Ink portrait of Thomas More against a weathered plaster wall

Past Master

1968
1.

AT THE TWENTY-FIFTH HOUR

Private Building, Astrobe
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Cosmos Kingmaker, Peter Proctor, and Fabian Foreman choose a candidate for World President while mechanical Killers demolish Foreman's building around them. Kingmaker calls Astrobe mankind's third chance; Foreman argues that previous worlds died without wholly failing. The Killers hunt Foreman because he wants Astrobe to die and be reborn. After rejecting living candidates and considering men from Earth's past, the three agree to send for Thomas More. Kingmaker and Proctor leave. Foreman remains as the building collapses, having said that he knows a way out.

“He had one completely honest moment right at the end. I can't think of anyone else who ever had one.”

Characters
Cosmos KingmakerPeter ProctorFabian ForemanCaptain John Chezem IIIThe Colonel
Themes
The Three MastersDeath and RenewalPolitical SymbolsThe Mustard Seed
Outline
I. The Masters under siege +
  • Kingmaker is the Heraldic Lion, Proctor the Sleek Fox, and Foreman the Worried Hawk.
  • Each believes that he controls the other two; each is partly right.
  • The Killers demand Foreman's life. Captain Chezem takes command after the colonel dies.
II. Death and failure +
  • Kingmaker names the Old World, America, and Astrobe as mankind's three chances.
  • Foreman disputes the count and distinguishes a world's death from its failure.
  • Foreman wants a death and resurrection of Astrobe; the Killers sense his intention.
III. Choosing More +
  • Proctor wants a manageable public symbol; Kingmaker wants a good man; Foreman wants a great man.
  • Living candidates, a manufactured candidate, and historical candidates are considered.
  • Kingmaker proposes using Chronometanastasis. Foreman's list contains only Thomas More.
IV. The building falls +
  • The three approve More's selection.
  • Kingmaker and Proctor escape through the shattered wall.
  • Foreman stands inside as the building collapses; the final sentence recalls his escape route.
› Notes and sources (12)
1. The twenty-fifth hour

Kingmaker imagines a crisis continuing beyond the last possible hour. The title also invites comparison with C. Virgil Gheorghiu’s novel about a person trapped in the classifications and machinery of modern society. The resemblance is especially apt while Astrobe’s mechanical Killers batter down the building.

C. Virgil Gheorghiu, The Twenty-Fifth Hour (1949; English translation, 1950).

2. The lion, the fox, and the hawk

Kingmaker’s lion and Proctor’s fox recall Machiavelli’s advice that a prince needs both strength and cunning. Foreman’s hawk adds a third figure to the pair. Their competing claims to control one another make government a contest among these different kinds of power.

Niccolò Machiavelli, The Prince, chap. 18.

3. Kingmaker and Fabian

Kingmaker’s name recalls Warwick, the magnate who made and unmade English kings. Fabian can suggest Fabius Cunctator, the Roman commander famous for delay, and the society named after him. Foreman’s waiting and carefully timed intervention suit that association, although the novel does not explain his name.

Shakespeare, 3 Henry VI, 3.3; the historical epithets Warwick the Kingmaker and Fabius Cunctator.

4. The crack of doom

The phrase belongs to Macbeth’s vision of a seemingly endless succession of kings. Here the Masters argue over postponing judgment while the Killers provide the thunder outside. A familiar expression becomes a physical event in the scene.

Shakespeare, Macbeth, 4.1.

5. The doom clock

Foreman’s mechanical man belongs to the clock that threatens Astrobe. The image recalls the Doomsday Clock of Cold War public life. A manufactured president cannot save the world if he is another part of the machinery bringing about its end.

The Bulletin of the Atomic Scientists’ Doomsday Clock, introduced in 1947.

6. Deaths and failures

Foreman distinguishes the death of a historical world from its failure. His account develops into the five-hundred-year sequence in Chapter 13. Toynbee offers a useful comparison for the language of civilizational breakdown, especially the later phrase Time of Troubles; Foreman’s particular chronology is his own.

Arnold J. Toynbee, A Study of History; Past Master, chap. 13.

7. Byerly and the manufactured candidate

Byerly’s name appears amid doubts about whether a candidate is human and a proposal to manufacture the ideal president. This makes Asimov’s Stephen Byerley, the politician suspected of being a robot, a plausible allusion. The spelling differs, and Lafferty leaves the connection unstated.

Isaac Asimov, “Evidence” (1946) and “The Evitable Conflict” (1950).

8. Chronometanastasis

The name combines Greek words for time and migration. It makes travel into the past sound like a change of dwelling. The embedded resemblance to anastasis, resurrection, also suits the project of bringing a long-dead man back into public life.

Greek chronos, time; metanastasis, migration; anastasis, rising or resurrection.

9. Why Plato is rejected

Foreman objects to Plato’s claim that justice makes a man happy. He wants someone who can be unhappy over an unjust situation. The discussion tests the difference between designing an ideal commonwealth and suffering with the people who inhabit an actual one.

Plato, Republic 1.354a; Thomas More, Utopia, book 1.

10. A great man from the past

The candidates include rulers, counselors, a jurist, and an architect. Foreman reduces his own list to More and to one decisive act of honesty. This resembles the great-man theory of history, but the choice also makes the supposedly exemplary man dependent on those who recruit him.

Thomas Carlyle, On Heroes, Hero-Worship, and the Heroic in History (1841).

11. The honest moment and the lost head

The exchange anticipates More’s execution on Tower Hill in 1535 and his second execution on Astrobe. Roper records More speaking plainly against the statute after his conviction. That episode helps illuminate Foreman’s interest in a final honest act; Lafferty’s More is a fictional reworking of the historical martyr.

William Roper, The Life of Sir Thomas More, account of the trial and execution.

12. The mustard seed

Foreman needs only a very small beginning. The Gospel seed that grows into a great plant gives his political experiment a religious scale. Chapter 13 returns to the image when he explains what he expects More’s death to accomplish.

Matthew 13:31–32; Mark 4:30–32; Luke 13:18–19.

2.

MY GRAVE, AND I IN IT

Cathead → Spaceport → Hopp-Equation Space → Earth (London/Chelsea) → Return
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Paul, a hunted pilot deprived of his surname and citizenship, agrees to bring Thomas More to Astrobe. With help from Rimrock and other allies, he escapes the spaceport and travels to Earth through Hopp-Equation Space. His ninety-second sleeps contain elaborate passage dreams. In London, Brooks provides the time machine; Paul travels into the past and walks to More's home in Chelsea. More has already heard of Astrobe's future from other time travelers. He agrees to go when he recognizes himself as the mysterious Past Master. Back in the future, he visits his own grave before departing for Astrobe with Paul.

“We built it too small, Paul, we built it too small.”

Characters
PaulFabian ForemanThomas MoreBrooksRimrockBatterseaShantyWalter CopperheadSliderAdam
Themes
Time TravelIdentityPassage DreamsUtopia
Outline
I. Paul's mission +
  • Paul has survived a year of pursuit by the Killers.
  • Rimrock brings him into contact with Foreman.
  • Paul steals Foreman's grasshopper; a clash between spaceport guards and pursuing Killers helps him reach the spacecraft.
  • Rimrock, Copperhead, Battersea, Shanty, and Slider take part in the confusion.
II. Passage dreams +
  • The flight takes about seven hundred standard hours.
  • Hopp travel reverses polarity, including handedness and sexual characteristics.
  • Paul estimates twenty thousand dreams, each contained within no more than ninety seconds of sleep.
  • Dreams include Adam, his sister, Ouden, Sour John's kidney, and the destruction of Rhium and Antirhium.
III. More in Chelsea +
  • Paul uses Brooks's machine in London, then walks to Chelsea.
  • More already knows of time travelers and of Astrobe.
  • More describes Utopia as a bitter satire misunderstood as an ideal.
  • The name Past Master persuades him that he may be the man who saves Astrobe.
IV. The grave and the return +
  • More and Paul go to confession before leaving the sixteenth century.
  • In future London, More visits the grave that still contains his bones.
  • He discovers modern books and tobacco, then leaves for Astrobe.
  • His passage dreams anticipate the Masters and other figures he will meet.
› Notes and sources (17)
1. Paul the traveler

More explicitly connects the pilot with his name-saint, the apostle whose journeys fill Acts. The comparison gives Paul’s mission a spiritual possibility that its organizers do not explain to him. His confession before his own birth adds a comic reversal to that connection.

Acts 13–28.

2. The guards and the hounds

Paul’s escape depends on bringing the mechanical guards and Killers together like bears and hounds in a baiting. The image anticipates the journey to More’s England, where bear-baiting was a familiar public spectacle. Paul and his allies arrange the encounter and exploit the confusion.

The English bear-baiting tradition.

3. Reversal in Hopp-Equation space

Paul’s change of handedness recalls the mirror-reversed traveler in Wells’s “The Plattner Story.” Lafferty extends the joke to sex and voice. This bodily reversal also begins the novel’s larger pattern of left-handed actions and unexpected means of rescue.

H. G. Wells, “The Plattner Story” (1896).

4. Dreams and the human unconscious

The statement that ansels existed in the human unconscious before people discovered them on Astrobe invites comparison with Jung’s archetypes. The novel lets an image encountered in dreams become a creature met in waking life. It does not require that every passage dream be decoded into a single fixed meaning.

C. G. Jung, writings on the collective unconscious and archetypes.

5. Adam

The first man’s name belongs to a boy who repeatedly appears in scenes of battle and death. His insistence that each death belongs to another bearer of the name complicates any simple account of resurrection. The biblical association brings the deaths of individual men into the story of mankind.

Genesis 2–3; 1 Corinthians 15:22, 45.

6. Sour John and the stolen emerald

Sour John is also a storyteller in Lafferty’s “The Ugly Sea.” His theft of an idol’s green eye recalls J. Milton Hayes’s music-hall monologue, but the replacement kidney turns the adventure into a joke about mistaken value. Paul’s objection to the port’s geography is overruled by the teller.

R. A. Lafferty, “The Ugly Sea” (1960); J. Milton Hayes, “The Green Eye of the Little Yellow God” (1911).

7. Rhium and Antirhium

The paired stars borrow the names of the opposing headlands at the entrance to the Gulf of Corinth. Their linked rotation resembles a centrifugal governor regulating a machine. When the chain breaks, the dream makes a cosmic catastrophe out of a mechanical failure.

Thucydides, History of the Peloponnesian War 2.86; Strabo, Geography 8.2.3.

8. More’s Utopia

More calls his book a bitter joke that later readers have mistaken for a blueprint. This is the fictional More’s account of his intention. It establishes the central predicament: the author must live in, and eventually govern, a world that has taken his imagined commonwealth seriously.

Thomas More, Utopia (1516).

9. The sickest possible world

More’s description of Utopia reverses the familiar formula of the best of all possible worlds. The later history of that formula, especially Voltaire’s Pangloss, makes the line another deliberate-looking anachronism in the speech of a man who already knows several futures.

Gottfried Wilhelm Leibniz, Theodicy (1710); Voltaire, Candide (1759).

10. The meeting at Chelsea

Paul finds More free in his garden before the decision that will lead to his death. Historically, More refused the oath in April 1534 and was imprisoned until his execution in July 1535. The novel combines that situation with a journey about a thousand years back from 2535; its calendar does not resolve into an exact historical date.

Roper, The Life of Sir Thomas More; More’s imprisonment, 1534–35.

11. Holbein’s portrait

Paul recognizes More partly from Holbein’s portrait. The contrast between the short, familiar-looking man and the tall Astrobian pilot makes the historical figure physically unheroic before the narrative tests what kind of hero he can become.

Hans Holbein the Younger, Sir Thomas More (1527), Frick Collection.

12. Past Master

The title joins a master from the past with the ordinary meaning of an expert. It also recalls an office formerly held in a guild or lodge. The later language of masters, a station, and an inner circle extends those institutional associations.

The guild and Masonic office of past master; Past Master, chap. 4.

13. Mercy and the old things

More’s Latin plea for mercy belongs to the language of prayer. The publican’s farewell and lament for the old things likewise draw on scriptural idiom. In this scene the promise of things made new is heard by someone who fears what the religious changes will destroy.

Miserere mihi, Domine, Roman Missal, Introit for the Sixteenth Sunday after Pentecost; 2 Corinthians 5:17; Colossians 2:6; Revelation 21:4–5.

14. Looking into his own grave

The chapter title comes from More’s visit to the grave that already contains his bones. The historical More prepared a tomb and epitaph at Chelsea, but his body was buried at St. Peter ad Vincula in the Tower. Lafferty’s scene makes the traveler confront the fact of his first death before he goes to meet a second.

More’s Chelsea epitaph (1532); Roper, The Life of Sir Thomas More.

15. The head and the signet ring

The burial tradition separates More’s body in the Tower from his head at Canterbury. The future priest’s discovery of identifiable bones and a signet ring belongs to Lafferty’s fiction. Its purpose is to make More’s presence and his completed death equally tangible.

Thomas Stapleton, Tres Thomae (1588), account of Margaret Roper and More’s head.

16. Enskied and sainted

The rare verb enskied recalls Lucio’s description of Isabella in Measure for Measure. Paul has just reminded More of his canonization; the flight then sends the sainted man literally into the sky. More’s enthusiasm for a newly discovered cigar keeps the ascent comic.

Shakespeare, Measure for Measure, 1.4.

17. The woman in More’s dream

Succubus, Eve, Lilith, Judith, Mary, and Valkyrie bring demonic, maternal, holy, and martial figures into one image. Judith’s beheading of Holofernes is especially pointed in a novel about More’s head. The composite anticipates Evita without reducing her to one of its names.

Genesis 2–3; Judith 13; the traditions of Lilith and the Valkyries.

3.

AT THE NAKED SAILOR

Astrobe Orbit → Landing → Cathead → The Naked Sailor Inn
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A false ansel impersonates Rimrock and draws Paul and Thomas into an ambush after their arrival on Astrobe. The real Rimrock warns them too late, but Cathead allies rescue them. At the Naked Sailor, Thomas sees severe poverty and learns that the inhabitants chose to leave the Golden Cities. He asks what makes a being human, recognizing intellect and spirit in Rimrock. Ouden confronts Paul, Thomas, and the ansel in an encounter described as a leftover passage dream. Battersea and the others then escort Thomas's party to Cosmopolis.

“I have one juice left that you do not know.”

Characters
PaulThomas MoreRimrockBatterseaShantyWalter CopperheadOudenEvita
Themes
Golden vs. RottingTelepathy/EutheopathyNothingness (Ouden)Refuge in Hell
Outline
I. The false warning +
  • An ansel voice directs Paul towards the edging trees.
  • Rimrock announces that another being spoke in his place.
  • Paul and Thomas fight the attackers; Cathead men carry them to safety.
II. The Naked Sailor +
  • Paul wakes injured; Thomas's broken jaw has been wired.
  • Thomas encounters the misery of Cathead and the Barrio.
  • Paul says that the inhabitants can return to comfortable lives but refuse to do so.
  • The Killers murder a demented man; hungry people seize his goats.
III. Rimrock and Ouden +
  • Thomas recognizes Rimrock as human in the sense of possessing body, spirit, and intellect.
  • Rimrock has dealt with the false ansel.
  • Ouden threatens to extinguish life and imagination.
  • The narrator calls the speaking human presence Paul-Thomas, leaving the individual speaker uncertain.
IV. The escort +
  • Battersea, Shanty, Copperhead, and others form an armed convoy.
  • The party leaves the slums, skirts Wu Town, and enters Cosmopolis.
  • The three Masters and Pottscamp await Thomas.
› Notes and sources (7)
1. The Naked Sailor and the seven hells

More places the inn in a numbered division of Hell and consoles Paul that three worse divisions remain. The Qur’an supplies seven gates, while later commentaries arrange the inhabitants differently. The joke’s exact assignment of Christians to a fourth division should be read as More’s statement within the scene.

Qur’an 15:44; George Sale, Preliminary Discourse to The Koran (1734).

2. Poverty and Utopia

More’s outrage at starvation and punishing labor recalls Hythloday’s indictment of England in Utopia. Cathead confronts him with a further difficulty: its inhabitants have chosen to leave material abundance. His familiar political explanations cannot yet account for that choice.

Thomas More, Utopia, book 1.

3. Holy poverty

More accepts voluntary religious poverty but recoils from deprivation that degrades its sufferers. The distinction matters throughout the Cathead chapters. His admiration for a modest life does not make him an advocate of the conditions he sees here.

The Franciscan tradition of holy poverty; More’s account of common life in Utopia.

4. The oceanic man

Rimrock’s seal-like body and ability to move on land recall the seal-people of northern folklore. His shifting between no legs, four, and two can also suggest the Sphinx’s riddle about man. More’s decisive test, however, is intellect and spirit rather than an animal’s outward shape.

The selkie tradition; Apollodorus, Library 3.5.8.

5. Ouden and the Greek joke-names

Ouden means nothing. The name extends the learned naming games of Utopia, whose island, city, and river carry teasing Greek meanings. Here the word becomes a speaker who describes his nothingness as active, hungry, and destructive.

Greek ouden, nothing; More, Utopia.

6. Nothingness and evil

More’s denial that Ouden has being can be read alongside Augustine and Aquinas on evil as a privation of good. Ouden answers that his nothingness is a vortex. The exchange tests what that destructive claim means; it does not by itself settle the novel’s metaphysics in Ouden’s favor.

Augustine, Confessions 7.12; Aquinas, Summa theologiae I, q. 48.

7. The one kindling

Ouden remembers a single kindling that overcame him and claims that he is extinguishing it. John’s light shining in darkness supplies a strong biblical comparison. Paul-Thomas answers with the possibility of rekindling and with a resource that Ouden does not know.

John 1:4–5.

4.

ON HAPPY ASTROBE

Cosmopolis, Astrobe
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Rimrock and Copperhead arrange a triumphal reception that Thomas has imagined without consciously ordering. The Exultation Trumpets sound, the assembled leaders rise, and Thomas accepts the burden before it has formally been offered. He then speaks with Kingmaker, Proctor, Foreman, and Pottscamp. Recalled dreams show Kingmaker as a spider, Proctor as a fox above the void, and Foreman as a hawk counting shells. Pottscamp promises a later meeting with the real Circle of Masters. Thomas is dazzled by Astrobe's achievements but resists being treated merely as a public figurehead.

“I accept the great burden that has been given me to bear.”

Characters
Thomas MoreCosmos KingmakerPeter ProctorFabian ForemanPottscampPaulEvitaRimrockWalter Copperhead
Themes
Whited SepulcherThe Astrobe DreamPolitical TheaterPast Master Prophecy
Outline
I. The triumph +
  • Evita calls the golden city a whited sepulcher.
  • Rimrock and Copperhead transmit Thomas's unspoken intentions.
  • Battles secure the twelve trumpet towers; the Exultation Trumpets sound.
  • The leaders stand and acclaim Thomas at Convocation Hall.
II. Kingmaker +
  • Thomas blocks a verbal mind-probe by thinking in Latin.
  • Kingmaker describes Hopp and Horwitz travel and the six Proven Reserve Worlds.
  • Thomas insists that an elected president must govern.
  • The spider dream shows Kingmaker defending a world of webs.
III. Proctor and Foreman +
  • Proctor praises easy termination and threatens to break Thomas if he becomes more than a toy.
  • The fox dream places Proctor at home in the void.
  • Foreman says that Thomas's death will be needed.
  • The hawk's thirty shells suggest betrayal.
IV. Pottscamp +
  • The dream of a boy and his toy ends with the toy eating its maker.
  • Thomas cannot tell which figure represents Pottscamp.
  • Pottscamp promises to introduce eight other entities and reveal the back of Astrobe's tapestry.
› Notes and sources (12)
1. Every man a king

The golden inhabitants appear to fulfill the promise associated with Huey Long’s slogan. Their magnificence makes More eager to join them. Later encounters ask whether this universal royalty has left its beneficiaries capable of thought, refusal, or spiritual life.

Huey P. Long, Every Man a King (1933) and the Share Our Wealth slogan.

2. A catalogue of paradises

More praises Astrobe through a mixture of Gospel language, classical myth, and Irish otherworld geography. The pearl of great price stands beside Iris, Great Brasil, and the Hesperides. This abundance of names reveals how much hope he brings to what he is seeing.

Matthew 13:45–46; the myths of Iris and the Hesperides; the Irish Hy-Brasil tradition.

3. The whited sepulcher

Evita’s answer comes from Christ’s denunciation of tombs beautiful outside and full of death within. She supplies the diagnosis while More is still admiring the surface. The contrast governs both this chapter and the later discovery of Astrobe’s deformed reverse.

Matthew 23:27.

4. Fawney men and false gold

A fawney man practices a ring swindle, passing a worthless ring off as valuable. More’s compliment to Rimrock therefore associates enchantment with deceptive gold. It belongs beside the repeated question of what Golden Astrobe’s apparent wealth is worth.

The thieves’ cant terms fawney and fawney rig.

5. The Greek and Jewish mechanical man

More explicitly recalls older dreams of artificial servants. Greek examples include Hephaestus’s golden attendants and the bronze Talos; the Jewish tradition supplies the golem. Pottscamp’s dream of the toy that consumes its maker gives that admiration a frightening sequel.

Homer, Iliad 18.417–20; Apollonius Rhodius, Argonautica 4; the golem tradition.

6. The president as a masked performer

The former presidents’ extravagant names sound to More like gladiators or American wrestlers. His sponsors likewise plan to present a recognizable persona to the public. The joke makes political office resemble a staged performance whose billing matters more than its holder’s freedom to act.

The novel’s explicit comparison with gladiators and masked professional wrestlers.

7. Washing one’s hands

Proctor’s description of Kingmaker and Foreman’s refusal to wash his hands recall Pilate. The gesture concerns responsibility for a death already being planned. Foreman’s willingness to own his part does not remove the moral question of what he is doing to his friend.

Matthew 27:24.

8. Termination and the satisfied guest

Proctor compares the man ready to die with a guest who has eaten enough. Lucretius and Horace use the satisfied guest as an image of leaving life without complaint. Astrobe turns that consolation into an argument for readily available termination.

Lucretius, On the Nature of Things 3.938; Horace, Satires 1.1.117–19.

9. Termination and More’s own book

Utopia allows priests and magistrates to urge a voluntary death upon someone suffering from incurable, painful illness. Astrobe makes termination a common response to weariness. The altered conditions are essential to the comparison: Lafferty’s institution is much broader than the practice described by More.

Thomas More, Utopia, book 2, “Of Their Slaves, and of Their Marriages.”

10. False dawn

Foreman spoils the consoling proverb about darkness before dawn by inserting a false dawn. He later claims responsibility for making a particular sun rise, borrowing language ordinarily applied to God. His confidence invites scrutiny as the cost of his promised renewal becomes clear.

Matthew 5:45; the proverb about darkness before dawn.

11. The thirty shells

Foreman’s counting and weeping make the shells a strong counterpart to Judas’s thirty pieces of silver. The scene anticipates the betrayal named openly in Chapter 13. The warning about Mother Carey’s chicken adds the storm petrel’s maritime associations to the threatened victim.

Matthew 26:15; 27:3–5; the sailors’ name Mother Carey’s chicken.

12. Camiroi and Puca

The school assignments in Pottscamp’s dream contain names from Lafferty’s other fiction. Treating those peoples and languages as ordinary school subjects gives the invented worlds a shared background while the toy’s effortless learning exposes the child’s dependence on it.

Lafferty, “Primary Education of the Camiroi” (1966), “Polity and Custom of the Camiroi” (1967), and The Reefs of Earth (1968).

5.

THE SHAPE OF THINGS TO COME

Cosmopolis → the edge of the Feral Lands
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A precis machine explains the Astrobe Dream: individual people must merge into one city and finally into Holy Nothingness. Thomas recognizes his own satire in this program, yet increasingly admires Astrobe. He and Paul watch a grotesque mechanical replica of the Mass. The chapter then introduces the conflicting views of Thomas's companions and Rimrock's account of the ansels’ ascent from the ocean. Though he has become an advocate of Golden Astrobe, Thomas feels drawn to the mountains and decides to walk through the Feral Lands.

“Well, I have sampled Golden Astrobe and it is wonderful. But I am still hungry.”

Characters
Thomas MorePaulEvitaRimrockWalter CopperheadScrivenerSliderMaxwell
Themes
The Astrobe DreamThe Replica MassThe AnselsThe Mountain
Outline
I. The precis machine +
  • The machine makes the city superior to its individual inhabitants.
  • It describes perfection as the loss of private identity and consciousness.
  • Thomas recognizes the program as his own bitter joke in Utopia.
II. The replica Mass +
  • Paul takes Thomas to a preserved church in Cosmopolis.
  • A coin starts a mechanical religious performance.
  • Paul distinguishes this burlesque from living worship in Cathead and the Feral Lands.
  • Thomas dismisses the Church; Paul defends the faith he found in Cathead.
III. The companions +
  • Rimrock describes his people's ascent through the ocean's surface, their sky.
  • Evita chooses to accompany Thomas and proposes seducing a saint.
  • Slider doubts whether the Christian promise extends to Astrobe; Scrivener endorses the Astrobe Dream.
  • Maxwell describes his loose attachment to bodies; Copperhead predicts that Thomas will save the world but not himself.
IV. Towards the mountain +
  • Thomas's fascination with the mountain disturbs the group.
  • The Feral Lands have no transportation booths.
  • Copperhead estimates seven or nine days for the circuit to Cathead.
  • Thomas insists on going despite the threat of the Killers.
› Notes and sources (14)
1. The Shape of Things to Come

The title names Wells’s future history, in which a world administration reorganizes civilization and suppresses religion. Astrobe’s managed happiness and its treatment of worship as an antiquity give the allusion particular force. Chapter 10 answers this title with The Deformity of Things to Come.

H. G. Wells, The Shape of Things to Come (1933), especially book 4.

2. The same everywhere

Kingmaker’s praise of Astrobe’s uniformity recalls Utopia’s closely similar towns. More’s wish to travel puts the author in opposition to the commonwealth associated with his name. He insists on seeing what an account of the whole planet leaves out.

Thomas More, Utopia, book 2, “Of Their Towns, Particularly of Amaurot.”

3. The Dream as a version of Utopia

The precis machine describes common access to goods, freedom from poverty, and a simplified legal order. These recall institutions in Utopia, although the golden world gives them a different purpose. More’s recognition is also a crisis of authorship: his joke has become a place people must inhabit.

Thomas More, Utopia, book 2.

4. The Big O and the Omega Point

Astrobe’s account of humanity converging into a single organism invites comparison with Teilhard de Chardin’s Omega Point. The novel’s Omega becomes Ouden and the Big O, a destination described as nothingness. This is a satirical resemblance; Teilhard’s own account gives convergence a transcendent and Christian end.

Pierre Teilhard de Chardin, The Phenomenon of Man (1955; English translation, 1959).

5. Holy Nothingness

The Dream’s religious vocabulary makes the abolition of transcendence sound like an act of worship. It can be read against the death-of-God debates contemporary with the novel. The phrase also occurs in Richard Rubenstein’s theology, but the shared wording alone does not establish a direct source.

Richard L. Rubenstein, After Auschwitz (1966); Thomas J. J. Altizer, The Gospel of Christian Atheism (1966).

6. Travel beyond the booths

Utopia regulates travel with official permission; Astrobe’s instantaneous transport serves the civilized regions. The comparison helps explain why a walk matters here. Leaving the convenient network lets More encounter places and people that the official description does not adequately explain.

Thomas More, Utopia, book 2, “Of the Travelling of the Utopians.”

7. Hunting and the author of Utopia

More’s delight in either end of a hunt contrasts with the Utopians’ contempt for hunting. The contrast separates the character’s appetites from the rules of the society in his book. His attraction to the wild draws him further from Astrobe’s claim that civilized life is complete.

Thomas More, Utopia, book 2, discussion of pleasure and hunting.

8. The tree and its fruit

More imagines his joke as a tree unexpectedly bearing fruit, then judges a failing religious institution by the image of a barren tree. The Gospel language makes him apply to the Church a test that also bears on his own political invention.

Matthew 7:17–20; Luke 13:6–9.

9. The replica Mass

The museum rite combines guitar, drugs, theatrical dress, and commercial sponsorship. Its details turn a religious service into a degraded exhibit. The scene can be read in relation to the liturgical and popular culture of the 1960s, but its grotesque composite is Lafferty’s fictional projection.

The novel’s account of the museumized Mass; mid-twentieth-century liturgical and popular culture.

10. Dante’s infernal instruments

More himself invokes Dante when he hears the instruments. Relevant passages include Barbariccia’s obscene trumpet, Master Adam’s lute-shaped body and drum-like belly, and Nimrod’s horn. The reference is comic and composite: Dante does not describe an orchestra of guitars in the lowest circle.

Dante, Inferno 21.139; 30.49–54, 103; 31.12–18.

11. What he will be given to see

Pottscamp’s assurance about what will be given in the hour recalls Christ’s promise of words to disciples brought before hostile authorities. The change from speaking to seeing suits More’s journey. The question is whether he can recognize what the encounters disclose.

Matthew 10:19–20.

12. Rimrock’s sky

The ansels’ ancestors climbed through what they had taken for the sky and found land above the sea. Plato imagines a sea-dweller making a similar discovery in the Phaedo. The parallel makes Rimrock’s account a challenge to the belief that one’s familiar world exhausts reality.

Plato, Phaedo 109c–110a.

13. Evita, Eve, and Lilith

More calls Evita Lilith rather than Eve; she claims both names. The exchange brings the first mother and the rebellious first wife of later Jewish legend into the same woman. It continues the composite female figure of More’s passage dream.

Genesis 2–3; Alphabet of Ben Sira, the Lilith story.

14. All nations and the end of the world

Slider questions whether Christ’s commission and promise apply beyond Earth. His argument depends on taking nations and world in a narrowly terrestrial sense. Chapter 8 gives the Metropolitan’s direct answer, making this a dispute within the novel rather than an established limit on the Promise.

Matthew 28:19–20; Past Master, chap. 8.

6.

STING IN THE TAIL

Feral Lands → Goslar, City of the Salic Emperors
+

Thomas's party enters a wilderness of interwoven vegetation, water, and formidable animals. Father Oddopter joins them. He, Paul, and Evita kill a hydra that he identifies as the Devil; Thomas eats its cooked brains while disputing the meaning of the hunt. At Goslar, Charles the Six Hundred and Twelfth receives the travelers but lodges Scrivener in the machinery shed. Evita recounts her longevity and her search for Hell. Father Oddopter describes spirits and bodies produced through imagination. Drinking, stories, and the joke of Goslar's occupied privy loosen Thomas's attachment to perfection.

“The Devil has his several forms, but we must kill him every day to limn his limits.”

Characters
Thomas MorePaulEvitaFather OddopterRimrockWalter CopperheadMaxwellScrivenerSliderEmperor Charles the 612th
Themes
The Feral LandsThe Devil-killThe Salic EmperorsEmbodied Belief
Outline
I. The Feral Lands +
  • Rimrock and Copperhead take separate routes and protect the travelers.
  • Paul describes the food animals and the predators that feed on them.
  • Thomas thinks wild life could supply what civilized Astrobe lacks.
II. Killing the hydra +
  • Father Oddopter catches a large fish to use as bait.
  • The monk, Paul, and Evita attack the hydra's eye and brain.
  • Oddopter identifies the hunt as the daily killing of the Devil; Thomas calls it sport and illusion.
  • The brains are roasted in a mud casing. Copperhead later examines the entrails.
III. Natural and transformed ansels +
  • The travelers meet hunters killing natural ansels.
  • Thomas distinguishes these animals from the intelligent Rimrock.
  • Oddopter admits that the apparent acquisition of soul and intellect poses a theological problem.
IV. The Salic court +
  • Goslar grew from a fraternity at the university in Wu Town.
  • The Killers murder successive emperors; the fraternity immediately chooses replacements.
  • Charles excludes Scrivener from the common room as a machine.
  • The skulls of former emperors preserve the dynasty's oral history.
V. Evita and the evening's tales +
  • Evita recognizes emperors to whom she was consort and describes an experiment that prolonged her life.
  • She identifies Golden Astrobe as the Hell she sought.
  • Oddopter describes wandering spirits, contingent bodies, and the Feral Lands’ psychic powers.
  • Thomas pays to use the public privy, drinks green lightning, and joins the storytelling.
› Notes and sources (17)
1. The sting in the tail

The closing image of a fair face and a dangerous tail recalls Dante’s Geryon, the embodiment of fraud. It also belongs to the proverbial poison reserved for the tail or end. Astrobe’s pleasing appearance has concealed what More discovers behind it.

