first.
His only last words on the scaffold are "Pater, in manus tuas—" (a scrap of old prayer).
The prayer begins Father, into your hands, echoing Christ's words in Luke 23:46. It breaks off before the blade falls.
The blade falls and More is beheaded. The narrative insists on the reality of the blood and death.
The narrator reports the snakes and the woman carrying the head, then disavows them with an insistence that such things could not happen. The tone preserves uncertainty rather than settling every prodigy as fact or falsehood.
The World Ends
Everything Ceases. And All the Stars Go Out.
But one thing does really happen. At the moment life flickers out of the beheaded corpus, the worlds come to an end.
All life and heat and pulse go out of the world. It dies in every bird, rock, plant, person, mountain, sea, cloud. It dies in gravity, light, heat, germ-life, life-code. Everything ceases. And all the stars go out.
Is it for a moment? Or a billion years? Or forever? There is no difference when the world ends, no time to measure time by.
Remember how it had been? A priest renegade just becomes Metropolitan; a programmed machine succeeds to president but wails, pouring ashes. Battersea and his men mob towards Centrality Square under their Hand-of-Vengeance banner. On such notes the worlds end.
The Questions
And is a new world born? Yeasted? Does the furious reaction bridge the gap? Does the mustard seed grow? The Judas tree bear fruit?
Does lightning lace things together or sunder forever? Thunder flattens worlds; a tidal wave carries away golden fungus.
In less than an instant, more than forever, it is over. But has it sequence? Does a new world follow?
The narrator asks whether the hand on the banner is misunderstood and recalls Gandy's Left Hand of God. The question is not spoken by Northprophet.
Remember cycles (Rome, Europe, Americas, Astrobe)? Cycles internal, electrifying? Divinity becomes humanity? Humanity becomes divinity?
Can spirit come down on gell-cells, flux-fix? Shall sterile wood fruit? Is Avid Nothingness cast away? Room for life? Return to real life? Does reaction become birthing?
Be quiet. We watch.
Be quiet. We wait.
Be quiet. We hope.
Time Travel
Chronometanastasis and Hopp-Equation Space
Time Travel in Past Master
Past Master employs two distinct modes of temporal/spatial displacement: Chronometanastasis (retrieving persons from the past) and Hopp-Equation Travel (interstellar transit). Both involve profound dislocations of reality, identity, and consciousness.
Both forms of travel disturb identity. More's retrieval resembles resurrection symbolically, but the machine takes him while alive in his own past. The later visit to his grave makes his simultaneous relation to life and death visible.
Chronometanastasis
Travel into the Past
Etymology: A Greek-derived name for travel through time. Its function is shown by the tuned loop and its calibrated attachments.
“Find a dead man who once led well. Let him lead again.”
Chronometanastasis has been a working thing for a dozen years.
Location: Kingmaker's London office on Earth
Device: A 'tuned antenna-like loop'—the 'basic machine' with attachments for calibration.
To the observer, the traveler vanishes into 'crackling air.' To the traveler: 'unholy gray confusion that is deeper than darkness.' All time travelers experience sickness.
Coins: Brooks supplies coins of the required period. Paul jokes about the problem of spending Tomorrow Coins in the wrong day.
Calibration: Paul brings a calibrated attachment. He says Brooks need not know its exact calibration, not that calibration is unnecessary.
Question: “Will there be two of me, then, Paul?”
More's Answer: “Every man is a multitude.”
History records More's death 'on a certain date in an extreme manner, and in this realm.' The retrieved More exists simultaneously—his bones remain in his grave at St. Peter in Chains while he walks on Astrobe.
Plato: 'Too cold, too placid.' Foreman calls him essentially 'a programmed person himself'—a just man who believed he could never be unhappy.
King Yu, Mung K'o, Chandragupta, Stilicho, Charles the Great, Cosimo I, Macchiavelli, Edward Coke, Gustavas Vasa, Lincoln, Inigo Jones: Almost good enough... a little something lacking in each.
I want a man who can be unhappy over an unjust situation.' More's 'showy act of honesty' that costs his head makes him uniquely qualified—or his 'one honest moment.
The Time Men
Previous Visitors to Thomas More
One of the great mysteries of the book. Who are these travelers?
More has been visited by time travelers before due to his historical significance. He has 'a number of past and future things in my head.'
He asked questions of his visitors and knows 'a little of several futures.'
• Paul lives approximately 1000 years hence, during the 'First Astrobian Time of Troubles.'
• Astrobe is 'wobbly' then, and will still be wobbly 1000 years after Paul's death—just a different wobble. Astrobe survives the current crisis.
• The man who saves Astrobe was 'shamefully treated,' his name unknown, identified only as 'the Past Master.'
The Utopia Irony: Time travelers told More his 'angry humor piece' Utopia was always misunderstood as depicting an ideal world. He wrote it in 'bitter and laughing irony' about the 'sickest of all possible worlds.' He finds the future 'slack' for mistaking satire for a 'vapid dream.'
Hopp-Equation Space
The Medium of Interstellar Travel
Hopp-Equation Space travel breaks reality. Not like ordinary space—persons and things 'aren't the same' during traversal.
Distance: The novel gives the distance as 1.5 parsecs and describes an ordinary light-speed journey as over five years. Its stated figures are approximate and do not align exactly.
Duration: Hopp-Equation Travel takes about one Astrobe month (approximately 700 standard hours).
Speed: Approximately 64× light speed.
No sense of motion. The universe disappears. No worlds, stars, or duration perceived.
'Absolutely fundamental reversal' or 'total reversal of polarity'—a common private joke among pilots.
• Paul becomes left-handed during passage.
• He jokes it's the only way he could sing soprano, which he often does in this state.
• Thomas experiences it as inexpressible fury: He seethes with inexpressible fury. He asks Paul if it happens to all Hopp-Equation travelers.
“What's time to a revenant? I've been dead a thousand years, that I should live to such shame.”
Hopp-Equation travel is very new.
Passage Dreams
Twenty Thousand Dreams in Ninety-Second Intervals
Sleep is restricted to 90-second intervals by instrumentation. Paul becomes adept, experiencing intricate dreams.
He calculates having at least 20,000 memorable, gemlike, self-contained, widely different dreams during passage—each a short life.
Attributed to compressing 4.5 years of psychic awareness (Law of Conservation of Psychic Totality) into one month. Nearly 5 years of psychic experience crowded into a month; psychic mass isn't foreshortened.
Debris: 'Psychic space debris'—fragments of billions of minds, poignant, comic, horrifying episodes.
Ansels: The ansel appears in many dreams; ansels were in human unconscious before being found on Astrobe.
Paul knew some dream monsters were real creatures living in Hopp-Equation space—some encountered only by him, others by multiple pilots in the same way and place.
Only the maladjusted can stand passages; well-adjusted pilots crack up. Hopp-Equation pilots are a peculiar breed.
This is why Paul—irregular, citizenship revoked, hunted by Killers—can make the journey. His very brokenness qualifies him.
Paul's Journey to Retrieve More
Paul leaves in Foreman's spacecraft with permission keyed for it. The grasshopper he steals to reach the spaceport is a different vehicle.
Paul travels from Golden Astrobe to Blue Earth. Earth appears bluish from Astrobe; Astrobe golden from Earth—due to their suns’ different white light.
Paul makes Earth-fall on the morning side, 'a beautiful experience that never gets old.' He lands in London, stables his craft.
Kingmaker has extensive Earth interests; Paul knows his way around. Brooks manages the London office, immediately flustered by an Astrobe visitor—Earthmen feel inferior since the elite left for Astrobe 400-500 years ago.
Paul presents forged credentials (he could have gotten real ones but prefers doing things himself). Brooks accepts them, respecting 'the buccaneer in a man.'
Paul steps through the tuned antenna-like loop, disappearing to Brooks into crackling air.
Materializes ankle-deep in mud on the edge of a large, sprawling wooden town—16th-century London.
In a ramshackle public house, Paul eats wood-cock, 'very high beef,' barley bread, and an onion 'the size of a child's head.'
The proprietor warns: 'The King's men are everywhere, friend. Walk in Christ.'
After an hour or two of walking, Paul reaches Chelsea. He is pleased the English haven't yet become 'that most unhandsome of people.'
He spots Thomas More walking in his frozen garden, 'wrapped up like a sheep.' Paul recognizes him instantly, though he only slightly resembles Holbein's portrait (which looks more like Holbein).
More Visits His Own Grave
After returning through the tunnel loop to modern London, Thomas insists on visiting St. Peter in Chains church.
The priest confirms the bones and ring found in the grave. He assumes the ring worn by the living More is a replica, failing to recognize his visitor.
The priest assumes More is an antiquarian. More corrects: 'No, I'm an antiquary... I have a special interest in this man.'
What other man, Paul, looks down on his own grave and he in it? All except my head.' His head is buried at Canterbury—'Parboiled it, did they not?
More expresses desire to see his head but deems the 70-mile journey 'too long'—despite preparing for a 1.5 parsec trip to Astrobe.
The Return to Astrobe
Thomas brings mystery novels, revels, bonanzas, science fiction (all new to him), plus newly discovered tobacco (stogie declared most wonderful thing since Evangels). He plans to smoke and read the whole trip.
All goes well until the first cosmic disappearance. Thomas tries to bellow, but his voice won't—the fundamental reversal has occurred.
More experiences thousands of dreams in sleeps of at most ninety seconds. Figures include Rimrock, a composite female, a lion-headed spider, a fox, and a hawk shuffling shells. Their relation to the people he meets becomes apparent later.
Annotations
Kingmaker imagines a crisis continuing beyond the last possible hour. The title also invites comparison with C. Virgil Gheorghiu’s novel about a person trapped in the classifications and machinery of modern society. The resemblance is especially apt while Astrobe’s mechanical Killers batter down the building.
C. Virgil Gheorghiu, The Twenty-Fifth Hour (1949; English translation, 1950).
Kingmaker’s lion and Proctor’s fox recall Machiavelli’s advice that a prince needs both strength and cunning. Foreman’s hawk adds a third figure to the pair. Their competing claims to control one another make government a contest among these different kinds of power.
Kingmaker’s name recalls Warwick, the magnate who made and unmade English kings. Fabian can suggest Fabius Cunctator, the Roman commander famous for delay, and the society named after him. Foreman’s waiting and carefully timed intervention suit that association, although the novel does not explain his name.
Shakespeare, 3 Henry VI, 3.3; the historical epithets Warwick the Kingmaker and Fabius Cunctator.
The phrase belongs to Macbeth’s vision of a seemingly endless succession of kings. Here the Masters argue over postponing judgment while the Killers provide the thunder outside. A familiar expression becomes a physical event in the scene.
Foreman’s mechanical man belongs to the clock that threatens Astrobe. The image recalls the Doomsday Clock of Cold War public life. A manufactured president cannot save the world if he is another part of the machinery bringing about its end.
The Bulletin of the Atomic Scientists’ Doomsday Clock, introduced in 1947.
Foreman distinguishes the death of a historical world from its failure. His account develops into the five-hundred-year sequence in Chapter 13. Toynbee offers a useful comparison for the language of civilizational breakdown, especially the later phrase Time of Troubles; Foreman’s particular chronology is his own.
Arnold J. Toynbee, A Study of History; Past Master, chap. 13.
Byerly’s name appears amid doubts about whether a candidate is human and a proposal to manufacture the ideal president. This makes Asimov’s Stephen Byerley, the politician suspected of being a robot, a plausible allusion. The spelling differs, and Lafferty leaves the connection unstated.
Isaac Asimov, “Evidence” (1946) and “The Evitable Conflict” (1950).
The name combines Greek words for time and migration. It makes travel into the past sound like a change of dwelling. The embedded resemblance to anastasis, resurrection, also suits the project of bringing a long-dead man back into public life.
Greek chronos, time; metanastasis, migration; anastasis, rising or resurrection.
Foreman objects to Plato’s claim that justice makes a man happy. He wants someone who can be unhappy over an unjust situation. The discussion tests the difference between designing an ideal commonwealth and suffering with the people who inhabit an actual one.
Plato, Republic 1.354a; Thomas More, Utopia, book 1.
The candidates include rulers, counselors, a jurist, and an architect. Foreman reduces his own list to More and to one decisive act of honesty. This resembles the great-man theory of history, but the choice also makes the supposedly exemplary man dependent on those who recruit him.
Thomas Carlyle, On Heroes, Hero-Worship, and the Heroic in History (1841).
The exchange anticipates More’s execution on Tower Hill in 1535 and his second execution on Astrobe. Roper records More speaking plainly against the statute after his conviction. That episode helps illuminate Foreman’s interest in a final honest act; Lafferty’s More is a fictional reworking of the historical martyr.
William Roper, The Life of Sir Thomas More, account of the trial and execution.
Foreman needs only a very small beginning. The Gospel seed that grows into a great plant gives his political experiment a religious scale. Chapter 13 returns to the image when he explains what he expects More’s death to accomplish.
Matthew 13:31–32; Mark 4:30–32; Luke 13:18–19.
More explicitly connects the pilot with his name-saint, the apostle whose journeys fill Acts. The comparison gives Paul’s mission a spiritual possibility that its organizers do not explain to him. His confession before his own birth adds a comic reversal to that connection.
Acts 13–28.
Paul’s escape depends on bringing the mechanical guards and Killers together like bears and hounds in a baiting. The image anticipates the journey to More’s England, where bear-baiting was a familiar public spectacle. Paul and his allies arrange the encounter and exploit the confusion.
The English bear-baiting tradition.
Paul’s change of handedness recalls the mirror-reversed traveler in Wells’s “The Plattner Story.” Lafferty extends the joke to sex and voice. This bodily reversal also begins the novel’s larger pattern of left-handed actions and unexpected means of rescue.
H. G. Wells, “The Plattner Story” (1896).
The statement that ansels existed in the human unconscious before people discovered them on Astrobe invites comparison with Jung’s archetypes. The novel lets an image encountered in dreams become a creature met in waking life. It does not require that every passage dream be decoded into a single fixed meaning.
C. G. Jung, writings on the collective unconscious and archetypes.
The first man’s name belongs to a boy who repeatedly appears in scenes of battle and death. His insistence that each death belongs to another bearer of the name complicates any simple account of resurrection. The biblical association brings the deaths of individual men into the story of mankind.
Genesis 2–3; 1 Corinthians 15:22, 45.
Sour John is also a storyteller in Lafferty’s “The Ugly Sea.” His theft of an idol’s green eye recalls J. Milton Hayes’s music-hall monologue, but the replacement kidney turns the adventure into a joke about mistaken value. Paul’s objection to the port’s geography is overruled by the teller.