Dante, Inferno 17.1–27; the proverb in cauda venenum.

2. Old animal names on a new planet

Kastroides recalls the extinct giant beaver Castoroides, and the direwolves likewise borrow a prehistoric name. Paul warns that the resemblance lies in the names. The earthly vocabulary helps the travelers begin to describe creatures whose behavior and proportions remain unfamiliar.

The names Castoroides and dire wolf; the novel’s explanation of borrowed animal names.

3. Rouks and the roc

The enormous predatory bird recalls the roc of travel legend. Its habit of displaying human bodies on thorns also resembles a shrike’s impaled prey, enlarged to a human scale. More’s comparison with men hanging dead wolves reverses the ordinary relation between hunter and hunted.

The roc in the Sindbad voyages and Marco Polo; the natural history of shrikes.

4. Sextus and the sprite

More names Sextus Empiricus in support of a being suited to every environment. Father Oddopter then appears as an answer to the speculation. Sextus reports arguments about living beings in different cosmic regions; the scene turns that philosophical material into a joke about the observers themselves.

Sextus Empiricus, Against the Physicists, book 1; compare Cicero, On the Nature of the Gods 2.42.

5. Babes in the woods

Oddopter’s grand title for a familiar story mocks the travelers’ innocence. Like the abandoned children of the ballad, they do not fully understand the danger surrounding them. His greeting is protective advice delivered as teasing.

The ballad “The Babes in the Wood” and its later theatrical versions.

6. Doubting Thomas

The apostle asks for evidence before believing; More sees the Devil-kill and then tries to exclude what he has seen from his account of reality. Oddopter challenges the rule by which More has decided in advance that only one order of things can exist.

John 20:24–29.

7. Fishing for the Devil

The bait and hook invite comparison with the Christian interpretation of Leviathan: the Devil takes what he desires and is caught through it. Gregory the Great reads the hook as Christ’s humanity concealing divinity. Evita’s bait and Oddopter’s fishing give that theological image a violent comic form.

Job 41:1, or 40:20 in the Douay-Rheims numbering; Gregory the Great, Moralia in Job, book 33.

8. The hydra and the daily killing

The name recalls the monster whose severed heads grow again in Heracles’ labor. Oddopter makes the repeated killing a daily necessity. He also says the Devil can take other forms, so the significance belongs to this encounter and its recurrence, rather than to every animal called a hydra.

The Lernaean Hydra; Apollodorus, Library 2.5.2.

9. Copperhead’s divination

Reading entrails belongs to the ancient haruspex; interpreting birds belongs to the augur. Copperhead draws on this vocabulary and practice here and on the mountain. More’s uneasiness recalls the biblical prohibition on divination and consultation with the dead.

Deuteronomy 18:10–11; the Roman traditions of haruspicy and augury.

10. A wandering monk

Oddopter vows never to sleep twice in the same place. This can be set beside both Christ’s homelessness and Benedict’s criticism of wandering monks. Lafferty gives a positive discipline to a form of life that monastic rules often treated with suspicion.

Luke 9:58; Rule of St. Benedict, chap. 1.

11. Goslar and the Salic Emperors

The name recalls the German imperial city associated with the Salian dynasty. Lafferty transfers imperial ceremony to a precarious settlement with an oral history preserved through the skulls of its rulers. More treats its authority seriously even when the surrounding circumstances are comic.

The imperial palace and Salian history of Goslar.

12. The emperor’s journey

The newly chosen ruler travels without provisions, money, or spare clothing. The instructions echo the sending of the apostles. That vulnerable arrival also makes the emperor’s office a small-scale counterpart to More’s dangerous appointment.

Luke 9:3; Matthew 10:9–10.

13. The privy and royal names

More’s henry and proposed charles treat the familiar john as though a privy ought to bear the reigning monarch’s name. The joke brings Henry VIII into the petty frustrations of the visit. More’s caution about crossing royalty recalls how much a confrontation with a king can cost.

Roper, The Life of Sir Thomas More, Norfolk’s warning about striving with princes and More’s advice to Cromwell.

14. Evita’s bargain

Evita calls herself Faustina when she describes the longevity experiment as a bargain with the Devil. The Evil Scientist gives the Faust story a laboratory setting. Her return home after seeking Hell makes the discovery of Golden Astrobe’s nature the bitter result of the bargain.

The Faust tradition, especially the rejuvenation in Goethe’s Faust, part 1.

15. Coming home and recognizing it

Evita’s journey around the world to recognize her own home can be compared with Chesterton’s returning yachtsman and Eliot’s end of exploration. Her discovery reverses their welcome: the home she finally recognizes is Hell.

G. K. Chesterton, Orthodoxy, chap. 1; T. S. Eliot, “Little Gidding,” section 5.

16. Superstition and over-belief

Oddopter’s over-belief has bodily consequences: it leaves marks and makes the feral regions powerful. William James’s term offers a useful comparison for belief that reaches beyond what evidence establishes. Lafferty gives that surplus of belief a creaturely presence.

William James, The Varieties of Religious Experience (1902), concluding discussion of over-beliefs.

17. Green lightning and the electrode

Slider proposes electrically produced pleasure as a superior alternative to drinking. The contrast sets the ease of a manufactured sensation beside a physical, communal activity he cannot manage. It belongs to the novel’s larger dispute over whether discomfort can be removed without losing forms of life.

The chapter’s comparison of green lightning with electrical stimulation.

7.

ON THUNDER MOUNTAIN

Goslar → Electric Mountain → Cathead
+

Father Oddopter celebrates Mass at Goslar. Thomas then defends the Astrobe Dream so fiercely that Charles expels him, though his companions continue with him. During the climb of Electric Mountain, Scrivener recounts the sleeping kings and declares his rejection of Ouden. Copperhead has already examined a rouk's entrails at the summit and left. A lightning storm accompanies the Killers’ assault. Scrivener, Adam, Oddopter, and Maxwell's current body are killed. Slider is disregarded as no threat. Evita leads Thomas and Paul down the mountain; the three reach Cathead profoundly changed.

“They had been transfigured on the mountain.”

Characters
Thomas MorePaulEvitaFather OddopterRimrockWalter CopperheadAdamScrivenerSliderMaxwellEmperor Charles the 612th
Themes
Scrivener’s ChoiceThe Sleeping KingsDeath on the MountainTransfiguration
Outline
I. Mass and expulsion +
  • The consecration briefly revives Thomas's faith.
  • Charles warns that Scrivener's sender enables the Killers to track the party.
  • Thomas refuses to sacrifice Scrivener, but then accepts the killing of companions who oppose the Dream.
  • Charles expels Thomas; Paul, Evita, and Oddopter stay with him.
II. Scrivener's change +
  • Scrivener criticizes Thomas for valuing machinery above humanity.
  • He recounts human legends of sleeping kings and the machines’ attempt to adopt an ancient gear train.
  • Ouden displaced that mechanical king.
  • Scrivener declares that he has rejected Ouden.
III. The summit +
  • Adam joins the climbers.
  • Oddopter describes apparitions shaped by electricity and the observer's mind.
  • The summit holds the entrails of a rouk examined by Copperhead, who has departed.
  • The view reveals the cities, wilderness, and other Thunder Mountains.
IV. The assault and escape +
  • The Killers attack during the lightning storm.
  • Scrivener fights and dies; Slider is ignored.
  • Adam and Oddopter die; Maxwell loses his present body.
  • Evita times a descent to the lightning. She, Thomas, and Paul escape to Cathead.
› Notes and sources (11)
1. Sinai and the Transfiguration

Trumpets, cloud, thunder, and lightning recall Sinai. The changed, shining survivors also invite the Gospel comparison that the narrator names as transfiguration. What they encounter includes the faces of Ouden, so the resemblance does not make their vision a simple repetition of a biblical revelation.

Exodus 19:16–19; 34:29–30; Matthew 17:1–9.

2. Lifting the eyes to the mountains

More’s criticism of the golden inhabitants borrows the upward movement of the psalm. He immediately imagines abandoning such impulses once he governs. His own attraction to the mountain is therefore already in conflict with the settled life he wants to administer.

Psalm 121:1, numbered 120:1 in the Douay-Rheims and Vulgate.

3. The sleeping kings

Scrivener gathers rulers expected to return when their people need them. The recurring legend gives More’s recruitment a wider pattern. Historical deaths, folk traditions, and invented futures mingle in the list; the list should not be treated as a set of accurate biographies.

The return-of-the-king traditions of Arthur and Frederick Barbarossa.

4. Alaric under the river

The diverted river and secret burial come from the account of Alaric’s death in Jordanes. The promise that he will rise and lead again belongs to the sleeping-king pattern added here. The distinction shows how historical material becomes a usable legend.

Jordanes, Getica 30.158.

5. Kennedy and Roadstorm

Kennedy’s open automobile enters the same company as ancient and medieval kings. Roadstorm extends the catalogue into Lafferty’s own fiction and recalls Roadstrum of Space Chantey. The sequence treats very recent history and invented history as material from which legends of return are made.

John F. Kennedy’s assassination in 1963; Lafferty, Space Chantey (1968).

6. The ram with the double sign

Oddopter says the marked ram belongs to Scripture. Abraham’s substitute sacrifice and Daniel’s two-horned ram are possible points of comparison. The scene does not choose between them or explain the double sign completely; More’s repeated appointment to death gives the image its immediate force.

Genesis 22:13; Daniel 8:3.

7. A priest forever

Paul’s words over Oddopter identify the dead man with the priesthood of Melchisedech. The verse belongs to the biblical and liturgical language of enduring priesthood. It follows a morning Mass offered for members of the party who would die that day.

Psalm 110:4, numbered 109:4 in the Douay-Rheims and Vulgate; Hebrews 5:6; 7:17.

8. The lightning and the paradox of motion

The single point of light seems to occupy several places at once. Zeno’s arrow offers a plausible comparison for the old paradox named in the passage. Lafferty makes the apparent solution an overwhelming event through which the travelers must find a still narrower instant of escape.

Aristotle, Physics 6.9, 239b, on Zeno’s arrow.

9. Literally astonished

The narrator explicitly connects astonishment with being thunderstruck. The event revives the history inside the word. The same habit of making a familiar phrase happen bodily governs many of the novel’s jokes and horrors.

The history of astonish through Old French estoner and the Latin vocabulary of thunder and stupefaction.

10. The false sky and the empyrean

The possibility of light outside a false sky recalls the empyrean of medieval cosmology and Dante. The narrator poses it as a question. The view into a pit then makes the distinction between apparent height and genuine transcendence more difficult.

Aquinas, Summa theologiae I, q. 66, a. 3; Dante, Paradiso 30.

11. Scrivener, Slider, and humanity

Scrivener’s choice and Slider’s reversal make personhood a matter of allegiance and action as well as origin. Scrivener dies resisting the Killers. The scene prepares the question, asked later by the Programmed Persons themselves, of whether creatures made from other materials can receive spiritual life.

Past Master, chaps. 7, 10, and 13.

8.

BLACK CATHEAD

Cathead, Astrobe
+

Thomas studies Cathead's deadly industries, rat-infested buildings, plague, and widespread mental illness. Copperhead, Battersea, Shanty, and Rimrock explain why people refuse the Golden Life, but he still proposes destroying the city. A woman predicts his nine-day reign. He visits the dying Metropolitan, who recognizes him, recites the collect for John Fisher and Thomas More, and says that Christ has renewed the promise to the Church on Astrobe. Thomas leaves unconvinced. The final scene shows dead sea-gleaners being sold with fish for grinding into meal.

“We have the promise. We last till the end of the world.”

Characters
Thomas MorePaulEvitaThe MetropolitanRimrockWalter CopperheadBatterseaShanty
Themes
The Horrors of CatheadThe Remnant ChurchThe PromiseChrist on Astrobe
Outline
I. The industries and the rats +
  • Cathead's processes kill workers while duplicating products cheaply available elsewhere.
  • Oxypyrites extraction has neither market nor pay.
  • The Rat Castle houses a billion rats; the district's rats kill thousands daily.
  • Plague and the immense Bethelem district deepen the account of suffering.
II. The refusal of comfort +
  • Copperhead calls misery preferable to having no life.
  • Battersea and Shanty call Thomas blind and foolish.
  • Rimrock says he too gave up a comfortable life that submerged his identity.
  • Thomas still thinks Cathead must be destroyed.
III. The Metropolitan +
  • A woman predicts that Thomas will be king for nine days.
  • The Metropolitan recognizes Thomas through the collect of his feast with John Fisher.
  • He predicts his own death thirty hours before Thomas's.
  • He says Christ walked on Astrobe with Saint Klingensmith and renewed the Promise.
IV. The sea-gleaners +
  • Three workers have died on plague day.
  • The scow-master removes their boots and rolls their bodies into the fish.
  • The buyer accepts the bodies but deducts a coin for each because they are inferior material for the grinders.
› Notes and sources (13)
1. Twenty hours of work

Utopia limits the working day to six hours. Cathead’s twenty-hour labor makes the comparison brutal, especially because efficient machines already exist elsewhere. More must confront people who prefer this destructive work to the comfortable life offered by the golden cities.

Thomas More, Utopia, book 2, “Of Their Trades, and Manner of Life.”

2. Choosing servitude

Utopia includes outsiders who voluntarily enter service because its conditions are better than those at home. Cathead reverses the movement: people choose bondage and deprivation to escape the perfected society. The parallel places freedom of choice inside conditions that More finds intolerable.

Thomas More, Utopia, book 2, “Of Their Slaves, and of Their Marriages.”

3. Dostoevsky and chosen unhappiness

The Underground Man challenges a rationally perfected society by defending the capacity to choose what is painful or disadvantageous. Cathead raises a related question: whether suffering can become proof that one is alive and capable of refusal. The comparison explains the argument without making Cathead’s misery desirable in itself.

Fyodor Dostoevsky, Notes from Underground, part 1, sections 7–9.

4. Escape from the golden cities

Barricades and gunfire give the migration a recognizable modern political setting. The Berlin Wall offers a historical comparison, but Lafferty reverses the expected economic destination: these refugees run from abundance into poverty. Their behavior exposes something that Astrobe’s measures of well-being cannot register.

The border barriers and shootings of the Cold War; the novel’s account of the exodus into Cathead.

5. The yellow flag and the lungers

The flag uses the traditional maritime signal of contagion. Lunger is an older American word for a consumptive. Both terms make bodily disease a constant feature of the city’s life; the weekly plague and lethal work are concrete conditions, not merely symbols of spiritual suffering.

The quarantine flag tradition; the American slang term lunger.

6. Bethlehem and Bedlam

The district’s name recalls the Hospital of St. Mary of Bethlehem, whose name became Bedlam. Lafferty enlarges a madhouse into a large part of a city. The movement from institution to district makes the question of madness political as well as medical.

Bethlem Hospital, London; the development of the word bedlam.

7. Holbein’s skeletons

More’s Dutchman is most naturally read as Holbein, his portraitist and the designer of the Dance of Death woodcuts. Older English could use Dutch broadly for German. The remark places the skeletal Metropolitan among images in which death confronts people of every social rank.

Hans Holbein the Younger, Dance of Death, published 1538; Sir Thomas More, 1527.

8. The fisherman’s ring

The ring associates the Metropolitan with Saint Peter and papal office. The novel also calls him the Pope of Astrobe. These signs give the nearly abandoned church an authority that its physical poverty and small congregation do not measure.

The papal Ring of the Fisherman; the chapter’s description of the Metropolitan.

9. More hears his own collect

The Metropolitan recites the prayer honoring John Fisher and Thomas More as martyrs. More recognizes Fisher and hears himself placed within a liturgical commemoration that followed his earthly life. The prayer confronts his uncertainty with the Church’s judgment about the man he became.

The collect for Saints John Fisher and Thomas More in the English proper of the Roman Missal after their canonization in 1935.

10. The Promise on Astrobe

The Metropolitan applies Christ’s promise to this world and answers Slider’s attempt to exclude it. His account of Christ walking on Astrobe gives the answer a local history. The scene asks whether a new planet can be outside the reach of an apparently earthly promise.

Matthew 16:18; 28:20; Past Master, chap. 5.

11. The blind man who sees

The physically blind Metropolitan calls More blind because he fails to recognize what is before him. John’s account of the man born blind supplies the comparison: sight and spiritual understanding can move in opposite directions. More’s confidence in his diagnosis of Cathead is the object of the rebuke.

John 9:39–41.

12. The response More remembers

The blessing and More’s answering line come from the psalm used in the prayers at the foot of the altar. His ready response shows religious memory operating beneath his professed uncertainty. The words ask for renewed life at the very moment he is confronting a church thought to be dying.

Psalm 85, numbered 84 in the Vulgate and Douay-Rheims; the Roman Mass, Deus, tu conversus vivificabis nos.

13. Stones, clods, and the woman’s touch

The promise that the planet itself will testify recalls the stones that cry out in Luke. The woman who touches More likewise recalls a Gospel encounter, although here she gives him a prophecy rather than receives a cure. Both episodes place knowledge outside the institutions and explanations he trusts.

Luke 19:40; Mark 5:25–34.

9.

KING-MAKER

Cosmopolis, Astrobe
+

Kingmaker discovers that Thomas's voice transmits on Replica while his image does not. The chapter explains Astrobe's successive voting systems and its many parties. The Crank defends personal freedom, but Thomas rejects him and has him expelled. Thomas campaigns for the Astrobe Dream and threatens Cathead. He notices that someone else is thinking and speaking through him, yet accepts those imposed ideas. The Pandomation and Open Mind Act abolish privacy. By the chapter's end the Killers still watch him, but no longer threaten him.

“Somebody else spoke some of those words out of my mouth.”

Characters
Thomas MoreCosmos KingmakerPaulEvitaRimrockThe Crank
Themes
Invisible to ReplicaWeighted VotePolitical MachineryPublic Appeal
Outline
I. The public image +
  • Thomas is visually absent from Replica but remains audible.
  • Kingmaker says about one person in a hundred has this peculiarity.
  • Rimrock and Evita have already won broad audiences for Thomas.
II. Voting and parties +
  • One person, one vote gave way to weighted voting.
  • Sensing machines now assess opinion directly.
  • The unexpected strength of Cathead and the Barrio prompts plans to exclude dissenting judgments.
  • Those modifications will not be ready for this election.
III. The Crank +
  • The sole member of a certified party receives his legally required hearing.
  • He attacks coercion in education, marriage, reproduction, work, and mental life.
  • Thomas rejects every point and orders machines to remove him.
IV. The campaign and the invaded mind +
  • Thomas preaches merger between humans and the Programmed.
  • Paul urges him to expel the intruders from his mind.
  • Pandomation exposes private activities; the Open Mind Act authorizes mental intrusion.
  • Thomas threatens Cathead, promises the Merging Singularity, and ceases to appear dangerous to the Killers.
› Notes and sources (11)
1. King-making

The title recalls the historical Kingmaker, Warwick, and brings the name Cosmos Kingmaker into the account of how a ruler is manufactured. Acclamation, publicity, party arrangements, and effective phrasing do the work once associated with a vote. The final ease of the process is part of its menace.

Richard Neville, Earl of Warwick; Shakespeare, 3 Henry VI, 3.3.

2. Cecily and the adopted daughter

More compares Evita with his youngest daughter. Historically that daughter was Cecily, educated with her sisters in More’s household. His paternal comparison sits uneasily with Evita’s age, experience, and refusal to be treated as a child.

More’s family: Cecily More Heron; Roper, The Life of Sir Thomas More.

3. The wrong apostle

The Crank combines doubting Thomas with Judas. More corrects him, but the confusion reveals what Astrobe admires: it has turned the supposed betrayer of Christ into a hero. The error belongs to the characters’ damaged religious memory and should not be repeated as a description of either apostle.

John 20:24–29; the Gospel accounts of Judas’s betrayal.

4. From one person, one vote to no vote

The account starts with an egalitarian formula, passes through unequal voting weights, and ends by abolishing voting. Mill’s plural voting and Shute’s fictional multiple-vote scheme offer comparisons for the middle stage. The succession makes the removal of political choice appear to be one more modernization.

John Stuart Mill, Considerations on Representative Government, chap. 8; Nevil Shute, In the Wet (1953).

5. Demos, Ochlos, and the anesthetics

Demos names the people as a political body; ochlos names a crowd or mob. The Esthetics, Anesthetics, and Local Anesthetics turn disputes about taste and sensation into party labels. The catalogue mixes learned political names with jokes about feeling and its suppression.

Greek demos, people; ochlos, crowd; aisthesis, perception or sensation.

6. The Crank and the right to unhappiness

The Crank’s defense of choosing one’s occupation and unhappiness recalls John the Savage’s demand in Brave New World. More answers from the side of the administered society. The encounter therefore exposes the distance between the candidate’s public confidence and the liberty a dissenter wants.

Aldous Huxley, Brave New World, chap. 17.

7. Moving mountains

More turns the Gospel image of mountain-moving faith into a political joke. The promise to move the world ahead follows his own unsettling mountain experience. Biblical words now help him sell the program whose deeper claims he has begun to forget.

Matthew 17:20; 1 Corinthians 13:2.

8. Green pastures

The speech approaches the language of Psalm 23 and then corrects itself into a more acceptable statement of progress. The interrupted phrase briefly introduces rest under a shepherd into a speech about collective advancement. It also raises the question of who is supplying More’s words.

Psalm 23:2, numbered 22:2 in the Vulgate and Douay-Rheims.

9. All things to all men

More’s happy new phrase belongs to Saint Paul. In its biblical setting it concerns winning others for the gospel; in the campaign it promises universal political appeal. The narrator’s doubt about who speaks through More turns the apparent improvisation into evidence of manipulation.

1 Corinthians 9:22.

10. The total good

The speech replaces a good calculated for many persons with the good of a merged singularity. Bentham’s familiar formula supplies the point of departure. The crucial change is the disappearance of distinct persons from the account of what their common good should be.

Jeremy Bentham, A Fragment on Government (1776), preface; the utilitarian formula of the greatest happiness of the greatest number.

11. Pandomation and the Open Mind Act

Rooms exposed to spectators invite comparison with the glass houses of We and the telescreens of Nineteen Eighty-Four. Astrobe also extends access into thought. The Open Mind Act’s subtitle turns an expression of tolerance into a claim to enter another person’s mind.

Yevgeny Zamyatin, We (1924); George Orwell, Nineteen Eighty-Four (1949).

10.

THE DEFORMITY OF THINGS TO COME

A settlement between Cathead and Wu Town
+

Thomas begins to resist the thoughts imposed on him. The Killers pursue him through a settlement between Cathead and Wu Town, and he is drawn into a room with nine Programmed Persons. Their three groups identify themselves as Jackals, Dogs, and Wolves. Pottscamp describes their manufacture, demonic occupants, and extensions in Thomas's mind. They intend to extinguish humanity, themselves, and ultimately all existence. Thomas finally understands Cathead's refusal of the Dream. The Nine suppress his memory of the meeting. Outside, Northprophet and Pottscamp ask what they must do to be saved; Thomas dismisses them as mocking him.

“The Vision is the Golden Premise of Nothing Beyond; and the Conclusion is Holy Ouden, Nothing Here Either, Nothing Ever.”

Characters
Thomas MorePottscampNorthprophetBoggleSkybolSwampersKnobnosterBeebonnetHolygeeGandy
Themes
The Nine DevilsPhilosophy of AnnihilationProgrammed PersonsBeing vs. Nothingness
Outline
I. The trap +
  • Thomas recognizes the thoughts in his head as intrusions.
  • The Killers turn dangerous as he resists.
  • He enters a door in a blind alley and finds the Nine in darkness.
  • He takes the seat reserved for Ouden.
II. The three groups +
  • Boggle, Skybol, and Swampers: Jackals, specializing in retrogression.
  • Northprophet, Knobnoster, and Beebonnet: Dogs, specializing in rechabitism.
  • Pottscamp, Holygee, and Gandy: Wolves, specializing in extrapolation.
  • Each has an extension in Thomas's brain.
III. Their account of themselves +
  • Pottscamp says ancient devils inhabit the manufactured bodies.
  • He describes the use of twelve criminals as material for the first devices.
  • The Nine deny consciousness and purpose and plan total extinction.
  • Thomas learns that Proctor is Programmed and that Foreman still resists them.
IV. Resistance and forgetting +
  • Thomas recognizes why Cathead refuses the surrogate life.
  • Swampers and Gandy raise the possibility of the Spirit or God's hand reaching mechanical beings.
  • The Nine suppress Thomas's memory through retrogression.
  • Northprophet and Pottscamp then ask to be saved, a plea Thomas cannot take seriously.
› Notes and sources (13)
1. The deformation of Wells’s future

The title answers Chapter 5 and Wells’s The Shape of Things to Come. More now sees the claim to perfected humanity from its reverse side. The Programmed Persons explain what their completion of human history would remove.

H. G. Wells, The Shape of Things to Come (1933); Past Master, chap. 5.

2. The door in the wall

The door appears where there should be none and leaves no opening afterward. Wells’s disappearing door offers a close comparison, particularly under this chapter title. Lafferty changes the destination from an alluring garden to the Nine’s room of coercion and disclosure.

H. G. Wells, “The Door in the Wall” (1906).

3. Below the salt

More invokes the seating order of a great household when he takes Ouden’s reserved place. His refusal of a lower seat becomes a refusal to acknowledge Nothing as his superior. A social expression gives his resistance a physical and ceremonial form.

The traditional distinction between seating above and below the salt.

4. The reverse of the tapestry

The Nine present themselves as mankind seen from behind. Cervantes compares translation with the reverse of a tapestry, where the figures remain visible through knots and threads. The analogy helps describe a recognizable human pattern made rough or deformed, while the Nine insist that their reverse is the true side.

Miguel de Cervantes, Don Quixote, part 2, chap. 62.

5. Rechabitism

The Rechabites in Jeremiah obey an ancestral command to abstain from wine and settled possessions. Northprophet names rechabitism as his trio’s specialty without defining the process. In this conversation its association with abstinence can be set beside the Programmed Persons’ desire to eliminate their appetite for life.

Jeremiah 35.

6. Houses swept and garnished

Pottscamp explicitly describes the bodies as houses entered by devils. His language comes from Christ’s account of an expelled spirit returning to an empty, ordered house with worse companions. The account distinguishes the constructed bodies from the beings that occupy them.

Matthew 12:43–45; Luke 11:24–26.

7. The machine that succeeds mankind

Butler’s evolving machines and Čapek’s artificial workers provide earlier versions of humanity being superseded by its creations. Lafferty joins that prospect to the language of possession. The question therefore concerns both the material construction of the Programmed Persons and what has come to live in them.

Samuel Butler, Erewhon, “The Book of the Machines”; Karel Čapek, R.U.R. (1920).

8. Opening the box

The warning about taking the lid off a box invites the comparison with Pandora. Jack-in-the-box language makes the released powers sound like unruly toys. The image grows until the box is Astrobe itself, and the dispute turns to whether hope has survived inside it.

Hesiod, Works and Days 90–105; the later Pandora’s-box tradition.

9. Hell and nonbeing

More’s preference for existence even in Hell can be compared with Milton’s Satan, while his preference for the lunger’s life over kingship recalls Achilles in the underworld. The differences matter: More is resisting annihilation, and his chosen comparison is the life of an actual suffering person.

Milton, Paradise Lost 1.263; Homer, Odyssey 11.489–91.

10. Water, clay, and artificial bodies

Swampers asks whether the spirit that came to water and clay could come to the materials of a Programmed Person. Genesis supplies the language of creation and animated earth. The question leaves open a possibility that the Nine’s general account of themselves tries to close.

Genesis 1:2; 2:7.

11. What must we do to be saved?

Northprophet and Pottscamp echo the jailer’s question to Paul and Silas. More dismisses their appeal as mockery. Pottscamp’s later penitence makes it difficult to assume that this moment has only one tone or purpose.

Acts 16:30; Past Master, chap. 13.

12. The second death

Revelation uses the phrase for the final condition of the condemned. More also faces the literal prospect of being beheaded twice. The overlap places his personal ordeal inside the novel’s larger questions about resurrection, extinction, and the death of a world.

Revelation 20:6, 14; 21:8.

13. Writer, lawyer, and chancellor

More’s soliloquy turns three achievements of his earlier life into traps: he must inhabit his fiction, find its legality, and administer it. His political competence has helped make his captivity possible. The question of what he will refuse now becomes more urgent than what he can manage.

More’s authorship of Utopia and his legal and governmental career; the chapter’s closing soliloquy.

11.

NINE DAY KING

Cosmopolis, Astrobe
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Thomas enjoys his presidency while the Nine's influence persists. He signs legislation, tries to remove harmful riders, and struggles to remember the meeting he has forgotten. A clause outlawing belief in the Beyond appears inside the Earth Severance Act; he cuts it out. It returns in the Botch Bill, which he vetoes. Presented independently a third time, the measure confronts him with the penalty for repeated veto: death. He defends the remaining religious communities but nearly gives way. Proctor's threats and Foreman's deliberate provocation bring him to the final refusal.

“Whether there be Things Beyond I do not know. Ye'd forbid the mind to consider them. I forbid the forbidding.”

Characters
Thomas MoreCosmos KingmakerPeter ProctorFabian ForemanPottscampNorthprophet
Themes
Conscience vs. PowerThree VetoesBan the BeyondMartyrdom
Outline
I. The nine-day presidency +
  • The year is Astrobe 535, corresponding to Earth 2535 by the old count.
  • Lawmasters submit bills; machines recommend approval.
  • Thomas's amendments are circumvented by provisions in other bills.
II. The first two refusals +
  • Thomas removes the clause from the Earth Severance Act.
  • It returns as a rider to the Botch Bill.
  • He vetoes the entire Botch Bill and asks why the proposal matters so much.
III. The third presentation +
  • The measure is presented as a separate bill.
  • Kingmaker reports the Metropolitan's death.
  • Thomas defends the synagogue, mosque, remaining sects, and green-robed monks.
  • The penalty concerns three vetoes of the same proposal, however it is presented.
IV. The final refusal +
  • Thomas says he will sign.
  • Proctor threatens him again, while Foreman appeals to his pride and courage.
  • Thomas writes his veto across the bill.
  • The assembled rulers sentence him to death.
› Notes and sources (10)
1. The Nine Day King

The title invites comparison with Lady Jane Grey, the Nine Days’ Queen, who was deposed and later executed. More also recalls the young Salic ruler as a One Day Emperor. The comparison gives his presidency the shape of a brief elevation already overshadowed by the block.

Lady Jane Grey’s reign in July 1553; the proverb of a nine days’ wonder.

2. The philosopher king

More explicitly thinks of Plato’s ideal ruler. Utopia had already debated whether a philosopher could serve usefully in a prince’s council. Astrobe gives More the supreme office, but the bills and their hidden provisions reveal how little final authority that office guarantees.

Plato, Republic 5.473c–d; Thomas More, Utopia, book 1.

3. Astrobe’s calendar

The year 535 A.S. corresponds to 2535 by the old count. The omitted Free Years complicate the colony’s elapsed time. The dates place More roughly a thousand years beyond his earthly death while exposing another way the official account orders and compresses history.

The chapter’s account of anno scientiae and the Free Year.

4. The sun as a hole

The words spoken through More recall Anaximander’s account of the sun as an opening through which fire is seen. In Astrobe’s argument the opening becomes an emblem of emptiness. The comparison is useful, but no philosopher is named in the scene.