R. A. Lafferty, “The Ugly Sea” (1960); J. Milton Hayes, “The Green Eye of the Little Yellow God” (1911).
The paired stars borrow the names of the opposing headlands at the entrance to the Gulf of Corinth. Their linked rotation resembles a centrifugal governor regulating a machine. When the chain breaks, the dream makes a cosmic catastrophe out of a mechanical failure.
Thucydides, History of the Peloponnesian War 2.86; Strabo, Geography 8.2.3.
More calls his book a bitter joke that later readers have mistaken for a blueprint. This is the fictional More’s account of his intention. It establishes the central predicament: the author must live in, and eventually govern, a world that has taken his imagined commonwealth seriously.
More’s description of Utopia reverses the familiar formula of the best of all possible worlds. The later history of that formula, especially Voltaire’s Pangloss, makes the line another deliberate-looking anachronism in the speech of a man who already knows several futures.
Gottfried Wilhelm Leibniz, Theodicy (1710); Voltaire, Candide (1759).
Paul finds More free in his garden before the decision that will lead to his death. Historically, More refused the oath in April 1534 and was imprisoned until his execution in July 1535. The novel combines that situation with a journey about a thousand years back from 2535; its calendar does not resolve into an exact historical date.
Roper, The Life of Sir Thomas More; More’s imprisonment, 1534–35.
Paul recognizes More partly from Holbein’s portrait. The contrast between the short, familiar-looking man and the tall Astrobian pilot makes the historical figure physically unheroic before the narrative tests what kind of hero he can become.
Hans Holbein the Younger, Sir Thomas More (1527), Frick Collection.
The title joins a master from the past with the ordinary meaning of an expert. It also recalls an office formerly held in a guild or lodge. The later language of masters, a station, and an inner circle extends those institutional associations.
The guild and Masonic office of past master; Past Master, chap. 4.
More’s Latin plea for mercy belongs to the language of prayer. The publican’s farewell and lament for the old things likewise draw on scriptural idiom. In this scene the promise of things made new is heard by someone who fears what the religious changes will destroy.
Miserere mihi, Domine, Roman Missal, Introit for the Sixteenth Sunday after Pentecost; 2 Corinthians 5:17; Colossians 2:6; Revelation 21:4–5.
The chapter title comes from More’s visit to the grave that already contains his bones. The historical More prepared a tomb and epitaph at Chelsea, but his body was buried at St. Peter ad Vincula in the Tower. Lafferty’s scene makes the traveler confront the fact of his first death before he goes to meet a second.
More’s Chelsea epitaph (1532); Roper, The Life of Sir Thomas More.
The burial tradition separates More’s body in the Tower from his head at Canterbury. The future priest’s discovery of identifiable bones and a signet ring belongs to Lafferty’s fiction. Its purpose is to make More’s presence and his completed death equally tangible.
Thomas Stapleton, Tres Thomae (1588), account of Margaret Roper and More’s head.
The rare verb enskied recalls Lucio’s description of Isabella in Measure for Measure. Paul has just reminded More of his canonization; the flight then sends the sainted man literally into the sky. More’s enthusiasm for a newly discovered cigar keeps the ascent comic.
Shakespeare, Measure for Measure, 1.4.
Succubus, Eve, Lilith, Judith, Mary, and Valkyrie bring demonic, maternal, holy, and martial figures into one image. Judith’s beheading of Holofernes is especially pointed in a novel about More’s head. The composite anticipates Evita without reducing her to one of its names.
Genesis 2–3; Judith 13; the traditions of Lilith and the Valkyries.
More places the inn in a numbered division of Hell and consoles Paul that three worse divisions remain. The Qur’an supplies seven gates, while later commentaries arrange the inhabitants differently. The joke’s exact assignment of Christians to a fourth division should be read as More’s statement within the scene.
Qur’an 15:44; George Sale, Preliminary Discourse to The Koran (1734).
More’s outrage at starvation and punishing labor recalls Hythloday’s indictment of England in Utopia. Cathead confronts him with a further difficulty: its inhabitants have chosen to leave material abundance. His familiar political explanations cannot yet account for that choice.
Thomas More, Utopia, book 1.
More accepts voluntary religious poverty but recoils from deprivation that degrades its sufferers. The distinction matters throughout the Cathead chapters. His admiration for a modest life does not make him an advocate of the conditions he sees here.
The Franciscan tradition of holy poverty; More’s account of common life in Utopia.
Rimrock’s seal-like body and ability to move on land recall the seal-people of northern folklore. His shifting between no legs, four, and two can also suggest the Sphinx’s riddle about man. More’s decisive test, however, is intellect and spirit rather than an animal’s outward shape.
The selkie tradition; Apollodorus, Library 3.5.8.
Ouden means nothing. The name extends the learned naming games of Utopia, whose island, city, and river carry teasing Greek meanings. Here the word becomes a speaker who describes his nothingness as active, hungry, and destructive.
Greek ouden, nothing; More, Utopia.
More’s denial that Ouden has being can be read alongside Augustine and Aquinas on evil as a privation of good. Ouden answers that his nothingness is a vortex. The exchange tests what that destructive claim means; it does not by itself settle the novel’s metaphysics in Ouden’s favor.
Augustine, Confessions 7.12; Aquinas, Summa theologiae I, q. 48.
Ouden remembers a single kindling that overcame him and claims that he is extinguishing it. John’s light shining in darkness supplies a strong biblical comparison. Paul-Thomas answers with the possibility of rekindling and with a resource that Ouden does not know.
John 1:4–5.
The golden inhabitants appear to fulfill the promise associated with Huey Long’s slogan. Their magnificence makes More eager to join them. Later encounters ask whether this universal royalty has left its beneficiaries capable of thought, refusal, or spiritual life.
Huey P. Long, Every Man a King (1933) and the Share Our Wealth slogan.
More praises Astrobe through a mixture of Gospel language, classical myth, and Irish otherworld geography. The pearl of great price stands beside Iris, Great Brasil, and the Hesperides. This abundance of names reveals how much hope he brings to what he is seeing.
Matthew 13:45–46; the myths of Iris and the Hesperides; the Irish Hy-Brasil tradition.
Evita’s answer comes from Christ’s denunciation of tombs beautiful outside and full of death within. She supplies the diagnosis while More is still admiring the surface. The contrast governs both this chapter and the later discovery of Astrobe’s deformed reverse.
Matthew 23:27.
A fawney man practices a ring swindle, passing a worthless ring off as valuable. More’s compliment to Rimrock therefore associates enchantment with deceptive gold. It belongs beside the repeated question of what Golden Astrobe’s apparent wealth is worth.
The thieves’ cant terms fawney and fawney rig.
More explicitly recalls older dreams of artificial servants. Greek examples include Hephaestus’s golden attendants and the bronze Talos; the Jewish tradition supplies the golem. Pottscamp’s dream of the toy that consumes its maker gives that admiration a frightening sequel.
Homer, Iliad 18.417–20; Apollonius Rhodius, Argonautica 4; the golem tradition.
The former presidents’ extravagant names sound to More like gladiators or American wrestlers. His sponsors likewise plan to present a recognizable persona to the public. The joke makes political office resemble a staged performance whose billing matters more than its holder’s freedom to act.
The novel’s explicit comparison with gladiators and masked professional wrestlers.
Proctor’s description of Kingmaker and Foreman’s refusal to wash his hands recall Pilate. The gesture concerns responsibility for a death already being planned. Foreman’s willingness to own his part does not remove the moral question of what he is doing to his friend.
Matthew 27:24.
Proctor compares the man ready to die with a guest who has eaten enough. Lucretius and Horace use the satisfied guest as an image of leaving life without complaint. Astrobe turns that consolation into an argument for readily available termination.
Lucretius, On the Nature of Things 3.938; Horace, Satires 1.1.117–19.
Utopia allows priests and magistrates to urge a voluntary death upon someone suffering from incurable, painful illness. Astrobe makes termination a common response to weariness. The altered conditions are essential to the comparison: Lafferty’s institution is much broader than the practice described by More.
Thomas More, Utopia, book 2, “Of Their Slaves, and of Their Marriages.”
Foreman spoils the consoling proverb about darkness before dawn by inserting a false dawn. He later claims responsibility for making a particular sun rise, borrowing language ordinarily applied to God. His confidence invites scrutiny as the cost of his promised renewal becomes clear.
Matthew 5:45; the proverb about darkness before dawn.
Foreman’s counting and weeping make the shells a strong counterpart to Judas’s thirty pieces of silver. The scene anticipates the betrayal named openly in Chapter 13. The warning about Mother Carey’s chicken adds the storm petrel’s maritime associations to the threatened victim.
Matthew 26:15; 27:3–5; the sailors’ name Mother Carey’s chicken.
The school assignments in Pottscamp’s dream contain names from Lafferty’s other fiction. Treating those peoples and languages as ordinary school subjects gives the invented worlds a shared background while the toy’s effortless learning exposes the child’s dependence on it.
Lafferty, “Primary Education of the Camiroi” (1966), “Polity and Custom of the Camiroi” (1967), and The Reefs of Earth (1968).
The title names Wells’s future history, in which a world administration reorganizes civilization and suppresses religion. Astrobe’s managed happiness and its treatment of worship as an antiquity give the allusion particular force. Chapter 10 answers this title with The Deformity of Things to Come.
H. G. Wells, The Shape of Things to Come (1933), especially book 4.
Kingmaker’s praise of Astrobe’s uniformity recalls Utopia’s closely similar towns. More’s wish to travel puts the author in opposition to the commonwealth associated with his name. He insists on seeing what an account of the whole planet leaves out.
Thomas More, Utopia, book 2, “Of Their Towns, Particularly of Amaurot.”
The precis machine describes common access to goods, freedom from poverty, and a simplified legal order. These recall institutions in Utopia, although the golden world gives them a different purpose. More’s recognition is also a crisis of authorship: his joke has become a place people must inhabit.
Thomas More, Utopia, book 2.
Astrobe’s account of humanity converging into a single organism invites comparison with Teilhard de Chardin’s Omega Point. The novel’s Omega becomes Ouden and the Big O, a destination described as nothingness. This is a satirical resemblance; Teilhard’s own account gives convergence a transcendent and Christian end.
Pierre Teilhard de Chardin, The Phenomenon of Man (1955; English translation, 1959).
The Dream’s religious vocabulary makes the abolition of transcendence sound like an act of worship. It can be read against the death-of-God debates contemporary with the novel. The phrase also occurs in Richard Rubenstein’s theology, but the shared wording alone does not establish a direct source.
Richard L. Rubenstein, After Auschwitz (1966); Thomas J. J. Altizer, The Gospel of Christian Atheism (1966).
Utopia regulates travel with official permission; Astrobe’s instantaneous transport serves the civilized regions. The comparison helps explain why a walk matters here. Leaving the convenient network lets More encounter places and people that the official description does not adequately explain.
Thomas More, Utopia, book 2, “Of the Travelling of the Utopians.”
More’s delight in either end of a hunt contrasts with the Utopians’ contempt for hunting. The contrast separates the character’s appetites from the rules of the society in his book. His attraction to the wild draws him further from Astrobe’s claim that civilized life is complete.
Thomas More, Utopia, book 2, discussion of pleasure and hunting.
More imagines his joke as a tree unexpectedly bearing fruit, then judges a failing religious institution by the image of a barren tree. The Gospel language makes him apply to the Church a test that also bears on his own political invention.
Matthew 7:17–20; Luke 13:6–9.
The museum rite combines guitar, drugs, theatrical dress, and commercial sponsorship. Its details turn a religious service into a degraded exhibit. The scene can be read in relation to the liturgical and popular culture of the 1960s, but its grotesque composite is Lafferty’s fictional projection.
The novel’s account of the museumized Mass; mid-twentieth-century liturgical and popular culture.
More himself invokes Dante when he hears the instruments. Relevant passages include Barbariccia’s obscene trumpet, Master Adam’s lute-shaped body and drum-like belly, and Nimrod’s horn. The reference is comic and composite: Dante does not describe an orchestra of guitars in the lowest circle.
Dante, Inferno 21.139; 30.49–54, 103; 31.12–18.
Pottscamp’s assurance about what will be given in the hour recalls Christ’s promise of words to disciples brought before hostile authorities. The change from speaking to seeing suits More’s journey. The question is whether he can recognize what the encounters disclose.
Matthew 10:19–20.
The ansels’ ancestors climbed through what they had taken for the sky and found land above the sea. Plato imagines a sea-dweller making a similar discovery in the Phaedo. The parallel makes Rimrock’s account a challenge to the belief that one’s familiar world exhausts reality.
More calls Evita Lilith rather than Eve; she claims both names. The exchange brings the first mother and the rebellious first wife of later Jewish legend into the same woman. It continues the composite female figure of More’s passage dream.
Genesis 2–3; Alphabet of Ben Sira, the Lilith story.
Slider questions whether Christ’s commission and promise apply beyond Earth. His argument depends on taking nations and world in a narrowly terrestrial sense. Chapter 8 gives the Metropolitan’s direct answer, making this a dispute within the novel rather than an established limit on the Promise.
Matthew 28:19–20; Past Master, chap. 8.
The closing image of a fair face and a dangerous tail recalls Dante’s Geryon, the embodiment of fraud. It also belongs to the proverbial poison reserved for the tail or end. Astrobe’s pleasing appearance has concealed what More discovers behind it.
Dante, Inferno 17.1–27; the proverb in cauda venenum.
Kastroides recalls the extinct giant beaver Castoroides, and the direwolves likewise borrow a prehistoric name. Paul warns that the resemblance lies in the names. The earthly vocabulary helps the travelers begin to describe creatures whose behavior and proportions remain unfamiliar.
The names Castoroides and dire wolf; the novel’s explanation of borrowed animal names.
The enormous predatory bird recalls the roc of travel legend. Its habit of displaying human bodies on thorns also resembles a shrike’s impaled prey, enlarged to a human scale. More’s comparison with men hanging dead wolves reverses the ordinary relation between hunter and hunted.
The roc in the Sindbad voyages and Marco Polo; the natural history of shrikes.
More names Sextus Empiricus in support of a being suited to every environment. Father Oddopter then appears as an answer to the speculation. Sextus reports arguments about living beings in different cosmic regions; the scene turns that philosophical material into a joke about the observers themselves.
Sextus Empiricus, Against the Physicists, book 1; compare Cicero, On the Nature of the Gods 2.42.
Oddopter’s grand title for a familiar story mocks the travelers’ innocence. Like the abandoned children of the ballad, they do not fully understand the danger surrounding them. His greeting is protective advice delivered as teasing.
The ballad “The Babes in the Wood” and its later theatrical versions.
The apostle asks for evidence before believing; More sees the Devil-kill and then tries to exclude what he has seen from his account of reality. Oddopter challenges the rule by which More has decided in advance that only one order of things can exist.