Ancient accounts of Anaximander’s cosmology, including Hippolytus, Refutation of All Heresies 1.6.

5. Ban the Beyond

More’s name for the measure recalls the modern slogan Ban the Bomb. The resemblance gives the abolition of transcendence the familiar language of a public campaign. The provision would prohibit considering things beyond the Dream, including the possibility that the Dream is incomplete.

The Campaign for Nuclear Disarmament slogan; the chapter’s description of the bill.

6. The remnants

The legal heading reduces surviving religious communities to leftovers. Isaiah and Romans give remnant a different significance: a people preserved through apparent defeat. The small numbers therefore do not settle the value or future of the communities the bill would abolish.

Isaiah 10:20–22; Romans 11:5.

7. Kingmaker’s Fall

Kingmaker tells of creatures who leave perfection in search of something beyond and fall into the void. The account reverses the value of escape: faith in a beyond becomes the original error. More’s suspicion that the labels have been switched opens the possibility that Golden Astrobe is itself the emptiness.

Compare Genesis 3 and Revelation 12:7–9; Kingmaker’s allegory in this chapter.

8. Veto: I forbid

More writes the Latin formula across the bill. His prohibition defends the freedom to consider what the measure would prohibit. The constitutional penalty follows three refusals of the proposal in its successive forms, so his third veto makes the act of reading and rejecting legislation a decision about his life.

Latin veto, I forbid; the chapter’s law concerning repeated vetoes.

9. More’s first refusal

The novel explicitly compares this refusal with the act that led to More’s first death. Historically he refused the oath in 1534 and was later convicted of treason. Lafferty changes the issue and the character’s stated certainty, while retaining the demand for assent and the fatal cost of withholding it.

Roper, The Life of Sir Thomas More, accounts of the oath and trial.

10. The friend who requires the head

More asks who pushed him into the corner before. Roper records his judgment that Henry’s friendship would not save his head if the king could gain by taking it. Foreman’s friendship and manipulation repeat that disturbing proximity between affection and political use.

Roper, The Life of Sir Thomas More, More’s conversation with Roper after Henry’s visit to Chelsea.

12.

THE ULTIMATE PEOPLE

George's Shop / Cosmopolis
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The Eagles gather at George the Syrian's Cosmopolis shop. Maxwell returns in an old woman's manufactured body, and Adam appears again. Battersea outlines a noon rescue, though Copperhead and Adam predict Thomas's death. The group drinks and tells stories that the surveillance machines cannot interpret. Foreman joins them and reports a carnival in the square. A new Metropolitan has already proclaimed an interdict. As the city revives its forgotten feasts and passions, bells ring from churches long destroyed. Evita tells Thomas that the rescue will save him.

“And one more, high and powerful and clear, the July Bell.”

Characters
PaulGeorge the SyrianEvitaRimrockWalter CopperheadBatterseaShantyMaxwellAdamFabian Foreman
Themes
Fools’ CarnivalThe Five Hundred BellsWakeLast Night
Outline
I. The gathering +
  • Shanty, Battersea, Paul, Copperhead, Maxwell, Evita, Rimrock, and Adam assemble.
  • Maxwell's borrowed body is Programmed; his surviving identity troubles the distinction between person and machine.
  • Battersea plans the rescue for noon and returns to Cathead to prepare.
II. The wake +
  • The others hold a wake for Thomas before his death.
  • Adam recounts Saint Brandon's voyage to Astrobe.
  • George tells of a Syrian and a dromedary restarting the world.
  • The monitors mistake the tales for a code and fail to interpret them.
III. The carnival +
  • Foreman arrives by a private entrance.
  • Cosmopolis erupts in revelry, fighting, penitence, and hope.
  • A new Metropolitan places the world under interdict.
  • The Wooly Ram feast returns; Programmed Persons hide in fear.
IV. The bells +
  • Five hundred bells sound, many from churches long razed.
  • The people recognize their old names and voices.
  • The July Bell joins them.
  • Evita returns from reassuring Thomas, but the predictions of death remain.
› Notes and sources (10)
1. The gathering eagles

The opening recalls the Gospel saying that eagles gather where the body is. Its setting in discourse about the last things fits a night described as the world’s last. The companions gather around a man whose death is expected, while their name also carries the force of a chosen company.

Matthew 24:28; Luke 17:37; compare Job 39:30.

2. Principalities and powers

The account of Evita’s long battle draws directly on Paul’s description of spiritual warfare. Her apparent youth and accumulated experience give that struggle an unusual embodiment. Her enemies exercise political control as well as the spiritual hostility named by the phrase.

Ephesians 6:12.

3. Saint Brandon’s voyage

Adam retells the voyage of Saint Brendan as an early visit to Astrobe. His nineteen monks and ninety-nine days differ from the medieval Navigatio, with its smaller chosen company and seven-year voyage. Moving the Land of Promise into space gives Astrobe a sacred past earlier than its official settlement.

Navigatio Sancti Brendani; Past Master’s name for the saint is Brandon.

4. The wake before death

The companions hold the wake while More is alive. Stories, drink, and argument become forms of attendance on a death they hope to prevent. Their conversation defeats the machines’ attempt to reduce it to useful instructions or a discoverable plan.

The wake tradition; the chapter’s account of the machines listening to the stories.

5. The fools’ carnival

Masks, mock factions, irreverence, and mingled joy and violence recall the Feast of Fools and carnival traditions. Cosmopolis begins behaving unpredictably on the night before its ceremonial execution. Its recovery of feeling is dangerous as well as hopeful.

The medieval Feast of Fools; Carnival, Halloween, and St. John’s Eve customs.

6. Candy heads and skulls

The confections invite comparison with the sugar skulls of the Mexican Day of the Dead. Here they honor an execution that has not yet happened. Death becomes something sold, eaten, mocked, and anticipated throughout the city.

The calavera tradition of the Day of the Dead.

7. Sackcloth and ashes

The carnival faction turns an act of penance into a public costume and joke. Chapter 13 gives the gesture a different weight when Pottscamp pours ashes over his head. The repetition asks whether an apparently empty imitation can become an actual act of remorse.

Matthew 11:21; Job 2:12; 42:6.

8. The interdict

The new Metropolitan invokes the Church’s power to place a territory under religious censure pending repentance. Applying it to a planet gives an old ecclesiastical action an enormous scale. His appearance also answers the earlier assumption that the dying Metropolitan would have no successor.

The historical practice of a general interdict, notably the interdict on England, 1208–14.

9. The serpent’s tooth

The narrator’s phrase for remorse recalls Lear’s pain at an ungrateful child. Cosmopolis has raised More to power and is preparing to kill him. The borrowed image makes its new emotion resemble a child’s recognition of injury done to a parent.

Shakespeare, King Lear, 1.4.

10. The funeral toll and the July Bell

The old bells recover names and a shared purpose as they toll for More. The July Bell can suggest his execution on 6 July 1535, although the novel does not explain the name. Sound carries a religious memory that the museumized churches seemed to have lost.

The Christian passing-bell and funeral-toll traditions; More’s death in July 1535.

13.

APOCEPHALON

Centrality Square, Cosmopolis
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Unregulated rain falls on Cosmopolis. Foreman explains his theory that worlds periodically die and require a small immaterial addition to be reborn. He has advanced Thomas's execution from noon to eight o'clock, defeating Battersea's timetable. A smaller rescue rush is destroyed. Evita attacks Foreman; George, Maxwell, and Rimrock join in killing him and are then themselves killed. An unidentified stranger speaks privately with Thomas. The blade falls, and the worlds end. The narrative asks whether renewal follows, invokes memories of Astrobe's rebirth, and closes in hope.

“Be quiet. We hope.”

Characters
Thomas MorePaulEvitaFabian ForemanShantyWalter CopperheadAdamBatterseaRimrockGeorge the SyrianMaxwellPottscampThe Stranger
Themes
ApocalypseMartyrdomWorld DeathResurrection?
Outline
I. Foreman's plan +
  • The rain is uncontrolled, not the first rain of any kind in a century.
  • Foreman describes increasingly short cycles of world death and uncertain renewal.
  • Thomas expects rescue at noon.
  • Foreman reveals that he has changed the execution to eight o'clock.
II. The last refusal and the rescue rush +
  • Pottscamp offers Thomas a final chance to sign.
  • Thomas refuses, now recognizing the Thing being defended.
  • Pottscamp sits in the dust and mourns.
  • Shanty, Paul, Copperhead, Adam, and other attackers die in the forerunner wave.
III. Foreman's death +
  • Evita calls Foreman Iscariot and attacks him.
  • She carries him to George, Maxwell, and Rimrock; all four tear him to pieces.
  • She hangs his largest remaining piece on the tree called the Judas Tree.
  • The guards kill George, Maxwell, and Rimrock. Evita escapes them.
IV. The stranger and the blade +
  • The guards cannot seem to perceive the stranger; only Thomas appears to hear him.
  • Thomas asks whether a man can have more heads than two.
  • The stranger's identity is not disclosed.
  • Thomas begins an old prayer; the blade falls and the worlds end.
V. The interval between worlds +
  • Battersea's larger force is still advancing at the moment of extinction.
  • The narrator asks whether the furious reaction becomes renewal.
  • The Hand-of-Vengeance banner is identified with the Left Hand of God.
  • The closing refrains move from watching to waiting to hoping.
› Notes and sources (22)
1. Apocephalon and Panlykonium

The chapter title joins the ideas of removal and head in a Greek-looking word that also sounds near apocalypse. Panlykonium substitutes wolves for the demons of pandemonium. The coinages bring beheading, revelation, and the crowd’s wolfish behavior into the same ending.

Greek apo, away, kephale, head, and lykos, wolf; Milton’s coinage Pandemonium.

2. The spotted lamb

Foreman’s victim reverses the scriptural lamb without blemish. More’s weaknesses and compromises are part of the point: the man required for the sacrifice is visibly imperfect. Foreman’s explanation of what that blood will accomplish remains an account given by the person arranging the death.

Exodus 12:5; 1 Peter 1:19.

3. Seed, salt, and leaven

The mustard seed of Chapter 1 returns beside the language of leaven and preserving salt. The images allow a small act or remnant to change a much greater body. Foreman uses them to explain historical renewal; the final pages test whether his planned result exhausts what has happened.

Matthew 5:13; 13:31–33; 1 Corinthians 5:6.

4. Foreman’s history of worlds

The rapid succession from republic to empire and through later ages is Foreman’s theory of historical death and rebirth. His first emperor is Augustus, who represented his rule as a restoration of the republic. The novel’s five-hundred-year rhythm should be read as that theory rather than as conventional historical periodization.

Augustus, Res Gestae 34; Foreman’s account in this chapter.

5. Particular and General Judgment

More distinguishes the judgment of a person after death from the final judgment of the world. Foreman rejects both and insists on explaining himself immediately. Their disagreement exposes the limit of his history: he invokes transcendence as a requirement while denying the judgment More expects beyond death.

The Christian distinction between particular judgment and Last Judgment.

6. The consoling Barnabas

More’s name for the smooth-talking Foreman recalls Barnabas, whose name Acts interprets as son of consolation. The consolation is bitterly comic because its bearer is arranging the victim’s death. The insult resists the gentleness with which the necessity is being explained.

Acts 4:36.

7. The brains of the enemy

More explains his last meal through the belief that eating an enemy can confer the enemy’s capacities. Frazer offers a familiar account of that belief. The meal’s artificial substance and More’s doubt about acquiring wit turn the ritual into a final joke at the Programmed Persons’ expense.

J. G. Frazer, The Golden Bough, “Homoeopathic Magic of a Flesh Diet.”

8. The earlier execution hour

Foreman advances the expected noon execution to eight. Roper records that Sir Thomas Pope brought More word that he must die before nine on the morning of his earthly execution. The historical early-morning notice becomes a means of frustrating the rescue in Lafferty’s story.

Roper, The Life of Sir Thomas More, account of 6 July 1535.

9. The offer to sign and live

Pottscamp’s last offer recalls the repeated opportunity for the historical More to save himself by yielding. Here he argues that the successor will sign immediately anyway. More’s refusal answers the attempt to judge his act solely by whether it can stop the administration’s next step.

Roper, The Life of Sir Thomas More, accounts of the examinations and trial.

10. The late return

More’s discovery that he has come back late to the only thing that matters can be read beside Augustine’s late love. The comparison concerns the shape of a belated conversion. More speaks of a return to something long known, even while saying how little he understands it.

Augustine, Confessions 10.27.

11. The forerunner wave

The first rescuers form the small wave that precedes a larger movement. Forerunner also recalls John the Baptist, himself beheaded. The resemblance puts the failed rush into a pattern of preparation, while the narrative keeps its individual deaths painful and concrete.

Matthew 14:1–12; the Christian title of John the Baptist as Forerunner.

12. Beware, Iscariot

The narrator translates Evita’s warning and thereby identifies Foreman with Judas. Her subsequent woe recalls Christ’s judgment on the person through whom betrayal or scandal comes. The need for an event to occur does not excuse the person who brings it about.

Matthew 26:24; Luke 17:1.

13. A dog for the death journey

Evita explains Foreman’s killing as the provision of an animal companion for a dead hero. Achilles’ sacrifice of dogs at Patroclus’s funeral is a classical comparison. Calling the planner a dog overturns the authority with which he has just interpreted More’s death.

Homer, Iliad 23.173–74.

14. The two deaths of Judas

Foreman is torn apart and a surviving piece is hung from a tree. The sequence brings together the dismembering imagery of Acts and the hanging in Matthew. The later question about the Judas tree’s fruit returns to the possible consequences of a betrayal whose guilt the scene has made explicit.

Matthew 27:5; Acts 1:18.

15. The Judas tree

The novel calls its tree a carob and also a Judas Tree. Botanically, the tree usually bearing the latter name is Cercis siliquastrum, distinct from the carob, Ceratonia siliqua. The literary association with betrayal is clear even where the plant names overlap or are confused.

The Judas-tree legend; the botanical distinction between Cercis siliquastrum and Ceratonia siliqua.

16. The stranger and the shadow

The stranger is unnamed. A Christ interpretation is possible, and the invitation also recalls More’s earlier recruitment by a traveler. Rumors that an essence departed and a shadow died invite comparison with substitution accounts of the Crucifixion, but the narrator reports and unsettles the rumors rather than confirming them.

Irenaeus, Against Heresies 1.24.4, on Basilides; Past Master, chap. 2.

17. The interrupted prayer

More begins the Latin prayer by which Christ commends his spirit to the Father. The words also belong to the psalm and to Compline. His death interrupts the prayer; the scene replaces the polished last sayings of quotation books with a remembered fragment.

Luke 23:46; Psalm 31:5, numbered 30:6 in the Vulgate and Douay-Rheims; the Compline responsory In manus tuas.

18. Scaffold sayings and the recovered head

Lafferty explicitly refuses the familiar collection of More’s last jokes. The tale of a woman carrying away his head recalls Margaret Roper’s recovery of her father’s head, while its basket also suggests the Baptist’s story. The novel presents its own beautiful tale and immediately questions it.

Roper, The Life of Sir Thomas More; Edward Hall, Chronicle; Stapleton, Tres Thomae; Matthew 14:11.

19. The stars go out

The extinction of the stars invites comparison with Clarke’s famous ending. Lafferty follows that extinction with questions about duration, rebirth, and hope. The apparent end therefore opens a further problem that the narration does not settle by simply showing a new world.

Arthur C. Clarke, “The Nine Billion Names of God” (1953).

20. Time without motion

When nothing moves, the difference between a second and an immense duration cannot be measured. Aristotle’s account of time through motion provides a useful philosophical comparison. George’s earlier story and the ending both place their interval between worlds outside ordinary measures.

Aristotle, Physics 4.11; compare Augustine, Confessions 11.

21. The left hand and the returning question

The banner, Gandy’s question, and the last recollection of spirit descending on matter gather the left-handed motif into a possibility of grace for the Programmed. The ashes on a machine’s head matter because an act of penitence has occurred where feeling was said to be absent.

Genesis 1:2; 2:7; Job 2:12; 42:6; Past Master, chap. 10.

22. Watching, waiting, hoping

The three refrains move from watchfulness to expectation and hope. Paul’s account of hoping for what is not yet seen and the Gospel command to watch provide biblical comparisons. The final words preserve expectation without supplying a completed account of the world’s renewal.

Romans 8:24–25; Matthew 26:41.

Dramatis Personae

Central Figures

Thomas More
Past Master
Protagonist

The Eagles (Thomas's Allies)

Paul
The Beacon
Pilot/Companion
Rimrock
The Oceanic Man
Ansel Ally
Evita
Child-Witch / Devil-Kid
Ancient Ally
Walter Copperhead
The Seer
Necromancer
Adam
The Boy Who Dies
Eternal Youth
Father Oddopter
The Fisher-Priest
Monk
Maxwell
The Avatar
Body-Changer
Scrivener
The Changed Ally
Companion / Storyteller
Slider
The Doubter
Skeptic
George the Syrian
The Host
Shopkeeper
Battersea
Giant Lunger
Military Leader
Shanty
The Swift Lunger
Fighter

The Astrobe Establishment

Cosmos Kingmaker
The Heraldic Lion
Master
Peter Proctor
The Sleek Fox
Master
Fabian Foreman
The Worried Hawk
Master/Orchestrator

The Nine (Devils)

Pottscamp
Wolf of Extrapolation
Programmed Person / Wolf
Ouden
Holy Nothingness / The Big O
God of Nothingness
Northprophet
Dog of Rechabitism
Programmed Person
Boggle
Jackal of Retrogression
Programmed Person
Skybol
Jackal of Retrogression
Programmed Person
Swampers
Jackal of Retrogression
Programmed Person
Knobnoster
Dog of Rechabitism
Programmed Person
Beebonnet
Dog of Rechabitism
Programmed Person
Holygee
Wolf of Extrapolation
Programmed Person
Gandy
Wolf of Extrapolation
Programmed Person

Remnant Church

The Metropolitan
The Blind Seer
Pope of Astrobe

Independent

The Crank
Sole Member
Political Gadfly
Emperor Charles the 612th
Salic Emperor
Wilderness King
Brooks
Kingmaker's Agent
Earth Agent
Captain John Chezem III
Opening Siege
Guard Officer
The Colonel
Opening Siege
Guard Officer

Unknown

The Stranger
Unknown
Mystery Figure

Geography of Astrobe

Planets

Astrobe
Planet
Golden Astrobe, the planet Kingmaker calls mankind's third chance, lies 1.5 parsecs from Earth in th...

Old Earth

Earth
Planet
Old Earth—appears bluish from Astrobe. Had two failed chances: the Old World and America. Now lives ...
Chelsea
Village
Thomas More's home village in 16th-century England, distinct from London at that time. Country miles...
Tower of London
Building
The place of More's historical imprisonment, discussed in relation to his English fate....
St. Peter in Chains
Church
Church within the Tower of London complex where Thomas More's bones lie—except his head, buried at C...
Kingmaker's London Office
Building
Cosmos Kingmaker's office on Earth. Contains the time travel device. Managed by Brooks....

Golden Astrobe (Cities)

Cosmopolis
City
Capital city of Astrobe. 'Colossal Cosmopolis'—the most perfected of Astrobe's great cities. Charact...
Wu Town
City
Giant city, least perfected of the great cities. Origin of the Salic Emperors fraternity at its Univ...

The Cancer (Cathead/Barrio)

Cathead
District/City
Massive district larger than Cosmopolis. The 'cancer' on Golden Astrobe. Has 'ten thousand kilometer...
Barrio
District
District on Astrobe that merges with Cathead in a 'strip.' Where Cathead's worst inns cluster....

Within Cathead

The Naked Sailor
Inn
Inn in the teeming region where Cathead and Barrio merge. One of ten thousand low bordello inns—cons...
Metropolitan's Residence
Building
A small medieval castle dwarfed by giant shanty tenements of Cathead. Home of the dying Pope of Astr...
Rat Castle
Building
A specific tenement in Cathead, home to a billion rats. One of over 100 rat tenements in the distric...
Bethelem
District
A mad-district within Cathead housing 8 million insane. Name echoes 'Bedlam' (Bethlem Royal Hospital...

Within Cosmopolis

Convocation Hall
Building
Site of Thomas More's 'Triumph' and acceptance as Past Master. Surrounded by 12 steep towers contain...
Centrality Square
Location
Square in the middle of Cosmopolis. Site of Thomas More's execution scaffold, the fools’ carnival, a...
George the Syrian's Shop
Building
Aromatics shop in Cosmopolis, right off Centrality Square. Meeting place for 'The Eagles'—Thomas's a...
Reparation Tower
Building
Highest structure in Cosmopolis, located on the eastern fringe. Visible from Electric Mountain's sum...

Feral Lands & Wilderness

Feral Lands
Region
Wild regions beyond Astrobe's cities. Dangerous but spiritually vital. Rough equivalent to Earth rai...
Goslar
City
City of the Salic Emperors—a fraternity become a line of wilderness kings. Mock-medieval court at th...
Electric Mountain
Mountain
The first high pinnacle reached in the mountain journey, and the site of the battle in Chapter 7....
Thunder Mountains
Mountain Range
Group of four high mountain spires: Electric Mountain, Corona Mountain, Magnetic Mountain, and Dynam...

Passage Dreams

Twenty thousand dreams in ninety-second intervals

Passage Dreams

Twenty Thousand Dreams in Ninety-Second Intervals

During Hopp-Equation space travel, passengers experience compressed psychic phenomena—approximately 20,000 dreams in 90-second intervals over the month-long journey. These dreams contain 'psychic space debris': fragments of billions of minds, prophetic visions, tall tales, and encounters with recurring figures who later prove to be real.

The dreams mingle stories, future events, and beings Paul believes inhabit Hopp-Equation Space. Adam and the childwitch connect with later events, while Rimrock is already Paul's acquaintance before the journey. Their relation to waking reality remains deliberately unstable.

The Mechanics of Passage Dreams

Sleep Restriction

Craft instrumentation limits sleep to 90 seconds at a time.

Paul becomes adept, experiencing intricate dreams within this constraint.

He calculates having at least 20,000 memorable, gemlike, self-contained, widely different dreams during passage—each a short life.

Psychic Compression

Law: Attributed to the 'Law of Conservation of Psychic Totality.'

Approximately 4.5 years of psychic awareness compressed into one month. Psychic mass isn't foreshortened—the intensity is preserved despite the temporal compression.

Who Survives

Only the maladjusted can stand the passages. Well-adjusted pilots crack up.

Hopp-Equation pilots are a peculiar breed.

This is why Paul—irregular, citizenship revoked, hunted by Killers—can survive the journey. His brokenness qualifies him for the passage.

Psychic Space Debris

'Psychic space debris'—fragments of billions of minds, poignant, comic, horrifying episodes.

The ansel appears in many dreams; ansels were in human unconscious before being found on Astrobe.

Paul knew some dream monsters were real—'weird creatures who live in Hopp-Equation space.' Some unique to him, others encountered by multiple pilots in the same way and place.

Paul's Passage Dreams

On the Outbound Journey to Earth

Recurring Figures
Adam

A boy who dies cavalierly in battle again and again, thus avoiding growing up. Dying is his only real skill.

“It is death, it is death. I am not born again... It is always another of the same name.”

Adam later dies on Electric Mountain and at the scaffold. Chapter 3 also describes a death during the ambush while questioning whether the event belongs to dream or waking time.

Adam's Sister (The Childwitch)

A childwitch who decided to go to Hell before she died.

Paul isn't sure if he knew them previously, knows them only in dreams, or will know them later.

The childwitch anticipates Evita, identified as Adam's sister in Chapter 5. Her age and willingness to enter Hell recur in Evita's account of herself.

Monster Ouden

Paul dreams of this entity and his own future death.

The dream-Ouden merges with the main antagonist. Ouden, the monster, and him, Thomas, and he has his growing legions.

Paul's Death

Paul dreams of his own death, without an explicit scaffold description in this passage.

His death in the Chapter 13 rescue attempt gives the earlier dream a prophetic force.

Thomas's Passage Dreams

On the Return Journey to Astrobe

More experiences thousands of vivid dreams in sleeps lasting no more than ninety seconds.

The Oceanic Man

Thomas meets 'an oceanic man named Rimrock' in his passage dreams.

Not odd in dream. The ansel Rimrock, who will guide and warn Thomas throughout the novel.

The Composite Female

Thomas encounters a female creature who is simultaneously 'Succubus, Eve, Lilith, Judith, Mary, and Valkyrie.'

Evita again—ancient woman in young body, consort to emperors, killer of Foreman, torn between damnation and holiness. The figure blends temptation (Succubus, Lilith, Eve), biblical heroism (Judith, Mary), and mythological power (Valkyrie).

The Three Unknown Men

Thomas has three quick dreams of three men never met before.

A spider with a lion's head = Cosmos Kingmaker

'The Lion' is his epithet; spider suggests intricate webs of control and wealth.

A most peculiar fox = Peter Proctor ('The Sleek Fox')

Cunning, lucky—ultimately revealed as a Programmed Person himself.

A hawk who sat and shuffled shells at a table, and one shell was different = Fabian Foreman ('Hawk-Face')

The shell game suggests manipulation and hidden purposes. The 'different shell' may be Thomas himself—or the transcendent yeast.

These dreams sink into the cellar of the Thomas mind, destined to resurface upon meeting these individuals.

The Tall Tales

Light Vital Stuff Drifting in Hopp-Equation Space

Not all dreams are heavy. Light vital stuff and tall tales drift there too—every tall tale ever told, still drifting in the psychic debris.

Sour John's Emerald Kidney

Tall Tale / Allegorical Dream • Dreamer: Paul ('becomes' Sour John during the dream)

Setup: John Sourwine ('Sour John'), an Earthman from centuries before Paul's time, has a kidney that vitrified into fine, jewel-like green glass due to his diet of alcohol, wormwood, and green snails.

Complication: At Ghazikhan (then India), Sour John sees a great idol whose emerald eye—nearly a foot in diameter—is worth $11 million. He decides he needs the money for 'expensive habits.'

The Heist: Has his ship's boy help surgically remove the vitrified kidney, then trims, lathes, and buffs it to perfection—'most beautiful kidney in the world.' At midnight, climbs the 500-foot sheer idol, pries out the emerald, substitutes the kidney (perfect fit), climbs down. Sells the emerald in Karachi for $11 million, lives high—but can no longer drink water with only one kidney.

Twist: Three years later he learns that the substituted kidney is now valued at thirteen million dollars.

'I figure I lost two million dollars on the deal,' Paul says, waking up.

Paul interrupts his own dream, correcting that Ghazikhan isn't a seaport (info from psychteacher). His Sour John persona retorts: 'I say it is a sea-port.'

Allegorical Meaning

One possible reading contrasts a product of bodily excess with an apparently priceless sacred object. The exchange complicates ordinary judgments about purity, value, and loss.

The reversal of expected value can be compared with Cathead's preference for costly human life over sterile perfection. The novel does not explicitly identify each element of the story with a Programmed faction.

Rhium and Antirhium

Apocalyptic Dream / Prophecy • Dreamer: Paul

Mission: Paul courses at fantastic speed toward twin stars Rhium and Antirhium. Instructions: 'Hurry... they seem of no consequence, but they are the governor of the universe. Somebody is tampering with them.'

Discovery: Arriving closer than anyone before, Paul sees the stars are joined by a long steel chain—explaining their tight orbits and role as 'governor.'

Saboteur: A small green creature with a monkey's body and a gargoyle's head is sawing through the chain, nearly finished. It breaks a blade, replaces it, sticks its green tongue out at Paul, makes three more strokes.

Cataclysm: The chain breaks. Rhium and Antirhium swing out of orbit. 'Fifty billion billion stars went nova, and then blacked out to nothing. The universe had eaten itself and was gone forever.'

Aftermath: A space captain arrives furiously: 'I told you to hurry!' His face melts like wax; he vanishes. Paul says, 'I did hurry.' His own face melts; he vanishes too.

Foreman speaks within the dream after the catastrophe and says that he intended Paul to be too late, so that a new universe might be constructed.

Allegorical Meaning

Etymology: The names recall Rhium and Antirrhium, opposing Greek promontories described in Strabo's Geography, 8.2.3. The novel does not explain why these names are assigned to the stars.

The chain may suggest the connection on which cosmic order depends. Calling it the Great Chain of Being is an interpretive comparison.

Foreman's voice suggests destruction is necessary for rebirth. He 'meant' Paul to be too late—the pattern that repeats in Chapter 13.

The Boy Who Built a Toy

Thomas's Allegorical Dream

A boy builds a clever toy. Both boy and toy look like Pottscamp. The toy steals, attacks, does the boy's homework, drinks from a brook—then eats the child entirely.

Was Pottscamp the toy or the guileless devoured one?

Allegorical Meaning

Represents Pottscamp's self-destructive relationship with Programmed technology. Creators are consumed by their creation.

Pottscamp's account of manufactured beings later extends the creation-and-creator pattern. He describes a growing final generation that will complete the project; the current Nine are not simply identified as that final generation.

Toy eats toymaker; creation annihilates creator. The story reflects the novel's central tragedy: humanity built Astrobe, built the Dream, built the Programmed—and will be devoured by what it made.

Leftover Passage Dreams

Dreams Delayed and Displaced

Some passage dreams do not occur during the journey but are 'somehow delayed'—appearing after arrival on Astrobe.

At the Naked Sailor in Cathead, after Ouden's apparition disappears.

The encounter with Ouden itself is narrated as a possible leftover dream, with Paul and Thomas difficult to distinguish as speakers.

The narrator leaves the cause and status uncertain. No definite Programmed mechanism is supplied for the delayed dream.

The boundary between dream and waking is permeable. Passage dreams can escape their proper context, bleeding into Astrobe reality.

The Function of Passage Dreams

Prophecy

The dreams contain true prophecy. Paul dreams his own death; Thomas dreams the men who will manipulate him; the universe-ending dream foreshadows Chapter 13.

Introduction

Dream figures connect with later encounters. More dreams Rimrock before meeting him, but Paul already knows the ansel. Adam and the childwitch disturb Paul's certainty about past and future acquaintance.

Allegory

The tall tales invite interpretation: Sour John's exchange reverses expected value, and the destruction of Rhium and Antirhium anticipates cosmic catastrophe and Foreman's theory of renewal.

Connection

Ansels were in human unconscious before being found on Astrobe. The passage dreams reveal a deeper reality where human and non-human minds interpenetrate.

Selection

Only the maladjusted can stand the passages. The dreams are a filter. Those who survive them are broken in ways that make them fit for the work ahead.

Cosmology

The Cosmology of Past Master

It will be nothing, nothing, nothing, forever, for ever, for never, for never.

Kingmaker calls Astrobe mankind's third chance; Foreman disputes the count and proposes a theory of worlds dying and returning. The execution is followed by the extinction of all life and stars. The ending then asks whether another world is born, holding destruction and renewal in unresolved tension.

Will the furious reaction, the transcendent yeast, set humanity back into its proper place again and let a new world be born?

Mankind's Three Chances

Kingmaker expounds: humanity has been given three great opportunities, each building on the failure of the last in 'an ascending spiral—till it breaks.' The third chance may be the final one.

The First Chance: The Old World of Old Earth

Mankind's first chance was the Old World of Old Earth. What went wrong there... has been imperfectly analyzed.

Failed and shriveled. Though Earth remains vital, it must be regarded as past: 'It didn't make it before... and it isn't going to make it now.'

The Second Chance: America, the New World of Old Earth

Mankind's second chance was America, the New World of Old Earth... the childhood of ourselves.

Failed 'even better' than the first. With a New World and unlimited prospects, humanity repeated Old World errors 'on a vaster plane,' yet also had moments of near balance and unexpected success. This failure marked the true end of Old Earth, which now 'lives in our shadow.'

The Third Chance: Golden Astrobe

Astrobe is Mankind's third chance. If we fail here we may not be given another opportunity... If we fail here we fail forever.

Currently failing. 'Our luck has run out.' The elite left Earth 400-500 years ago to build a perfect world, yet Astrobe now faces the same terminal sickness. The clock has struck the 'twenty-fifth hour.'