John 20:24–29.
The bait and hook invite comparison with the Christian interpretation of Leviathan: the Devil takes what he desires and is caught through it. Gregory the Great reads the hook as Christ’s humanity concealing divinity. Evita’s bait and Oddopter’s fishing give that theological image a violent comic form.
Job 41:1, or 40:20 in the Douay-Rheims numbering; Gregory the Great, Moralia in Job, book 33.
The name recalls the monster whose severed heads grow again in Heracles’ labor. Oddopter makes the repeated killing a daily necessity. He also says the Devil can take other forms, so the significance belongs to this encounter and its recurrence, rather than to every animal called a hydra.
The Lernaean Hydra; Apollodorus, Library 2.5.2.
Reading entrails belongs to the ancient haruspex; interpreting birds belongs to the augur. Copperhead draws on this vocabulary and practice here and on the mountain. More’s uneasiness recalls the biblical prohibition on divination and consultation with the dead.
Deuteronomy 18:10–11; the Roman traditions of haruspicy and augury.
Oddopter vows never to sleep twice in the same place. This can be set beside both Christ’s homelessness and Benedict’s criticism of wandering monks. Lafferty gives a positive discipline to a form of life that monastic rules often treated with suspicion.
Luke 9:58; Rule of St. Benedict, chap. 1.
The name recalls the German imperial city associated with the Salian dynasty. Lafferty transfers imperial ceremony to a precarious settlement with an oral history preserved through the skulls of its rulers. More treats its authority seriously even when the surrounding circumstances are comic.
The imperial palace and Salian history of Goslar.
The newly chosen ruler travels without provisions, money, or spare clothing. The instructions echo the sending of the apostles. That vulnerable arrival also makes the emperor’s office a small-scale counterpart to More’s dangerous appointment.
Luke 9:3; Matthew 10:9–10.
More’s henry and proposed charles treat the familiar john as though a privy ought to bear the reigning monarch’s name. The joke brings Henry VIII into the petty frustrations of the visit. More’s caution about crossing royalty recalls how much a confrontation with a king can cost.
Roper, The Life of Sir Thomas More, Norfolk’s warning about striving with princes and More’s advice to Cromwell.
Evita calls herself Faustina when she describes the longevity experiment as a bargain with the Devil. The Evil Scientist gives the Faust story a laboratory setting. Her return home after seeking Hell makes the discovery of Golden Astrobe’s nature the bitter result of the bargain.
The Faust tradition, especially the rejuvenation in Goethe’s Faust, part 1.
Evita’s journey around the world to recognize her own home can be compared with Chesterton’s returning yachtsman and Eliot’s end of exploration. Her discovery reverses their welcome: the home she finally recognizes is Hell.
G. K. Chesterton, Orthodoxy, chap. 1; T. S. Eliot, “Little Gidding,” section 5.
Oddopter’s over-belief has bodily consequences: it leaves marks and makes the feral regions powerful. William James’s term offers a useful comparison for belief that reaches beyond what evidence establishes. Lafferty gives that surplus of belief a creaturely presence.
William James, The Varieties of Religious Experience (1902), concluding discussion of over-beliefs.
Slider proposes electrically produced pleasure as a superior alternative to drinking. The contrast sets the ease of a manufactured sensation beside a physical, communal activity he cannot manage. It belongs to the novel’s larger dispute over whether discomfort can be removed without losing forms of life.
The chapter’s comparison of green lightning with electrical stimulation.
Trumpets, cloud, thunder, and lightning recall Sinai. The changed, shining survivors also invite the Gospel comparison that the narrator names as transfiguration. What they encounter includes the faces of Ouden, so the resemblance does not make their vision a simple repetition of a biblical revelation.
Exodus 19:16–19; 34:29–30; Matthew 17:1–9.
More’s criticism of the golden inhabitants borrows the upward movement of the psalm. He immediately imagines abandoning such impulses once he governs. His own attraction to the mountain is therefore already in conflict with the settled life he wants to administer.
Psalm 121:1, numbered 120:1 in the Douay-Rheims and Vulgate.
Scrivener gathers rulers expected to return when their people need them. The recurring legend gives More’s recruitment a wider pattern. Historical deaths, folk traditions, and invented futures mingle in the list; the list should not be treated as a set of accurate biographies.
The return-of-the-king traditions of Arthur and Frederick Barbarossa.
The diverted river and secret burial come from the account of Alaric’s death in Jordanes. The promise that he will rise and lead again belongs to the sleeping-king pattern added here. The distinction shows how historical material becomes a usable legend.
Jordanes, Getica 30.158.
Kennedy’s open automobile enters the same company as ancient and medieval kings. Roadstorm extends the catalogue into Lafferty’s own fiction and recalls Roadstrum of Space Chantey. The sequence treats very recent history and invented history as material from which legends of return are made.
John F. Kennedy’s assassination in 1963; Lafferty, Space Chantey (1968).
Oddopter says the marked ram belongs to Scripture. Abraham’s substitute sacrifice and Daniel’s two-horned ram are possible points of comparison. The scene does not choose between them or explain the double sign completely; More’s repeated appointment to death gives the image its immediate force.
Genesis 22:13; Daniel 8:3.
Paul’s words over Oddopter identify the dead man with the priesthood of Melchisedech. The verse belongs to the biblical and liturgical language of enduring priesthood. It follows a morning Mass offered for members of the party who would die that day.
Psalm 110:4, numbered 109:4 in the Douay-Rheims and Vulgate; Hebrews 5:6; 7:17.
The single point of light seems to occupy several places at once. Zeno’s arrow offers a plausible comparison for the old paradox named in the passage. Lafferty makes the apparent solution an overwhelming event through which the travelers must find a still narrower instant of escape.
Aristotle, Physics 6.9, 239b, on Zeno’s arrow.
The narrator explicitly connects astonishment with being thunderstruck. The event revives the history inside the word. The same habit of making a familiar phrase happen bodily governs many of the novel’s jokes and horrors.
The history of astonish through Old French estoner and the Latin vocabulary of thunder and stupefaction.
The possibility of light outside a false sky recalls the empyrean of medieval cosmology and Dante. The narrator poses it as a question. The view into a pit then makes the distinction between apparent height and genuine transcendence more difficult.
Aquinas, Summa theologiae I, q. 66, a. 3; Dante, Paradiso 30.
Scrivener’s choice and Slider’s reversal make personhood a matter of allegiance and action as well as origin. Scrivener dies resisting the Killers. The scene prepares the question, asked later by the Programmed Persons themselves, of whether creatures made from other materials can receive spiritual life.
Past Master, chaps. 7, 10, and 13.
Utopia limits the working day to six hours. Cathead’s twenty-hour labor makes the comparison brutal, especially because efficient machines already exist elsewhere. More must confront people who prefer this destructive work to the comfortable life offered by the golden cities.
Thomas More, Utopia, book 2, “Of Their Trades, and Manner of Life.”
Utopia includes outsiders who voluntarily enter service because its conditions are better than those at home. Cathead reverses the movement: people choose bondage and deprivation to escape the perfected society. The parallel places freedom of choice inside conditions that More finds intolerable.
Thomas More, Utopia, book 2, “Of Their Slaves, and of Their Marriages.”
The Underground Man challenges a rationally perfected society by defending the capacity to choose what is painful or disadvantageous. Cathead raises a related question: whether suffering can become proof that one is alive and capable of refusal. The comparison explains the argument without making Cathead’s misery desirable in itself.