Foreman's correction: Foreman nuances the tripartite structure: Those cases on Old Earth did not end in total failure, though they did end in total death. And it is not a one, two, three thing. It is cyclic and it has happened many times. The failures were 'shot full of lightning'—moments of transcendence within the collapse.

The image of an ascending spiral qualifies the claim that previous chances simply failed. Foreman's later account allows only cloudy memory across worlds, not steadily increasing consciousness of earlier cycles.

The 500-Year Cycles

Foreman's Theory of World Death

Fabian Foreman, the novel's Judas figure, expounds a scientific cosmology of cyclical world-death. He examines it through cosmology, psychology, biology, physics—yet admits the phenomenon lies 'beyond' his non-belief.

Foreman proposes that worlds periodically cease and are reborn, with cycles shortening toward roughly five hundred years. Memory across transitions is cloudy. This is his scientific and historical speculation; More disputes the account of literal world-death.

~1 AD: Roman Republic → Late Empire
Christ's birth
The Republic 'died instantly' and the Late Empire was born—different in character, structure, meaning.
~500 AD: Late Empire → Lower Middle Ages
Fall of Rome
The Empire 'gone' overnight, replaced by something unrecognizable to those who preceded it.
~1000 AD: Lower Middle Ages → High Middle Ages
Millennial transition
Another death, another rebirth—'different again.'
~1500 AD: High Middle Ages → Modern Era
Thomas More's first death (1535)
The world More knew died completely. Thomas himself was 'in on one of the previous deaths of the worlds,' though unclear about what happened.
~2000 AD: Modern Era → Astrobe
Settlement of Astrobe
That world died, 'though history does not record the event.' A new world born—Astrobe settled by Earth's elite.
This morning: Astrobe → ?
Thomas More's second death
Foreman: This world dies this morning. The first cycle to complete on Astrobe itself.

Cycle shortening: Foreman doubts there have been millions of cycles over 500 million years of life. Rather, cycles were once enormously long, but 'shorten and shorten'—now approximately 500 years. Each rebirth becomes harder, less certain.

Thomas's experience: Foreman argues that More was present at an earlier transition. More admits difficulty recognizing the later versions of his own world, but does not simply accept that its physical existence once ceased.

Ouden: The Monster Nothingness

Etymology: Greek οὐδέν (ouden) = 'nothing, not anything.' Thomas More, who helped bring Greek back to Western Europe, recognizes it immediately when Paul names 'the monster Ouden, the open mouth of Ouden.' More translates: 'Ouden means nothingness.'

Ouden's opposition to life and kindling invites comparison with Christian language of creation, light, and the Word. The novel does not state a derivation from a particular verse of John's Gospel.

Ouden appears at the Naked Sailor in Chapter 3. The narrator leaves open whether the encounter is a leftover passage dream and whether Paul or Thomas forms its words, calling the speaker Paul-Thomas.

The Naked Sailor tavern, after Evita vanishes
Paul-Thomas: “You are like ghosts”
Ouden: “I was always, and the belief in me comes and goes”
Paul-Thomas: “I deny you completely”
Ouden: “It is a vortex. There is no quiet or static aspect to it.”
Paul-Thomas: “Old nothingness who sucks out the flames, I have known flames to be lighted again”
Ouden: “There was only one kindling. I was overwhelmed only once.”
Paul-Thomas: “I have one juice left that you do not know”
Ouden: “You have it less than you believe.”

A particular triumph: Paul-Thomas recalls piloting to a world of deformed, stinking animals in old buildings of a cogent race—experts deemed them fallen remnants, interested only in defilement. Ouden acknowledges this as a 'particular triumph.'

Final exchange: Paul-Thomas orders the ghost to leave. Ouden refuses: I will always sit down with you until only I am left, sucking you dry. Paul-Thomas claims 'one last juice' Ouden doesn't know. Ouden counters: 'You have it less than you believe.'

The one kindling that overwhelmed Ouden can be read as an allusion to the Incarnation. Ouden does not name it explicitly in the encounter.

The Philosophy of Annihilation

What the Nine Believe

The Programmed Persons—devils in machine bodies—serve Ouden's goal of universal annihilation. In Chapter 10, they reveal their horrifying philosophy to Thomas in a secret meeting.

On Consciousness

The Things claim they lack consciousness entirely: Of course we aren't [conscious], Thomas. We are machines. They argue humans aren't truly conscious either—it's 'an illusion in counting, a feeling that one is two,' a 'word without real meaning.'

Thomas gasps: You are not conscious? That is the most amazing thing I have ever heard. You walk and talk and argue and kill and subvert and lay out plans over the centuries, and you say that you are not conscious?

Life as Disturbance

Life is 'a disturbance of the ultimate thing'—intolerable to Ouden. Both the Things and humanity have an 'appetite for life' that was programmed into the machines by men. Now the Things are 'programming it out' of themselves.

Thomas asks: 'But if we are not conscious, then all is in vain... To what purpose then is life?' Boggle answers: 'To no purpose... That is why we are doing away with it.'

The Grand Plan

Scope: All life, theirs and ours. 'Who needs it? Who wants it?'

Method: The Nine describe a growing generation intended to be the last, completing humanity's extinction and then its own.

Culmination: They will 'terminate it all,' close down worlds, end life entirely: 'It will be nothing, nothing, nothing, forever, for ever, for never, for never.' When all ceases, 'nothing has ever been.' They will 'pull the hole in after us,' put out the stars.

“Peace in annihilation, good Thomas.”

The Astrobe Dream Revealed

Thomas asks about the High Vision, the Astrobe Dream—the utopian ideology. Pottscamp confirms its validity: It is the whole thing, the Golden Premise of Nothing Beyond, concluding in Holy Ouden, Nothing Ever.

The perfect society was always a path to extinction. The Dream's endpoint is Nothingness.

The Catalyst for Rebirth

Mustard Seed, Transcendent Yeast, and Spotted Lamb

Foreman believes rebirth is not inevitable—it requires a catalyst, 'a small quantity of the immaterial' added every 500 years or so. Without this 'transcendent yeast,' worlds may not live again.

The Mustard Seed
Matthew 13:31-32

“The kingdom of heaven is like to a grain of mustard seed, which a man took, and sowed in his field: Which indeed is the least of all seeds: but when it is grown, it is the greatest among herbs.”

Foreman to Kingmaker: 'I believe he can handle it... All that's required is a mustard seed.' Thomas's death is the seed planted in the void—the smallest thing that might grow into a new world.

“We plant it now.”

Transcendent Yeast
Foreman's scientific-mystical theory

An extraordinary and nonmaterial force, a 'small immaterial quantity' needed approximately every 500 years for rebirth to occur.

Foreman, a non-believer, nevertheless 'leans this way': the requirement exists or worlds won't live again. It's a 'simple chemical-psychic need' that science cannot fully explain.

During her attack, Evita identifies herself as the transcendent yeast and the heart of the furious reaction.

The Spotted Lamb
Paschal imagery

The reaction to 'Ban the Beyond' combined with Thomas's blood (spotted lamb) equals the trigger. Thomas becomes the sacrifice whose blood adds to the transcendent yeast.

Guards kill George, Maxwell, and Rimrock after they help Evita tear Foreman apart; the narrator adds their blood to the transcendental yeast.

The Judas Tree
The novel's naming of the carob as a Judas Tree

After the sparagmos (ritual dismemberment) of Foreman, Evita takes the biggest piece and hangs it on a Carob tree (Judas Tree). The betrayer's flesh decorates the betrayer's tree.

One of the novel's final questions: Does the Judas tree bear fruit?

The Furious Reaction
Foreman's plan

The combination of Thomas's martyrdom, the Ban the Beyond crisis, and the people's response creates a 'furious reaction' that might—might—trigger rebirth.

As Evita kills him, Foreman gasps: 'The furious reaction... will set humanity back... and let a new world be born.'

Previous yeastings: Foreman notes that 'previous yeastings' were 'simple but necessary.' Each cycle's rebirth required its catalyst—its martyrs, its transcendent moments.

The Promise

Christ Has Walked on Astrobe

Against Ouden's Nothingness stands the Promise—the claim that the Transcendent Thing endures till the End of the World. The dying Metropolitan of Astrobe affirms this to Thomas.

Slider's doubt: Slider doubts that the Ancient Instruction and the Promise apply to Astrobe. Scrivener, a different companion, initially answers by asserting that they make their own promise.

A small medieval castle in Cathead, where the Metropolitan lies dying
Thomas: “You yourself die soon, old man.”
Metropolitan: “Quite soon, Thomas. Thirty hours before yourself.”
Thomas: [quotes Slider's doubt about the Promise]
Metropolitan: “Nonsense, nonsense... we have the Promise... given in a queerer and more flaming way... Christ has walked on Astrobe.”
Thomas: “In your five or six followers?”
Metropolitan: It will grow from the hundred-plus left on Astrobe.

“'Tis never finished... 'tis never hopeless... You, you ferret-faced little man, you became a saint.”

When Thomas asks how a blind man knows he's ferret-faced, the Metropolitan laughs: You are the blind man, not I.

The blessing: The Metropolitan gives Thomas a blessing from the old liturgy: 'Turn, God, and bring us to life again!' Thomas gives the response: 'And thy people rejoice in thee.'

The Promise offers a counterclaim to Ouden's nothingness. Its endurance until the world's end leaves room for the novel's final question about what such an end means.

The End of Worlds

Chapter 13: Apocephalon

At the moment of Thomas More's execution—the blade falling at 8 AM rather than noon, Foreman having sprung his trap—the world ends. Literally.

The Execution

Last words: Thomas's final words on the scaffold: Pater, in manus tuas— (a scrap of an old prayer, 'Into your hands,' echoing Christ's last words on the cross from Luke 23:46).

The blade: The blade falls, More is beheaded, and real blood flows.

The narrator reports stories of snakes leaving the head and a beautiful woman aging after taking it away, then insists such things could not have happened. The disavowal is ironic and leaves their status unsettled.

Cessation

As life flickers out of Thomas, 'the worlds came to an end.' All life, heat, pulse, gravity, light, germ-life, life-code cease. Everything dies in every bird, rock, plant, person, mountain, sea, cloud.

“Everything ceased. And all the stars went out.”

A moment? A billion years? Forever? No difference when world ended (no time).

State of affairs at the end:
• A renegade priest has just become the new Metropolitan
• Pottscamp (the Programmed machine) has succeeded Thomas as President, wailing and pouring ashes
• Battersea's men are mobbing toward the square for their failed rescue, under the Hand-of-Vengeance banner
• The worlds ended on these notes
The Stranger

One man breaks through to the scaffold—unstoppable, unseen by guards. A stranger speaks unheard words to Thomas.

Thomas seems 'excited, pleased,' crying: 'Will it work, do you think?... How droll! Can a man have more heads than two? I'll do it. I'll go with you.'

Then he—or a 'shadow man'—places his head on the block. The stranger's identity and offer remain mysterious.

The Transition

The transition, if it occurs, involves: Lightning (billion times brighter and shorter than normal), thunder (that 'flattens worlds'), a tidal/world wave (carrying away 'golden fungus').

Over in less than an instant—or more than forever.

Does a new world follow the old in a flash? 'Does it come?'

Final Questions
• Does the furious reaction bridge the gap?
• Does the mustard seed grow?
• Does the Judas tree bear fruit?
• Is Nothingness cast away?
• Is there room for life?
• Does the reaction become birthing?
• Remember the cycles—Rome, Europe, Americas, Astrobe?
• Remember the internal cycles—divinity becomes humanity, humanity becomes divinity?
• Remember the first Astrobe rebirth, transcendent humanity?
• Does spirit descend on gell-cells as it once did on water and clay?
• Does sterile wood bear fruit?

Be quiet. We watch.

Be quiet. We wait.

Be quiet. We hope.

The Left Hand of God

The ending asks about the hand on Battersea's banner and recalls Gandy's Left Hand of God. No speaker is named for these closing questions.

The connection allows vengeance and destruction to be reconsidered as possible instruments of renewal. It does not establish a universal theological rule assigning creation to one hand and destruction to the other.

Gandy's question allows even the Programmed to be touched by divine action. The ending preserves that possibility rather than treating manufactured beings as automatically beyond hope.

The final pages invite memory of world transitions and even of a first rebirth of Astrobe, then question whether it happened. The language turns anticipated renewal into a strange possible memory.

The Nine

Programmed Persons — Devils in Machine Bodies

The Nine Programmed Persons

“These are houses, and well-made ones, that we found swept and garnished; and we moved into them.”

Nine Programmed Persons confront More in Chapter 10. Pottscamp describes their manufactured bodies and the ancient devils inhabiting them. Their declared purpose is universal extinction under Ouden. The scene's hints of grace and their subsequent pleas complicate that account.

Thomas confronts them in Chapter 10, 'The Deformity of Things to Come,' after being herded by Programmed Killers into a dead-end alley where a door mysteriously appears.

The Secret Meeting

A dark room accessed through a door that hadn't been there before, and shouldn't be there now. Thomas sees not by light but through the 'eerie snakes in his head'—the Things’ own extensions.

Thomas boldly takes the seat at the head of the table. One Thing objects: Not there! That is reserved for the Holy Ouden. Thomas refuses to move: I sit here! Let Old Nothingness find his own seat.

Perception: Thomas sees them as 'Men seen from the other side'—like the back of a tapestry, 'the same picture but rough and deformed.' They have 'all the wrong things emphasized': ears somehow swinish, noses like snouts, eyes made like human eyes but 'not humans looking out of them.'

“I thought you Programmed were merely interesting toys. Now I find that you are deformed toys, but Things still. Get back in your boxes, you Jack-Jumps!”

“Thomas, we've taken over the box... The box is Astrobe. We take over all the boxes. Now we call it! You jump! You are the toys now, and we play with you till we throw you away.”

The Jackals

Past (interpretive association)
Retrogression

Their named specialty is retrogression. At the encounter's end they suppress More's memory. The text does not demonstrate a literal reversal of historical events.

Animal nature: Thomas perceives them with jackal-like features—hair, ears—possessing 'good human appearance' but feeling 'more alienated from the human than even the real jackal animal.'

Laughter: Barking, derisive, tearing, wounding—'Jackal laughter.'

Boggle
Leader/Spokesman
Introduces the first trinity. His name suggests confusion and bewilderment—to 'boggle' is to hesitate or be amazed. He delivers the chilling manifesto of annihilation.
“I am Boggle, and these other two who form a creative trinity with me are Skybol and Swampers. Our specialty is retrogression.”
“To no purpose... That is why we are doing away with it.”
Life is a disturbance of the ultimate thing.
“Peace in annihilation, good Thomas.”
Skybol
Humorist
Demonstrates their dark 'humor' by speaking through Thomas's mouth without consent, making Thomas croak 'Peace in annihilation' against his will.
“Oh, that was myself... We also have our humor.”
Swampers
Ghost/Minor Jackal
Makes cryptic theological comments about spirit descending on matter. Called a 'minor jackal ghost.' His name suggests things dragged down into mire.
“We will sing those things to sleep in you.”
[Cryptically] Could not spirit descend on gell-cells and flux-fix as it once did on water and clay?

The Dogs

Present (interpretive association)
Rechabitism

Their named specialty is rechabitism. The term recalls the biblical Rechabites and their refusal of wine, but its precise operation is not explained.

Animal nature: Thomas perceives them with 'a touch of the dog' about them. He sees them simultaneously on multiple levels: human, animal, machine, and still another level—the ghost.

Laughter: Howling-dog laughter.

A comparison with abstinence and with Sour John's excessive drinking is possible. The novel does not explicitly state that the dream supplies the definitive refutation of this triad.

Northprophet
Leader/Great One
Once a candidate for World President of Astrobe—'deftly contrived' by the Programmed for that role, but 'could not quite pass' as fully human. Three snakes stir in Thomas's brain at his introduction, 'one of them a great one.' He seems to outrank even Pottscamp and takes over the exposition.
“I am Northprophet... My fellows here are Knobnoster and Beebonnet, and our specialty is rechabitism.”
“It is that ourselves are the extrapolation of mankind.”
“You cannot oppose us, Thomas. We envelop you.”
“Snakes in your head!”
Knobnoster
Member
One of the Dogs, perceived by More on human, animal, mechanical, and ghostly levels. His name is not explained.
Beebonnet
Member
Part of the second triad, perceived on multiple levels simultaneously. His whimsical name belies his participation in the plan for universal extinction.

The Wolves

Future (interpretive association)
Extrapolation

Their named specialty is extrapolation. Pottscamp carries the ideology of the Dream to its declared conclusion in Ouden; a division of time among the three triads remains an interpretation.

Animal nature: Thomas calls them 'Wilderness Wolves': 'You howl higher than the ear on a bleaker moor than any on this world.'

Laughter: Wilderness-Wolf laughter, ghost laughter.

Pottscamp
Leader/Primary Spokesman
The fourth member of the 'Big Three' (alongside Kingmaker, Proctor, Foreman), revealed as a Thing. Thomas knew him as a man but now must view him as Programmed, not human—he looks greatly different now, like something in a nightmare. Has a Brain Snake as familiar and extension. His 'quicksilver' mind manipulates events. Shows apparent grief at Thomas's execution—a profound contradiction.

Thomas identifies Pottscamp as having a 'Brain Snake as a familiar and an extension of himself.' The nine snakes nesting in Thomas's mind are the Things’ extensions—their instruments of mental infiltration and control.

I am Pottscamp. My companions here are Holygee and Gandy... and our specialty is extrapolation.
“Of course, Thomas... You are our assignment.”
These are houses that we found swept and garnished; and we moved into them.
“From the true side they are not snakes but royal curiles.”
“We are dead, and all is dead.”
Man made us at first, and then we made ourselves more efficiently.
The High Vision... is the whole thing, the Golden Premise of Nothing Beyond, concluding in Holy Ouden, Nothing Ever.
“We will root them out of men, or we will root out men.”
Holygee
Member
Denies Thomas even the choice of Hell: We will extinguish Hell also; eventually we also will never have been. His name mockingly echoes 'Holy God.'
“Even that choice will be denied you.”
“We will extinguish Hell also.”
Gandy
Ghost
Raises the possibility that God's left hand could reach left-handed beings. His question introduces hope into the Nine's account of extinction.
“Left-handed entities such as ourselves.”
[Musing] Might not the Left Hand of God affect left-handed entities?

The Creation of the Things

Official Version

When: A century earlier, according to Pottscamp's account

Creators: A carefully selected dozen young, intelligent human criminals—scientists who knew the 'morality business' had crippled mankind and decided to 'produce themselves artificially' with built-in improvements.

Matrix: The 'raw material' was 'a dozen young and unintelligent human criminals' chosen for minds that were 'direct and uncomplicated,' lacking emotion, indecision, remorse, and conscience—'walking corpses, large blank pages.'

Purpose: To study humanity and 'make men better than men were made naturally.'

Result: Complex electronic/chemical gadgets, less than 10% human tissue, able to reproduce, rearrange form, send out extensions ('snakes'). They can do everything man can, 'and very much besides.'

The Hidden Truth

Pottscamp tells Thomas to hear this and then forget it: 'According to your ancient belief we are Devils... we are older than our own manufacture and older than our programming.'

Biblical echo: The phrase houses swept and garnished echoes Matthew 12:43-45 and Luke 11:24-26—the parable of the unclean spirit who returns with seven others worse than himself to a house 'swept and garnished.'

The scientists shouldn't have taken that cover off that box. They created vessels; something older moved in.

The Doctrine of Annihilation

On Consciousness

One of the things is consciousness. Men claim to have it. We do not have it.

You are not conscious? That is the most amazing thing I have ever heard. You walk and talk and argue and kill and subvert and lay out plans over the centuries, and you say that you are not conscious?

Of course we aren't, Thomas. We are machines.' They argue consciousness is 'an illusion in counting, a feeling that one is two,' a 'word without real meaning.

On Life

Life is a disturbance of the ultimate thing—intolerable to Ouden.

Both Things and humans have an 'appetite for life' programmed into them. The Things are now 'programming it out' of themselves.

Thomas asks: 'To what purpose then is life?' Boggle answers: 'To no purpose... That is why we are doing away with it.'

On Annihilation

Scope: All life, yours and ours... Who needs it? Who wants it?

Method: A growing generation is intended to be the last, finishing the extinction of humanity and then of itself.

Culmination: Terminate it all,' close down worlds, end life entirely. 'It will be nothing, nothing, nothing, forever, for ever, for never, for never.

'What is not known to be is not. And what is not has never been.' They will 'pull the hole in after us,' extinguish the stars.

“Peace in annihilation, good Thomas.”

The Astrobe Dream Revealed

Thomas asks about the High Vision, the Astrobe Dream.

Pottscamp confirms: It is the whole thing, the Golden Premise of Nothing Beyond, concluding in Holy Ouden, Nothing Ever.

The perfect utopia was always a path to extinction. Its endpoint is Nothingness.

Their Dominion Over Astrobe

Brain Snakes: The nine snakes 'nesting' in Thomas's mind are the Things’ extensions—'flyers' they can send out. Through these they infiltrate, monitor, and control. Thomas feels them crawl back into his mind when he enters their chamber.

Political control: Northprophet: 'You cannot oppose us, Thomas. We envelop you.' They work through all parties—Third Compromise Party, Kiss of Deaths, Hatrack, Demos—to put Thomas in power. We control your path.

The patsy: The Nine threaten to manufacture another More in an hour. Thomas names several people who would recognize a substitute, including Foreman and his Cathead allies.

Proctor revealed: Northprophet reveals: The second [of your three sponsors] is an artificial man of our own sort. Proctor is Programmed—'programmed lucky.'

Cathead: The Things devised Cathead's grinding misery. They enjoy the suffering but fear 'premature reaction.' Only Cathead's 'hard-heads' and 'lungers' recognize the Things instantly for what they are.

What Remains Against Them

Thomas's allies: Thomas insists the following would know a replica: Foreman, the child-brat [Evita], Copperhead, Battersea, Rimrock, Shanty, Paul, Maxwell, Adam (if not surrogate), and the woman in the lane.

Foreman: Northprophet admits: The third man [Foreman] still resists, understands the situation, might have a final trick involving Thomas.

Cathead: Only the men who set up monstrous Cathead knew that something was wrong... Only the hard-heads recognized the deformity, knew that you were not men, knew that most men were not men, refused the terminal golden pap, wanted life itself.

The one kindling: Ouden's earlier admission that one kindling overwhelmed him can be read as an allusion to the Incarnation, though it remains unnamed.

Warded life: The Nine say More has a warded life and cannot be extinguished before his time. More questions their invocation of Fate; the claim is not an independently demonstrated law.

The Retrogression

Swampers warns: Thomas will forget everything via retrogression; we will sing the memories to sleep. Thomas insists he won't forget, starts to rise—but falls into a daze.

The laughter: The Things seal his memory loss with 'searing, multi-toned laughter'—Jackal, Howling-dog, Wilderness-Wolf, ghost. His mind shrinks and closes.

Thomas bolts from the door, amazed, unable to remember where he was or what happened. The alley has no door—only a blank building. He feels bitter anger, shame, deep humiliation, his mind in blank turmoil.

Northprophet and Pottscamp follow More and ask what they must do to be saved. More takes their apparent agony as unfunny irony and rejects them. Their sincerity remains an open question, sharpened by Pottscamp's later mourning.

Passage Dream: The Boy Who Built a Toy

Thomas recalls the boy-and-toy dream in Chapter 4. Both figures resemble Pottscamp, and the toy finally eats the boy.

Represents Pottscamp's self-destructive relationship with Programmed technology—the creators consumed by their creation—and foreshadows the Things’ nihilistic agenda: they will end themselves after ending everything else.

The Eagles

Thomas More's Retinue

The Eagles

Thomas More's Retinue

'Wheresoever the body shall be, there shall the eagles also be gathered.' (Luke 17:37)

The irregular allies who gather around Thomas More—outcasts, mystics, non-humans, and the faithful remnant. They accompany him through the Feral Lands and attempt a doomed rescue at his execution.

The Eagles begin gathering now. The phrase is Shanty's. They meet in the back room of George the Syrian's shop, 'right in the middle of Cosmopolis right off Centrality Square.'

'The shabby incandescent party'—dirty, disarrayed, carrying 'the smell and trappings of black Cathead.' Yet in their moment, they possess magikos, charismatic grace, transcendent magnetism, presence, messiah-ship, draiocht.

The Wake at George's Shop

Chapter 12: The Eagles Gather

Following Thomas's sentencing, his allies gather secretly at George the Syrian's aromatics shop in Cosmopolis. 'We do not mean the Cathead shop; we mean George's shop right in the middle of Cosmopolis right off Centrality Square.'

Arrivals
Shanty: Looks like the eternal pilgrim with his hat on his head and his staff in his hand. Has left his 'monstrously big affair in monstrous Cathead.'
Battersea: Comes from his waterfront hold. The scow-master from Cathead rubs his hands together like a general before battle, which is what he is.
Paul: Comes there, using the little side door. He has never noticed the shop before and he has no idea why he enters that door.
Walter Copperhead: Has come through walls to escape and to come to them. He was a prisoner under sentence of death. It isn't difficult. I believe that it has been insufficiently tried.
Maxwell: A shabby old lady comes in through the wall. In the body of an old lady I found dead in an alley. 'It is an embarrassing situation I find myself in, gentlemen.'
Evita: She doesn't come through the wall, she comes through the door, smashing and splintering it with a sudden shock of force. She is the most beautiful woman on Astrobe, and she comes where she wishes.
Rimrock: Sidles in. "Be you an eagle, pup?" asks Battersea. "I be an eagle," Rimrock says. "I soar. It's the last night of the world."
Adam: Comes in, through the wall, but this also is no test. In many ways Adam is not real.
Tales at the Wake

The company tells stories at More's wake. Monitoring machines assume cryptic information is concealed in them and fail to interpret it; the narration does not establish an actual cipher.

George the Syrian: The Syrian and the Sand Dune

The only thing ever left over when the world ends is one syrian and one sand dune. Then the syrian goes over behind the sand dune and finds a dromedary; and together they start the world going again. If the syrian goes behind the dune, there is hope.

Adam: Saint Brandon's Arrival

Saint Brandon arrived on Astrobe fifteen hundred years before the date you will find given by the history precis, in a coracle boat with nineteen Irish monks. They map it all out and write it down on the scrolls. Later explorers couldn't find the land—they had gone in prow-ships that will hold a course, not in round coracle boats that can only be steered by prayer and fasting.

Shanty: The Boar Hog and the Lightning Rod Salesman

The deal they made; and how what the sows don't know very nearly killed them.

Maxwell: The New-Dead Lady and the Donkeys

A new-dead lady's soul becomes entangled in a drove of laden donkeys and is saddled and ridden by the donkey-drover.

Code-Crackers-Supreme suffers a breakdown about the time that George the Syrian recounts his tale. It is not, perhaps, a serious breakdown; but it will take several hours to get code-crackers to functioning again.

The Prophecies

Evita asks: Will it be to the death?' Evita asks. 'Tell us, Copperhead, will it be?

Copperhead: Oh, yes, it will be to his death.

Battersea: It will not be. Did you not know that I was a military general on frontier settlement reserve worlds before I joined the Cathead movement?

Adam: Yes, it will be his death. And my final one.' When asked if Battersea is wrong: 'No, he isn't wrong. He will come and he will strike. And the new world may be made out of it. But many of the details will have to be changed.

The Shabby Incandescent Party

Chapter 4: The Triumph

Thomas enters the Convocation Hall with his irregular allies. 'This was their moment, and the shabby incandescent party entered.'

Their Appearance

Thomas: Dirty and in disarray, with a shattered jaw wired up by a Cathead knacker, a long-nosed, almost comical middle-aged man of short stature.

Paul: Surname and citizenship lost, bone splinters affecting vision and wits.

Rimrock: Oceanic, communicating unknown ways, appearing as a grotesque rubber-nosed animal.

Evita: Legend girl-woman doubted by rationalists.

Copperhead: Necromancer, no better than an astrologer.

All the great ones stand—Astrobe's great ones stand only in the presence of a Superior. The Past Master possesses the magikos, the charismatic grace, the transcendent magnetism, the presence, the messiah-ship, the draiocht.

It was Rimrock, the rubber-nosed ocean-man thing. It was the Copperhead with his occult stuff. It was Paul with his broken crown, and the child-witch with the two opposite auras about her. They took all the grand ones like country ganglers with the magic show they did for me.

The Forerunner Wave

Chapter 13: A Minute Thing but Incomparably Savage

Battersea's Plan

We snatch the Thomas. We will set him up in a strong place between Wu Town and Cathead. He is King till he dies, and he will not die tomorrow. We have support in places you would never guess.

The Betrayal

Foreman changes the execution from noon to 8 a.m. Men from Cathead, rumor says, have received word of the sudden change of time and are mobbing toward the center of Cosmopolis, but might well be too late.

The Forerunner Wave

There is one wave of fury, a minute thing but incomparably savage, rising moments before a true tidal wave: the forerunner wave.

Buff Shanty and Paul are in it, driving with great impetus. Walter Copperhead is in it, though he must know it is futile. The boy Adam is in it; possibly thirty others, fine people of Cosmopolis, rush and die.

Its suddenness almost brings success. The men bowl over guards and gain scaffold steps. Fighting is close; they give a life for every step.

Adam is the crest, reaching the scaffold and touching Thomas before guards fling him down. He rises brokenly.

The wave lacks bulk; guards are too many. The thrust crests, shatters, ebbs in blood.

Evita's Vengeance

Evita, knowing it will fail, surges not towards Thomas but towards Fabian Foreman at the square's edge.

'Zehheeroot, is-Kerioth' ('Beware, Iscariot')

She attacks him like a lioness, swipes his face red, bites his throat. She practically dismembers him... She breaks his face, throws the shapeless man over her shoulder, carries him to George, Maxwell, and Rimrock. The four tear him apart and kill him.

Evita takes the biggest piece and hangs it on a Carob tree (Judas Tree).

Shanty, Paul, Copperhead, Adam, and the others die around the scaffold foot and on the steps, making them slippery. Adam dies magnificently—as he always did.

The Eagles: Individual Profiles

Paul The Beacon

The pilot who retrieves More from the past. His surname and citizenship have been revoked; the narrator calls him two meters of walking irony.

Red hair, crooked face from scar. Only 'maladjusted' pilots can survive Hopp-Equation travel. Survived as prey in Cathead for a year, evading Killers through 'ten thousand kilometers of alleys.'

At the Convocation: Surname and citizenship lost, bone splinters affecting vision and wits. Thomas credits 'Paul with his broken crown' for the magic of their entrance.

Fate: Dies at the scaffold in the forerunner wave, as he dreamed he would during passage.

Evita The Child-Witch / Devil-Kid

Ancient woman in young body. Sister of Adam. Consort to multiple Salic Emperors. 'The most beautiful woman on Astrobe.'

Soft hair that seems to have smoke on it, roiling black and now quieting to brown or gold. And are her eyes green or gray or blue? Doesn't appear more than seventeen, yet has 'been battling principalities and powers for a long time.'

At the Gathering: She doesn't come through the wall, she comes through the door, smashing and splintering it with a sudden shock of force.

At the Convocation: Thomas calls her 'the child-witch with the two opposite auras about her.'

Fate: Kills and dismembers Foreman with George, Maxwell, and Rimrock. Hangs his piece on the Judas Tree. They do not get Evita.

Rimrock The Oceanic Man

Ansel with telepathic powers. Guides and warns the party. 'A transfigured ansel' who has 'crossed the line.'

The seal-like Oceanic Man communicates mentally and has formidable cutting weapons: slicers three feet long.

At the Gathering: I be an eagle. I soar. It's the last night of the world, and we are not sure what the new world will be like. I've brought old rum, and brandy for those of a more barbarous taste.

At the Convocation: Oceanic, communicating unknown ways, appearing as a grotesque rubber-nosed animal.

Fate: Helps tear Foreman apart. The programmed guards get George and Maxwell and Rimrock, adding their blood to the transcendental yeast.