Fyodor Dostoevsky, Notes from Underground, part 1, sections 7–9.
Barricades and gunfire give the migration a recognizable modern political setting. The Berlin Wall offers a historical comparison, but Lafferty reverses the expected economic destination: these refugees run from abundance into poverty. Their behavior exposes something that Astrobe’s measures of well-being cannot register.
The border barriers and shootings of the Cold War; the novel’s account of the exodus into Cathead.
The flag uses the traditional maritime signal of contagion. Lunger is an older American word for a consumptive. Both terms make bodily disease a constant feature of the city’s life; the weekly plague and lethal work are concrete conditions, not merely symbols of spiritual suffering.
The quarantine flag tradition; the American slang term lunger.
The district’s name recalls the Hospital of St. Mary of Bethlehem, whose name became Bedlam. Lafferty enlarges a madhouse into a large part of a city. The movement from institution to district makes the question of madness political as well as medical.
Bethlem Hospital, London; the development of the word bedlam.
More’s Dutchman is most naturally read as Holbein, his portraitist and the designer of the Dance of Death woodcuts. Older English could use Dutch broadly for German. The remark places the skeletal Metropolitan among images in which death confronts people of every social rank.
Hans Holbein the Younger, Dance of Death, published 1538; Sir Thomas More, 1527.
The ring associates the Metropolitan with Saint Peter and papal office. The novel also calls him the Pope of Astrobe. These signs give the nearly abandoned church an authority that its physical poverty and small congregation do not measure.
The papal Ring of the Fisherman; the chapter’s description of the Metropolitan.
The Metropolitan recites the prayer honoring John Fisher and Thomas More as martyrs. More recognizes Fisher and hears himself placed within a liturgical commemoration that followed his earthly life. The prayer confronts his uncertainty with the Church’s judgment about the man he became.
The collect for Saints John Fisher and Thomas More in the English proper of the Roman Missal after their canonization in 1935.
The Metropolitan applies Christ’s promise to this world and answers Slider’s attempt to exclude it. His account of Christ walking on Astrobe gives the answer a local history. The scene asks whether a new planet can be outside the reach of an apparently earthly promise.
Matthew 16:18; 28:20; Past Master, chap. 5.
The physically blind Metropolitan calls More blind because he fails to recognize what is before him. John’s account of the man born blind supplies the comparison: sight and spiritual understanding can move in opposite directions. More’s confidence in his diagnosis of Cathead is the object of the rebuke.
John 9:39–41.
The blessing and More’s answering line come from the psalm used in the prayers at the foot of the altar. His ready response shows religious memory operating beneath his professed uncertainty. The words ask for renewed life at the very moment he is confronting a church thought to be dying.
Psalm 85, numbered 84 in the Vulgate and Douay-Rheims; the Roman Mass, Deus, tu conversus vivificabis nos.
The promise that the planet itself will testify recalls the stones that cry out in Luke. The woman who touches More likewise recalls a Gospel encounter, although here she gives him a prophecy rather than receives a cure. Both episodes place knowledge outside the institutions and explanations he trusts.
Luke 19:40; Mark 5:25–34.
The title recalls the historical Kingmaker, Warwick, and brings the name Cosmos Kingmaker into the account of how a ruler is manufactured. Acclamation, publicity, party arrangements, and effective phrasing do the work once associated with a vote. The final ease of the process is part of its menace.
Richard Neville, Earl of Warwick; Shakespeare, 3 Henry VI, 3.3.
More compares Evita with his youngest daughter. Historically that daughter was Cecily, educated with her sisters in More’s household. His paternal comparison sits uneasily with Evita’s age, experience, and refusal to be treated as a child.
More’s family: Cecily More Heron; Roper, The Life of Sir Thomas More.
The Crank combines doubting Thomas with Judas. More corrects him, but the confusion reveals what Astrobe admires: it has turned the supposed betrayer of Christ into a hero. The error belongs to the characters’ damaged religious memory and should not be repeated as a description of either apostle.
John 20:24–29; the Gospel accounts of Judas’s betrayal.
The account starts with an egalitarian formula, passes through unequal voting weights, and ends by abolishing voting. Mill’s plural voting and Shute’s fictional multiple-vote scheme offer comparisons for the middle stage. The succession makes the removal of political choice appear to be one more modernization.
John Stuart Mill, Considerations on Representative Government, chap. 8; Nevil Shute, In the Wet (1953).
Demos names the people as a political body; ochlos names a crowd or mob. The Esthetics, Anesthetics, and Local Anesthetics turn disputes about taste and sensation into party labels. The catalogue mixes learned political names with jokes about feeling and its suppression.
Greek demos, people; ochlos, crowd; aisthesis, perception or sensation.
The Crank’s defense of choosing one’s occupation and unhappiness recalls John the Savage’s demand in Brave New World. More answers from the side of the administered society. The encounter therefore exposes the distance between the candidate’s public confidence and the liberty a dissenter wants.
Aldous Huxley, Brave New World, chap. 17.
More turns the Gospel image of mountain-moving faith into a political joke. The promise to move the world ahead follows his own unsettling mountain experience. Biblical words now help him sell the program whose deeper claims he has begun to forget.
Matthew 17:20; 1 Corinthians 13:2.
The speech approaches the language of Psalm 23 and then corrects itself into a more acceptable statement of progress. The interrupted phrase briefly introduces rest under a shepherd into a speech about collective advancement. It also raises the question of who is supplying More’s words.
Psalm 23:2, numbered 22:2 in the Vulgate and Douay-Rheims.
More’s happy new phrase belongs to Saint Paul. In its biblical setting it concerns winning others for the gospel; in the campaign it promises universal political appeal. The narrator’s doubt about who speaks through More turns the apparent improvisation into evidence of manipulation.
1 Corinthians 9:22.
The speech replaces a good calculated for many persons with the good of a merged singularity. Bentham’s familiar formula supplies the point of departure. The crucial change is the disappearance of distinct persons from the account of what their common good should be.
Jeremy Bentham, A Fragment on Government (1776), preface; the utilitarian formula of the greatest happiness of the greatest number.
Rooms exposed to spectators invite comparison with the glass houses of We and the telescreens of Nineteen Eighty-Four. Astrobe also extends access into thought. The Open Mind Act’s subtitle turns an expression of tolerance into a claim to enter another person’s mind.
Yevgeny Zamyatin, We (1924); George Orwell, Nineteen Eighty-Four (1949).
The title answers Chapter 5 and Wells’s The Shape of Things to Come. More now sees the claim to perfected humanity from its reverse side. The Programmed Persons explain what their completion of human history would remove.
H. G. Wells, The Shape of Things to Come (1933); Past Master, chap. 5.
The door appears where there should be none and leaves no opening afterward. Wells’s disappearing door offers a close comparison, particularly under this chapter title. Lafferty changes the destination from an alluring garden to the Nine’s room of coercion and disclosure.
H. G. Wells, “The Door in the Wall” (1906).
More invokes the seating order of a great household when he takes Ouden’s reserved place. His refusal of a lower seat becomes a refusal to acknowledge Nothing as his superior. A social expression gives his resistance a physical and ceremonial form.
The traditional distinction between seating above and below the salt.
The Nine present themselves as mankind seen from behind. Cervantes compares translation with the reverse of a tapestry, where the figures remain visible through knots and threads. The analogy helps describe a recognizable human pattern made rough or deformed, while the Nine insist that their reverse is the true side.
Miguel de Cervantes, Don Quixote, part 2, chap. 62.