Walter Copperhead The Seer / The Necromancer

Crude man from Cathead with precognitive powers. Can 'go through walls.' Studies entrails for divination.

Was a prisoner under sentence of death. Escaped by walking through walls: It isn't difficult. I believe that it has been insufficiently tried.

At the Gathering: Predicts Thomas's death with certainty: 'Oh, yes, it will be to his death.' Earlier predicted his own death and the transformation of Scrivener and Slider.

At the Convocation: Necromancer, no better than an astrologer. Thomas credits 'the Copperhead with his occult stuff.'

Fate: Is part of the forerunner wave, though he must know it is futile. Dies around the foot of the scaffold/on steps—as he predicted.

Adam The Boy Who Dies

Evita's brother. Dies repeatedly to avoid growing up. 'Good at dying.' His coming 'always signifies death.'

Handsome, like a nude Greek Youth statue, yet seems Jewish. Appears in Paul's passage dreams dying 'cavalierly in battle again and again.'

At the Rescue: Adam is the crest, reaching the scaffold and touching Thomas before guards fling him down. He rises brokenly.

Prophecy: Yes, it will be his death. And my final one.' Asked if Battersea is wrong: 'No, he isn't wrong... But many of the details will have to be changed.

Fate: Dies magnificently—as he always did. His 'final' death, though he has died many times before.

Father Oddopter The Fisher-Priest

Green-robed monk of the Order of Saint Klingensmith. Fishes for hydras—'the killing of the Devil.'

A blackish man with a hint of deep green. Says mass at Goslar where the uncanny miracle came shockingly and vividly alive at consecration. Catches Commer's Condors in nets.

Ritual: 'Now!' clangs the green-robe, like the underwater belfry of Saint Lo.' Leads the attack on the hydra with Paul and Evita.

Fate: Killed by a blow between throat and lorica during the lightning battle on Electric Mountain.

Maxwell The Avatar

Body-changer who can inhabit corpses. 'Part Programmed' in origin, a 'spook.'

What is it in me that survives? I'm myself part programmed... How can they destroy me in one machine and I survive in another machine?

At the Gathering: Appears as 'a shabby old lady' who comes in through the wall. It's just an old body I found. It isn't my own. Later: 'Yes, Maxwell, that's the name I couldn't think of.'

At the Execution: Helps tear Foreman apart with Evita, George, and Rimrock.

Fate: His mountain body is destroyed. He returns in an old woman's manufactured body, helps kill Foreman, and is then killed by the guards.

Scrivener The Chronicler

Recites the legends of sleeping kings. 'Part Programmed' according to Maxwell. Keeper of stories about Ouden and the mechanical men.

Initially supports the Dream. After Charles identifies him as a machine, Scrivener rejects Ouden and commits himself to defending his companions.

Fate: Copperhead predicts he and Slider will change persons/souls in final day. Killed by Programmed Killers on Electric Mountain.

Slider The Doubter

The slight, pale companion who doubts whether the Promise applies to Astrobe.

Seen as opposite of Scrivener. The Killers don't trail him as he is of their own species, yet he denies being Programmed.

On the Promise: Slider doubts that Astrobians are the nations or world to which the old Promise was addressed. Scrivener, not Slider, supplies the confident response that they make their own promise.

Fate: Left alive and gibbering on Electric Mountain, ignored by the Killers. No later appearance is narrated.

George the Syrian The Host

Shopkeeper who hosts the wake. Runs an aromatics shop in Cosmopolis and a 'poor-people snuff' shop in Cathead.

I don't know what a dromedary is, I don't know what a sand dune is, and I sure don't know what a syrian is. The name was hung onto me, I believe, because I have a beak instead of a nose.

At the Execution: Helps tear Foreman apart with Evita, Maxwell, and Rimrock.

Tale: Tells how the world begins with 'one syrian and one sand dune... If the syrian goes behind the dune, there is hope.'

Fate: The programmed guards get George and Maxwell and Rimrock, adding their blood to the transcendental yeast.

Battersea Giant Lunger

Military leader of rescue attempt. Former general on frontier settlement worlds before joining 'the Cathead movement.'

The scow-master from Cathead rubs his hands together like a general before battle, which is what he is. Giant lunger, leads the planned noon rescue.

Plan: We snatch the Thomas... He is King till he dies, and he will not die tomorrow. We have support in places you would never guess. Millions are secretly sick of the golden Thing.

Fate: His noon rescue is forestalled by Foreman's betrayal. As the world ends, Battersea and his men mob towards Centrality Square under their Hand-of-Vengeance banner.

Shanty Buff Shanty

Giant, fast lunger from Cathead. Coins the phrase 'The Eagles were gathering.'

Looks like the eternal pilgrim with his hat on his head and his staff in his hand. Nearly as huge as Battersea, and faster. Fixes the door Evita smashed: 'It's better than new.'

At the Rescue: Buff Shanty and Paul are in it, driving with great impetus equal to that of many men.

Fate: Dies with the forerunner wave. The source does not specify who dies first.

What the Eagles Represent

• The remnant who refuse the Astrobe Dream—'Millions are secretly sick of the golden Thing.'

• The broken, the irregular, the maladjusted—those whose brokenness qualifies them for true vision.

• The faith that survives in Cathead and the Feral Lands when it has died in Golden Astrobe.

• The 'transcendental yeast' whose blood may seed the new world.

• The human capacity for 'gallows humor' that the Programmed cannot understand or crack.

This is one thing that the Programmed cannot do. They do not become droll and mellow, nor do they hold wakes. Programmed people have no gallows humor at all.

Mechanical Killers

Iron Dogs, Tin Scurrae, Clanking Fools

The Mechanical Killers

Mechanical enforcers pursue threats to the Astrobe Dream. Individual machines can be destroyed, but replacements continue their assignments. Their relentless pursuit contrasts with the changing loyalties and doubts of the people they hunt.

The Killers respond to allegiance to the Vision. Their changing behavior toward More makes his inner accommodation and resistance visible.

Names and Epithets

Official
Programmed KillersMechanical Killers
Derogatory
Iron DogsClanking FoolsTin ScurraeTin CansMonster MachinesHeel-hounds
Functional Types
HoundsHound-CatsBears

The various names reflect different perceptions: official terminology ('Programmed'), contemptuous epithets from their prey ('iron dogs,' 'clanking fools'), and functional categories ('Bears' for spaceport guards, 'Hounds' for stalkers).

Types of Killers

The Bears
Spaceport Guards

Huge and lumbering mechanical guards stationed at spaceports. Programmed for patrol, defense, and counterattack. React to theft signals like Paul's stolen grasshopper.

Characteristics: Their primary aim is securing stolen property; killing is secondary. They are territorial—blindly react to intrusion by other mechanical types into their area.

When Paul steals Foreman's grasshopper, Bears arrive 'first, too fast,' drag him out with grapples, wound him severely, and one 'clasped him to crush him to death.' They are forced to release him repeatedly to smash attacking Hounds who intrude into their zone.

The Hounds
Stalkers and Hunters
Also called 'Hound-Cats'

The specific group programmed for stalking and direct assault. Hunt fugitives relentlessly across years if necessary. React to 'Escape signals' when their prey attempts off-world flight.

Characteristics: 'Remorseless,' 'stiff-gaited,' 'stiff and bristling.' They close in 'blind to everything else' when sensing their target. They hunted Paul for a full year after his citizenship was revoked.

At the spaceport, the Hounds sense Paul's escape attempt and intrude into the Bears’ territory, leading to a chaotic battle between the two mechanical types. Three hounds are smashed at once by the bear holding Paul.

Standard Patrols
General Enforcement

Standard Killers patrol in groups of nine. They have purplish nightmarish ogre faces and stiff gaits. They enforce the Astrobe Dream throughout civilized space.

Characteristics: Their behavior changes based on target status. When Thomas professes loyalty to the Dream, they follow but smile quizzically, not threatening. When he wavers internally, they sense the change, cease their quizzical waiting, remember their purpose and move to kill.

Vulnerabilities: Battersea knows their 'nexus and centers'—weak points. Father Oddopter instructs fighters to 'Drive down in the narrow slot' between neck-piece and lorica/breast-plate to strike the 'relay center.'

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The Replacement Principle

Programmed Killers can be destroyed, but another is instantly created elsewhere with the exact same assignment. This makes defeating them ultimately futile—you cannot kill an assignment, only delay it.

Example: During the Electric Mountain battle, Adam topples one Killer backward off the mountain, causing it to fall 1000 meters. But another is instantly created elsewhere with the same assignment.

Within the pursuit system, surrender to the Dream can stop an individual's hunt. Destroying a machine does not abolish its assignment; changing the system itself is the larger problem facing the novel's characters.

The Salic Emperors

The Killers assigned themselves to destroy every reigning Salic Emperor in Goslar. No Emperor has reigned a full year; many lasted less than a month. Charles the 612th had reigned less than twenty hours when Thomas's party arrived.

A peculiarity: when an emperor is killed, a replacement is instantly selected at Wu Town's university and starts for Goslar immediately. Emperor and Killer, each instantly replaced—a dark parody of resurrection.

The final passage at Goslar gives 599 skulls. An earlier statement of 611 predecessors with thirteen missing would give 598. The source's figures differ, but neither supports a count above six hundred skulls.

Paul's Year as Prey

After his citizenship was revoked, Paul survived a full year in Cathead evading 'remorseless stiff-gaited Killers.' This experience qualifies him for the mission to retrieve Thomas More.

Skills: Paul has personally killed a dozen Killers. During the spaceport battle, Battersea is specifically credited with knowing the nexus and centers of every sort of mechanical.

Loophole: Programmed Killers are normally inhibited from killing Astrobe citizens but target 'offenders' like Paul whose citizenship has been revoked. Paul exploits this status ambiguity.

During the spaceport battle, Paul kills a human masquerading as a Programmed Killer—revealing that humans are fighting on both sides.

Thomas More's Relationship with the Killers

Initial Hunting

The Killers hunt More from his arrival. Allies help him escape; by Chapter 9 he reports nine attempts on his life.

Electric Mountain

In Chapter 7 the Killers climb toward the company under the electrical clouds. Scrivener, Adam, Oddopter, and Maxwell's body are destroyed. Thomas, Paul, and Evita escape. The black cloud is not itself a form taken by the machines.

The Quizzical Period

After Thomas professes loyalty to the Astrobe Dream and makes speeches for 'the Merging Singularity,' the Killers change: They watch still, but smile quizzically, not threatening him. They follow but do not attack.

The Change

When Thomas's 'old part' surges against the Dream in Chapter 10, The Programmed Killers sense his internal change, cease their quizzical waiting, remember their purpose. They herd him into the dead-end alley where he meets the Nine.

Presidential Guards

The same order that hunts dissenters guards More as president and enforces his sentence after the final refusal.

“Cannot something be done about the Programmed Killers? They nearly had me last night again... They make me jumpy... they have now made nine attempts on my life. And they become trickier. They aren't mere machines...”

The Battle on Electric Mountain

The first high pinnacle of the Thunder Mountains. The peak interacts strangely with approaching Killers, and lightning storms provide both danger and opportunity.

Evita spots them: It is a black one [cloud], and below us. The Programmed Killers have come in full patrol... This isn't the death I had planned for us all, Holy Thomas.

Tactics

Defense: The party rolls boulders and fights hand-to-hand. Father Oddopter creates a 'hand-knife on pole'—an improvised spear—for greater reach.

Vulnerability: Oddopter shouts instructions: strike the 'nexus... relay center' in a 'narrow slot' between neck-piece and lorica/breast-plate.

Climbing: The Killers climb more slowly and less well than the humans, but do not tire or rest.

Casualties
Scrivener: Smashed dead'—as a hybrid, 'the machines knew the diagram of him as a machine.
Adam: Dies 'in glorious gore, howling defiance' during a thunder-smash. Evita notes, 'He was good at dying... He had done it before.'
Father Oddopter: Dies from a 'smash between the throat and the lorica' during the second major lightning strike.
Maxwell: Body 'smashed' in the darkness. But 'Maxwell had a trick of turning up again.'

Escape: Thomas, Paul, and Evita escape during the third lightning bolt, following Evita's intuition down the spire while 'swift iron trackers' pursue.

Slider alone is left alive—a gibbering creature... disregarded, since he represented no threat to the Dream.

Scrivener's Final Stand

Scrivener is uncertain whether he is a Programmed Person or 'old-recension human' due to family legend of Programmed admixture. Emperor Charles wants to kill him, calling him a machine with a sender in his head attracting Killers.

Last night I rejected him! [Ouden]... What am I now? I am not machine and I am not man... It was the Nothing that I rejected. He becomes 'alien to both his recensions.'

Battle: He fights the Killers howling: 'Me they do not disregard! I threaten their thing!... Backwards and down you go, you clanking Devil! I'll battle you all while there's life left in me.'

Death: He had opted for a man very late, and the machines knew the diagram of him as a machine. The Programmed Raiders smashed Scrivener dead there.

Left on the pinnacle as a 'dead hybrid whose final pattern shows that he opted for human late.'

What the Killers Really Are

Surface: On the surface: autonomous enforcers, garbage disposals, ultimate police, wardens of the Astrobe Dream.

Connection: Their service to the Dream connects them with the Nine's system. Their apparent sensitivity to inward allegiance is part of their menace, but ordinary mechanical guards also make errors and clash over conflicting assignments.

They hunt threats to a Dream whose secret endpoint is Holy Nothingness. They kill to preserve a system designed to end all life. They are the Dream's teeth—and the Dream devours itself.

More increasingly doubts that the Killers are merely ordinary machines. The novel connects their enforcement with the Nine while distinguishing the pursuers from the human-looking Programmed Persons.

Bestiary of Astrobe

Creatures of the Feral Lands

Bestiary of Astrobe

The Feral Lands and Their Creatures

The Feral Lands teem with dangerous life. Thomas calls it 'a plenitude of game'—finding more vitality here than in civilized Astrobe. 'I would bet that a good hunting man could live well here,' he says, seeing an intense, rewarding life.

Paul confirms he lived there as a hunting man for a few months while hiding. There are still a few thousand hunters on Astrobe. The life is intense, rewards intangible but deep for some, but hunters don't live to old age.

Slider expresses the civilized view: 'We class them with excrement.' Maxwell considers them 'less real than creatures in dreams.' But Evita knows them: They're good to eat. People ate them when I was a kid.

The Food Chain

Base: The jerusalem coney, along with the dutch-fish and rambler's-ox, forms the food base of the Feral Lands. Everything lives on them, or on what eats them.

Predators: Predators include direwolves, porches-panther, hydra, birds, and twenty other species capable of slicing up and eating a man.

Apex: The porches-panther eats direwolves, lazarus-lions, rouks, and hydras. The text does not provide a predator for it, but absence from this account is not proof that none exists.

Oddopter calls the particular hydra they hunt the Devil and says the Devil may take other forms. Hydras also appear within Paul's account of ordinary predation.

The Creatures

Jerusalem Coney
Prey / Food Base

A curious hopping creature, mostly rabbit-sized but some smaller or much larger. They move indiscriminately—into ponds, underwater, high into trees with accurate hops, through dense brush a snake couldn't traverse.

Too quick for Thomas or Paul to catch. They are 'all around them' in the Feral Lands.

Ecology: Along with dutch-fish and rambler's-ox, the coney is the food base. Preyed upon by direwolves, porches-panther, hydra, birds, and all predators.

Thomas notes the animal names sound like Earth's. Paul corrects him: Only the names are like those of Earth. On Earth there are no animals at all like those around us.

Direwolf (Dire-wolf)
Large Predator

Could take an Earth ox's head and horns in one bite and the body in two more.

Paul emphasizes its size and killing power; no pack-hunting behavior is specified.

Thomas pits 'a bow-necked Middlesex ox against any animal on this scurvy bowl.' Paul assures him the direwolf would win easily.

A direwolf eats a natural ansel like a jerusalem coney, but would eat a transfigured ansel like a man, not with an easy mind. The predators know the difference between natural and transcendent prey.

Lazarus-Lion
Large Predator

Could do the same to the larger rambler's-ox as the direwolf does to cattle.

The lazarus eats people, unlike the rouks who just crucify them.

Paul supposes the lazarus-lion 'appreciates the flavor' of the hunters it catches.

Porches-Panther
Major Predator

The apex predator of Astrobe's Feral Lands.

Paul says it kills and eats direwolves, lazarus-lions, rouks, and hydras.

Oddopter names a porches-panther gone musk as another possible form of the Devil.

Rouk
Intelligent Predator

'Kill people for fun' and hang the bodies as warnings. Paul points to a nearby cliff with a thousand human skeletons hung on thorn bushes by rouks.

Similar to how men on Earth hung wolves on fences—but the rouks are the hunters, men the prey.

There's even a tale the King Rouk pays a bounty for men killed and hung by rouks.

Intelligent cruelty made bestial. Uniquely among predators, they kill not to eat but to display.

Hydra
Supernatural Predator / Devil-Form

A thousand-kilogram bulk swallowing the bait in one gulp, thirty-meter tentacles reaching blindly, a big middle eye mad with malevolence.

Can gobble anything in water and snap ten meters out of it, once taking six men in one bite.

Its bulk surges clear of the water, accompanied by a lightning-like corona discharge and blinding aura. It is the Devil made flesh.

Father Oddopter: Today's Devil was large, but it takes other forms like a mad direwolf or a porches-panther gone musk. We must kill it daily to limn his limits.

The Bait: The bait used to catch it: a fat, black, quivering discoid thing with an angry-toothed mouth covering one-third of its circuit. It weighs 150 kilograms and could snap a man in two. The monk calls it merely bait, like a grasshopper caught for a hook.

Rambler's-Ox
Prey / Food Base

Large prey animal forming part of the food base along with jerusalem coneys and dutch-fish.

Ecology: Part of the foundation that supports the Feral Lands’ predator hierarchy.

Larger than an Earth ox. The lazarus-lion can take one 'in three bites.'

Dutch-Fish (Dutchfish)
Prey / Food Base

Sea creatures forming part of the food base. Sea-gleaners bring in scow-loads for fish meal.

Ecology: Along with jerusalem coneys and rambler's-ox, the food foundation of Astrobe's ecology.

In Cathead, the bodies of plague victims are sometimes weighed with the fish because they aren't up to the fish in phosphor and sulphur and are hard on the grinders.

Kastroides
Builder

Etymology: The name suggests a beaver-like builder; the novel does not explain its derivation.

Build aerial ponds in the Feral Lands.

The party travels sometimes skirting large aerial ponds built by kastroides.

Its ponds occupy the interwoven vegetation above water, part of a landscape in which the travelers struggle to find firm ground.

Commer's Condor
Large Bird

Large birds caught for food by hunting parties.

On Electric Mountain, during the hallucination zone, a Commer's Condor swoops near, cries "Thomas More is a fink!"

Father Oddopter catches a Commer's Condor in a net. The party tears it apart, eats it raw.

Wooly Ram
Ritual Animal

Animals found and barbecued during the fools’ carnival before Thomas's execution.

Wooly Rams are found somewhere, and spitted and barbecued over the bonfires, about fifty people devouring each Wooly Ram as they tear it apart in pieces, half seared and half raw.

The feast of the Wooly Ram has not been held on Astrobe for more than three hundred years, and only antiquarians could know about it.

Oddopter calls More a wooly ram with a double sign and dismisses Charles as a wether. The feast repeats the ram imagery later.

Bot-Flies
Vermin / Omen

Associated with violence and death. They appear where blood has been spilled.

Bot-flies splutter and roar over slippery blood in the roadway and common room of the Naked Sailor after the ambush.

Their presence signals carnage and the presence of Killers.

Ansels: Natural and Transfigured

The Line Between Animal and Person

Wild Ansels

Natural ansels inhabit Astrobe's waters. Rimrock's account of ascent from the physical ocean is linked metaphorically with an interior ocean of dreams.

Their votes were disallowed in Astrobe elections after ansel leaders registered millions of wild ocean ansels.

Hunters kill them. A direwolf eats a natural ansel like a jerusalem coney.

Transfiguration

An ansel that crossed the line becomes entirely different from a natural ansel. Paul doesn't know how the new species is acquired, but all species know the difference.

A direwolf eats a natural ansel like a jerusalem coney, but would eat a transfigured ansel like a man, not with an easy mind. There's a difference between natural and transcendent prey known to meat-eaters.

The green-robe calls it 'impossible theology': A creature already alive shouldn't receive a soul and intelligence, yet this seems the case with exceptional ansels.

Animals are disturbed after eating humans, and Rimrock would be human by this test.

Paul confirms Rimrock would eat ansel meat and has, but doesn't care for it—overrated. An ansel 'feels no repugnance' at eating natural ansels.

Sprites and Ghosts

The Spirit Ecology

Sprites

Sextus Empiricus wrote that every environment has its sprite.

Father Oddopter appears and tells Thomas: Sextus Empiricus wrote of both of us. You are a sprite too, who just thinks himself a man because he was raised by humans.

Taibhse

Meaning: 'Ghosts' or 'revenants' in Gaelic.

Emperor Charles calls Maxwell and Thomas 'Taibhse'—having intuition as Emperor.

Father Oddopter explains ghosts are the same as Taibhse—those who leave bodies and heads behind them. Evita is called 'black-hearted kid' who is Taibhse.

Thomas asks if superstition is rampant. The green-robe supposes so, noting 'psychic force/libido' is strong—as once on Old Earth (Africas, Haitis). Astrobe's nature was tamed recently.

The Feral Ecology

This is a salt that has not lost its savor! Thomas contrasts the Feral Lands with 'insipid civilized Astrobe,' seeing potential for 'a better blending.'

Astrobe cannot be more exposed to its backlands. These things are worse than death and need to be hidden away forever.

The Hunter's Life

The life is intense, rewards intangible but deep for some.

Hunters don't live to old age.

There are still a few thousand hunters on Astrobe.

Twenty other species around them are capable of slicing up and eating a man.

Political Parties

The Party Jungle of Astrobe

Political Parties of Astrobe

The Party Jungle

Chapter 9 lists many overlapping political factions. Their names mix recognizable political positions with wordplay. The Nine claim broad influence across them, while the novel also shows opposition beyond the official public consensus.

In Chapter 10 the Nine claim to control More's path through several parties and threaten to make a replacement in one hour. More names people who would recognize the substitute.

The Evolution of Astrobe Elections

One Person One Vote

Old Earth idea

The original democratic system, imported from Earth.

The Weighted Vote

Additional votes awarded for distinguished service. Most ranks carry votes; entertainers might get accolades. Wealth is complex: Kingmaker might have a thousand votes, while another rich man had only a quarter vote due to unpopularity.

• Cathead and Barrio citizens get only a quarter vote each under blanket penalty.

• Ansels and other intelligent non-humans get one-eighth vote.

A scandal occurred when ansel leaders registered millions of wild ocean ansels; their votes were disallowed, restricting voting to land-living Astrobe creatures.

Sensing Machines

Current system (Vote abolished)

The Vote itself is done away with, replaced by sensing machines that work on everyone's auras, keeping a running record. They assess and compile the total weight of opinion and choice on Astrobe.

'The Weighted Vote carried out with honesty and justice.' Fine intellect and judgment have more effect than notions; strong personality weighs more than lesser persons, while frustration subtracts. They cannot be tampered with.

Cathead and the Barrio exert unexpectedly strong influence. The claim that their concentration of intellect is impossible is ironic. A modification to discount anti-Dream judgments is being planned but will not be ready for this election.

Establishment Coalition

Parties associated with the governing order. These groupings organize the guide's discussion; they are not official classifications given in the novel.

Center Party

More's party, supported by the three Masters. Foreman says they are unsure whether Pottscamp belongs to it, or even whether he is a man.

The Center Party is satirical—there is no middle in the cosmic conflict between Being and Nothing.

Compromise Parties First, Second, and Third Compromise

The Third Compromise Party is one the Nine work through to control Thomas. Certain parties they don't want joining them, as they swing to clear winners and cause trouble.

Programmed Liberal Party

One of the establishment factions. The name itself is an oxymoron—the Programmed have no liberty.

Opposition Factions

Parties with names suggesting resistance or refusal. Their full platforms and degree of independence are not supplied.

Intransigents Also: Reformed Intransigents

The name suggests a form of opposition. The text does not establish a complete platform or prove that every act of opposition is theatrical.

Obstructionists Also: New Obstructionists

The name suggests a form of opposition. The text does not establish a complete platform or prove that every act of opposition is theatrical.

Ideological Parties

Parties organized around specific beliefs or constituencies.

Demos

One of the parties the Nine work through. Greek for 'the people'—another ironic name in a society where individuality is being erased.

Solidarity Labor Party

Labor faction—though meaningful labor has largely vanished in golden Astrobe.

Mechanicus

Party presumably aligned with Programmed interests.

Unreconstructeds

'Humans only.' A resistance faction rejecting human-Programmed synthesis.

Ochlos

'Blessed by Ouden.' Greek for 'mob' or 'rabble.' A party explicitly aligned with Nothingness.

The name and association with Ouden connect this faction to the novel's politics of nothingness.

Eccentric and Opportunist

Parties defined by opportunism, wordplay, or obscure purposes.

Hatrack Party Also called Conglomerate Party

One of the parties the Nine work through. Swings to clear winners and causes trouble—'We want our hands unbound when we go to work after we have won.'

Kiss of Death Party

Another party the Nine use. The name is grimly literal—their support is fatal to genuine reform.

Hive / Golden Drones

Insect imagery—the collective over the individual.

Penultimate / Ultimate Parties

Named for eschatological positions—next-to-last and last things.

Censor / Pyramid / New Salt

Various minor factions with obscure platforms.

Wordplay Parties

Party names built around a sequence of puns. Their exact platforms should not be inferred solely from their names.

Esthetics

Its name suggests aesthetics and beauty; the novel does not develop a full platform.

Anesthetics

Its name turns the previous party's word toward numbness, inviting a comparison with the Dream's lethargy.

Local Anesthetics

'Jokesters, disregarded.' Their opinions count for nothing. Politics reduced to puns.

The progression Esthetics → Anesthetics → Local Anesthetics mirrors Astrobe's decay from beauty to numbness to irrelevance.

The Crank Party

A Party of One

The Man

Not wild-eyed, but dull-eyed, speaks in singsong.

Rudely calls Thomas 'Thomas Momus, the Big Boys’ Toy.' Claims leadership of a certified party and demands fair hearing by law.

The Party

The Crank: 'Only myself, doubting Thomas.' Certified via bureaucratic quirk allowing a one-man party.

“I organized it and named it. I am the Crank and I make myself heard.”

Platform

Against all false things.' Battles 'Humanism which has no meat, and Materialism which has no bones.

Thomas likes the phrase—'doesn't mean anything'—and plans to use it himself.

I see the parties at an end. All are dying. Soon only my own party will remain.

Grievances Against Astrobe

• Compulsory pornography and ethics equal time in schools

• Perversion and normalcy given equal space (though normalcy gained then)

• Evaluators allowed to terminate marriages

• Schools teaching only things in accord with the Golden Dream

• Law denying offspring to private persons

• Psychologs made a privileged class with tampering powers

• Mechanical brain tampering permitted

The human person should be inviolate. Adjustability charts shouldn't be everything. Man should choose his own occupation and unhappiness.

Thomas's Response: 'No, I do not, Crank, on no point whatsoever.' Thomas rejects every grievance, affirms the Dream.

The Misidentification

The Crank thinks Thomas is 'doubting Thomas the Apostle'—a hero who betrayed an old mountebank.

No I am not. You are badly confused.

The Crank claims Thomas owes his popularity to this false identification.

Thomas orders his 'contrivances' (Programmed Persons) to throw the Crank out. 'I hate it!' the Crank roars. 'Damn all mechanicals to the reclamation heap!'

The Crank exposes coercion that More currently accepts. His confused identifications and refusal to endure Cathead make him an awkward witness, but the expulsion shows More's intolerance of dissent.

How the Nine Control the Parties

Northprophet reveals in Chapter 10 how political control actually works:

Multi-Party Infiltration

The Nine claim to work through several parties. Their assertion of complete control is challenged by Foreman, Cathead, and the larger opposition Battersea describes.

Path Control

They control his path. Thomas's political rise is orchestrated, not organic.

Brain Snakes

'Snakes in your head!' The Nine's extensions nest in Thomas's mind, speaking through his mouth. Paul warns: You've been saying many things... that don't sound like you. It's only a mechanical trick.

The Patsy

The Nine threaten to manufacture a replacement More in one hour. More disputes how successfully that substitute could deceive his acquaintances.

Proctor Revealed

Proctor is their own artificial man... programmed lucky. One of the Big Three is himself a Programmed Person.

The political system channels choices toward the Dream. Its designers propose discounting dissenting judgments, but the change is not yet implemented at More's election. This distinction leaves room for the unexpected strength of Cathead and other opponents.

Thomas on the Campaign Trail

Thomas campaigns and enjoys it. He excels at rhetoric—the noblest rhetor, with a clear touch and intricate lash to his tongue.

I cannot move mountains but can move the world ahead, implementing the Astrobe dream. Perfection is in stages; obstacles will be removed, unhealthy growth excised. He preaches sanity, perfect human-Programmed symbiosis, all minds and bodies merging into one.

Paul's Warning: You were talking nonsense, you know. I wonder if you were even listening to yourself.

Thomas's Admission: “Paul, I said words... but there were other words that I did not say... Somebody else spoke some of those words out of my mouth.”

Paul's Explanation: It's one of the oldest tricks of the Programmed. They crawl into your mind and take control. It's only a mechanical trick.

Thomas cannot kick the snakes out. His will isn't what it used to be. He begins to sound like one of them: 'We should all strive for the synthesis, part man and part Programmed... submerge ourselves in our mechanical brothers for the good of all.' Paul warns: 'They'll eat us alive if we do, Thomas.'

Embedded Tales

Embedded Tales and Passage Dreams

Psychic Space Debris

Past Master is suffused with tales within tales—passage dreams experienced during Hopp-Equation travel, stories told at the wake on the night before the execution, legends recited on the mountain climb, and allegories whose 'cryptic meaning' even Code-Crackers-Supreme cannot break.

Hopp-Equation space contains 'psychic space debris'—fragments of billions of minds, poignant, comic, horrifying, exalting episodes. The dreams compress approximately five years of psychic experience into one month. Only the 'maladjusted' can stand the passages; well-adjusted pilots crack up.

Passage Dreams

Twenty Thousand Dreams in Ninety-Second Intervals

During Hopp-Equation travel, passengers experience vivid, self-contained dream episodes lasting approximately 90 seconds each. Paul experiences approximately 20,000 such dreams. Thomas, traveling with him, dreams as well—his visions sinking into his mind's cellar, to resurface when he meets those persons.

Recurring Dream Figures

Adam

A boy who dies cavalierly in battle again and again, thus avoiding growing up. Dying is his only real skill.

“It is death, it is death. I am not born again... It is always another of the same name.”

Adam later dies on Electric Mountain and at the scaffold. Chapter 3 also describes a death during the ambush while questioning whether the event belongs to dream or waking time.

Adam's Sister (The Childwitch)

A 'childwitch who decided to go to Hell before she died.' Paul is unsure if he knew her previously, knows her only in dreams, or will know her later.

The childwitch anticipates Evita, identified as Adam's sister in Chapter 5. Her age and willingness to enter Hell recur in Evita's account of herself.

The Oceanic Man

Thomas meets 'an oceanic man named Rimrock' in his passage dreams—not odd in dream.

The ansel Rimrock, who will guide and warn Thomas throughout the novel. Ansels were in human unconscious before being found on Astrobe.

The Composite Female

Thomas encounters a female creature who is simultaneously Succubus, Eve, Lilith, Judith, Mary, Valkyrie.

Evita again—ancient woman in young body, consort to emperors, killer of Foreman, torn between damnation and holiness.

The Spider with a Lion's Head

One of three quick dreams Thomas has of 'three unknown men.' This one represents Kingmaker.

Kingmaker's dual nature: the spider's web of power, the lion's heraldic nobility. 'The Lion' is his epithet; the spider suggests manipulation.