The Rechabites in Jeremiah obey an ancestral command to abstain from wine and settled possessions. Northprophet names rechabitism as his trio’s specialty without defining the process. In this conversation its association with abstinence can be set beside the Programmed Persons’ desire to eliminate their appetite for life.
Jeremiah 35.
Pottscamp explicitly describes the bodies as houses entered by devils. His language comes from Christ’s account of an expelled spirit returning to an empty, ordered house with worse companions. The account distinguishes the constructed bodies from the beings that occupy them.
Matthew 12:43–45; Luke 11:24–26.
Butler’s evolving machines and Čapek’s artificial workers provide earlier versions of humanity being superseded by its creations. Lafferty joins that prospect to the language of possession. The question therefore concerns both the material construction of the Programmed Persons and what has come to live in them.
Samuel Butler, Erewhon, “The Book of the Machines”; Karel Čapek, R.U.R. (1920).
The warning about taking the lid off a box invites the comparison with Pandora. Jack-in-the-box language makes the released powers sound like unruly toys. The image grows until the box is Astrobe itself, and the dispute turns to whether hope has survived inside it.
Hesiod, Works and Days 90–105; the later Pandora’s-box tradition.
More’s preference for existence even in Hell can be compared with Milton’s Satan, while his preference for the lunger’s life over kingship recalls Achilles in the underworld. The differences matter: More is resisting annihilation, and his chosen comparison is the life of an actual suffering person.
Milton, Paradise Lost 1.263; Homer, Odyssey 11.489–91.
Swampers asks whether the spirit that came to water and clay could come to the materials of a Programmed Person. Genesis supplies the language of creation and animated earth. The question leaves open a possibility that the Nine’s general account of themselves tries to close.
Genesis 1:2; 2:7.
Northprophet and Pottscamp echo the jailer’s question to Paul and Silas. More dismisses their appeal as mockery. Pottscamp’s later penitence makes it difficult to assume that this moment has only one tone or purpose.
Acts 16:30; Past Master, chap. 13.
Revelation uses the phrase for the final condition of the condemned. More also faces the literal prospect of being beheaded twice. The overlap places his personal ordeal inside the novel’s larger questions about resurrection, extinction, and the death of a world.
Revelation 20:6, 14; 21:8.
More’s soliloquy turns three achievements of his earlier life into traps: he must inhabit his fiction, find its legality, and administer it. His political competence has helped make his captivity possible. The question of what he will refuse now becomes more urgent than what he can manage.
More’s authorship of Utopia and his legal and governmental career; the chapter’s closing soliloquy.
The title invites comparison with Lady Jane Grey, the Nine Days’ Queen, who was deposed and later executed. More also recalls the young Salic ruler as a One Day Emperor. The comparison gives his presidency the shape of a brief elevation already overshadowed by the block.
Lady Jane Grey’s reign in July 1553; the proverb of a nine days’ wonder.
More explicitly thinks of Plato’s ideal ruler. Utopia had already debated whether a philosopher could serve usefully in a prince’s council. Astrobe gives More the supreme office, but the bills and their hidden provisions reveal how little final authority that office guarantees.
Plato, Republic 5.473c–d; Thomas More, Utopia, book 1.
The year 535 A.S. corresponds to 2535 by the old count. The omitted Free Years complicate the colony’s elapsed time. The dates place More roughly a thousand years beyond his earthly death while exposing another way the official account orders and compresses history.
The chapter’s account of anno scientiae and the Free Year.
The words spoken through More recall Anaximander’s account of the sun as an opening through which fire is seen. In Astrobe’s argument the opening becomes an emblem of emptiness. The comparison is useful, but no philosopher is named in the scene.
Ancient accounts of Anaximander’s cosmology, including Hippolytus, Refutation of All Heresies 1.6.
More’s name for the measure recalls the modern slogan Ban the Bomb. The resemblance gives the abolition of transcendence the familiar language of a public campaign. The provision would prohibit considering things beyond the Dream, including the possibility that the Dream is incomplete.
The Campaign for Nuclear Disarmament slogan; the chapter’s description of the bill.
The legal heading reduces surviving religious communities to leftovers. Isaiah and Romans give remnant a different significance: a people preserved through apparent defeat. The small numbers therefore do not settle the value or future of the communities the bill would abolish.
Isaiah 10:20–22; Romans 11:5.
Kingmaker tells of creatures who leave perfection in search of something beyond and fall into the void. The account reverses the value of escape: faith in a beyond becomes the original error. More’s suspicion that the labels have been switched opens the possibility that Golden Astrobe is itself the emptiness.
Compare Genesis 3 and Revelation 12:7–9; Kingmaker’s allegory in this chapter.
More writes the Latin formula across the bill. His prohibition defends the freedom to consider what the measure would prohibit. The constitutional penalty follows three refusals of the proposal in its successive forms, so his third veto makes the act of reading and rejecting legislation a decision about his life.
Latin veto, I forbid; the chapter’s law concerning repeated vetoes.
The novel explicitly compares this refusal with the act that led to More’s first death. Historically he refused the oath in 1534 and was later convicted of treason. Lafferty changes the issue and the character’s stated certainty, while retaining the demand for assent and the fatal cost of withholding it.
Roper, The Life of Sir Thomas More, accounts of the oath and trial.
More asks who pushed him into the corner before. Roper records his judgment that Henry’s friendship would not save his head if the king could gain by taking it. Foreman’s friendship and manipulation repeat that disturbing proximity between affection and political use.
Roper, The Life of Sir Thomas More, More’s conversation with Roper after Henry’s visit to Chelsea.
The opening recalls the Gospel saying that eagles gather where the body is. Its setting in discourse about the last things fits a night described as the world’s last. The companions gather around a man whose death is expected, while their name also carries the force of a chosen company.
Matthew 24:28; Luke 17:37; compare Job 39:30.
The account of Evita’s long battle draws directly on Paul’s description of spiritual warfare. Her apparent youth and accumulated experience give that struggle an unusual embodiment. Her enemies exercise political control as well as the spiritual hostility named by the phrase.
Ephesians 6:12.
Adam retells the voyage of Saint Brendan as an early visit to Astrobe. His nineteen monks and ninety-nine days differ from the medieval Navigatio, with its smaller chosen company and seven-year voyage. Moving the Land of Promise into space gives Astrobe a sacred past earlier than its official settlement.
Navigatio Sancti Brendani; Past Master’s name for the saint is Brandon.
The companions hold the wake while More is alive. Stories, drink, and argument become forms of attendance on a death they hope to prevent. Their conversation defeats the machines’ attempt to reduce it to useful instructions or a discoverable plan.
The wake tradition; the chapter’s account of the machines listening to the stories.
Masks, mock factions, irreverence, and mingled joy and violence recall the Feast of Fools and carnival traditions. Cosmopolis begins behaving unpredictably on the night before its ceremonial execution. Its recovery of feeling is dangerous as well as hopeful.
The medieval Feast of Fools; Carnival, Halloween, and St. John’s Eve customs.
The confections invite comparison with the sugar skulls of the Mexican Day of the Dead. Here they honor an execution that has not yet happened. Death becomes something sold, eaten, mocked, and anticipated throughout the city.
The calavera tradition of the Day of the Dead.
The carnival faction turns an act of penance into a public costume and joke. Chapter 13 gives the gesture a different weight when Pottscamp pours ashes over his head. The repetition asks whether an apparently empty imitation can become an actual act of remorse.