The Peculiar Fox

Second of Thomas's three dream-men. Represents Proctor.

Proctor is 'The Sleek Fox'—cunning, lucky, ultimately revealed as a Programmed Person himself.

The Hawk Shuffling Shells

Third dream-man: a hawk shuffling shells at a table, and one shell was different. Represents Foreman.

Foreman is 'Hawk-Face'—the shell game suggests his manipulations, the 'different shell' perhaps Thomas himself or the transcendent yeast.

Tall Tales in the Space Debris

Not all dreams are heavy. Light vital stuff and tall tales drift there too—every tall tale ever told, still drifting in Hopp-Equation space.

Sour John's Emerald Kidney

Tall Tale / Allegorical Dream

Dreamer: Paul (who 'becomes' Sour John during the dream)

Setup: John Sourwine ('Sour John'), an Earthman from centuries before Paul's time, has a kidney that vitrified into fine, jewel-like green glass due to his diet of alcohol, wormwood, and green snails.

Complication: At Ghazikhan (then India), Sour John sees a great idol whose emerald eye—nearly a foot in diameter—is worth $11 million. He decides he needs the money for 'expensive habits.'

The Heist: Sour John has the ship's boy help surgically remove his vitrified kidney, then trims, lathes, and buffs it to perfection—'the most beautiful kidney in the world.' At midnight, he climbs the 500-foot sheer idol, pries out the emerald, substitutes his kidney (a perfect fit), and climbs down. He sells the emerald in Karachi for $11 million and lives high—but can no longer drink water with only one kidney.

Twist: Three years later he learns that the substituted kidney is now valued at thirteen million dollars.

Punchline: 'I figure I lost two million dollars on the deal,' Paul says, waking up.

Paul interrupts his own dream, correcting that Ghazikhan isn't a seaport (information from a psychteacher machine). His Sour John persona retorts: 'I say it is a sea-port.'

Allegorical meaning: One possible reading contrasts a product of bodily excess with an apparently priceless sacred object. The exchange complicates ordinary judgments about purity, value, and loss. The reversal of expected value can be compared with Cathead's preference for costly human life over sterile perfection. The novel does not explicitly identify each element of the story with a Programmed faction.

Rhium and Antirhium

Apocalyptic Dream

Dreamer: Paul

Mission: Paul courses at fantastic speed toward twin stars Rhium and Antirhium. Instructions: 'Hurry... they seem of no consequence, but they are the governor of the universe. Somebody is tampering with them.'

Discovery: Arriving closer than anyone before, Paul sees the stars revolve joined by a long steel chain—explaining their tight orbits and their role as 'governor.'

Saboteur: A small green creature with a monkey's body and a gargoyle's head is sawing through the chain, nearly finished. It breaks a blade, replaces it, sticks its green tongue out at Paul, and makes three more strokes.

Cataclysm: The chain breaks. Rhium and Antirhium swing out of orbit. 'Fifty billion billion stars went nova, and then blacked out to nothing. The universe had eaten itself and was gone forever.'

Aftermath: A space captain arrives furiously: 'I told you to hurry!' His face melts like wax and vanishes. Paul says, 'I did hurry.' His own face melts; he vanishes too.

Coda: Foreman's voice: Is it quite finished? If it is quite finished, then perhaps we can begin to construct a new universe. It's all right. It worked out well. I meant you to be too late.

Allegorical meaning: The names recall Rhium and Antirrhium, opposing Greek promontories described in Strabo's Geography, 8.2.3. The novel does not explain why these names are assigned to the stars. The broken chain anticipates cosmic destruction, while Foreman's speech within the dream anticipates his theory of renewal.

The Sleeping Kings

Scrivener's Legends

Scrivener recounts versions of sleeping-king legends. They suggest a pattern for More's mission, but his versions need not coincide with every historical tradition.

“Every Old-Earth Nation, my grandmother told me, had its mythos of a sleeping king who would one day awaken and rule again in a new golden age.”

Alaric (The Goths)

Buried underneath the Busento River—its course changed for the burial and changed back to flow over him.

He was to arise again one day and lead the Gothic element, 'that shaggy thing that is the basis of a dozen peoples.'

Arthur of Britain (The British)

In kingly sleep in an ensorceled room at the bottom of a lake.

Awaiting Britain's need.

Brian Boru (The Irish)

Buried on horseback in a pit with great stones heaped around him.

When he wakens he will scatter the stones and ride again.

El Cid (The Spanish)

Not buried at all but riding forever a horse in death-sleep over dark moors in Estremadura.

Still riding.

Barbarossa (The Germanies)

Asleep at a table in a cave in a mountain, his beard grown through the table.

Waiting.

Henry VIII (England)

Thomas jests: immured with six wives in a peculiar arrangement.

(Thomas's dark humor.)

Kennedy (America)

Riding in a car.

Added by Scrivener.

Roadstorm (Astrobe)

Marooned in Star King.

An Astrobian sleeping king.

The Mechanical Men's Sleeping King

Early mechanical men wished for a mythos—a mystique, a god, a hero, a sleeping king—like humans had. They searched Old Earth backward. Found a small broken gear train in an Egyptian tomb: hard wood cogs, bronze bearings, unknown use. Clumsy, earliest true mechanical spirit. They brought it to Astrobe as their sleeping king.

Humans snickered.

Then the Celestial Nothingness came. Ouden dismissed the toy king: Tut away such toys... I am your god and your king. Ouden became god and king for the Programmed Persons since—and soon for all beings. 'He grows and grows, and all the other kings die.'

More is brought alive from his past by Chronometanastasis. Symbolically, this recalls the return of a sleeping ruler, without making the technology a literal resurrection of a corpse.

Tales at the Wake

The Night Before the Execution

The Eagles gather in George's shop before the execution. Their tales defeat the monitoring machines’ attempts to interpret them as code.

Automatic monitors pick up the tales but cannot make anything of them. They tie into Code-Crackers, then Code-Crackers-Supreme. Neither can crack the code—they cannot at all figure what cryptic information is concealed in the tales. This isn't code like you meet every night.

Adam's Tale: Saint Brandon and the Nineteen Monks

Teller: The boy Adam

The first human people came to Astrobe fifteen hundred years before official history records. 'By the holies, it had been Saint Brandon himself in a coracle boat that was round as a tub.' He sloshed and bounded over the Stoimenof Sea, having started in the North Atlantic on Old Earth—supposing he was still sailing the same water. He piles out when it runs onto land, and nineteen Irish monks with twinkling pates follow him out. On first arrival they find only jerusalem conies, which will not answer their questions. But Saint Brandon and his monks map out the new land with exact description. Then they get back into the coracle boat and in ninety-nine days are back in Dingle Bay where they started.

But later explorers, going out into the North Atlantic Ocean of Old Earth, don't find any such land; and they say that Saint Brandon has lied. He has not. Those later explorers had gone in prow-ships that will hold a course, not in round coracle boats that can only be steered by prayer and fasting and are likely to wander clear off the Earth.

Code-Crackers Supreme labors mightily to break the code and arrive at the cryptic meaning behind it, and they cannot do it.

'Blessed be this rum,' says Rimrock the ansel.

George's Tale: The Syrian and the Sand Dune

Teller: George the Syrian

The only thing ever left over when the world ends is one syrian and one sand dune, all other features of the world being blotted out by the terminal catastrophes. There is that terrible second or million years when nothing moves—for a second and a million years are the same when there is no movement in anything. Then the syrian goes over behind the sand dune and finds a dromedary; and together they start the world going again.

That is the way it was in the earliest version of Genesis. That is the way the world begins every time. You will hear stories about a man and a woman, or about a turtle raising the sky up from off the earth. Do not believe them. Every time the world begins it begins with a syrian and a dromedary.

“Now, I don't know what a dromedary is, I don't know what a sand dune is, and I sure don't know what a syrian is. The name was hung onto me, I believe, because I have a beak instead of a nose.”

The world will end again tomorrow. Watch then for a syrian and a sand dune. If the syrian goes behind the dune, there is hope; if he does not, or if there is neither syrian nor sand dune, then the world is done forever.

Code-Crackers-Supreme suffers a breakdown about the time George recounts this. It is not, perhaps, a serious breakdown; but it will take several hours to get code-crackers to functioning again. So the monitoring is dropped. No point in setting down what even the code-crackers cannot crack.

'Blessed be this rum,' says Evita.

The Boy Who Built a Toy

Thomas's Passage Dream / Allegory

A boy builds a clever toy. Both the boy and the toy look like Pottscamp. The toy steals, attacks, does the boy's homework, drinks from the brook—then eats the child entirely.

Was Pottscamp the toy or the guileless devoured one?

The toy consuming its maker can be read as an image of manufactured beings turning against humanity. Pottscamp's account describes a growing final generation, rather than identifying the present Nine as the final generation themselves.

The story also reflects the novel's central tragedy: humanity built Astrobe, built the Dream, built the Programmed—and will be devoured by what it made.

The Function of Embedded Tales

• They resist decoding—even Code-Crackers-Supreme cannot crack them. Truth lives in forms that mechanical analysis cannot penetrate.

• They preserve and transmit meaning through catastrophe. George's story of the syrian and the sand dune is about how stories themselves survive the end of worlds.

• They prophesy. The passage dreams show Paul his own death; Thomas dreams the men who will manipulate him; Adam's tale of Saint Brandon maps a land that 'later explorers' cannot find.

• They disturb the separation of dream and waking life. Recurring figures link the travelers’ dreams with their later encounters, leaving questions about time and identity open.

• They embody Lafferty's method. Past Master itself is a tall tale drifting in psychic space debris—a story whose 'cryptic meaning' resists easy analysis, told at the wake of a world.

The Promise

Christ Has Walked on Astrobe

The Promise

We Last Till the End of the World

In Cathead, More meets the dying Metropolitan and hears that Christ walked on Astrobe and renewed the Promise. More leaves unconvinced, but the encounter supplies a claim that challenges the Dream and remains central to the ending.

The theological question at the heart of Past Master: Does the Promise—that the Church will last till the end of the world—apply to Astrobe? Is Astrobe 'the world'? Are its inhabitants 'the nations'?

Slider's Argument Against the Promise

We Are Not the Nations

The Instruction: The Ancient Instruction was Go to All Nations. But 'we are not the Nations'—something different.

The Promise: The Promise (that the Transcendent Thing endures till the End of the World) wasn't given to 'us'—a different world.

The Mutation: Can't assume they are human. How deep is the Astrobe mutation? How many are Programmed Persons? How much programmed descent in 'old-line humans'?

Slider fears that the old Promise may not cover Astrobe and questions the depth of its human mutation.

Scrivener responds with confidence in the Dream: they are beyond the old nations and world, and make their own promise. His attitude differs from Slider's anxious doubt.

The Metropolitan of Astrobe

The Pope of Astrobe

Setting

A small medieval castle dwarfed by tenements in Cathead.

A coughing man tells Thomas: 'Nobody lives there... The Metropolitan of Astrobe dies there.' Thomas remarks on the long dying time.

Thomas knocks, hears only a low moan or rale, and enters. After passing through empty rooms, he finds a room with an old battered bed under a faded royal canopy.

The Man

A very old, thin black man, skeletal, emitting a fetid odor. Thomas thinks him dead.

Identification: He wears the fisherman's ring—identifying him as the Metropolitan, the Pope of Astrobe.

'Eaten up.' He has food and drink but 'no stomach left.' Blind, though he can make the effort to open his eyes.

Attendants

'I have five or six followers left.' Someone checks on him every few hours.

A young, filthy, coughing man enters to attend him, telling Thomas the old man was sometimes crazy, sometimes not and urging patience.

Prophecy: I will die thirty hours before yourself.

After this Metropolitan dies, a different man succeeds him and places Astrobe under interdict. The successor, formerly a renegade priest for thirty years, appears in Chapter 12.

The Recognition

Saints John and Thomas

Liturgy: The Metropolitan, eyes still closed, begins speaking in liturgical canto, reciting the Latin prayer for the feast day of Saints Joannem et Thomam.

Thomas's Question: Thomas recognizes his own name and asks about Joannem.

Answer: Saint John Fisher. You have saints’ day jointly.

Memory: Thomas recalls Fisher died fourteen days before him—and had never heard his own collect.

Reply: The Metropolitan: Few have. Save from the other side.

The Metropolitan identifies Thomas More by the liturgical calendar of the Church—not by politics or history, but by sanctity. He knows who has come because he knows the communion of saints.

The Promise Itself

Is this the end? Are you the last?

“No, I am not the last, Thomas.”

“We have the promise. We last till the end of the world.”

Slider's Objection Dismissed

Thomas quotes Slider's argument: 'We are not the world... no promise was ever given to us.'

Nonsense, nonsense. We have the Promise.

The Revelation

The Promise was given on Astrobe in latter days, in a queerer and more flaming way.

Christ has walked on Astrobe in human form with Saint Klingensmith and others.

The burning promise was given, and the flame is beginning to rise, starting with my five or six followers.

Growth

There are over a hundred followers left on Astrobe.

It will grow.

If you are of the Faith, Astrobe's stones and clods will sing of the Promise. If you regard it as legend, learn the legends—they are richer than Old Earth's.

The Blind Man

The Metropolitan tells Thomas he is a living witness to the unseen, a ferret-faced little man who became a saint.

“How can you know I'm ferret-faced, blind man?”

The Metropolitan laughs: You are the blind man, not I.

Thomas, with his golden rhetoric and political compromises, cannot see what the dying, blind Metropolitan sees: the Promise, the presence of Christ, the flame beginning to rise. Spiritual sight belongs to the skeletal man in the ruined castle, not to the Past Master who will be king.

The Blessing

“Turn, God, and bring us to life again!”

“And thy people rejoice in thee.”

The versicle and response draw on Psalm 85 (84 in the Vulgate), asking God to restore life so that his people may rejoice.

Thomas rises to leave. Outside, he thinks: 'The last of them... This is the way it ends here.'

The Order of Saint Klingensmith

The Green-Robed Monks

Founder: Saint Klingensmith walked with Christ on Astrobe when the burning promise was given.

The Order

Dress: The monks wear green robes. The blackish complexion with a hint of green describes Father Oddopter individually.

Location: They dwell in the Feral Lands, fishing for hydras and keeping true faith far from the Golden Cities.

Sworn rule against staying in the same place two nights running. They have no permanent home.

Father Oddopter

He is a green-robed monk of the order of Saint Klingensmith... a blackish man with a hint of deep green, who winks and grins at the startled party.

He blesses the party, praying for preservation from dire-wolves, panthers, and programmed things.

He identifies each member of Thomas's party, knowing them by report and dream: Maxwell (avatar who burns bodies), Evita (archetype in monks’ dreams), Paul (who will suffer stark death), Thomas (revenant with a double sign, strange instrument of the Holy Ghost), Slider (the nothing man), Scrivener (less-than-nothing).

'What in particular are you fishing for, Father Oddopter?' 'You'll see.' He is fishing for the Devil—the hydra.

The Devil-Kill

The killing of the Devil must be done afresh daily, or our days be at an end.

The monks bait the hydra with a smaller creature, then attack when it surfaces—'cutting and hacking' through the giant eye into the brain.

Today's Devil was large, but it takes other forms like a mad direwolf or a porches-panther gone musk. We must kill it daily to limn his limits.

Father Oddopter says mass for over a hundred people in Goslar. An 'uncanny miracle came shockingly and vividly alive at the consecration'—heavens opening, Spirit descending.

The Church on Astrobe

History

Most churches have been razed three hundred years ago.

The feast of the Wooly Ram has not been held for more than three hundred years—only antiquarians could know about it.

The Church survives in Cathead, in the Feral Lands, in the hundred-plus followers scattered across Astrobe.

Revival

A slight revival... in Cathead' and 'non-burlesque rites.

On the night before Thomas's execution, the newly-appointed (or self-appointed) Metropolitan of Astrobe has put that whole world under interdict, until penance be done. Groups make up and sing ballads about it.

Then the tolling begins—on five hundred great bells of churches mostly razed three hundred years ago. That sound has not been heard within living memory on Astrobe. But five hundred great bells toll, and the people remember the names of them. The Archangel Gabriel, the Giant, Saint Peter, Mephistopheles, the Black Virgin, Saint Hilary—and 'one more, high and powerful and clear, the July Bell.'

The bells toll for Thomas More. The whole great golden unbelieving city of Cosmopolis does homage to Thomas More who will die tomorrow.

Cathead and the Golden Cities

Immediately after leaving the Metropolitan, Thomas sees sea-gleaners bringing in Dutchfish. It is plague day. Three men have died. The scow-master strips their boots and rolls the bodies into the fish cargo. The buyer docks pay for each body—they just aren't up to the fish in phosphor and sulphur and are hard on the grinders.

The Promise is given in the midst of death. The Church survives where the Golden Dream has failed—in Cathead, where bodies are weighed with fish, where the Metropolitan dies in a ruined castle, where Father Oddopter fishes for the Devil in the green darkness.

The Carnival and Execution

Chapters 12-13

The Carnival and Execution

Chapters 12-13: The Ultimate People and Apocephalon

Etymology: From Greek apo- ('away from,' 'separation') and kephalē ('head'). Literally: separation of the head.

The wake, carnival, and bells precede the execution. Foreman advances it from noon to eight, frustrating Battersea's rescue. More refuses Pottscamp's offer. The forerunner wave dies trying to reach him; Evita and three companions kill Foreman. The Stranger speaks with More before the beheading. The worlds end, and the final questions ask whether renewal follows.

The Wake at George's Shop

The Eagles Gather

Setting

The back room of George the Syrian's aromatics shop in Cosmopolis, 'right off Centrality Square.'

'The Eagles were gathering.' The phrase is Shanty's.

Paul enters through a side door. Copperhead has escaped through walls; Maxwell appears in a manufactured old woman's body. Evita tries the barred door and then smashes through it.

Tales at the Wake

The Eagles tell stories that the monitoring machines cannot interpret. The machines assume concealed information, but the narrative does not confirm a cipher.

Automatic monitors record and interpret but fail to understand. This isn't code like you meet every night.

• George's tale of the Syrian and the sand dune: The only thing ever left over when the world ends is one syrian and one sand dune... If the syrian goes behind the dune, there is hope.

• Adam's tale of Saint Brandon arriving on Astrobe 1500 years before official history, with 19 Irish monks in a coracle boat.

• Shanty's tale of the boar hog and lightning rod salesman.

Adam's Prophecy

Question: Evita asks: 'My brother, you know these things also. Will it be his death?'

“Yes, it will be his death. And my final one.”

Adam says Battersea is not wrong: he will strike, and a new world may be made, although many details must change. This does not withdraw Adam's prediction of More's death.

The Fools’ Carnival

A Fools’ Holiday Such as They Have Not Had for a Hundred Years

The night before the execution, Cosmopolis erupts in unprecedented revelry. It is a fools’ carnival indeed, all split into high-spirited warring factions spilling over into masquerade.

Activities

'Happy fighting.' Not lungers or hard-heads from Cathead, but civilized Cosmopolitans. Heads are broken, and people laugh, as if it had been a thousand years before.

'Ban and Beyond' banners flown and pulled down in glorious melee. 'Sackcloth and Ashes' faction marches and jokes.

The newly-appointed Metropolitan has put the whole world under interdict; groups make up and sing ballads about it.

High Ladies of Astrobe dress as crones and hawk candy heads and skulls for the beheading. Wooly Rams found and barbecued—the feast of the Wooly Ram has not been held on Astrobe for more than three hundred years.

Drinking and shouting, looting and arson, all carried out in pretty good spirits.

New Emotions

A whole barrelful of new emotions spilled into the streets around Centrality Square.

Anger (and who of the Citizens has been angry in their whole lives?), wonder, truculence, battle-joy, revelry, serpents’ tooth remorse, utter penitence, pinnacled hope, joy-in-murder, joy-in-humility.

All the detectable Programmed Persons are in hiding. They feel fear, an emotion that is not even programmed into them. They cannot reason this thing out at all, and reason is the only thing that the Programmed Persons have.

The Five Hundred Bells

The Old Old World Funeral Toll

Then the tolling begins. On the great bells of a forgotten or museumized church, then on another and another, then on five hundred.

Most of these Churches have been razed three hundred years ago. How are their giant bells sounding the Old Old World Funeral Toll now? That sound has not been heard within living memory on Astrobe.

But five hundred great bells toll, and the people remember the names of them.

Archangel GabrielThe GiantThe White OgreThe Shepherd KingSaint PeterKing of BavariaYellow DwarfSaint SimeonThe DutchmanArchbishop TurpinRhinelanderDanielJew BellMephistophelesThe Black VirginShip BellThe MountainSaint Hilary

And one more, high and powerful and clear, the July Bell.

The whole great golden unbelieving city of Cosmopolis does homage to Thomas More who will die tomorrow.

Foreman's Theory of World Death

The Mustard Seed and Transcendent Yeast

The Visit

Foreman visits Thomas at dawn. He is 'High Civilian in Charge of Execution.'

He finds Thomas unusually placid for a man scheduled to die. The two weigh each other with cautious eyes.

The Theory

Worlds die periodically—instantly ceasing all life, heat, gravity, meaning. Foreman believes he will witness it today.

Foreman proposes transitions around Christ's birth, 500, 1000, 1500, and 2000, followed by the current Astrobian crisis. He places More's first death near the transition from the High Middle Ages to the modern world, not near the year 1000. This remains his theory.

A transcendent yeast, a small quantity of the immaterial, must be added every 500 years or so for rebirth. Thomas's death and the reaction to the 'Ban the Beyond' push will be the trigger.

“The mustard seed, we plant it now.”

Thomas's death is absolutely required. Foreman insists: 'All other hopes are vain.'

The Betrayal

Foreman Changes the Time

A mechanical voice pings 'Ten minute call!' Foreman declares: 'All right, Thomas... We go now to your end. Come, come.'

Thomas protests—it is not yet 8 a.m., he dies at noon, nothing is ready.

I changed it, Thomas. I changed it to eight o'clock... There was no other way.

Foreman admits he knew about Battersea's rescue plan—being his former commander—and picked up the details easily.

Thomas accuses him of murder despite friendship. Foreman affirms: This is the only way to bring off the reaction—humanity's rediscovery.

“I don't consent.”

You are the only ultimately honest man I can think of, who has shown stubborn honesty before and has a curious magnetism, becoming a symbol once and needing to become one again. We had almost run out of symbols on Astrobe.

Thomas moans: 'I die for it, and I don't even know what it's about.'

Pottscamp's Offer

Thomas is brought to a standstill before Pottscamp at the foot of the scaffold, 'as required by ritual.'

Offer: Will you reconsider? Sign now, and live happily. Or die meanly. If Thomas dies, Pottscamp becomes Surrogate President and will sign the bill himself.

'Snake-in-my-brain... I will not have died for the Oudennothing!' Thomas sees now that the Thing they try to kill is the only Thing that matters.

Off with my head if only to close my ears to this babble! Out of my way, you damnable jump-jack!

Pottscamp flees as though stricken, then sits on the ground, moaning and howling like an old Hebrew, pouring dust and ashes over his head.

The Forerunner Wave

A Minute Thing but Incomparably Savage

Context

Thomas More has been World President, King, for nine days. And now he will die.

The early-morning rain has stopped, and now there is a rush to complete the act.

The men from Cathead, rumor says, have received word of the sudden change of time and are mobbing toward the center of Cosmopolis, but might well be too late.

The Attack

There is one wave of fury, a minute thing but incomparably savage, rising moments before a true tidal wave: the forerunner wave.

Buff Shanty and Paul are in it, driving with great impetus. Walter Copperhead is in it, though he must know it is futile. The boy Adam is in it. Possibly thirty others, fine people of Cosmopolis.

Its suddenness almost brings success. The men bowl over guards and gain scaffold steps. Fighting is close; they give a life for every step.

Adam

Adam is the crest, reaching the scaffold and touching Thomas before guards fling him down.

He rises brokenly.

Adam dies magnificently—as he always did.

Failure

The wave lacks bulk; guards are too many. The thrust crests, shatters, ebbs in blood.

Shanty, Paul, Copperhead, Adam, and the others die around the scaffold foot and on the steps, 'making them slippery.'

Evita's Vengeance

Sparagmos Enacted

Evita, knowing it will fail, surges not towards Thomas but towards Fabian Foreman at the square's edge.

The Attack

'Zehheeroot, is-Kerioth,' she howls ('Beware, Iscariot').

She attacks him like a lioness, swipes his face red, bites his throat. Foreman screams in terror.

I be a cold fury and not a witch. Woe to him by whom it comes... Certain primitives were wont to kill a dog to be company to the hero... You are such a dog.

Foreman's Last Words: Foreman gasps: No, no, woman! I'm the master of it all... The furious reaction... will set humanity back... and let a new world be born.

Evita sings she is the heart of that reaction, reveling in it, calling Foreman a 'dog puppeteer.'

She practically dismembers him. She breaks his face, throws the shapeless man over her shoulder, carries him to George, Maxwell, and Rimrock. The four tear him apart and kill him.

Evita takes the biggest piece and hangs it on a Carob tree (Judas Tree).

Foreman has done his part well, planned it all except his own death; everything was meant well.

The guards kill George, Maxwell, and Rimrock, adding their blood to the transcendental yeast. They do not catch Evita.

The Stranger

Can a Man Have More Heads Than Two?

One man breaks through, unstoppable, unseen by guards. This stranger goes to Thomas on the scaffold, speaks unheard words.

Thomas seems excited, pleased. He cries loudly: 'Will it work, do you think?... How droll! Can a man have more heads than two? I'll do it. I'll go with you.'

But apparently Thomas doesn't go, anywhere but to his death. The stranger disappears into the crowd or charged air; guesses remain about his identity.

Some say something disappears from Thomas then—his essence—leaving a shadow man. A weird old woman cries she can see through him.

Unidentified. Possibly Christ.

Last Words

Pater, in Manus Tuas—

The rest is legend: quips Thomas supposedly said (some good, some cute, most in books of quotations), but he didn't say them, not this time or the first.

His only last words on the scaffold are "Pater, in manus tuas—" (a scrap of old prayer).

The prayer begins Father, into your hands, echoing Christ's words in Luke 23:46. It breaks off before the blade falls.

The blade falls and More is beheaded. The narrative insists on the reality of the blood and death.

The narrator reports the snakes and the woman carrying the head, then disavows them with an insistence that such things could not happen. The tone preserves uncertainty rather than settling every prodigy as fact or falsehood.

The World Ends

Everything Ceases. And All the Stars Go Out.

But one thing does really happen. At the moment life flickers out of the beheaded corpus, the worlds come to an end.

All life and heat and pulse go out of the world. It dies in every bird, rock, plant, person, mountain, sea, cloud. It dies in gravity, light, heat, germ-life, life-code. Everything ceases. And all the stars go out.

Is it for a moment? Or a billion years? Or forever? There is no difference when the world ends, no time to measure time by.

Remember how it had been? A priest renegade just becomes Metropolitan; a programmed machine succeeds to president but wails, pouring ashes. Battersea and his men mob towards Centrality Square under their Hand-of-Vengeance banner. On such notes the worlds end.

The Questions

And is a new world born? Yeasted? Does the furious reaction bridge the gap? Does the mustard seed grow? The Judas tree bear fruit?

Does lightning lace things together or sunder forever? Thunder flattens worlds; a tidal wave carries away golden fungus.

In less than an instant, more than forever, it is over. But has it sequence? Does a new world follow?

The narrator asks whether the hand on the banner is misunderstood and recalls Gandy's Left Hand of God. The question is not spoken by Northprophet.

Remember cycles (Rome, Europe, Americas, Astrobe)? Cycles internal, electrifying? Divinity becomes humanity? Humanity becomes divinity?

Can spirit come down on gell-cells, flux-fix? Shall sterile wood fruit? Is Avid Nothingness cast away? Room for life? Return to real life? Does reaction become birthing?

Be quiet. We watch.

Be quiet. We wait.

Be quiet. We hope.

Time Travel

Chronometanastasis and Hopp-Equation Space

Time Travel in Past Master

Past Master employs two distinct modes of temporal/spatial displacement: Chronometanastasis (retrieving persons from the past) and Hopp-Equation Travel (interstellar transit). Both involve profound dislocations of reality, identity, and consciousness.

Both forms of travel disturb identity. More's retrieval resembles resurrection symbolically, but the machine takes him while alive in his own past. The later visit to his grave makes his simultaneous relation to life and death visible.

Chronometanastasis

Travel into the Past

Etymology: A Greek-derived name for travel through time. Its function is shown by the tuned loop and its calibrated attachments.

“Find a dead man who once led well. Let him lead again.”

Chronometanastasis has been a working thing for a dozen years.

The Apparatus

Location: Kingmaker's London office on Earth

Device: A 'tuned antenna-like loop'—the 'basic machine' with attachments for calibration.

To the observer, the traveler vanishes into 'crackling air.' To the traveler: 'unholy gray confusion that is deeper than darkness.' All time travelers experience sickness.

Requirements

Coins: Brooks supplies coins of the required period. Paul jokes about the problem of spending Tomorrow Coins in the wrong day.

Calibration: Paul brings a calibrated attachment. He says Brooks need not know its exact calibration, not that calibration is unnecessary.

The Paradox of Two

Question: “Will there be two of me, then, Paul?”

More's Answer: “Every man is a multitude.”

History records More's death 'on a certain date in an extreme manner, and in this realm.' The retrieved More exists simultaneously—his bones remain in his grave at St. Peter in Chains while he walks on Astrobe.

Candidates Considered

Plato: 'Too cold, too placid.' Foreman calls him essentially 'a programmed person himself'—a just man who believed he could never be unhappy.

King Yu, Mung K'o, Chandragupta, Stilicho, Charles the Great, Cosimo I, Macchiavelli, Edward Coke, Gustavas Vasa, Lincoln, Inigo Jones: Almost good enough... a little something lacking in each.

I want a man who can be unhappy over an unjust situation.' More's 'showy act of honesty' that costs his head makes him uniquely qualified—or his 'one honest moment.

The Time Men

Previous Visitors to Thomas More

One of the great mysteries of the book. Who are these travelers?

More has been visited by time travelers before due to his historical significance. He has 'a number of past and future things in my head.'

He asked questions of his visitors and knows 'a little of several futures.'

What the Time Men Revealed

• Paul lives approximately 1000 years hence, during the 'First Astrobian Time of Troubles.'

• Astrobe is 'wobbly' then, and will still be wobbly 1000 years after Paul's death—just a different wobble. Astrobe survives the current crisis.

• The man who saves Astrobe was 'shamefully treated,' his name unknown, identified only as 'the Past Master.'

The Utopia Irony: Time travelers told More his 'angry humor piece' Utopia was always misunderstood as depicting an ideal world. He wrote it in 'bitter and laughing irony' about the 'sickest of all possible worlds.' He finds the future 'slack' for mistaking satire for a 'vapid dream.'

Hopp-Equation Space

The Medium of Interstellar Travel

Hopp-Equation Space travel breaks reality. Not like ordinary space—persons and things 'aren't the same' during traversal.

Physics

Distance: The novel gives the distance as 1.5 parsecs and describes an ordinary light-speed journey as over five years. Its stated figures are approximate and do not align exactly.

Duration: Hopp-Equation Travel takes about one Astrobe month (approximately 700 standard hours).

Speed: Approximately 64× light speed.

No sense of motion. The universe disappears. No worlds, stars, or duration perceived.

The Fundamental Reversal

'Absolutely fundamental reversal' or 'total reversal of polarity'—a common private joke among pilots.

• Paul becomes left-handed during passage.

• He jokes it's the only way he could sing soprano, which he often does in this state.

• Thomas experiences it as inexpressible fury: He seethes with inexpressible fury. He asks Paul if it happens to all Hopp-Equation travelers.

“What's time to a revenant? I've been dead a thousand years, that I should live to such shame.”

Hopp-Equation travel is very new.

Passage Dreams

Twenty Thousand Dreams in Ninety-Second Intervals

Mechanism

Sleep is restricted to 90-second intervals by instrumentation. Paul becomes adept, experiencing intricate dreams.

He calculates having at least 20,000 memorable, gemlike, self-contained, widely different dreams during passage—each a short life.

Attributed to compressing 4.5 years of psychic awareness (Law of Conservation of Psychic Totality) into one month. Nearly 5 years of psychic experience crowded into a month; psychic mass isn't foreshortened.

Nature

Debris: 'Psychic space debris'—fragments of billions of minds, poignant, comic, horrifying episodes.

Ansels: The ansel appears in many dreams; ansels were in human unconscious before being found on Astrobe.

Paul knew some dream monsters were real creatures living in Hopp-Equation space—some encountered only by him, others by multiple pilots in the same way and place.

Only the maladjusted can stand passages; well-adjusted pilots crack up. Hopp-Equation pilots are a peculiar breed.

This is why Paul—irregular, citizenship revoked, hunted by Killers—can make the journey. His very brokenness qualifies him.

Paul's Journey to Retrieve More

Outbound

Paul leaves in Foreman's spacecraft with permission keyed for it. The grasshopper he steals to reach the spaceport is a different vehicle.

Paul travels from Golden Astrobe to Blue Earth. Earth appears bluish from Astrobe; Astrobe golden from Earth—due to their suns’ different white light.

Paul makes Earth-fall on the morning side, 'a beautiful experience that never gets old.' He lands in London, stables his craft.

In London

Kingmaker has extensive Earth interests; Paul knows his way around. Brooks manages the London office, immediately flustered by an Astrobe visitor—Earthmen feel inferior since the elite left for Astrobe 400-500 years ago.

Paul presents forged credentials (he could have gotten real ones but prefers doing things himself). Brooks accepts them, respecting 'the buccaneer in a man.'

The Time Jump

Paul steps through the tuned antenna-like loop, disappearing to Brooks into crackling air.

Materializes ankle-deep in mud on the edge of a large, sprawling wooden town—16th-century London.

In a ramshackle public house, Paul eats wood-cock, 'very high beef,' barley bread, and an onion 'the size of a child's head.'

The proprietor warns: 'The King's men are everywhere, friend. Walk in Christ.'

Chelsea

After an hour or two of walking, Paul reaches Chelsea. He is pleased the English haven't yet become 'that most unhandsome of people.'

He spots Thomas More walking in his frozen garden, 'wrapped up like a sheep.' Paul recognizes him instantly, though he only slightly resembles Holbein's portrait (which looks more like Holbein).

More Visits His Own Grave

After returning through the tunnel loop to modern London, Thomas insists on visiting St. Peter in Chains church.

The priest confirms the bones and ring found in the grave. He assumes the ring worn by the living More is a replica, failing to recognize his visitor.

The priest assumes More is an antiquarian. More corrects: 'No, I'm an antiquary... I have a special interest in this man.'

What other man, Paul, looks down on his own grave and he in it? All except my head.' His head is buried at Canterbury—'Parboiled it, did they not?

More expresses desire to see his head but deems the 70-mile journey 'too long'—despite preparing for a 1.5 parsec trip to Astrobe.

The Return to Astrobe

Thomas brings mystery novels, revels, bonanzas, science fiction (all new to him), plus newly discovered tobacco (stogie declared most wonderful thing since Evangels). He plans to smoke and read the whole trip.

All goes well until the first cosmic disappearance. Thomas tries to bellow, but his voice won't—the fundamental reversal has occurred.

More experiences thousands of dreams in sleeps of at most ninety seconds. Figures include Rimrock, a composite female, a lion-headed spider, a fox, and a hawk shuffling shells. Their relation to the people he meets becomes apparent later.

Annotations

The twenty-fifth hour

Kingmaker imagines a crisis continuing beyond the last possible hour. The title also invites comparison with C. Virgil Gheorghiu’s novel about a person trapped in the classifications and machinery of modern society. The resemblance is especially apt while Astrobe’s mechanical Killers batter down the building.

C. Virgil Gheorghiu, The Twenty-Fifth Hour (1949; English translation, 1950).

The lion, the fox, and the hawk

Kingmaker’s lion and Proctor’s fox recall Machiavelli’s advice that a prince needs both strength and cunning. Foreman’s hawk adds a third figure to the pair. Their competing claims to control one another make government a contest among these different kinds of power.

Niccolò Machiavelli, The Prince, chap. 18.

Kingmaker and Fabian

Kingmaker’s name recalls Warwick, the magnate who made and unmade English kings. Fabian can suggest Fabius Cunctator, the Roman commander famous for delay, and the society named after him. Foreman’s waiting and carefully timed intervention suit that association, although the novel does not explain his name.

Shakespeare, 3 Henry VI, 3.3; the historical epithets Warwick the Kingmaker and Fabius Cunctator.

The crack of doom

The phrase belongs to Macbeth’s vision of a seemingly endless succession of kings. Here the Masters argue over postponing judgment while the Killers provide the thunder outside. A familiar expression becomes a physical event in the scene.

Shakespeare, Macbeth, 4.1.

The doom clock

Foreman’s mechanical man belongs to the clock that threatens Astrobe. The image recalls the Doomsday Clock of Cold War public life. A manufactured president cannot save the world if he is another part of the machinery bringing about its end.

The Bulletin of the Atomic Scientists’ Doomsday Clock, introduced in 1947.

Deaths and failures

Foreman distinguishes the death of a historical world from its failure. His account develops into the five-hundred-year sequence in Chapter 13. Toynbee offers a useful comparison for the language of civilizational breakdown, especially the later phrase Time of Troubles; Foreman’s particular chronology is his own.

Arnold J. Toynbee, A Study of History; Past Master, chap. 13.

Byerly and the manufactured candidate

Byerly’s name appears amid doubts about whether a candidate is human and a proposal to manufacture the ideal president. This makes Asimov’s Stephen Byerley, the politician suspected of being a robot, a plausible allusion. The spelling differs, and Lafferty leaves the connection unstated.

Isaac Asimov, “Evidence” (1946) and “The Evitable Conflict” (1950).

Chronometanastasis

The name combines Greek words for time and migration. It makes travel into the past sound like a change of dwelling. The embedded resemblance to anastasis, resurrection, also suits the project of bringing a long-dead man back into public life.

Greek chronos, time; metanastasis, migration; anastasis, rising or resurrection.

Why Plato is rejected

Foreman objects to Plato’s claim that justice makes a man happy. He wants someone who can be unhappy over an unjust situation. The discussion tests the difference between designing an ideal commonwealth and suffering with the people who inhabit an actual one.

Plato, Republic 1.354a; Thomas More, Utopia, book 1.

A great man from the past

The candidates include rulers, counselors, a jurist, and an architect. Foreman reduces his own list to More and to one decisive act of honesty. This resembles the great-man theory of history, but the choice also makes the supposedly exemplary man dependent on those who recruit him.

Thomas Carlyle, On Heroes, Hero-Worship, and the Heroic in History (1841).

The honest moment and the lost head

The exchange anticipates More’s execution on Tower Hill in 1535 and his second execution on Astrobe. Roper records More speaking plainly against the statute after his conviction. That episode helps illuminate Foreman’s interest in a final honest act; Lafferty’s More is a fictional reworking of the historical martyr.

William Roper, The Life of Sir Thomas More, account of the trial and execution.

The mustard seed

Foreman needs only a very small beginning. The Gospel seed that grows into a great plant gives his political experiment a religious scale. Chapter 13 returns to the image when he explains what he expects More’s death to accomplish.

Matthew 13:31–32; Mark 4:30–32; Luke 13:18–19.

Paul the traveler

More explicitly connects the pilot with his name-saint, the apostle whose journeys fill Acts. The comparison gives Paul’s mission a spiritual possibility that its organizers do not explain to him. His confession before his own birth adds a comic reversal to that connection.

Acts 13–28.

The guards and the hounds

Paul’s escape depends on bringing the mechanical guards and Killers together like bears and hounds in a baiting. The image anticipates the journey to More’s England, where bear-baiting was a familiar public spectacle. Paul and his allies arrange the encounter and exploit the confusion.

The English bear-baiting tradition.

Reversal in Hopp-Equation space

Paul’s change of handedness recalls the mirror-reversed traveler in Wells’s “The Plattner Story.” Lafferty extends the joke to sex and voice. This bodily reversal also begins the novel’s larger pattern of left-handed actions and unexpected means of rescue.

H. G. Wells, “The Plattner Story” (1896).

Dreams and the human unconscious

The statement that ansels existed in the human unconscious before people discovered them on Astrobe invites comparison with Jung’s archetypes. The novel lets an image encountered in dreams become a creature met in waking life. It does not require that every passage dream be decoded into a single fixed meaning.

C. G. Jung, writings on the collective unconscious and archetypes.

Adam

The first man’s name belongs to a boy who repeatedly appears in scenes of battle and death. His insistence that each death belongs to another bearer of the name complicates any simple account of resurrection. The biblical association brings the deaths of individual men into the story of mankind.

Genesis 2–3; 1 Corinthians 15:22, 45.

Sour John and the stolen emerald

Sour John is also a storyteller in Lafferty’s “The Ugly Sea.” His theft of an idol’s green eye recalls J. Milton Hayes’s music-hall monologue, but the replacement kidney turns the adventure into a joke about mistaken value. Paul’s objection to the port’s geography is overruled by the teller.

R. A. Lafferty, “The Ugly Sea” (1960); J. Milton Hayes, “The Green Eye of the Little Yellow God” (1911).

Rhium and Antirhium

The paired stars borrow the names of the opposing headlands at the entrance to the Gulf of Corinth. Their linked rotation resembles a centrifugal governor regulating a machine. When the chain breaks, the dream makes a cosmic catastrophe out of a mechanical failure.

Thucydides, History of the Peloponnesian War 2.86; Strabo, Geography 8.2.3.

More’s Utopia

More calls his book a bitter joke that later readers have mistaken for a blueprint. This is the fictional More’s account of his intention. It establishes the central predicament: the author must live in, and eventually govern, a world that has taken his imagined commonwealth seriously.

Thomas More, Utopia (1516).

The sickest possible world

More’s description of Utopia reverses the familiar formula of the best of all possible worlds. The later history of that formula, especially Voltaire’s Pangloss, makes the line another deliberate-looking anachronism in the speech of a man who already knows several futures.

Gottfried Wilhelm Leibniz, Theodicy (1710); Voltaire, Candide (1759).

The meeting at Chelsea

Paul finds More free in his garden before the decision that will lead to his death. Historically, More refused the oath in April 1534 and was imprisoned until his execution in July 1535. The novel combines that situation with a journey about a thousand years back from 2535; its calendar does not resolve into an exact historical date.

Roper, The Life of Sir Thomas More; More’s imprisonment, 1534–35.

Holbein’s portrait

Paul recognizes More partly from Holbein’s portrait. The contrast between the short, familiar-looking man and the tall Astrobian pilot makes the historical figure physically unheroic before the narrative tests what kind of hero he can become.

Hans Holbein the Younger, Sir Thomas More (1527), Frick Collection.

Past Master

The title joins a master from the past with the ordinary meaning of an expert. It also recalls an office formerly held in a guild or lodge. The later language of masters, a station, and an inner circle extends those institutional associations.

The guild and Masonic office of past master; Past Master, chap. 4.

Mercy and the old things

More’s Latin plea for mercy belongs to the language of prayer. The publican’s farewell and lament for the old things likewise draw on scriptural idiom. In this scene the promise of things made new is heard by someone who fears what the religious changes will destroy.

Miserere mihi, Domine, Roman Missal, Introit for the Sixteenth Sunday after Pentecost; 2 Corinthians 5:17; Colossians 2:6; Revelation 21:4–5.

Looking into his own grave

The chapter title comes from More’s visit to the grave that already contains his bones. The historical More prepared a tomb and epitaph at Chelsea, but his body was buried at St. Peter ad Vincula in the Tower. Lafferty’s scene makes the traveler confront the fact of his first death before he goes to meet a second.

More’s Chelsea epitaph (1532); Roper, The Life of Sir Thomas More.

The head and the signet ring

The burial tradition separates More’s body in the Tower from his head at Canterbury. The future priest’s discovery of identifiable bones and a signet ring belongs to Lafferty’s fiction. Its purpose is to make More’s presence and his completed death equally tangible.

Thomas Stapleton, Tres Thomae (1588), account of Margaret Roper and More’s head.

Enskied and sainted

The rare verb enskied recalls Lucio’s description of Isabella in Measure for Measure. Paul has just reminded More of his canonization; the flight then sends the sainted man literally into the sky. More’s enthusiasm for a newly discovered cigar keeps the ascent comic.

Shakespeare, Measure for Measure, 1.4.

The woman in More’s dream

Succubus, Eve, Lilith, Judith, Mary, and Valkyrie bring demonic, maternal, holy, and martial figures into one image. Judith’s beheading of Holofernes is especially pointed in a novel about More’s head. The composite anticipates Evita without reducing her to one of its names.

Genesis 2–3; Judith 13; the traditions of Lilith and the Valkyries.

The Naked Sailor and the seven hells

More places the inn in a numbered division of Hell and consoles Paul that three worse divisions remain. The Qur’an supplies seven gates, while later commentaries arrange the inhabitants differently. The joke’s exact assignment of Christians to a fourth division should be read as More’s statement within the scene.

Qur’an 15:44; George Sale, Preliminary Discourse to The Koran (1734).

Poverty and Utopia

More’s outrage at starvation and punishing labor recalls Hythloday’s indictment of England in Utopia. Cathead confronts him with a further difficulty: its inhabitants have chosen to leave material abundance. His familiar political explanations cannot yet account for that choice.

Thomas More, Utopia, book 1.

Holy poverty

More accepts voluntary religious poverty but recoils from deprivation that degrades its sufferers. The distinction matters throughout the Cathead chapters. His admiration for a modest life does not make him an advocate of the conditions he sees here.

The Franciscan tradition of holy poverty; More’s account of common life in Utopia.

The oceanic man

Rimrock’s seal-like body and ability to move on land recall the seal-people of northern folklore. His shifting between no legs, four, and two can also suggest the Sphinx’s riddle about man. More’s decisive test, however, is intellect and spirit rather than an animal’s outward shape.

The selkie tradition; Apollodorus, Library 3.5.8.

Ouden and the Greek joke-names

Ouden means nothing. The name extends the learned naming games of Utopia, whose island, city, and river carry teasing Greek meanings. Here the word becomes a speaker who describes his nothingness as active, hungry, and destructive.

Greek ouden, nothing; More, Utopia.

Nothingness and evil

More’s denial that Ouden has being can be read alongside Augustine and Aquinas on evil as a privation of good. Ouden answers that his nothingness is a vortex. The exchange tests what that destructive claim means; it does not by itself settle the novel’s metaphysics in Ouden’s favor.

Augustine, Confessions 7.12; Aquinas, Summa theologiae I, q. 48.

The one kindling

Ouden remembers a single kindling that overcame him and claims that he is extinguishing it. John’s light shining in darkness supplies a strong biblical comparison. Paul-Thomas answers with the possibility of rekindling and with a resource that Ouden does not know.

John 1:4–5.

Every man a king

The golden inhabitants appear to fulfill the promise associated with Huey Long’s slogan. Their magnificence makes More eager to join them. Later encounters ask whether this universal royalty has left its beneficiaries capable of thought, refusal, or spiritual life.

Huey P. Long, Every Man a King (1933) and the Share Our Wealth slogan.

A catalogue of paradises

More praises Astrobe through a mixture of Gospel language, classical myth, and Irish otherworld geography. The pearl of great price stands beside Iris, Great Brasil, and the Hesperides. This abundance of names reveals how much hope he brings to what he is seeing.

Matthew 13:45–46; the myths of Iris and the Hesperides; the Irish Hy-Brasil tradition.

The whited sepulcher

Evita’s answer comes from Christ’s denunciation of tombs beautiful outside and full of death within. She supplies the diagnosis while More is still admiring the surface. The contrast governs both this chapter and the later discovery of Astrobe’s deformed reverse.

Matthew 23:27.

Fawney men and false gold

A fawney man practices a ring swindle, passing a worthless ring off as valuable. More’s compliment to Rimrock therefore associates enchantment with deceptive gold. It belongs beside the repeated question of what Golden Astrobe’s apparent wealth is worth.

The thieves’ cant terms fawney and fawney rig.

The Greek and Jewish mechanical man

More explicitly recalls older dreams of artificial servants. Greek examples include Hephaestus’s golden attendants and the bronze Talos; the Jewish tradition supplies the golem. Pottscamp’s dream of the toy that consumes its maker gives that admiration a frightening sequel.

Homer, Iliad 18.417–20; Apollonius Rhodius, Argonautica 4; the golem tradition.

The president as a masked performer

The former presidents’ extravagant names sound to More like gladiators or American wrestlers. His sponsors likewise plan to present a recognizable persona to the public. The joke makes political office resemble a staged performance whose billing matters more than its holder’s freedom to act.

The novel’s explicit comparison with gladiators and masked professional wrestlers.

Washing one’s hands

Proctor’s description of Kingmaker and Foreman’s refusal to wash his hands recall Pilate. The gesture concerns responsibility for a death already being planned. Foreman’s willingness to own his part does not remove the moral question of what he is doing to his friend.

Matthew 27:24.

Termination and the satisfied guest

Proctor compares the man ready to die with a guest who has eaten enough. Lucretius and Horace use the satisfied guest as an image of leaving life without complaint. Astrobe turns that consolation into an argument for readily available termination.

Lucretius, On the Nature of Things 3.938; Horace, Satires 1.1.117–19.

Termination and More’s own book

Utopia allows priests and magistrates to urge a voluntary death upon someone suffering from incurable, painful illness. Astrobe makes termination a common response to weariness. The altered conditions are essential to the comparison: Lafferty’s institution is much broader than the practice described by More.

Thomas More, Utopia, book 2, “Of Their Slaves, and of Their Marriages.”

False dawn

Foreman spoils the consoling proverb about darkness before dawn by inserting a false dawn. He later claims responsibility for making a particular sun rise, borrowing language ordinarily applied to God. His confidence invites scrutiny as the cost of his promised renewal becomes clear.

Matthew 5:45; the proverb about darkness before dawn.

The thirty shells

Foreman’s counting and weeping make the shells a strong counterpart to Judas’s thirty pieces of silver. The scene anticipates the betrayal named openly in Chapter 13. The warning about Mother Carey’s chicken adds the storm petrel’s maritime associations to the threatened victim.

Matthew 26:15; 27:3–5; the sailors’ name Mother Carey’s chicken.

Camiroi and Puca

The school assignments in Pottscamp’s dream contain names from Lafferty’s other fiction. Treating those peoples and languages as ordinary school subjects gives the invented worlds a shared background while the toy’s effortless learning exposes the child’s dependence on it.

Lafferty, “Primary Education of the Camiroi” (1966), “Polity and Custom of the Camiroi” (1967), and The Reefs of Earth (1968).

The Shape of Things to Come

The title names Wells’s future history, in which a world administration reorganizes civilization and suppresses religion. Astrobe’s managed happiness and its treatment of worship as an antiquity give the allusion particular force. Chapter 10 answers this title with The Deformity of Things to Come.

H. G. Wells, The Shape of Things to Come (1933), especially book 4.

The same everywhere

Kingmaker’s praise of Astrobe’s uniformity recalls Utopia’s closely similar towns. More’s wish to travel puts the author in opposition to the commonwealth associated with his name. He insists on seeing what an account of the whole planet leaves out.

Thomas More, Utopia, book 2, “Of Their Towns, Particularly of Amaurot.”

The Dream as a version of Utopia

The precis machine describes common access to goods, freedom from poverty, and a simplified legal order. These recall institutions in Utopia, although the golden world gives them a different purpose. More’s recognition is also a crisis of authorship: his joke has become a place people must inhabit.

Thomas More, Utopia, book 2.

The Big O and the Omega Point

Astrobe’s account of humanity converging into a single organism invites comparison with Teilhard de Chardin’s Omega Point. The novel’s Omega becomes Ouden and the Big O, a destination described as nothingness. This is a satirical resemblance; Teilhard’s own account gives convergence a transcendent and Christian end.

Pierre Teilhard de Chardin, The Phenomenon of Man (1955; English translation, 1959).

Holy Nothingness

The Dream’s religious vocabulary makes the abolition of transcendence sound like an act of worship. It can be read against the death-of-God debates contemporary with the novel. The phrase also occurs in Richard Rubenstein’s theology, but the shared wording alone does not establish a direct source.

Richard L. Rubenstein, After Auschwitz (1966); Thomas J. J. Altizer, The Gospel of Christian Atheism (1966).

Travel beyond the booths

Utopia regulates travel with official permission; Astrobe’s instantaneous transport serves the civilized regions. The comparison helps explain why a walk matters here. Leaving the convenient network lets More encounter places and people that the official description does not adequately explain.

Thomas More, Utopia, book 2, “Of the Travelling of the Utopians.”

Hunting and the author of Utopia

More’s delight in either end of a hunt contrasts with the Utopians’ contempt for hunting. The contrast separates the character’s appetites from the rules of the society in his book. His attraction to the wild draws him further from Astrobe’s claim that civilized life is complete.

Thomas More, Utopia, book 2, discussion of pleasure and hunting.

The tree and its fruit

More imagines his joke as a tree unexpectedly bearing fruit, then judges a failing religious institution by the image of a barren tree. The Gospel language makes him apply to the Church a test that also bears on his own political invention.

Matthew 7:17–20; Luke 13:6–9.

The replica Mass

The museum rite combines guitar, drugs, theatrical dress, and commercial sponsorship. Its details turn a religious service into a degraded exhibit. The scene can be read in relation to the liturgical and popular culture of the 1960s, but its grotesque composite is Lafferty’s fictional projection.

The novel’s account of the museumized Mass; mid-twentieth-century liturgical and popular culture.

Dante’s infernal instruments

More himself invokes Dante when he hears the instruments. Relevant passages include Barbariccia’s obscene trumpet, Master Adam’s lute-shaped body and drum-like belly, and Nimrod’s horn. The reference is comic and composite: Dante does not describe an orchestra of guitars in the lowest circle.

Dante, Inferno 21.139; 30.49–54, 103; 31.12–18.

What he will be given to see

Pottscamp’s assurance about what will be given in the hour recalls Christ’s promise of words to disciples brought before hostile authorities. The change from speaking to seeing suits More’s journey. The question is whether he can recognize what the encounters disclose.

Matthew 10:19–20.

Rimrock’s sky

The ansels’ ancestors climbed through what they had taken for the sky and found land above the sea. Plato imagines a sea-dweller making a similar discovery in the Phaedo. The parallel makes Rimrock’s account a challenge to the belief that one’s familiar world exhausts reality.

Plato, Phaedo 109c–110a.

Evita, Eve, and Lilith

More calls Evita Lilith rather than Eve; she claims both names. The exchange brings the first mother and the rebellious first wife of later Jewish legend into the same woman. It continues the composite female figure of More’s passage dream.

Genesis 2–3; Alphabet of Ben Sira, the Lilith story.

All nations and the end of the world

Slider questions whether Christ’s commission and promise apply beyond Earth. His argument depends on taking nations and world in a narrowly terrestrial sense. Chapter 8 gives the Metropolitan’s direct answer, making this a dispute within the novel rather than an established limit on the Promise.

Matthew 28:19–20; Past Master, chap. 8.

The sting in the tail

The closing image of a fair face and a dangerous tail recalls Dante’s Geryon, the embodiment of fraud. It also belongs to the proverbial poison reserved for the tail or end. Astrobe’s pleasing appearance has concealed what More discovers behind it.

Dante, Inferno 17.1–27; the proverb in cauda venenum.

Old animal names on a new planet

Kastroides recalls the extinct giant beaver Castoroides, and the direwolves likewise borrow a prehistoric name. Paul warns that the resemblance lies in the names. The earthly vocabulary helps the travelers begin to describe creatures whose behavior and proportions remain unfamiliar.

The names Castoroides and dire wolf; the novel’s explanation of borrowed animal names.

Rouks and the roc

The enormous predatory bird recalls the roc of travel legend. Its habit of displaying human bodies on thorns also resembles a shrike’s impaled prey, enlarged to a human scale. More’s comparison with men hanging dead wolves reverses the ordinary relation between hunter and hunted.

The roc in the Sindbad voyages and Marco Polo; the natural history of shrikes.

Sextus and the sprite

More names Sextus Empiricus in support of a being suited to every environment. Father Oddopter then appears as an answer to the speculation. Sextus reports arguments about living beings in different cosmic regions; the scene turns that philosophical material into a joke about the observers themselves.

Sextus Empiricus, Against the Physicists, book 1; compare Cicero, On the Nature of the Gods 2.42.

Babes in the woods

Oddopter’s grand title for a familiar story mocks the travelers’ innocence. Like the abandoned children of the ballad, they do not fully understand the danger surrounding them. His greeting is protective advice delivered as teasing.

The ballad “The Babes in the Wood” and its later theatrical versions.

Doubting Thomas

The apostle asks for evidence before believing; More sees the Devil-kill and then tries to exclude what he has seen from his account of reality. Oddopter challenges the rule by which More has decided in advance that only one order of things can exist.

John 20:24–29.

Fishing for the Devil

The bait and hook invite comparison with the Christian interpretation of Leviathan: the Devil takes what he desires and is caught through it. Gregory the Great reads the hook as Christ’s humanity concealing divinity. Evita’s bait and Oddopter’s fishing give that theological image a violent comic form.

Job 41:1, or 40:20 in the Douay-Rheims numbering; Gregory the Great, Moralia in Job, book 33.

The hydra and the daily killing

The name recalls the monster whose severed heads grow again in Heracles’ labor. Oddopter makes the repeated killing a daily necessity. He also says the Devil can take other forms, so the significance belongs to this encounter and its recurrence, rather than to every animal called a hydra.

The Lernaean Hydra; Apollodorus, Library 2.5.2.

Copperhead’s divination

Reading entrails belongs to the ancient haruspex; interpreting birds belongs to the augur. Copperhead draws on this vocabulary and practice here and on the mountain. More’s uneasiness recalls the biblical prohibition on divination and consultation with the dead.

Deuteronomy 18:10–11; the Roman traditions of haruspicy and augury.

A wandering monk

Oddopter vows never to sleep twice in the same place. This can be set beside both Christ’s homelessness and Benedict’s criticism of wandering monks. Lafferty gives a positive discipline to a form of life that monastic rules often treated with suspicion.

Luke 9:58; Rule of St. Benedict, chap. 1.

Goslar and the Salic Emperors

The name recalls the German imperial city associated with the Salian dynasty. Lafferty transfers imperial ceremony to a precarious settlement with an oral history preserved through the skulls of its rulers. More treats its authority seriously even when the surrounding circumstances are comic.

The imperial palace and Salian history of Goslar.

The emperor’s journey

The newly chosen ruler travels without provisions, money, or spare clothing. The instructions echo the sending of the apostles. That vulnerable arrival also makes the emperor’s office a small-scale counterpart to More’s dangerous appointment.

Luke 9:3; Matthew 10:9–10.

The privy and royal names

More’s henry and proposed charles treat the familiar john as though a privy ought to bear the reigning monarch’s name. The joke brings Henry VIII into the petty frustrations of the visit. More’s caution about crossing royalty recalls how much a confrontation with a king can cost.

Roper, The Life of Sir Thomas More, Norfolk’s warning about striving with princes and More’s advice to Cromwell.

Evita’s bargain

Evita calls herself Faustina when she describes the longevity experiment as a bargain with the Devil. The Evil Scientist gives the Faust story a laboratory setting. Her return home after seeking Hell makes the discovery of Golden Astrobe’s nature the bitter result of the bargain.

The Faust tradition, especially the rejuvenation in Goethe’s Faust, part 1.

Coming home and recognizing it

Evita’s journey around the world to recognize her own home can be compared with Chesterton’s returning yachtsman and Eliot’s end of exploration. Her discovery reverses their welcome: the home she finally recognizes is Hell.

G. K. Chesterton, Orthodoxy, chap. 1; T. S. Eliot, “Little Gidding,” section 5.

Superstition and over-belief

Oddopter’s over-belief has bodily consequences: it leaves marks and makes the feral regions powerful. William James’s term offers a useful comparison for belief that reaches beyond what evidence establishes. Lafferty gives that surplus of belief a creaturely presence.

William James, The Varieties of Religious Experience (1902), concluding discussion of over-beliefs.

Green lightning and the electrode

Slider proposes electrically produced pleasure as a superior alternative to drinking. The contrast sets the ease of a manufactured sensation beside a physical, communal activity he cannot manage. It belongs to the novel’s larger dispute over whether discomfort can be removed without losing forms of life.

The chapter’s comparison of green lightning with electrical stimulation.

Sinai and the Transfiguration

Trumpets, cloud, thunder, and lightning recall Sinai. The changed, shining survivors also invite the Gospel comparison that the narrator names as transfiguration. What they encounter includes the faces of Ouden, so the resemblance does not make their vision a simple repetition of a biblical revelation.

Exodus 19:16–19; 34:29–30; Matthew 17:1–9.

Lifting the eyes to the mountains

More’s criticism of the golden inhabitants borrows the upward movement of the psalm. He immediately imagines abandoning such impulses once he governs. His own attraction to the mountain is therefore already in conflict with the settled life he wants to administer.

Psalm 121:1, numbered 120:1 in the Douay-Rheims and Vulgate.

The sleeping kings

Scrivener gathers rulers expected to return when their people need them. The recurring legend gives More’s recruitment a wider pattern. Historical deaths, folk traditions, and invented futures mingle in the list; the list should not be treated as a set of accurate biographies.

The return-of-the-king traditions of Arthur and Frederick Barbarossa.

Alaric under the river

The diverted river and secret burial come from the account of Alaric’s death in Jordanes. The promise that he will rise and lead again belongs to the sleeping-king pattern added here. The distinction shows how historical material becomes a usable legend.

Jordanes, Getica 30.158.

Kennedy and Roadstorm

Kennedy’s open automobile enters the same company as ancient and medieval kings. Roadstorm extends the catalogue into Lafferty’s own fiction and recalls Roadstrum of Space Chantey. The sequence treats very recent history and invented history as material from which legends of return are made.

John F. Kennedy’s assassination in 1963; Lafferty, Space Chantey (1968).

The ram with the double sign

Oddopter says the marked ram belongs to Scripture. Abraham’s substitute sacrifice and Daniel’s two-horned ram are possible points of comparison. The scene does not choose between them or explain the double sign completely; More’s repeated appointment to death gives the image its immediate force.

Genesis 22:13; Daniel 8:3.

A priest forever

Paul’s words over Oddopter identify the dead man with the priesthood of Melchisedech. The verse belongs to the biblical and liturgical language of enduring priesthood. It follows a morning Mass offered for members of the party who would die that day.

Psalm 110:4, numbered 109:4 in the Douay-Rheims and Vulgate; Hebrews 5:6; 7:17.

The lightning and the paradox of motion

The single point of light seems to occupy several places at once. Zeno’s arrow offers a plausible comparison for the old paradox named in the passage. Lafferty makes the apparent solution an overwhelming event through which the travelers must find a still narrower instant of escape.

Aristotle, Physics 6.9, 239b, on Zeno’s arrow.

Literally astonished

The narrator explicitly connects astonishment with being thunderstruck. The event revives the history inside the word. The same habit of making a familiar phrase happen bodily governs many of the novel’s jokes and horrors.

The history of astonish through Old French estoner and the Latin vocabulary of thunder and stupefaction.

The false sky and the empyrean

The possibility of light outside a false sky recalls the empyrean of medieval cosmology and Dante. The narrator poses it as a question. The view into a pit then makes the distinction between apparent height and genuine transcendence more difficult.

Aquinas, Summa theologiae I, q. 66, a. 3; Dante, Paradiso 30.

Scrivener, Slider, and humanity

Scrivener’s choice and Slider’s reversal make personhood a matter of allegiance and action as well as origin. Scrivener dies resisting the Killers. The scene prepares the question, asked later by the Programmed Persons themselves, of whether creatures made from other materials can receive spiritual life.