Matthew 11:21; Job 2:12; 42:6.
The new Metropolitan invokes the Church’s power to place a territory under religious censure pending repentance. Applying it to a planet gives an old ecclesiastical action an enormous scale. His appearance also answers the earlier assumption that the dying Metropolitan would have no successor.
The historical practice of a general interdict, notably the interdict on England, 1208–14.
The narrator’s phrase for remorse recalls Lear’s pain at an ungrateful child. Cosmopolis has raised More to power and is preparing to kill him. The borrowed image makes its new emotion resemble a child’s recognition of injury done to a parent.
Shakespeare, King Lear, 1.4.
The old bells recover names and a shared purpose as they toll for More. The July Bell can suggest his execution on 6 July 1535, although the novel does not explain the name. Sound carries a religious memory that the museumized churches seemed to have lost.
The Christian passing-bell and funeral-toll traditions; More’s death in July 1535.
The chapter title joins the ideas of removal and head in a Greek-looking word that also sounds near apocalypse. Panlykonium substitutes wolves for the demons of pandemonium. The coinages bring beheading, revelation, and the crowd’s wolfish behavior into the same ending.
Greek apo, away, kephale, head, and lykos, wolf; Milton’s coinage Pandemonium.
Foreman’s victim reverses the scriptural lamb without blemish. More’s weaknesses and compromises are part of the point: the man required for the sacrifice is visibly imperfect. Foreman’s explanation of what that blood will accomplish remains an account given by the person arranging the death.
Exodus 12:5; 1 Peter 1:19.
The mustard seed of Chapter 1 returns beside the language of leaven and preserving salt. The images allow a small act or remnant to change a much greater body. Foreman uses them to explain historical renewal; the final pages test whether his planned result exhausts what has happened.
Matthew 5:13; 13:31–33; 1 Corinthians 5:6.
The rapid succession from republic to empire and through later ages is Foreman’s theory of historical death and rebirth. His first emperor is Augustus, who represented his rule as a restoration of the republic. The novel’s five-hundred-year rhythm should be read as that theory rather than as conventional historical periodization.
Augustus, Res Gestae 34; Foreman’s account in this chapter.
More distinguishes the judgment of a person after death from the final judgment of the world. Foreman rejects both and insists on explaining himself immediately. Their disagreement exposes the limit of his history: he invokes transcendence as a requirement while denying the judgment More expects beyond death.
The Christian distinction between particular judgment and Last Judgment.
More’s name for the smooth-talking Foreman recalls Barnabas, whose name Acts interprets as son of consolation. The consolation is bitterly comic because its bearer is arranging the victim’s death. The insult resists the gentleness with which the necessity is being explained.
Acts 4:36.
More explains his last meal through the belief that eating an enemy can confer the enemy’s capacities. Frazer offers a familiar account of that belief. The meal’s artificial substance and More’s doubt about acquiring wit turn the ritual into a final joke at the Programmed Persons’ expense.
J. G. Frazer, The Golden Bough, “Homoeopathic Magic of a Flesh Diet.”
Foreman advances the expected noon execution to eight. Roper records that Sir Thomas Pope brought More word that he must die before nine on the morning of his earthly execution. The historical early-morning notice becomes a means of frustrating the rescue in Lafferty’s story.
Pottscamp’s last offer recalls the repeated opportunity for the historical More to save himself by yielding. Here he argues that the successor will sign immediately anyway. More’s refusal answers the attempt to judge his act solely by whether it can stop the administration’s next step.
Roper, The Life of Sir Thomas More, accounts of the examinations and trial.
More’s discovery that he has come back late to the only thing that matters can be read beside Augustine’s late love. The comparison concerns the shape of a belated conversion. More speaks of a return to something long known, even while saying how little he understands it.
Augustine, Confessions 10.27.
The first rescuers form the small wave that precedes a larger movement. Forerunner also recalls John the Baptist, himself beheaded. The resemblance puts the failed rush into a pattern of preparation, while the narrative keeps its individual deaths painful and concrete.
Matthew 14:1–12; the Christian title of John the Baptist as Forerunner.
The narrator translates Evita’s warning and thereby identifies Foreman with Judas. Her subsequent woe recalls Christ’s judgment on the person through whom betrayal or scandal comes. The need for an event to occur does not excuse the person who brings it about.
Matthew 26:24; Luke 17:1.
Evita explains Foreman’s killing as the provision of an animal companion for a dead hero. Achilles’ sacrifice of dogs at Patroclus’s funeral is a classical comparison. Calling the planner a dog overturns the authority with which he has just interpreted More’s death.
Homer, Iliad 23.173–74.
Foreman is torn apart and a surviving piece is hung from a tree. The sequence brings together the dismembering imagery of Acts and the hanging in Matthew. The later question about the Judas tree’s fruit returns to the possible consequences of a betrayal whose guilt the scene has made explicit.
Matthew 27:5; Acts 1:18.
The novel calls its tree a carob and also a Judas Tree. Botanically, the tree usually bearing the latter name is Cercis siliquastrum, distinct from the carob, Ceratonia siliqua. The literary association with betrayal is clear even where the plant names overlap or are confused.
The Judas-tree legend; the botanical distinction between Cercis siliquastrum and Ceratonia siliqua.
The stranger is unnamed. A Christ interpretation is possible, and the invitation also recalls More’s earlier recruitment by a traveler. Rumors that an essence departed and a shadow died invite comparison with substitution accounts of the Crucifixion, but the narrator reports and unsettles the rumors rather than confirming them.
Irenaeus, Against Heresies 1.24.4, on Basilides; Past Master, chap. 2.
More begins the Latin prayer by which Christ commends his spirit to the Father. The words also belong to the psalm and to Compline. His death interrupts the prayer; the scene replaces the polished last sayings of quotation books with a remembered fragment.
Luke 23:46; Psalm 31:5, numbered 30:6 in the Vulgate and Douay-Rheims; the Compline responsory In manus tuas.
Lafferty explicitly refuses the familiar collection of More’s last jokes. The tale of a woman carrying away his head recalls Margaret Roper’s recovery of her father’s head, while its basket also suggests the Baptist’s story. The novel presents its own beautiful tale and immediately questions it.
Roper, The Life of Sir Thomas More; Edward Hall, Chronicle; Stapleton, Tres Thomae; Matthew 14:11.
The extinction of the stars invites comparison with Clarke’s famous ending. Lafferty follows that extinction with questions about duration, rebirth, and hope. The apparent end therefore opens a further problem that the narration does not settle by simply showing a new world.
Arthur C. Clarke, “The Nine Billion Names of God” (1953).
When nothing moves, the difference between a second and an immense duration cannot be measured. Aristotle’s account of time through motion provides a useful philosophical comparison. George’s earlier story and the ending both place their interval between worlds outside ordinary measures.
Aristotle, Physics 4.11; compare Augustine, Confessions 11.
The banner, Gandy’s question, and the last recollection of spirit descending on matter gather the left-handed motif into a possibility of grace for the Programmed. The ashes on a machine’s head matter because an act of penitence has occurred where feeling was said to be absent.
Genesis 1:2; 2:7; Job 2:12; 42:6; Past Master, chap. 10.
The three refrains move from watchfulness to expectation and hope. Paul’s account of hoping for what is not yet seen and the Gospel command to watch provide biblical comparisons. The final words preserve expectation without supplying a completed account of the world’s renewal.
Romans 8:24–25; Matthew 26:41.
Glossary
Comprehensive Reference