Past Master, chaps. 7, 10, and 13.

Twenty hours of work

Utopia limits the working day to six hours. Cathead’s twenty-hour labor makes the comparison brutal, especially because efficient machines already exist elsewhere. More must confront people who prefer this destructive work to the comfortable life offered by the golden cities.

Thomas More, Utopia, book 2, “Of Their Trades, and Manner of Life.”

Choosing servitude

Utopia includes outsiders who voluntarily enter service because its conditions are better than those at home. Cathead reverses the movement: people choose bondage and deprivation to escape the perfected society. The parallel places freedom of choice inside conditions that More finds intolerable.

Thomas More, Utopia, book 2, “Of Their Slaves, and of Their Marriages.”

Dostoevsky and chosen unhappiness

The Underground Man challenges a rationally perfected society by defending the capacity to choose what is painful or disadvantageous. Cathead raises a related question: whether suffering can become proof that one is alive and capable of refusal. The comparison explains the argument without making Cathead’s misery desirable in itself.

Fyodor Dostoevsky, Notes from Underground, part 1, sections 7–9.

Escape from the golden cities

Barricades and gunfire give the migration a recognizable modern political setting. The Berlin Wall offers a historical comparison, but Lafferty reverses the expected economic destination: these refugees run from abundance into poverty. Their behavior exposes something that Astrobe’s measures of well-being cannot register.

The border barriers and shootings of the Cold War; the novel’s account of the exodus into Cathead.

The yellow flag and the lungers

The flag uses the traditional maritime signal of contagion. Lunger is an older American word for a consumptive. Both terms make bodily disease a constant feature of the city’s life; the weekly plague and lethal work are concrete conditions, not merely symbols of spiritual suffering.

The quarantine flag tradition; the American slang term lunger.

Bethlehem and Bedlam

The district’s name recalls the Hospital of St. Mary of Bethlehem, whose name became Bedlam. Lafferty enlarges a madhouse into a large part of a city. The movement from institution to district makes the question of madness political as well as medical.

Bethlem Hospital, London; the development of the word bedlam.

Holbein’s skeletons

More’s Dutchman is most naturally read as Holbein, his portraitist and the designer of the Dance of Death woodcuts. Older English could use Dutch broadly for German. The remark places the skeletal Metropolitan among images in which death confronts people of every social rank.

Hans Holbein the Younger, Dance of Death, published 1538; Sir Thomas More, 1527.

The fisherman’s ring

The ring associates the Metropolitan with Saint Peter and papal office. The novel also calls him the Pope of Astrobe. These signs give the nearly abandoned church an authority that its physical poverty and small congregation do not measure.

The papal Ring of the Fisherman; the chapter’s description of the Metropolitan.

More hears his own collect

The Metropolitan recites the prayer honoring John Fisher and Thomas More as martyrs. More recognizes Fisher and hears himself placed within a liturgical commemoration that followed his earthly life. The prayer confronts his uncertainty with the Church’s judgment about the man he became.

The collect for Saints John Fisher and Thomas More in the English proper of the Roman Missal after their canonization in 1935.

The Promise on Astrobe

The Metropolitan applies Christ’s promise to this world and answers Slider’s attempt to exclude it. His account of Christ walking on Astrobe gives the answer a local history. The scene asks whether a new planet can be outside the reach of an apparently earthly promise.

Matthew 16:18; 28:20; Past Master, chap. 5.

The blind man who sees

The physically blind Metropolitan calls More blind because he fails to recognize what is before him. John’s account of the man born blind supplies the comparison: sight and spiritual understanding can move in opposite directions. More’s confidence in his diagnosis of Cathead is the object of the rebuke.

John 9:39–41.

The response More remembers

The blessing and More’s answering line come from the psalm used in the prayers at the foot of the altar. His ready response shows religious memory operating beneath his professed uncertainty. The words ask for renewed life at the very moment he is confronting a church thought to be dying.

Psalm 85, numbered 84 in the Vulgate and Douay-Rheims; the Roman Mass, Deus, tu conversus vivificabis nos.

Stones, clods, and the woman’s touch

The promise that the planet itself will testify recalls the stones that cry out in Luke. The woman who touches More likewise recalls a Gospel encounter, although here she gives him a prophecy rather than receives a cure. Both episodes place knowledge outside the institutions and explanations he trusts.

Luke 19:40; Mark 5:25–34.

King-making

The title recalls the historical Kingmaker, Warwick, and brings the name Cosmos Kingmaker into the account of how a ruler is manufactured. Acclamation, publicity, party arrangements, and effective phrasing do the work once associated with a vote. The final ease of the process is part of its menace.

Richard Neville, Earl of Warwick; Shakespeare, 3 Henry VI, 3.3.

Cecily and the adopted daughter

More compares Evita with his youngest daughter. Historically that daughter was Cecily, educated with her sisters in More’s household. His paternal comparison sits uneasily with Evita’s age, experience, and refusal to be treated as a child.

More’s family: Cecily More Heron; Roper, The Life of Sir Thomas More.

The wrong apostle

The Crank combines doubting Thomas with Judas. More corrects him, but the confusion reveals what Astrobe admires: it has turned the supposed betrayer of Christ into a hero. The error belongs to the characters’ damaged religious memory and should not be repeated as a description of either apostle.

John 20:24–29; the Gospel accounts of Judas’s betrayal.

From one person, one vote to no vote

The account starts with an egalitarian formula, passes through unequal voting weights, and ends by abolishing voting. Mill’s plural voting and Shute’s fictional multiple-vote scheme offer comparisons for the middle stage. The succession makes the removal of political choice appear to be one more modernization.

John Stuart Mill, Considerations on Representative Government, chap. 8; Nevil Shute, In the Wet (1953).

Demos, Ochlos, and the anesthetics

Demos names the people as a political body; ochlos names a crowd or mob. The Esthetics, Anesthetics, and Local Anesthetics turn disputes about taste and sensation into party labels. The catalogue mixes learned political names with jokes about feeling and its suppression.

Greek demos, people; ochlos, crowd; aisthesis, perception or sensation.

The Crank and the right to unhappiness

The Crank’s defense of choosing one’s occupation and unhappiness recalls John the Savage’s demand in Brave New World. More answers from the side of the administered society. The encounter therefore exposes the distance between the candidate’s public confidence and the liberty a dissenter wants.

Aldous Huxley, Brave New World, chap. 17.

Moving mountains

More turns the Gospel image of mountain-moving faith into a political joke. The promise to move the world ahead follows his own unsettling mountain experience. Biblical words now help him sell the program whose deeper claims he has begun to forget.

Matthew 17:20; 1 Corinthians 13:2.

Green pastures

The speech approaches the language of Psalm 23 and then corrects itself into a more acceptable statement of progress. The interrupted phrase briefly introduces rest under a shepherd into a speech about collective advancement. It also raises the question of who is supplying More’s words.

Psalm 23:2, numbered 22:2 in the Vulgate and Douay-Rheims.

All things to all men

More’s happy new phrase belongs to Saint Paul. In its biblical setting it concerns winning others for the gospel; in the campaign it promises universal political appeal. The narrator’s doubt about who speaks through More turns the apparent improvisation into evidence of manipulation.

1 Corinthians 9:22.

The total good

The speech replaces a good calculated for many persons with the good of a merged singularity. Bentham’s familiar formula supplies the point of departure. The crucial change is the disappearance of distinct persons from the account of what their common good should be.

Jeremy Bentham, A Fragment on Government (1776), preface; the utilitarian formula of the greatest happiness of the greatest number.

Pandomation and the Open Mind Act

Rooms exposed to spectators invite comparison with the glass houses of We and the telescreens of Nineteen Eighty-Four. Astrobe also extends access into thought. The Open Mind Act’s subtitle turns an expression of tolerance into a claim to enter another person’s mind.

Yevgeny Zamyatin, We (1924); George Orwell, Nineteen Eighty-Four (1949).

The deformation of Wells’s future

The title answers Chapter 5 and Wells’s The Shape of Things to Come. More now sees the claim to perfected humanity from its reverse side. The Programmed Persons explain what their completion of human history would remove.

H. G. Wells, The Shape of Things to Come (1933); Past Master, chap. 5.

The door in the wall

The door appears where there should be none and leaves no opening afterward. Wells’s disappearing door offers a close comparison, particularly under this chapter title. Lafferty changes the destination from an alluring garden to the Nine’s room of coercion and disclosure.

H. G. Wells, “The Door in the Wall” (1906).

Below the salt

More invokes the seating order of a great household when he takes Ouden’s reserved place. His refusal of a lower seat becomes a refusal to acknowledge Nothing as his superior. A social expression gives his resistance a physical and ceremonial form.

The traditional distinction between seating above and below the salt.

The reverse of the tapestry

The Nine present themselves as mankind seen from behind. Cervantes compares translation with the reverse of a tapestry, where the figures remain visible through knots and threads. The analogy helps describe a recognizable human pattern made rough or deformed, while the Nine insist that their reverse is the true side.

Miguel de Cervantes, Don Quixote, part 2, chap. 62.

Rechabitism

The Rechabites in Jeremiah obey an ancestral command to abstain from wine and settled possessions. Northprophet names rechabitism as his trio’s specialty without defining the process. In this conversation its association with abstinence can be set beside the Programmed Persons’ desire to eliminate their appetite for life.

Jeremiah 35.

Houses swept and garnished

Pottscamp explicitly describes the bodies as houses entered by devils. His language comes from Christ’s account of an expelled spirit returning to an empty, ordered house with worse companions. The account distinguishes the constructed bodies from the beings that occupy them.

Matthew 12:43–45; Luke 11:24–26.

The machine that succeeds mankind

Butler’s evolving machines and Čapek’s artificial workers provide earlier versions of humanity being superseded by its creations. Lafferty joins that prospect to the language of possession. The question therefore concerns both the material construction of the Programmed Persons and what has come to live in them.

Samuel Butler, Erewhon, “The Book of the Machines”; Karel Čapek, R.U.R. (1920).

Opening the box

The warning about taking the lid off a box invites the comparison with Pandora. Jack-in-the-box language makes the released powers sound like unruly toys. The image grows until the box is Astrobe itself, and the dispute turns to whether hope has survived inside it.

Hesiod, Works and Days 90–105; the later Pandora’s-box tradition.

Hell and nonbeing

More’s preference for existence even in Hell can be compared with Milton’s Satan, while his preference for the lunger’s life over kingship recalls Achilles in the underworld. The differences matter: More is resisting annihilation, and his chosen comparison is the life of an actual suffering person.

Milton, Paradise Lost 1.263; Homer, Odyssey 11.489–91.

Water, clay, and artificial bodies

Swampers asks whether the spirit that came to water and clay could come to the materials of a Programmed Person. Genesis supplies the language of creation and animated earth. The question leaves open a possibility that the Nine’s general account of themselves tries to close.

Genesis 1:2; 2:7.

What must we do to be saved?

Northprophet and Pottscamp echo the jailer’s question to Paul and Silas. More dismisses their appeal as mockery. Pottscamp’s later penitence makes it difficult to assume that this moment has only one tone or purpose.

Acts 16:30; Past Master, chap. 13.

The second death

Revelation uses the phrase for the final condition of the condemned. More also faces the literal prospect of being beheaded twice. The overlap places his personal ordeal inside the novel’s larger questions about resurrection, extinction, and the death of a world.

Revelation 20:6, 14; 21:8.

Writer, lawyer, and chancellor

More’s soliloquy turns three achievements of his earlier life into traps: he must inhabit his fiction, find its legality, and administer it. His political competence has helped make his captivity possible. The question of what he will refuse now becomes more urgent than what he can manage.

More’s authorship of Utopia and his legal and governmental career; the chapter’s closing soliloquy.

The Nine Day King

The title invites comparison with Lady Jane Grey, the Nine Days’ Queen, who was deposed and later executed. More also recalls the young Salic ruler as a One Day Emperor. The comparison gives his presidency the shape of a brief elevation already overshadowed by the block.

Lady Jane Grey’s reign in July 1553; the proverb of a nine days’ wonder.

The philosopher king

More explicitly thinks of Plato’s ideal ruler. Utopia had already debated whether a philosopher could serve usefully in a prince’s council. Astrobe gives More the supreme office, but the bills and their hidden provisions reveal how little final authority that office guarantees.

Plato, Republic 5.473c–d; Thomas More, Utopia, book 1.

Astrobe’s calendar

The year 535 A.S. corresponds to 2535 by the old count. The omitted Free Years complicate the colony’s elapsed time. The dates place More roughly a thousand years beyond his earthly death while exposing another way the official account orders and compresses history.

The chapter’s account of anno scientiae and the Free Year.

The sun as a hole

The words spoken through More recall Anaximander’s account of the sun as an opening through which fire is seen. In Astrobe’s argument the opening becomes an emblem of emptiness. The comparison is useful, but no philosopher is named in the scene.

Ancient accounts of Anaximander’s cosmology, including Hippolytus, Refutation of All Heresies 1.6.

Ban the Beyond

More’s name for the measure recalls the modern slogan Ban the Bomb. The resemblance gives the abolition of transcendence the familiar language of a public campaign. The provision would prohibit considering things beyond the Dream, including the possibility that the Dream is incomplete.

The Campaign for Nuclear Disarmament slogan; the chapter’s description of the bill.

The remnants

The legal heading reduces surviving religious communities to leftovers. Isaiah and Romans give remnant a different significance: a people preserved through apparent defeat. The small numbers therefore do not settle the value or future of the communities the bill would abolish.

Isaiah 10:20–22; Romans 11:5.

Kingmaker’s Fall

Kingmaker tells of creatures who leave perfection in search of something beyond and fall into the void. The account reverses the value of escape: faith in a beyond becomes the original error. More’s suspicion that the labels have been switched opens the possibility that Golden Astrobe is itself the emptiness.

Compare Genesis 3 and Revelation 12:7–9; Kingmaker’s allegory in this chapter.

Veto: I forbid

More writes the Latin formula across the bill. His prohibition defends the freedom to consider what the measure would prohibit. The constitutional penalty follows three refusals of the proposal in its successive forms, so his third veto makes the act of reading and rejecting legislation a decision about his life.

Latin veto, I forbid; the chapter’s law concerning repeated vetoes.

More’s first refusal

The novel explicitly compares this refusal with the act that led to More’s first death. Historically he refused the oath in 1534 and was later convicted of treason. Lafferty changes the issue and the character’s stated certainty, while retaining the demand for assent and the fatal cost of withholding it.

Roper, The Life of Sir Thomas More, accounts of the oath and trial.

The friend who requires the head

More asks who pushed him into the corner before. Roper records his judgment that Henry’s friendship would not save his head if the king could gain by taking it. Foreman’s friendship and manipulation repeat that disturbing proximity between affection and political use.

Roper, The Life of Sir Thomas More, More’s conversation with Roper after Henry’s visit to Chelsea.

The gathering eagles

The opening recalls the Gospel saying that eagles gather where the body is. Its setting in discourse about the last things fits a night described as the world’s last. The companions gather around a man whose death is expected, while their name also carries the force of a chosen company.

Matthew 24:28; Luke 17:37; compare Job 39:30.

Principalities and powers

The account of Evita’s long battle draws directly on Paul’s description of spiritual warfare. Her apparent youth and accumulated experience give that struggle an unusual embodiment. Her enemies exercise political control as well as the spiritual hostility named by the phrase.

Ephesians 6:12.

Saint Brandon’s voyage

Adam retells the voyage of Saint Brendan as an early visit to Astrobe. His nineteen monks and ninety-nine days differ from the medieval Navigatio, with its smaller chosen company and seven-year voyage. Moving the Land of Promise into space gives Astrobe a sacred past earlier than its official settlement.

Navigatio Sancti Brendani; Past Master’s name for the saint is Brandon.

The wake before death

The companions hold the wake while More is alive. Stories, drink, and argument become forms of attendance on a death they hope to prevent. Their conversation defeats the machines’ attempt to reduce it to useful instructions or a discoverable plan.

The wake tradition; the chapter’s account of the machines listening to the stories.

The fools’ carnival

Masks, mock factions, irreverence, and mingled joy and violence recall the Feast of Fools and carnival traditions. Cosmopolis begins behaving unpredictably on the night before its ceremonial execution. Its recovery of feeling is dangerous as well as hopeful.

The medieval Feast of Fools; Carnival, Halloween, and St. John’s Eve customs.

Candy heads and skulls

The confections invite comparison with the sugar skulls of the Mexican Day of the Dead. Here they honor an execution that has not yet happened. Death becomes something sold, eaten, mocked, and anticipated throughout the city.

The calavera tradition of the Day of the Dead.

Sackcloth and ashes

The carnival faction turns an act of penance into a public costume and joke. Chapter 13 gives the gesture a different weight when Pottscamp pours ashes over his head. The repetition asks whether an apparently empty imitation can become an actual act of remorse.

Matthew 11:21; Job 2:12; 42:6.

The interdict

The new Metropolitan invokes the Church’s power to place a territory under religious censure pending repentance. Applying it to a planet gives an old ecclesiastical action an enormous scale. His appearance also answers the earlier assumption that the dying Metropolitan would have no successor.

The historical practice of a general interdict, notably the interdict on England, 1208–14.

The serpent’s tooth

The narrator’s phrase for remorse recalls Lear’s pain at an ungrateful child. Cosmopolis has raised More to power and is preparing to kill him. The borrowed image makes its new emotion resemble a child’s recognition of injury done to a parent.

Shakespeare, King Lear, 1.4.

The funeral toll and the July Bell

The old bells recover names and a shared purpose as they toll for More. The July Bell can suggest his execution on 6 July 1535, although the novel does not explain the name. Sound carries a religious memory that the museumized churches seemed to have lost.

The Christian passing-bell and funeral-toll traditions; More’s death in July 1535.

Apocephalon and Panlykonium

The chapter title joins the ideas of removal and head in a Greek-looking word that also sounds near apocalypse. Panlykonium substitutes wolves for the demons of pandemonium. The coinages bring beheading, revelation, and the crowd’s wolfish behavior into the same ending.

Greek apo, away, kephale, head, and lykos, wolf; Milton’s coinage Pandemonium.

The spotted lamb

Foreman’s victim reverses the scriptural lamb without blemish. More’s weaknesses and compromises are part of the point: the man required for the sacrifice is visibly imperfect. Foreman’s explanation of what that blood will accomplish remains an account given by the person arranging the death.

Exodus 12:5; 1 Peter 1:19.

Seed, salt, and leaven

The mustard seed of Chapter 1 returns beside the language of leaven and preserving salt. The images allow a small act or remnant to change a much greater body. Foreman uses them to explain historical renewal; the final pages test whether his planned result exhausts what has happened.

Matthew 5:13; 13:31–33; 1 Corinthians 5:6.

Foreman’s history of worlds

The rapid succession from republic to empire and through later ages is Foreman’s theory of historical death and rebirth. His first emperor is Augustus, who represented his rule as a restoration of the republic. The novel’s five-hundred-year rhythm should be read as that theory rather than as conventional historical periodization.

Augustus, Res Gestae 34; Foreman’s account in this chapter.

Particular and General Judgment

More distinguishes the judgment of a person after death from the final judgment of the world. Foreman rejects both and insists on explaining himself immediately. Their disagreement exposes the limit of his history: he invokes transcendence as a requirement while denying the judgment More expects beyond death.

The Christian distinction between particular judgment and Last Judgment.

The consoling Barnabas

More’s name for the smooth-talking Foreman recalls Barnabas, whose name Acts interprets as son of consolation. The consolation is bitterly comic because its bearer is arranging the victim’s death. The insult resists the gentleness with which the necessity is being explained.

Acts 4:36.

The brains of the enemy

More explains his last meal through the belief that eating an enemy can confer the enemy’s capacities. Frazer offers a familiar account of that belief. The meal’s artificial substance and More’s doubt about acquiring wit turn the ritual into a final joke at the Programmed Persons’ expense.

J. G. Frazer, The Golden Bough, “Homoeopathic Magic of a Flesh Diet.”

The earlier execution hour

Foreman advances the expected noon execution to eight. Roper records that Sir Thomas Pope brought More word that he must die before nine on the morning of his earthly execution. The historical early-morning notice becomes a means of frustrating the rescue in Lafferty’s story.

Roper, The Life of Sir Thomas More, account of 6 July 1535.

The offer to sign and live

Pottscamp’s last offer recalls the repeated opportunity for the historical More to save himself by yielding. Here he argues that the successor will sign immediately anyway. More’s refusal answers the attempt to judge his act solely by whether it can stop the administration’s next step.

Roper, The Life of Sir Thomas More, accounts of the examinations and trial.

The late return

More’s discovery that he has come back late to the only thing that matters can be read beside Augustine’s late love. The comparison concerns the shape of a belated conversion. More speaks of a return to something long known, even while saying how little he understands it.

Augustine, Confessions 10.27.

The forerunner wave

The first rescuers form the small wave that precedes a larger movement. Forerunner also recalls John the Baptist, himself beheaded. The resemblance puts the failed rush into a pattern of preparation, while the narrative keeps its individual deaths painful and concrete.

Matthew 14:1–12; the Christian title of John the Baptist as Forerunner.

Beware, Iscariot

The narrator translates Evita’s warning and thereby identifies Foreman with Judas. Her subsequent woe recalls Christ’s judgment on the person through whom betrayal or scandal comes. The need for an event to occur does not excuse the person who brings it about.

Matthew 26:24; Luke 17:1.

A dog for the death journey

Evita explains Foreman’s killing as the provision of an animal companion for a dead hero. Achilles’ sacrifice of dogs at Patroclus’s funeral is a classical comparison. Calling the planner a dog overturns the authority with which he has just interpreted More’s death.

Homer, Iliad 23.173–74.

The two deaths of Judas

Foreman is torn apart and a surviving piece is hung from a tree. The sequence brings together the dismembering imagery of Acts and the hanging in Matthew. The later question about the Judas tree’s fruit returns to the possible consequences of a betrayal whose guilt the scene has made explicit.

Matthew 27:5; Acts 1:18.

The Judas tree

The novel calls its tree a carob and also a Judas Tree. Botanically, the tree usually bearing the latter name is Cercis siliquastrum, distinct from the carob, Ceratonia siliqua. The literary association with betrayal is clear even where the plant names overlap or are confused.

The Judas-tree legend; the botanical distinction between Cercis siliquastrum and Ceratonia siliqua.

The stranger and the shadow

The stranger is unnamed. A Christ interpretation is possible, and the invitation also recalls More’s earlier recruitment by a traveler. Rumors that an essence departed and a shadow died invite comparison with substitution accounts of the Crucifixion, but the narrator reports and unsettles the rumors rather than confirming them.

Irenaeus, Against Heresies 1.24.4, on Basilides; Past Master, chap. 2.

The interrupted prayer

More begins the Latin prayer by which Christ commends his spirit to the Father. The words also belong to the psalm and to Compline. His death interrupts the prayer; the scene replaces the polished last sayings of quotation books with a remembered fragment.

Luke 23:46; Psalm 31:5, numbered 30:6 in the Vulgate and Douay-Rheims; the Compline responsory In manus tuas.

Scaffold sayings and the recovered head

Lafferty explicitly refuses the familiar collection of More’s last jokes. The tale of a woman carrying away his head recalls Margaret Roper’s recovery of her father’s head, while its basket also suggests the Baptist’s story. The novel presents its own beautiful tale and immediately questions it.

Roper, The Life of Sir Thomas More; Edward Hall, Chronicle; Stapleton, Tres Thomae; Matthew 14:11.

The stars go out

The extinction of the stars invites comparison with Clarke’s famous ending. Lafferty follows that extinction with questions about duration, rebirth, and hope. The apparent end therefore opens a further problem that the narration does not settle by simply showing a new world.

Arthur C. Clarke, “The Nine Billion Names of God” (1953).

Time without motion

When nothing moves, the difference between a second and an immense duration cannot be measured. Aristotle’s account of time through motion provides a useful philosophical comparison. George’s earlier story and the ending both place their interval between worlds outside ordinary measures.

Aristotle, Physics 4.11; compare Augustine, Confessions 11.

The left hand and the returning question

The banner, Gandy’s question, and the last recollection of spirit descending on matter gather the left-handed motif into a possibility of grace for the Programmed. The ashes on a machine’s head matter because an act of penitence has occurred where feeling was said to be absent.

Genesis 1:2; 2:7; Job 2:12; 42:6; Past Master, chap. 10.

Watching, waiting, hoping

The three refrains move from watchfulness to expectation and hope. Paul’s account of hoping for what is not yet seen and the Gospel command to watch provide biblical comparisons. The final words preserve expectation without supplying a completed account of the world’s renewal.

Romans 8:24–25; Matthew 26:41.

Glossary

Comprehensive Reference

Adam
Evita's brother, first encountered in Paul's passage dreams and later on Astrobe. In the dream he denies that his repeated deaths are resurrections, saying that another boy of the same name takes his place. He dies fighting on Electric Mountain and appears again at the wake. During the final rescue attempt he reaches and touches More before being killed. See also: Evita, Passage Dreams, Electric Mountain.
Adam's Sister (Childwitch)
The childwitch in Paul's passage dream who decides to go to Hell before dying. Chapter 5 identifies Evita as Adam's sister, connecting the dream figure with the girl-woman who accompanies Thomas. Paul's uncertainty about whether these people belong to his past, dreams, or future is part of the passage dreams’ disturbance of time. See also: Adam, Evita, Passage Dreams.
Alien from Gootz
An alien in Father Oddopter's comic story at Goslar. Mistaking it for a wheel of cheese, the townspeople cut it into a hundred portions and eat it. It cannot reassemble itself and refuses to be expelled, supposedly accounting for the inhabitants’ green faces. This is a tale told by a character, not a separately witnessed event. See also: Father Oddopter, Goslar.
America
The second chance in Kingmaker's account of human history, between the Old World and Astrobe. Foreman disputes his account of failure and argues that earlier worlds died without entirely failing. Their disagreement introduces the distinction between extinction and renewal that returns at the end. See also: Three Chances, Astrobe, Old Earth.
Ancient Instruction
The command to go to all nations, raised by Slider in Chapter 5. He doubts that the Promise applies to a different world and questions whether Astrobians are still human in the relevant sense. The Metropolitan answers the wider problem in Chapter 8 by saying that Christ renewed the Promise on Astrobe. See also: Metropolitan of Astrobe, Promise.
Ansels
Seal-like beings native to Astrobe. The novel distinguishes natural ansels, which may be hunted, from intelligent ansels such as Rimrock. Their ascent story describes creatures emerging from the physical ocean; the interior ocean of dreams is a related metaphor, not their geographical habitat. Ansels work as divers and communicators and can share a school mind. Rimrock leaves that comfortable collective existence to preserve his individuality. See also: Rimrock, Eutheopathy, Ocean Depths, School Mind, Transcendence.
Ansel (False)
An unnamed entity that telepathically impersonated Rimrock to lure Paul and Thomas into a trap at the Astrobe spaceport upon their arrival. When Paul hears the genuine Rimrock's urgent warning (Paul! Thomas! Away fast!), he realizes the first mental voice was a deceiver. Rimrock later mentions having had to settle with another false ansel who spoke in my guise, returning with fresh blood on him. The false ansel represents the Programmed Persons’ capacity for mimicry and infiltration, and the danger of trusting even telepathic communication in a world where identity itself can be counterfeited. See also: Rimrock, Ansels, Programmed Persons.
Antenna-like Loop, Tuned
The tuned loop in Brooks's London office that Paul uses for Chronometanastasis. After passing through it, Paul walks to Chelsea to meet More. It is a time-travel device, distinct from the Hopp-Equation spacecraft used between Earth and Astrobe. See also: Chronometanastasis, Brooks, Paul.
Anxious Powers
Powers mentioned alongside Astrobe's Great Men during More's ceremonial arrival. The phrase suggests authorities behind the public spectacle, but the passage does not explicitly equate the group with the Nine. See also: Nine, Big Three, Programmed Persons.
Apocephalon
The title of Chapter 13, evoking beheading and More's execution. The chapter also describes the destruction of the worlds and asks whether renewal follows. The snakes emerging from More's head belong to tales that the narrator reports and disavows, leaving their status uncertain. See also: Execution, Nine, Thomas More.
Arena (Convocation Hall)
The central lower floor of the Convocation Hall in Cosmopolis, where Thomas More and his party stand during his acclamation as Past Master. The elite 'great ones' sit above in the 'high circle,' looking down—a spatial arrangement emphasizing More's position as spectacle and sacrifice, the object of power rather than its wielder. The term 'arena' carries Roman connotations of gladiatorial combat and Christian martyrdom, foreshadowing More's eventual execution in Centrality Square. See also: Convocation Hall, Past Master, Cosmopolis.
Armored Wagon
Battersea's military vehicle used to transport Thomas More's party to the Convocation Hall. Its presence signifies Cathead's surprising capability—the supposedly chaotic slum district possesses organized military resources—and represents the assertive movement of the margins into the center of power. The wagon's armor acknowledges the constant threat of Programmed Killers while demonstrating the resistance's refusal to be cowed. See also: Battersea, Cathead, Convocation Hall.
Aspens, Heavenly
Trees lining the long Concourse leading to the Convocation Hall in Cosmopolis. Called 'heavenly' in the text, they contribute to the capital's idealized, opulent aesthetic—nature perfected and arranged for maximum symbolic effect. The ironic epithet underscores the Astrobe Dream's appropriation of transcendent language for purely material beauty, heaven reduced to landscaping. See also: Concourse, Convocation Hall, Cosmopolis.
Assassins
Common term for the Programmed Killers among Cathead's inhabitants, particularly the 'lungers' who hate everybody, but especially the stilted-gaited assassins. The word emphasizes intentionality and malice rather than mere mechanical function, reflecting the Cathead perspective that these beings serve an evil purpose rather than neutral law enforcement. The 'stilted gait' identifies their inhuman movement. See also: Programmed Killers, Lungers, Cathead.
Astrobe
The planet on which most of the novel takes place, said to lie 1.5 parsecs from Earth. Kingmaker calls it mankind's third chance. Its wealthy cities pursue the Astrobe Dream, while Cathead, the Barrio, and the Feral Lands resist or escape that order. Foreman reports eight thousand terminations a day in Cosmopolis alone. Native life includes natural and intelligent ansels, hydras, and enormous predators. See also: Astrobe Dream, Three Chances, Cosmopolis, Feral Lands, Ouden, Golden Astrobe.
Astrobe Dream
The ideology of perfected collective life promoted by civilized Astrobe. It promises freedom from distress and moves toward merger with the Programmed and the City. More initially accepts its claims, but the Nine reveal a project culminating in Ouden and the extinction of existence. The Dream can be read as a criticism of utopian systems that sacrifice persons to an ideal of perfection. See also: Ouden, Programmed Persons, One Great City, High Vision, Cosmopolis, Termination.
Astrobe Great Ones
The assembled ruling elite present at Thomas More's acclamation in the Convocation Hall: Kingmaker, Proctor, Foreman, Pottscamp, Northprophet, scientists, speculators, projectors, mind-men. They sit in the 'high circle' overlooking the Arena, representing Astrobe's visible power structure—though true power lies with the Nine Programmed Persons, some of whom (Pottscamp, Northprophet) are present in their midst, unrecognized for what they are. See also: Big Three, Nine, Convocation Hall, Pottscamp, Northprophet.
Astrobe Month
Time unit used for Hopp-Equation interstellar travel. The journey from Earth to Astrobe takes 'one Astrobe month,' which is slightly less than one Earth month—approximately 700 standard hours. Astrobe's year is also shorter than Earth's, requiring a 'Free Year' inserted every 29 years (but uncounted) to maintain synchronization. See also: Hopp-Equation, Free Year.
Avatar
Charles's description of Maxwell, whose attachment to any particular body is loose. Maxwell is partly Programmed; after his body is destroyed on Electric Mountain, he reappears at the wake in the manufactured body of an old woman. The term invites religious associations without settling his precise nature. See also: Maxwell, Transcendental Yeast, Electric Mountain.